Hiya well i came across this site when i was doing some homework and gradually got interested in other peoples work i enjoy reading anything really i think my style of poetry often changes. Some friends i have made on AP have written me these poems
Formerly Creativity22
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Can be caring,
Rare personality, she has,
Ever elegant, some may say,
Anonymous you remain,
Trusting all through,
Idol you maybe,
Vain you can be,
Impossible at times,
Time flies by,
Young at heart, and always will be,
2 night you will become, a great poet,
2 good to be true, you may say
Bluemoon wrote this poem for me thank-you my friend
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Cheerful young poet
Really does show it
Especially when writing
A poem so inviting
That touches your heart
In its deepest part
Very touching her writes
In a way that delights
The emotions you feel
You’ll love their appeal
2 no end am I happy
2 have a friend like Jacqui
My dear friend sewasham wrote this for me
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He brushed his teeth just like he'd been told.
He rushed to the door & grabbed his books.
around & around he then looks.
From the second he reaches the bus the names start to be called.
They made fun of his clothes & the book-bag he hauled.
The boy never really fit in school.
Being smart just didn't make you cool.
I remember one day i saw him drentched in mustard.
kids were throwing pizza & school custard.
Then one girl poored milk over his head.
he walked to the office wishing to be dead.
& the girl he liked had no heart at all.
He gave her a flower & told her to call.
she took the flower & threw it in the trash can.
& told him she'd never date such an ugly man.
so that night he said good night to his mother.
kissed his dad & tucked in his little brother.
He put on his shoes & walked through the night.
until his middle school crept into sight.
he grabbed onto the rope he said his goodbye.
for then he decided he wanted to die.
so he took a step & down he fell.
he hung there right infront of his own hell.
"Jon Gettle hung himself in front of his middle school in Illinois at midnight. He left a note. it stated: "Bullying is a problem"
'BULLYING IS A PROBLEM' DONT CHANGE IT BECASUE WERE TRYING TO GET THE MESSAGE ACROSS. AND NEXT TIME YOU THINK OH IM GONNA PICK ON THAT PERSON ITS NOT COOL OR SMART ITS DUMB BECASUE YOUR NOT THINKIN OF THE CONCEQUENCES AND IF SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS IT WILL BE ON YOUR CONCIENCE
i hate bullying and i.m an avid campaigner
\(\ /) THIS IS MR.BUNNY. PLEASE PASTE HIM ON YOUR PAGE
(0.o) IN ORDER TO HELP HIM WITH HIS MISSION TO DOMINATE
(>"> THE WORLD!!!
/_l_\ \
You can contact me at jax378@hotmail.com
My dream is to write a song for greenday, also to be published
i love to be different (probs cuz i.ve been a reject all my life lol)
Bands i like:
Greenday (obviously)
Motorhead
KISS
Queen
Backyard Babies!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good Charlotte
Nightwish
Guns N Roses
Daft Punk
Body Rockers
The Pixies
Bloc Party
Erika Black
Yello Snow
etc. There are sooooo many
TV thats kool:
Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Angel
The Simpsons
W.I.T.C.H
Fairly Odd Parents
Dark Angel
Normally really weird stuff (according to my sister
lol)
(i.ll be here forever if i write them all lol)
Books:
Darren Shan saga
Harry Potter
Set in Stone
Railway Children
Goodnight Mister Tom
The Hungry Tide
Time Travelers Wife
Where a rainbow ends
PS i love you
anything by Jodi Picoult
and loads more!!
Random Quotes:
All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them.~~Walt Disney
The past is a foreign country, they do things differently there. ~~ L.P.Hartley
Without Passion we'd be truly dead.~~Angel (Buffy the Vampire Slayer)
Kool Websites:
www.sethwhite.org
www.freewebs.com/blondebiccy (it's not me)
loads more!!
My dreams are to write a song for Greenday and to travel the world and to see Antarctica
I.m a Gemini and Peterborough.
Hey and i run two writing groups one called just chat the other chill out
each is just a place where writers can relax and chill if you'd like to join there are the links down the bottom. Have Fun!!
Jacqui
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Formerly Creativity22
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Can be caring,
Rare personality, she has,
Ever elegant, some may say,
Anonymous you remain,
Trusting all through,
Idol you maybe,
Vain you can be,
Impossible at times,
Time flies by,
Young at heart, and always will be,
2 night you will become, a great poet,
2 good to be true, you may say
Bluemoon wrote this poem for me thank-you my friend
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Cheerful young poet
Really does show it
Especially when writing
A poem so inviting
That touches your heart
In its deepest part
Very touching her writes
In a way that delights
The emotions you feel
You’ll love their appeal
2 no end am I happy
2 have a friend like Jacqui
My dear friend sewasham wrote this for me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He brushed his teeth just like he'd been told.
