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I've been writing poetry since last year. I don't know why I started, but I love to write it. It helps me take out my feelings, whether its anger, hatred, happiness, etc.


Poetry is words written on paper
Poetry is words plus your feelings
Poetry is words plus your feelings plus your imagination
Your poetry is your thoughts.
My poetry is my thoughts.


I am a newbie at poetry, so my poems will have some forced rhymes. Don't mind them. I need to fix those. Just leave comments on the ones I need to fix if you notice forced rhymes. thanks.

oh and.. leave comments on my poems.... please?

  • Last seen on Oct 31 4:12 PM 2006. Member since April 25, 2005.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 66 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "For me, life just sux so much.".
  • I am a 13 year old girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
  • I have 66 comments, 36 poems

My Poetry

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    13 lines, 1 comment, March 28, 2006. In Love
  • What Trust Can Do
    I thought I could trust you
    You betrayed me
    14 lines, 4 comments, December 16, 2005. In Dark
  • Time
    Time and time again
    passes by too fast
    13 lines, 2 comments, September 20, 2005. In Angst
  • My Tears
    Too many thoughts, too much to handleI want to die in this hell hole of a placeI want them to feel the pain i alwayz go throughWhen tears fall do
    23 lines, 2 comments, September 4, 2005. In Angst

Guest Book

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  • azwiggz on March 29, 2006
    oomg. no. youre coming. ok? thats enough of this shit woman!! i GOTTA have you there!! omggg... who else am i gonna go to for a hair check or something? my GOD. i sure as hell cant do that with shivani... not khera... she doesnt no wtf shes doing... andddd... haha i wonder wat ROB would say... pshtt come on dimple... BFFFFF u gottttta be there!!!! PLEASEEE IM FUCKING BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU TOO MUCH TO LET YOU SIT AT HOME IN FRONT OF THE COMPUTER WEN U COULD BE PARTYIN IT UP WIT ME CHICKA!!!!!

    LYLASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
  • insertcleversn on December 20, 2005
    a hug?
    ::shudders::
    uh...no thanks. hahaha lol dimple i love you. it's boring...and stressful at highschool- i wanna go back to kindergarten!!! those teachers really know how to make you feel stupid and tired and stressed out. i don't think i've been to bed earlier than 1 AM for this past month.
    i hate honors courses.
    they should burnnnn i tell you.
  • Sexie Pimp 101 on December 16, 2005
    Your welcome no problom i get that alot! \
    <33 Noel <33
  • coolcat13 on November 27, 2005
    dimple!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm bored.....wth is going on in alpha?!!!! i feel sooooooo left out!!!!!!!!!!........rrrrrrrrrr.........sigh.....cough....sniff.....(i think i have a cold)

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