write about the rain, how it makes you feel, the dark dismal rainy days, the pouring rain, the sun shower, thunder / lightning storms,dancing in the rain... anything
By HayleyMai on June 29th 2009, lunch time.
on topic _ rain
on topic _ rain
the smokey grey clouds surround my world
ever greens trees sit patiently high on the horizon
i look up
soaking wet and hold my hands up
eyelashes stuck together
melded by the rain
my feet wet and muddy
raw and pruned by rain
thunder echos through the ancient wood
and pounds off the smooth shield
and rugged cliffs
the rough bay absorbs the bolt of lightening
and i quiver from the damp air
hair covering my eyes in matted knotted strings
small rain droplets roll off my soft youthful skin
my oversized t-shirt sticks to my body
becoming transparent
lingering eyes of my crush gravitate towards me
His strong arms wrap around me
as he puts his camoflauge bob marley jacket over me
the rain falls gently at first
then it starts to pour
the intensity of it increases
but we remain standing there
on the top of the rock
in the middle of the woods
and then he grabs my cheek
slowly, softly with his gentle hands
strokes my jaw, and my damp hair
and kisses me
in the pouring rain
and thn the lightning strikes and the thunder rolls
and startles me
echoing over and over through the rocks on either side of the bay
and the noise shakes the wise trees
and we then run toward shelter
ever greens trees sit patiently high on the horizon
i look up
soaking wet and hold my hands up
eyelashes stuck together
melded by the rain
my feet wet and muddy
raw and pruned by rain
thunder echos through the ancient wood
and pounds off the smooth shield
and rugged cliffs
the rough bay absorbs the bolt of lightening
and i quiver from the damp air
hair covering my eyes in matted knotted strings
small rain droplets roll off my soft youthful skin
my oversized t-shirt sticks to my body
becoming transparent
lingering eyes of my crush gravitate towards me
His strong arms wrap around me
as he puts his camoflauge bob marley jacket over me
the rain falls gently at first
then it starts to pour
the intensity of it increases
but we remain standing there
on the top of the rock
in the middle of the woods
and then he grabs my cheek
slowly, softly with his gentle hands
strokes my jaw, and my damp hair
and kisses me
in the pouring rain
and thn the lightning strikes and the thunder rolls
and startles me
echoing over and over through the rocks on either side of the bay
and the noise shakes the wise trees
and we then run toward shelter
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it is raining and it is wet
By tinyttt1 on June 29th 2009, early afternoon.on topic _ rain
it is raining and it is wet
the rain makes me feel as if i was a net,
under all the billions of tons of water in the ocean.
it is raining and it is wet
the pouring rain is as if i am stranded at sea
with but a boat and a hurricane to keep me company. it is as if i am all alone.
the rain makes me feel as if i was a net,
under all the billions of tons of water in the ocean.
it is raining and it is wet
the pouring rain is as if i am stranded at sea
with but a boat and a hurricane to keep me company. it is as if i am all alone.
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a storm
By Net on June 29th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic _ rain
Pounding rain
rolling thunder
Glints of light
as the cold
rushes to greet the heat
with the haste of
stampeeting elephants
heavy and oppressive
a delluge to a flood
hard heavy rain
relentless and magical
I want to dance
in natures shower
beside flowers nodding
shy of it's life source
rolling thunder
Glints of light
as the cold
rushes to greet the heat
with the haste of
stampeeting elephants
heavy and oppressive
a delluge to a flood
hard heavy rain
relentless and magical
I want to dance
in natures shower
beside flowers nodding
shy of it's life source
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the rain
By kinkster95 on June 30th 2009, the wee hours.on topic _ rain
the rain so soft, so pure. i love the sound of the rain i love the smell. the rain makes someone slow down. it makes someone take a look around. the rain is beautiful. the rain makes me feel free. have you ever danced in the rain? have you ever felt the rain on your face? Its one of the few things no one can control. the rain is magnificent.
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Rain Reborn
By I am me-So love me on June 30th 2009, the wee hours.on topic _ rain
The rain.
I believe it brings out every emotion bottled up inside.
i have to be alone.
If I'm around anyone,
I have to hide, who I am.
Rain,
It brings pain,
And it gains...
more rain.
It feeds on ur emotions,
hiding like the evil witches love potions.
Why watch,
,...Close ur eyes,
pretend ur blind,
just for a moment,
Get lost in the rain,.
Be alone,
let them out.
Now, why listen.
Just watch.
Like a baby's tears.
So sad,.
But so interesting to watch.
Can't look away.
not even for a second.
I don't really write rhymes, those were just a gimmick. XD
I've always been one for the rain.
always have loved it.
Always run in it.
resorts in being sick,
but also in a truckload lifted from my shoulders.
like i was just reborn.
I believe it brings out every emotion bottled up inside.
i have to be alone.
If I'm around anyone,
I have to hide, who I am.
Rain,
It brings pain,
And it gains...
more rain.
It feeds on ur emotions,
hiding like the evil witches love potions.
Why watch,
,...Close ur eyes,
pretend ur blind,
just for a moment,
Get lost in the rain,.
Be alone,
let them out.
Now, why listen.
Just watch.
Like a baby's tears.
So sad,.
But so interesting to watch.
Can't look away.
not even for a second.
I don't really write rhymes, those were just a gimmick. XD
I've always been one for the rain.
always have loved it.
Always run in it.
resorts in being sick,
but also in a truckload lifted from my shoulders.
like i was just reborn.
