Every once in a while I write something new
The old stuff is either really good or really bad. The new stuff I pretty much like.
But what do YOU think?
I am 18. I like writing poetry, but sometimes I am uninspired. I draw a lot more recently. I have a deviantart account with photos I've taken and/or edited. Feel free to take a look, it's not exactly thrilling though, I'm not superskilled.
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The old stuff is either really good or really bad. The new stuff I pretty much like.
But what do YOU think?
I am 18. I like writing poetry, but sometimes I am uninspired. I draw a lot more recently. I have a deviantart account with photos I've taken and/or edited. Feel free to take a look, it's not exactly thrilling though, I'm not superskilled.
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- Last seen on Oct 25 12:28 AM 2006. Member since January 29, 2004.
- I'm a obsidian idea poet for 578 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is its not really dying if you never really lived.
- I am a 18 year old girl (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I have 578 comments, 5 contests
My Poetry
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I pretend I'm improving
but I'm just a better liar20 lines, 3 comments, September 17, 2006. In Personal -
The harder I push it away,
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I spread out my hands and reach for you,
but you dissolve like a mirage24 lines, April 12, 2006. In Other -
I look back on past times
alone in the dark20 lines, 4 comments, February 15, 2006. In Other
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The razor-sharp blade sped towards the clear expanse of skin before it. The clean metal dove through layers of skin, flesh, muscle, and tendon AS smoothely as
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When Michael was little, he was mostly neglected by his mother, who was always on heroine or cocaine or whatever drug she could afford that day. Her 'boyfriends' (if you
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Danny was a little boy, about 9 or 10. He wore socks with holes, ripped jeans, no shoes, and a black felt hat several sizes too large. Although he knew his own name
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massacre on November 2, 2006Hey, I just commented on a few of your poems, so I thought I'd leave you a comment. As I said a few times before. I read your post in the forum about honest opinions on peoples poetry. It's a really great idea. I think It's going to help a lot of people, a lo. Lolzz. I don't know why, but yeah, I just feel that the last lines of your poems let them down a bit. I personally like it to be a.... Dead end. Like.... It's the end of something. I just don't feel like thats happening when I read yours. I really hope that that helps. You are a brilliant writter though. And I enjoyed reading your poems. I hope to hear from you soon with some advice on mine! xx
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Hiatus on September 11, 2006I wish you still wrote.
I don't even remember how you used to write.
I am very different now. I would not agree with what I wrote to you earlier, anymore. I don't even think I agreed with it then. I think it's bullshit. I think self-harm is a crock, and that people do it because they can't accept their own fallacies and so they create problems outside themselves to alert other people to the disease inside. But then it backfires because as much pain as they are in- people love to wallow in pity.
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translucent on January 8, 2006wow, if you used masochism and more for a contest name I'd feel very special
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i don't come on this site as much as i used to, or should, but i only just read your comment, and thanks very much, it's greatly appreciated...your honesty that is. Vent
