please give me some critism on my poems good or bad god knows i need it
check out some of my boyfriend's poems allpoetry.com/poet/shadow7
~*I LOVE YOU DALE!!!*~ with all my heart!!!!
Your voice makes me tremble inside
And your smile is an invitation
For my imagination to go wild.
~ by Anonymous ~
True love doesn't have a happy ending:
True love doesn't have an ending.
~ by Anonymous ~
A heart that loves is always young.
~ by A Greek Proverb ~
If I know what love is,
It is because of you.
~ by Herman Hesse ~
"I wish I didn't have any feelings,
because that's what breaks your heart."
~ by Austin Irwin ~
allpoetry.com/poets/Bland%20Butterfly check out some of brookes poems too another awesome writer is kira allpoetry.com/poets/Sunset%20Dreamer she just joined but that doesnt mean that they arent good
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(O.o) This is Mr.Bunny Please Paste him on your page in order to help
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Him with his mission to DOMINATE the world!!!
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31 ways to make a girl smile (i thought this was sweet)
1. Dont hug her friends or your friends that are girls cause she'll feel left out
2. Hold her hand at any moment . . . even if its just for a second.
3. Hug her from behind
4. Leave her voice messages to wake up to.
5. Wrestle with her
6. Don't go hang out with your ex when shes not with you, you might not realize how badly it hurts her.
7.If you're talking to another girl, when you're done talking, walk over and hug her and kiss her.... let her know she's yours and they aren't.
8. Write her notes or call her just to say "hi"
9. Introduce her to your friends . . . as your girlfriend.
10. Play with her hair.
11. Pick her up (if she likes it)
12. Get upset if another guy touches her and she doesn't like it
13. Make her laugh
14. Let her fall asleep in your arms.
15. If she's mad at you, kiss her.
16. If you care about her, then TELL HER (and don't be afraid to tell everyone else too!)
17. Every guy should give their girl 3 things: a stuffed animal(she'll hug it every time she goes to sleep), jewelry (she'll treasure it forever), and one of his t-shirts (she'll most likely wear it to bed).
18.Treat her the same around your friends as you do when you're alone.
19. Look her in the eyes and smile.
20. Hang out with her on weekends
21. Kiss her in the rain (girls love this)
22. Kiss her just for the heck of it
23. If your listening to music, let her listen too.
24. Remember her birthday and get her something, even if
its simple and inexpensive, it came from YOU. it means all the world to HER.
25. When she gives you a present on your birthday, Christmas, or just whenever, take it and tell her you love it, even if you don't (it'll make her happy.)
26. Always call her when you say you will, it may not seem like it, but it does hurt her and makes her think you don't care so call even if you can only talk for a minute. Girls don't necessarily have to have hour-long conversations every night but its nice for us to hear your voice even for a quick hello.
27. Give her what she wants (unless its ridiculous)
28. Recognize the small things . . . they usually mean the most.
29. tell her shes gorgeous...beautiful is getting old
30. Hang out with her whenever you are free
31. If u care about her...SHOW her!
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- Last seen on Apr 18 10:14 AM. Member since November 27, 2005.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 174 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "never underestimate the impossible".
- I am a 15 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.

- I have 174 comments, 18 poems
My Poetry
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My love, I miss you terribly right now. Sitting at home is so hard when I can't see your face, or feel your embrace. I love you. I want you to know, that you make me happy. Happier than I eve4 lines, 3 comments, September 6, 2007
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Kelsey is my favorite friend. / Her hair is blonde and blue. / She’s forever there until the end, / And I always love her shoes. / / Kelsey always wears black clothes. / My dad thinks she’s gothic. / She never29 lines, 3 comments, May 10, 2007. In Humor
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Looking at those old photographs
seeing your smile s49 lines, 1 comment, September 23, 2006. In Love
Guest Book
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BrokenDesires : hey on April 17, 2008I haven't talked to you in a very long time, I miss ya. I'll be visiting MI, in june and maybe if I see Kelsey or something, we can all hang out, write me, I'll talk to you soon, later... ^_^ ~Becca
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BrokenDesires : hmmmm on April 21, 2007LOVE YOU jenny, ^_^
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shadow7 on May 24, 2006hey i havent been on allpoetry lately but i am getting ready to go to bed so i can see you smile in the morning.. i thought id come and see whats new on your page.. I love you with all my heart, see you in the morning hun; with tons of love, dale
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shadow7 on April 18, 20066 minutes ago are you still on
