I have written mostly love poems. They rhyme easily and sometimes it seems I've tried hard to force them to rhyme. Most of the poems are inspired by some women I've known; some in relationships and some just admired. Maybe one day I'll expand my poetry to a more broader range of topics like my good friend brad-the-bard.
Brad once sent me poem by Pablo Neruda and drew comparisons between this great poet's style and my own. Recently I've been re-reading Sonnet XVII by Pablo Neruda and it brings tears to my eyes every single time.
My mother said to me, "If you are a soldier, you will become a general. If you are a monk, you will become the Pope." Instead, I was a painter, and became Picasso.
Pablo Picasso
Brad once sent me poem by Pablo Neruda and drew comparisons between this great poet's style and my own. Recently I've been re-reading Sonnet XVII by Pablo Neruda and it brings tears to my eyes every single time.
My mother said to me, "If you are a soldier, you will become a general. If you are a monk, you will become the Pope." Instead, I was a painter, and became Picasso.
Pablo Picasso
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- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 25 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is Inspiration for the Nation.
- I am a 32 year old man (South Africa)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Entrepreneur.
- Visit my homepage at ramonthomas.com
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My Poetry
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Your eyes are like the deep sea waters,
drowning with sorrow from a lifetime before me.24 lines, November 18, 2005. In Love -
I lost you once before my love
How can I loose you again?20 lines, 6 comments, November 16, 2004. In Love -
Your smile is mystically divine
Oh! Won't you please become mine?31 lines, 1 comment, October 30, 2004. In Love -
Love and friendship cause pain
so I never could forget my vanity18 lines, October 30, 2004. In Love
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