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this is robbie, im from Ok. I'm a freshman im finally in high skewl. I am 15 years old. I have dark brown hair, and blue eyes. Im 5ft and 10inches tall. ummm thats about it for me...

Please read my poems and comment.I'm interested in your personal experience with the poem: What you saw in your mind's eye as you read; Any feelings evoked; How you interpreted the poem and its imagery; Which lines, phrases, and/or stanzas you particularly liked and/or disliked and why; And any other observations that jump to mind as you go to leave your thoughts.

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My Mothers- Carole and Tristen
My Sister- Ashley
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Girl: I'm always here for you
Boy: I know
Girl: What's wrong?
Boy: I like her so much
Girl: Talk to her
Boy: I don't know. She won't ever like me
Girl: Don't say that. You're amazing.
Boy: I just want her to know how I feel.
Girl: Then tell her.
Boy: She won't like me
Girl: How do you know that?
Boy: I can just tell her
Girl: Well just tell her.
Boy: What should I say
Girl: Tell her how much you like her
Boy: I tell her that daily
Girl: what do you mean?
Boy: I'm always with her. I love her.
Girl: I know how you feel. I have the same problem. But he'll never like me
Boy: Wait. Who do you like?
Girl: Oh some boy
Boy: Oh... she won't like me either.
Girl: She does
Boy: How do you know..
Girl: Because, who wouldn't like you?
Boy: You
Girl: You're wrong, I love you.
Boy: I love you too.
Girl: So are you going to talk to her?
Boy: I just did.

A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road...
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of brake failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his brakes broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.
If you would ever do this for someone.

12 Ways To Get To A Girls Heart--
1. Hugs her from behind.
2. Grab her hand when you guys walk next to each other.
3. When standing, wrap your arms around her.
4. Cuddle with her.
5. Don't force her to do ANYTHING!
6. Write little notes.
7. Compliment her.
8. When you hug her, hold her in your arms as long as possible.
9. Say I love you.....and MEAN IT!
10. Brush the hair out of her eyes
11. Comfort her when she cries.
12. Love her with all your heart



Poems I'm focused on

  • The velvet night wraps me up
    in a warm embrace
    26 lines, 2 comments, February 6, 2008. In Love
  • The idea of cutting yourself
    with a razor,
    104 lines, 6 comments, January 31, 2008. In Pain, Sad

My Poetry

1 - 3 of 18   Show all Search
  • My life is dark and horrible
    If you join, you will enter
    the world of Pain.
    18 lines, 1 comment, April 22, 2008
  • Alone,
    me,
    20 lines, 3 comments, February 29, 2008
  • Pain, you'll never
    escape it.
    23 lines, 2 comments, February 29, 2008

Guest Book

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  • xxheartxbreakerxx : :( on May 1
    awww...you never talk to me anymore. it is really sad. i miss talking to you. message me sometime.
    ~love you~
  • XxForeverFaithfulxX on September 15, 2008
    I love your page!
  • peridotPixi on May 15, 2008
    checking out your page just to say thanks for the comments on my poems, keep up the wonderful writing -Amy
  • xxheartxbreakerxx : BLAAAA on May 14, 2008
    tHX 4 ADDING ME TO UR FAV.'S
    HEARTS AND BUBBLES
    BYE

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