He rushed to the door & grabbed his books.
around & around he then looks.
From the second he reaches the bus the names start to be called.
They made fun of his clothes & the book-bag he hauled.
The boy never really fit in school.
Being smart just didn't make you cool.
I remember one day i saw him drentched in mustard.
kids were throwing pizza & school custard.
Then one girl poored milk over his head.
he walked to the office wishing to be dead.
& the girl he liked had no heart at all.
He gave her a flower & told her to call.
she took the flower & threw it in the trash can.
& told him she'd never date such an ugly man.
so that night he said good night to his mother.
kissed his dad & tucked in his little brother.
He put on his shoes & walked through the night.
until his middle school crept into sight.
he grabbed onto the rope he said his goodbye.
for then he decided he wanted to die.
so he took a step & down he fell.
he hung there right infront of his own hell.
"Jon Gettle hung himself in front of his middle school in Illinois at midnight. He left a note. it stated: "Bullying is a problem"
'BULLYING IS A PROBLEM' DONT CHANGE IT BECASUE WERE TRYING TO GET THE MESSAGE ACROSS. AND NEXT TIME YOU THINK OH IM GONNA PICK ON THAT PERSON ITS NOT COOL OR SMART ITS DUMB BECASUE YOUR NOT THINKIN OF THE CONCEQUENCES AND IF SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS IT WILL BE ON YOUR CONCIENCE
i hate bullying and i.m an avid campaigner
\(\ /) THIS IS MR.BUNNY. PLEASE PASTE HIM ON YOUR PAGE
(0.o) IN ORDER TO HELP HIM WITH HIS MISSION TO DOMINATE
(>"> THE WORLD!!!
/_l_\ \
You can contact me at jax378@hotmail.com
My dream is to write a song for greenday, also to be published
i love to be different (probs cuz i.ve been a reject all my life lol)
Bands i like:
Greenday (obviously)
Motorhead
KISS
Queen
Backyard Babies!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good Charlotte
Nightwish
Guns N Roses
Daft Punk
Body Rockers
The Pixies
Bloc Party
Erika Black
Yello Snow
etc. There are sooooo many
TV thats kool:
Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Angel
The Simpsons
W.I.T.C.H
Fairly Odd Parents
Dark Angel
Normally really weird stuff (according to my sister
lol)(i.ll be here forever if i write them all lol)
Books:
Darren Shan saga
Harry Potter
Set in Stone
Railway Children
Goodnight Mister Tom
The Hungry Tide
Time Travelers Wife
Where a rainbow ends
PS i love you
anything by Jodi Picoult
and loads more!!
Random Quotes:
All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them.~~Walt Disney
The past is a foreign country, they do things differently there. ~~ L.P.Hartley
Without Passion we'd be truly dead.~~Angel (Buffy the Vampire Slayer)
Kool Websites:
www.sethwhite.org
www.freewebs.com/blondebiccy (it's not me)
loads more!!
My dreams are to write a song for Greenday and to travel the world and to see Antarctica
I.m a Gemini and Peterborough.
Hey and i run two writing groups one called just chat the other chill out
each is just a place where writers can relax and chill if you'd like to join there are the links down the bottom. Have Fun!!
Jacqui
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- I am a 15 year old girl (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a High School Student.
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- I have 462 comments, 4 contests, 2 addlines, 67 poems, 2 stories
My Poetry
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a key in a lock, / a picture on the wall, / memories locked away in walls, / laughter round every corner, / teasing and mocking, / take the box down from them cupboard, / the memoirs from the fridge, / Trave7 lines, July 10, 2007. In Personal
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Butterflies and Roses;
in the summer and spring;
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'When the sun reaches the moon the daylight is gone but the twilight zone appears' Hi my name is ali and i.m going to be a poet/astrominer when i.m older did you guess? I am on439 lines, 5 comments, February 21, 2004. In <200 lines, Crime
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Angel Full Of Hurt on October 14, 2006fabulous username!
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PrincessTigris on June 23, 2006Hey Jax! Just thought that I'd say hi! I see that you changed your name...
15!!! Wow...we've known each other for 2 years or something...you were my first AP friend!
Well, I haven't been on in awhile, so I am going to go and catch up on some of your new stuff...in love eh? I remember being in love at 15...what a dream!
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Somebody-New on March 23, 2006hey, just coming to check out your stuff like i said i would. thanks for all your comments on my poetry. i didin't actually realise that i had talked to you before, i am so sorry
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Somebody-New on December 3, 2005ok, after your comment on my bio, i though i would check out yours...can i just say that i love you?! your taste in music is awesome!
i love every band that you have listed, in drama class recently, we had to film a music video clip and me and my friends did we will rock you...it looked awesome!
i hope to talk to you soon...i'm going to check out your poems now!
