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well i am not really on the computer alot but when i am on it is usually for hours at a time. I love to write poetry so i have posted a few of my pieces but i hate it when people critque your fellings not your work so i try to keep the really personal things to myself, at my house, in my room inside the wonderful safe amber bought me (i really dont want to give my parents another reason to believe that i am  "another sucidel teen").  My future is really important to me and if you know me you would understand why.  I live in a two bedroom trailer in a small town with a very angry brother, always fighting parents who need a devorce and a sister who only lives with us when it is a convenience to her.  my parents have three kids ages 18-13 and they are only 35 years old and i dont want to end up like them so i take everything in life serious... especially school.  i am a junior at a tech school now and i have strait a's for the first time in my life and i plane on keeping it that way all the way through collage at clark state or ou. i love poetry so i i will try to comment on your as long as you do the same for me.


Things I hate: colored chuck talors, football players,  poetry about RAINBOWS!,  little kids who think their PunK,


Things I love: cheese balls, push pops, ohana punch (faygo), my friends, Parites Bay Rum w/ pinapple-orange juice, guys with gaged ears, tatoos and piercing, painting class and art with mrs.g, poetry and my true love music!




  • Last seen on Jul 14 2:48 PM 2008. Member since May 25, 2004.
  • I'm a peridot parrot poet for 45 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "cha cha cha chia".
  • I am a girl (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • Visit my homepage at www.alltungetideovau.com
  • I have 45 comments, 8 poems

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 8   Show all Search
  • But this time they will keep you
    Where you cant hurt me anymore
    18 lines, 1 comment, December 28, 2004. In Abuse
  • but the thought of hating you so much
    is all I really hate
    43 lines, 4 comments, December 26, 2004. In Personal
  • they tell you how to look,
    how to act and how to be
    22 lines, 3 comments, October 18, 2004. In Hope
  • you call yourself a good parent
    and you say your beside me all the way
    24 lines, 2 comments, July 2, 2004. In Personal, Abuse, Love

Guest Book

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  • on December 30, 2004
    I can't possibly thank you enough for your fantastic comment. I promise you that I will return the favor as soon as possible.

    Have a fabulous evening.

    Cheers,
    Whitney
  • troubled-love22 on October 17, 2004
    heeeyyyyyy Loser!! whats up yeah... what the crap I got on here so that I could freakin talk to you and ur not even on!!! whatever!! lol j/p... had a lot of fun last night and today it was nice hangin out with you again!!! welps bayba gotta get off here I'll ttyl love ya !!!
    ~Amber

    P.S. "Contact"
    Edited on Oct 18, 8:29 p.m. because 'spelling'.
  • Just An Echo on July 4, 2004
    mmmmm...Faygo be good. hehehehe. Just saw that you like faygo and I had to respond to that hehe. Later.
    *~~>Echo<~~*
  • lifelesslie on June 3, 2004
    yeah lol i guss we have something things in alike, but my little sister is the ice queen. i am the oldest. thinks for reading
    James

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