I'm Kaitlyn.
Any poems of mine that arnt from 2006 and up...
SUCK.
I wrote them when i was like 14...and im only keeping them for sentimental reasons..
I know they blow..so dont comment them...lol
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These bands give me alot of inspiration.
ELLIOTT SMITH
Alkaline trio
Death cab for cutie
Brand New
Coheed and Cambria
From autumn to ashes
Manson
say anything
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You're just somebody that I used to know.
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We held hands on the last night on earth. Our mouths filled with dust, we kissed in the fields and under trees, screaming like dogs, bleeding dark into the leaves.It was empty on the edge of town but we knew everyone floated along the bottom of the river. So we walked through the waste where the road curved into the sea and the shattered seasons lay, and the bitter smell of burning was on you like a disease. In our cancer of passion you said, "Death is a midnight runner."
The sky had come crashing down like the news of an intimate suicide. We picked up the shards and formed them into shapes of stars that wore like an antique wedding dress.The echoes of the past broke the hearts of the unborn as the ferris wheel silently slowed to a stop. The few insects skittered away in hopes of a better pastime. I kissed you at the apex of the maelstrom and asked if you would accompany me in a quick fall, but you made me realize that my ticket wasn't good for two. I rode alone.
You said, "The cinders are falling like snow." There is poetry in despair, and we sang with unrivaled beauty, bitter elegies of savagery and eloquence. Of blue and grey. Strange, we ran down desparate streets and carved our names in the flesh of the city. The sun has stagnated somewhere beyond the rim of the horizon and the darkness is a mystery of curves and lines. Still, we lay under the emptiness and drifted slowly outward, and somewhere in the wilderness we found salvation scratched into the earth like a message.
- AFI
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Any poems of mine that arnt from 2006 and up...
SUCK.
I wrote them when i was like 14...and im only keeping them for sentimental reasons..
I know they blow..so dont comment them...lol
XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXXxXXxXxX
These bands give me alot of inspiration.
ELLIOTT SMITH
Alkaline trio
Death cab for cutie
Brand New
Coheed and Cambria
From autumn to ashes
Manson
say anything
XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxxXxXx
You're just somebody that I used to know.
XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx
We held hands on the last night on earth. Our mouths filled with dust, we kissed in the fields and under trees, screaming like dogs, bleeding dark into the leaves.It was empty on the edge of town but we knew everyone floated along the bottom of the river. So we walked through the waste where the road curved into the sea and the shattered seasons lay, and the bitter smell of burning was on you like a disease. In our cancer of passion you said, "Death is a midnight runner."
The sky had come crashing down like the news of an intimate suicide. We picked up the shards and formed them into shapes of stars that wore like an antique wedding dress.The echoes of the past broke the hearts of the unborn as the ferris wheel silently slowed to a stop. The few insects skittered away in hopes of a better pastime. I kissed you at the apex of the maelstrom and asked if you would accompany me in a quick fall, but you made me realize that my ticket wasn't good for two. I rode alone.
You said, "The cinders are falling like snow." There is poetry in despair, and we sang with unrivaled beauty, bitter elegies of savagery and eloquence. Of blue and grey. Strange, we ran down desparate streets and carved our names in the flesh of the city. The sun has stagnated somewhere beyond the rim of the horizon and the darkness is a mystery of curves and lines. Still, we lay under the emptiness and drifted slowly outward, and somewhere in the wilderness we found salvation scratched into the earth like a message.
- AFI
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- Last seen on Sep 1 2:25 AM. Member since February 1, 2004.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 290 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is you're coming up roses, everywhere you go..
- I am a 18 year old girl from Illinois (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Trying to make a difference.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/allxthesexmistakes




- I have 290 comments, 3 contests
My Poetry
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I find multiple examples of your moral values and characteristics that have been disregarded and thrown into a place more vague than your e5 lines, May 20
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Flowing sounds opened my eyes.
Your empty words clogged my ears.10 lines, May 8. In Abuse -
waiting for words to fall out, which would be fine, because dog shit is already covering the floor.15 lines, May 6
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Your disappearing act has wowed its last audience.
The trick is stale and overrated.
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echoless07 on March 10Hiiiii Kaitlyn
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Jalalbel on December 24, 2007happy holidays and blessings in the coming year

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xxxbrittanyxxx on November 11, 2007well believe it or not i am 18...
or will be december 27th
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Miss Faith on October 24, 2007hey lovie...
I added you on myspace...
