All Watched Over By Machines Of Loving Grace

I like to think (and
the sooner the better!)
of a cybernetic meadow
where mammals and computers
live together in mutually
programming harmony
like pure water
touching clear sky.

I like to think
(right now, please!)
of a cybernetic forest
filled with pines and electronics
where deer stroll peacefully
past computers
as if they were flowers
with spinning blossoms.

I like to think
(it has to be!)
of a cybernetic ecology
where we are free of our labors
and joined back to nature,
returned to our mammal
brothers and sisters,
and all watched over
by machines of loving grace.
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Jemanoj23 - i had dreamt this !! , how beautiful
on Apr 19 2021 12:25 PM PST   x  edit
U.C. - who's the © owner of this piece? thank you to all
on Apr 03 2021 02:09 PM PST   x  edit
Prufrok - This seems like the tongue-in-cheek comment Ken Jennings made after IBM's WATSON won the jeopardy Tournament of Champions, "I, for one, welcome our new computer overlords."
on Mar 04 2021 12:06 PM PST   x  edit
Mooseboots - Personally, I think this poem is very weird. I can visualize the increasing need of humans for electronics and computers in our world. I can not visualize machines watching over us and nature. In this poem, it seems to me that we have reached the point where like in many cyber films, machines have reached a point of such an advanced state that they have overtaken humans and the natural world. I can easily see that happening with the technological advances of recent times and the speed at which things are advancing. I do believe this a realistic possibility. The protocol's that will need to be in place to oversee the advancement and control of machines as they advance to higher levels of capability than humans are going to be a real ethical challenge for the generations to come. I am glad I will not be alive to have to live in that world and now only get to live with the wonderful conveniences that technology is affording the human race. Just my thoughts...
on Dec 13 2020 12:37 PM PST   x  edit
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Zmuhls - (It's a satire, not a celebration, of techno-utopianism.)
on Dec 29 2020 12:02 PM PST   x  edit
Jasonmaurice802 - Umm....I'd like to think. I'm still thinking so I'll wait to comment until I have my conclusion. Lol
on Jul 16 2020 04:02 PM PST   x  edit
Philfletcher20 - When I first saw his image I thought oit was David Crosby. It seems that Mr Brautigan died in 1982 at the 'young' age of 47. I'd say this was quite a futuristic poem.

Nicely done
on Jun 19 2020 07:33 AM PST   x  edit
Mvbbrown - Even if it wasn't when Brautigan wrote this, it is now pure sarcasm.
on Apr 20 2020 11:21 AM PST   x  edit
R. Flynn - This is glorious
on Feb 09 2020 10:46 AM PST   x  edit
QueenOfDarkenDreams. - enjoyed

Great
on Jun 20 2019 01:17 PM PST   x  edit
Treerose70 - this poem is A+ from ya boi
on Mar 16 2018 08:37 AM PST   x  edit
Donald B. - Your wish to think has come TRUE !  We are outside of the box here at All Poetry , loved your write /
on Jun 20 2017 11:52 AM PST   x  edit

Comments from the archive

- From guest Tyler (contact)
The year of his death was 1984 not 1982.

(if you provide a source for the 1984 date we'll be happy to change it - Oldpoetry Team)
on Apr 07 2010 05:38 AM PST   x  edit
- From guest Flicka (contact)
I did not understand it, until my english teacher explained it to me. This is the kind of world we are living in know. Whenever he wrote this poem he must of ben seeeing a vision of the future. Today it makes perfect sence. Don't you think
on Feb 05 2010 03:36 AM PST   x  edit
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- From guest nick (contact)
i like it has meaning to it not just an ordinary poem
on Nov 18 2009 05:14 AM PST   x  edit
BermudaHighway - I think this has to be sardonic. He's not talking about utopia, he's talking about Big Brother. Nature and technology are two contrasting ideals. One succeeds at the other's expense. So, I figure when he's describing them as joined peacefully, especially in such an uncharacteristically maudlin fashion, he's doing so with a half-grin and the knowledge that such a future could never exist. Being seen as kin to wild animals is not a good thing in Brautigan's view, nor is being watched over by "loving" machines, a.k.a. the powers that be.. which is happening, (i.e. the Patriot Act.)
on May 18 2009 10:02 PM PST   x  edit
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- From guest Christian (contact)
Is it a longing for something he fears we'll never see? Machines take the place of gods. I don't think the poem contains much actual hope for the utopia it describes. It's wistful, even desperate.
on Jun 30 2008 02:29 PM PST   x  edit
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- From guest David Werner (contact)
Richard had a prophetic vision about technology and nature. Our task is to meld technology and nature in a way that makes technology "machines that watch over us with loving grace." That's how it's turning out, and the task is to make those machines (whether computers or nuclear power plants) serve the needs of humans in conformance with nature.
on May 23 2008 04:37 AM PST   x  edit
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- From guest Nena (contact)
I think this poem is very expressive and iconic.
on Apr 03 2008 02:53 PM PST   x  edit
- From guest J. Mozelsio Kaufthile (contact)
This is one of my favorite poems by Brautigan I read it four or five times when I first saw it in a book
on Feb 02 2007 04:53 PM PST   x  edit
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