my poetry does not flow. it's as simple as that. chaos has been present in my life since i can remember, and my poetry is a reflection of it. it rarely makes sense; it's choppy, sharp, full of acute angles and confusion. because that's how i feel almost all of the time-sharp, unapproachable, and just hopeless in general. i have never written anything that wasn't true, so everything of mine that you read is not made up-it happened. i was never good at writing myself out of pain. oh, once and a while i'll attempt to write a poem that flows. i try my best to make it feel like silk, like clear water, but it almost always turns out to be scratchy wool, thick like stew. i'm clumsy like that. sometimes, i even attempt to rhyme, but it hardly ever works out. as for myself, i am just as confusing as my poetry. i don't even have myself figured out yet, except for the fact that i'm...ha...confused.
"The closer I get to feeling, the further I get from feeling all right."
"The closer I get to feeling, the further I get from feeling all right."
- Last seen on Aug 19 4:03 AM 2007. Member since October 6, 2004.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 10 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "so close to dying that i finally can start living".
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a artist/poet.
- Visit my homepage at www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=masochisticLAMB
- I have 10 comments, 4 poems
My Poetry
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icy cold,
blood and frozen water blocking up my veins,17 lines, 2 comments, October 11, 2004. In Dark -
as we rise from our graves
by the watery light of the cruelest day...62 lines, 11 comments, October 11, 2004. In Weird
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Despairkitty on October 21, 2004I just wanted to tell you I really love your poetry. People try to get mad at my poetry because it dosent rhyme, or its not literal enough, but thats just how I write. Im glad that you liked one of my poems. Thanks alot!!! Keep writing because your work is awesome!!!
