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Hello out there my fellow muses & poets,
My name is Brynee Jade, I am 16 yrs old, my profile indicates 18, some of my poetry contains material most would consider inappropriate for young minds, although most would consider me a young mind, myself.
Also i wouldnt be able to read a fair a chunk of my poetry otherwise.

I am currently working as a Delicattessen Assistant in the local supermarket. Jobs a job! Recently started looking for another part time job to fill in time. Getting there!

I am about to start an 18 mth course in massage therapy through Cengage Education by correspondance, looking forward to it immensly.

I only just got back from an vacation in Bridgetown, WA. I went over for my best friend, Jess's, 18th Birthday. Missing it so much already, and everyone there.

** Shout outs to ** Dan the man & Shannarra, Pace, Ais, Mindi & Ross, Stotty & Ben, Cass & Neill (i think lol), Allan + Jayden, Gregg, Josh, Jason, Jess O'H, Allie & Nayman, Joe, Jo & Chris, Damo, Kat, Jaye, Corrina & Larna, Alanna, & Rastas, Pixie, Sabrina, Dagda.., if i forgot you, let me know!

Pen away all you poetic princesses, & paupers.
Blessed Be xXx.

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I ask only one thing of all of you.
If you happen to have the time at any stage,
please look through & comment on my poetry fairly & honestly.
Help me please.
Tell me where i'm wrong, where i can improve.
Let me know if a certain line or phrase really sets in your mind.
I hold all praise & critisims of my poems very dear to my heart,
So please. Let me know what YOU feel when you read MY words.
If you have the time :]
Thanking you all Deeply. xXx
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To personalise things a bit i have created my own category system (I'm hoping one day to be able to use it in my very own published book (= ) [[[ Under Construstion, still to be applied to poems ]]] :
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1) The Heartfelt Haven
- Love, Friendship, Hope, Faith, Family, Relationships.
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2) Echoes in the Graveyard
- Death, Mourning, Loss, Grief, Suicide, Murder.
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3) Flora Vs. Fauna
- Nature, Animals, Seasons, Natural Disasters.
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4) The Tear Well
- Pain, Sad, Depression, Lost Love, Betrayl, Heartbreak.
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5) Darkened Corner
- Self harm, Deep Meaning, Message, Philosophical, Lost in thought.
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6) Ciao
- Goodbyes, Letting go, Moving on, Giving up, Parting.
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7) Sex, Drugs & Alcohol
- Adult, Sex, Drugs, Erotica, Partying, Stealing, Teen issues, Mental/Physical/Emotional/Sexual/Substance Abuse, Domestic Violence, Family Issues.
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8) Watch Your Back
- Hate, Betrayl, Revenge, Karma, Threats, Anger, Enemies.
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9) To A Different Rhythm
- Prose, Freeverse. (I've only just become interested in these, bear with me. Im hoping to improve soon :]. )
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L o v e | IS | f r i e n d s h i p | ON | f i r e | - Unknown

| <3 | One...
Love comes in many forms, many shapes & sizes. Love is trusting someone with your life, facing death, and holding the thought in your mind knowing you aren't going to die.

/\ Roslyn Lena McDonald - My Mother. xXx
\/ Kathleen McDonald - My Grandmother. xXx
/\ Jessaka Rose Lupardo - My Best Friend, 'Blood Sister'. xXx
\/ Brodie John Waters - My Best Mate, A Big Brother. xXx
/\ Gavin Alan Hicks - My Ex Boyfriend, A Dear Friend. xXx

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F A M I L Y | fills the gaps | W H E N N O T H I N G S O K |
Keeps the haters | & | false fears at bay.
| N O M A T T E R | what they say, they are, forever | & always | S T I L L F A M I L Y |

True understanding | C O M E S | from one | K I N D | of love. True accomplishment | C O M E S | from one | K I N D | of support.

| <3 | Two..
Family
The ones i see celebrating joyously at my wedding reception,
& if need be gathered at my final farewell.

/\ My Mother Roslyn.
\/ My Aunty Jenette + My cousins Jeames & Liam.
/\ My Uncle Robert + My Cousins Aidan, Lachlan & Katelyn.
\/ My Grandmother Kathleen.
/\ My Uncle Ron, My Second Cousin Ronnie, & Cheryl + Heather.
\/ My Father Charles.
/\ My Grandmother Sophia, My Grandfather Anton,
\/ My Aunt Suzi & Uncle Rodney, My Cousin Stefan.

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A | G O O D F R I E N D | will come | & B A I L Y O U O U T | of jail, a | B E S T F R I E N D | will be sitting | B E S I D E
Y O U | saying "Damn, I think we stuffed up!"

| F R I E N D S | are the foundation on which | W E R E L A T E
T O E V E R Y O N E | around us, | & | the | S A F E T Y | net we | F A L L B A C K O N |

| <3 | Three..
Those i consider my friends, the ones that have stuck by me through & through . Much Love
A realm of reality & comfort, security & randomness.
One Love, Two forms.

