--My writing style--
When I write, I go around the subject, and describe it as many ways as possible (see: "Alleyway", or "City In Dark")...so that the reader feels as if they were there with me, experiencing the same thing as I may. I also like to use big, flowing words that are heavy with vowels. Also, although I do not post poetry or stories that often, I still comment like mad. If I ever comment on something you've written, you cannot miss it: I leave rediculously long comments.
--What's New--
To make short of a long story, I'm very happy with James. Everyday that we are together, physically or not, I feel blessed for him letting me be a part of his life. There are times where the static emotion that is happiness runs through me so powerfully, all I can do is just smile like a fool. I wake up, and wonder if he's awake yet. When I head to bed, I cuddle my blankets in a large mass and try to replace the shape his body against mine. It's all I can do until I see him again.
I care about James so very much. Even the thought of him being unhappy upsets me greatly. I couldn't even imagine a frown upon his face. He just makes me feel alive again, full of love. I'd love to hug him, and hold him forever. But forever isn't long enough for me.
It's been over a week since he "took my hand" and stated asked at if I was ready to take the friendship one more step further. (Do you remember?)
I'm still completely amazed at what a wonderful person James is. Wow. Wow x 1,000. Oh my God it's ridiculous. The way his mouth twists with his smile fills me warmth. How he goes out of his way to open the door the restaurant, and gets frustrated when I do it, makes me feel appreciated. His happy-go-lucky, it'll-get-better attitude fills my days with optimism.
With this new-found happiness, my creative blok has dissolved. I'm back to painting, and showing it off, too. Just recently, I painted Dory (from Finding Nemo) onto my backpack. I need to fix the eyes, however. I plan on painting the (yellow) cow fish from the aquarium (the one with the bubble addiction,) also. That means I'll get around to it next month.
--Advice, et al--
Do ignore the "My Motto" bit. That's just how I want to be viewed when I leave a comment. (Look at a comment I've left if you don't fully understand what I'm saying.)
--Speak up, the world can't hear you.--
--I leave long comments.--
I average about three lines on my comments, and about four points. So do expect that when I comment on your or a piece of yours, the comment will be quite lengthy. Not to mention wordy. :-p
When I write, I go around the subject, and describe it as many ways as possible (see: "Alleyway", or "City In Dark")...so that the reader feels as if they were there with me, experiencing the same thing as I may. I also like to use big, flowing words that are heavy with vowels. Also, although I do not post poetry or stories that often, I still comment like mad. If I ever comment on something you've written, you cannot miss it: I leave rediculously long comments.
--What's New--
To make short of a long story, I'm very happy with James. Everyday that we are together, physically or not, I feel blessed for him letting me be a part of his life. There are times where the static emotion that is happiness runs through me so powerfully, all I can do is just smile like a fool. I wake up, and wonder if he's awake yet. When I head to bed, I cuddle my blankets in a large mass and try to replace the shape his body against mine. It's all I can do until I see him again.
I care about James so very much. Even the thought of him being unhappy upsets me greatly. I couldn't even imagine a frown upon his face. He just makes me feel alive again, full of love. I'd love to hug him, and hold him forever. But forever isn't long enough for me.
It's been over a week since he "took my hand" and stated asked at if I was ready to take the friendship one more step further. (Do you remember?)
I'm still completely amazed at what a wonderful person James is. Wow. Wow x 1,000. Oh my God it's ridiculous. The way his mouth twists with his smile fills me warmth. How he goes out of his way to open the door the restaurant, and gets frustrated when I do it, makes me feel appreciated. His happy-go-lucky, it'll-get-better attitude fills my days with optimism.
With this new-found happiness, my creative blok has dissolved. I'm back to painting, and showing it off, too. Just recently, I painted Dory (from Finding Nemo) onto my backpack. I need to fix the eyes, however. I plan on painting the (yellow) cow fish from the aquarium (the one with the bubble addiction,) also. That means I'll get around to it next month.
--Advice, et al--
Do ignore the "My Motto" bit. That's just how I want to be viewed when I leave a comment. (Look at a comment I've left if you don't fully understand what I'm saying.)
--Speak up, the world can't hear you.--
--I leave long comments.--
I average about three lines on my comments, and about four points. So do expect that when I comment on your or a piece of yours, the comment will be quite lengthy. Not to mention wordy. :-p
- Last seen on Jul 27 11:09 PM 2006. Member since June 20, 2003.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 120 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "The reluctant poet with".
- I am a 19 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student, mainly..
- I have 120 comments, 2 addlines, 1 column, 26 poems, 9 stories
My Poetry
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I wrote this very quickly, and I like how it turned out. It's about seeing past your family's faults.
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I know this piece did not have to be about rabbits, I thought the theme was cute so I went along with it.
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I reach across the table,
towards a glass bowl -
The fizzy-ness in your love handles,
and your single, sugar kissing-ways,
My Stories
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238 lines, 2 comments, December 4, 2003. In <200 lines, Young adult
Guest Book
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Well hello there again missy! Guess who? I had no idea you were on here until about 5 minutes ago, so I figured I would bug you some more cuz I just miss talking to ya! I'm very glad to hear things are working out with this James fellow. I really like what I've read of yours so I'll have to leave a comment sometime. Check some of my stuff out if you want, you may like it, who knows? Anyways I guess I shall talk at you later.
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Scarlett on July 1, 2004LIKE WHOA! I haven't commented on your page since Christmas of last year...LOL!
Hope you're having a great summer, Alisey-Poo...AND DON'T FORGET -- I'm coming over if your computer is fixed, or you're coming over here. (This would be taking place on Saturday...FYI)
You know you love me,
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Scarlett on December 25, 2003Aww..What would I do without your motivation?
Merry Christmas!
!~*YS4e*~!
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MoonDemon on December 15, 2003Hey aorry it took so long toget back to you... it is a personal experience unfortunately, but in away a gift... i don't mind at all that you put my poem on MUST READ list, i'm very flattered thank you for you r comments they mean a lot to me...

