I'm real new to this poetry stuff, and to be honest I'm pretty damn embarassed about it. Anyways, please check out my writing, leave me feedback and help me out. If you like what you see and your interested in collaborating give me a shout.
Here and now we are less than we were nearly yesterday.
Death is a mystery to those left behind.
So we offer a chorus to those gone before us
and one in particular shines.
So I'll say hello to the girls that you know
and they'll laugh 'till they cry over stories of you.
At a table for one I'll recall all you've done,
and I'll finish my Guinness for two.
Away, oh, away!
A glass for one away.
Today, oh, today!
The past is done today.
Well, they say when you lose any limb you could choose
that surely you feel it, but surely it's gone.
In the same way, we know, up above we'll be whole
and our grand misadventures go on.
So I'll say hello to the girls that you know
and they'll laugh 'till they cry over stories of you.
At a table for one I'll recall all you've done,
and I'll finish my Guinness for two.
Though I miss you like burning, I don't wish your returning,
for you have gone on to joy evermore.
And I'll follow you soon for a life is a tune
and together we'll sing the encore.
-- "Guinness For Two," McKenna
Here and now we are less than we were nearly yesterday.
Death is a mystery to those left behind.
So we offer a chorus to those gone before us
and one in particular shines.
So I'll say hello to the girls that you know
and they'll laugh 'till they cry over stories of you.
At a table for one I'll recall all you've done,
and I'll finish my Guinness for two.
Away, oh, away!
A glass for one away.
Today, oh, today!
The past is done today.
Well, they say when you lose any limb you could choose
that surely you feel it, but surely it's gone.
In the same way, we know, up above we'll be whole
and our grand misadventures go on.
So I'll say hello to the girls that you know
and they'll laugh 'till they cry over stories of you.
At a table for one I'll recall all you've done,
and I'll finish my Guinness for two.
Though I miss you like burning, I don't wish your returning,
for you have gone on to joy evermore.
And I'll follow you soon for a life is a tune
and together we'll sing the encore.
-- "Guinness For Two," McKenna
- Last seen on Sep 30 8:03 PM. Member since December 10, 2005.
- I'm a topaz horse poet for 15 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "we'll laugh 'till we cry over stories of you...".
- I am a 23 year old guy (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
- I have 15 comments, 14 poems
My Poetry
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Holding our frame and devouring our light,
We all fail or we stand tonight.34 lines, 3 comments, December 5, 2007. In Anti-Establishment -
Sifting through piles of options and thoughts,
Titles telling things I don’t lament lost,46 lines, 1 comment, September 16, 2007 -
Across deserts and mountains and sands of time,
A piece it escapes me as I hunger to find,17 lines, 2 comments, September 15, 2007 -
Ignore the lines and creative notes,
A naked truth in life we find,18 lines, 1 comment, March 18, 2007
Guest Book
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FlameGemini on December 13, 2005Thanks for your comment on Sympathy for the Marytr. I really appreciated it ^^ I plan on reading most of your work, as I've put you on my favorites list. Are you the one in the Flogging Molly shirt? Because that would wrock hardcore. How'd you find me anyways? Flogging Molly wrocks my socks, and so do you! ... Even though I'm wearing flip flops... Which is kinda bad... Cause it's the middle of winter in Chicago... Oops... Anywayz, thanks for the comment. ^_^
Morgan
Edited on Dec 13, 9:13 because 'Because having premium for a week screw things up...'.