"Smiles & Screams,
Giggles & Dreams,
Love to my friends,
There til the end"

Love to you all, Kisses to my bitches, Hugs to my thugs. xXx.
Jessaka Lupardo, Brodie Waters, Sue Allman & Pete Wormald, Gavin Hicks <3, Bradley Airs, Tarni Airs, Tracey Airs, Terrilee Finlayson, Dee & B.G, Leigh Downie [hursty], Sandra & Carl + Adam + Mariah + Deanna Lee + Shaun + Casey + Michael, Rhett Carter, Adrian Hamilton [hammo], Mark Cummins [cummo] Dazza Coonity, Steve Coonity + Kayshah, + Kayde + Kaytlin Coonity, Shane Price, Linda Price, Becka Stone & Daniel Hart + Tadpole Stone, Dez Hart, Jimmi, Brian Madill, Baker .., Linzi McAnulty + Tadpole, Murry, Adrian Wells [wellsy], Dezal Torney <3x..,
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| T A K E N | too soon, but never really | G O N E |

Only the | G O O D D I E | young


| <3 | Four..
Loss is the worst feeling of them all, especially if there's no chance to revive whats once was. Missing you deeply, holding you close. Everyday, in every way.

Lenard Charles McDonald xXx
June Craig xXx
Adam James Bruton xXx
Lucinda Daphne Wilson xXx
Alex John Blair Graham xXx
Brylie Maureen Argaet xXx

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Music is the | w i n d o w | to the soul, and the | l y r i c s | are the stories we play out. - xXLithiumKissesXx

| <3 | Five..
The sounds blast out of my speakers, at all velocities, from all genres. They help me feel, stop feeling, hold on, and let go.

|~| SONG ON MY MIND NOW |~|

/\ The Sea is Rising - Bliss N Eso ft Hyjack

|~| TOP 10 |~|

/\ The Sea Is Rising & On a Bender - Bliss N Eso
\/ Because The Night & Another You - Cascada
/\ Hands Held High & In Pieces - Linkin Park
\/ She Loves me Not & Between Angels & Insects -PapaRoach
/\ Kill You & 3AM In The Morning - Eminem
\/ Riot & I Hate to Love you - Three Days Grace
/\ Journey & Ghetto - Akon
\/ Innocence & Fall to Pieces - Avril Lavigne
/\ Fall for you - Secondhand Serenade
\/ Teenagers - My Chemical Romance

| ~ | The Rest | ~ |

2Pac, 3 Doors Down, 3 Days Grace, 50 Cent, Aaliyah, Afroman, Akon, Alanis Morissette, Amanda Marshall, Amiel, Anastacia, Ashlee Simpson, Aqua, Avantasia, Avril Lavigne, Billy Joel, Blink 182, Bliss N Eso, Bloodhound Gang, Bomfunk MC's, Bon Jovi, Bryan Adams, Cascada, Chingy, Cold Chisel,
Cypress Hill, D12, Disturbed, DJ Alligator Project, DJ Sammy, DJ Alex, Dr Dre, Secondhand Serenade, Lilly Allen, The Eagles, Edguy, Eminem, Entwine, Evanescence, Fall Out Boy, Flo Rida, Fort Minor, The Game, Good Charlotte, Gotthard, Greenday, Guns N Roses, Gym Class Heroes,

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  • Last seen on Nov 14 12:21 AM. Member since September 15, 2008.
  • I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 19 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "It fluctuates to often to describe..".
  • I am a girl (Australia)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Studying massage through correspondance learning, and caring for my mum, she is very sick..
  • I have 19 comments, 79 poems

My Poetry

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  • Dainty & dreaming,
    Floating on air,
    24 lines, 1 comment, July 15
  • They blame it on innocence
    And its nothing but nonsence,
    19 lines, July 15
  • I was cleaning out the house today,
    And i found my silver box,
    19 lines, July 15
  • I warned you of my temper, & the vengeance i would keep,
    If ever did you cross me, if you ever made me weep,
    14 lines, July 15

Guest Book

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  • cazzy71 : Surprised on June 23
    Am surprised to read this is your first bronze,the quality of your work would lend me to believe you deserved more awards.It is difficult to judge others work,each author has there own ideas,styles,interpretation of the brief,and when entries are so strong,even some amazing pieces,do not get any credit.
  • Enrinye on June 11
    I read some of your poems and also commented...you have an unique way of writing and expressing yourself, so I would like to include you in my favourites hope you don't mind

    take care
    Suza
  • CharcoalScreams on September 22, 2008
    hello hunnie... I read your bebo page =)
    hope you can remember me.. gr.. you better =p
    should catch up sometime..

    Sammie, xx

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