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By cooljasleen on June 30th 2009, early morning.
on topic _ rain
on topic _ rain
long awaited rain
is knocking at our window pane
rain brings smiles
with bright n cheerful shine
my heart misses a beat
when i get rid of the heat
i walk out in the rain
just to get rid of my pain
what is about it
which makes me the craziest
is it the rain or the feelings within
in the rain u always see me grinning
would i ever be able to tell
what a wonderful cast this rain spells
it brings in the cool breeze
with romantic and thrilling freeze
oh god how should i thank you
for making this the happiest season all through
just keep on bringing this beautiful rain
and this would get us all the gain.
is knocking at our window pane
rain brings smiles
with bright n cheerful shine
my heart misses a beat
when i get rid of the heat
i walk out in the rain
just to get rid of my pain
what is about it
which makes me the craziest
is it the rain or the feelings within
in the rain u always see me grinning
would i ever be able to tell
what a wonderful cast this rain spells
it brings in the cool breeze
with romantic and thrilling freeze
oh god how should i thank you
for making this the happiest season all through
just keep on bringing this beautiful rain
and this would get us all the gain.
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in da street
By no more pain on June 30th 2009, late morning.on topic _ rain
it was a dark and a gloomy night
streets were full of rain
people ran here anr around
escaping from their gain
the sky was foggy and cloudy
but the trees were clean and tidy
it makes us smell the ran
and keep us away from our gain
streets were full of rain
people ran here anr around
escaping from their gain
the sky was foggy and cloudy
but the trees were clean and tidy
it makes us smell the ran
and keep us away from our gain
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rain
By Sweetly Broken on June 30th 2009, lunch time.on topic _ rain
Rain makes me feel alive acctully to know that things happen in the world. that i am not stuck here by the computer, that rain falls and the sun shines and that life contnues on without my help. i mean i would like the world to need my help, i would like the rain to stop once in a while i would like to not have to worry about whats around the corrner. not worry that the rain will get in the way of what i truly want, you know? free flowing as it is and how when i listen to it i feel at ease, but i want rain to mean life, not destruction. to mean things will live, not be wiped away. to know that in the world things are good and mother nature is not our abuser
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rain
By Sweetly Broken on June 30th 2009, lunch time.on topic _ rain
Rain makes me feel alive actually to know that things happen in the world. that i am not stuck here by the computer, that rain falls and the sun shines and that life continues on without my help. i mean i would like the world to need my help, i would like the rain to stop once in a while i would like to not have to worry about whats around the corner. not worry that the rain will get in the way of what i truly want, you know? free flowing as it is and how when i listen to it i feel at ease, but i want rain to mean life, not destruction. to mean things will live, not be wiped away. to know that in the world things are good and mother nature is not our abuser
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The Rain
By The-Scene-One on June 30th 2009, early afternoon.on topic _ rain
the rain is pouring down
drowning away the sound of my cries
walking in circls
remembering the last seconds i had with you
how could you break my heart
and then tell me that you love me
but i was so clueless that i believed
the rain has stopped
and final someone has realized
that i'm not alive
with my last breath
i say this to you
no matter what happened i love you too
drowning away the sound of my cries
walking in circls
remembering the last seconds i had with you
how could you break my heart
and then tell me that you love me
but i was so clueless that i believed
the rain has stopped
and final someone has realized
that i'm not alive
with my last breath
i say this to you
no matter what happened i love you too
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By Larkinabout on June 30th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic _ rain
on topic _ rain
Pattering against my walking cane,
Splattering my resistant face,
Battering the crushed up earth,
you soak my shoes through to the socks.
Your name is Rain.
Splattering my resistant face,
Battering the crushed up earth,
you soak my shoes through to the socks.
Your name is Rain.
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Elemental and The Cows
By Felicity B. on July 1st 2009, early evening.on topic _ rain
droplets on the rebound the aqua hiss and twice wet up to the ankles heavy rain and hot
open mouth and straight down
throw my shoes at you and press my toes into grass, into mud, like a tree and strong i am watered
hair canopy travelling drip dry and wet to the touch
i love you so much, you move freely, weaving in out the rain you never get stained unmessy man i am loving this soak i grow
but you
don't
warm heavy animals flattened the grass
warm their bodies and heavy
the rain coats their heads and misses their bellies
half wet and half dry they lie comfortable still.
open mouth and straight down
throw my shoes at you and press my toes into grass, into mud, like a tree and strong i am watered
hair canopy travelling drip dry and wet to the touch
i love you so much, you move freely, weaving in out the rain you never get stained unmessy man i am loving this soak i grow
but you
don't
warm heavy animals flattened the grass
warm their bodies and heavy
the rain coats their heads and misses their bellies
half wet and half dry they lie comfortable still.
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rain
By WritethePainAway on July 2nd 2009, the wee hours.on topic _ rain
rain, calm, rythmic, reliable, pitter pat pitter pat. sundden shake from peace a crash of thunder and a flash of ligthening "yes that really did just happen" this is real. boom, pitter pat boom pitter pat flash boom. like a metronome, keeping rythem adding a beat to the deafening silence of your heart in the ache of the dark night. Your not alone. Mother nature says hello.
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In the rain with my love
By girl in love on July 2nd 2009, late afternoon.on topic _ rain
I feel the rain on my skin while I run.
Tears run down my face.
My black mascara and eye linner is runnning.
I see him looking at me.
He grabs my wrist, asking me back.
I run away in the rain.
Its dark but yet, beautiful.
I hear thunder which scare me.
I run into a park and sit down on a bench crying.
He comes to me and kisses my lips.
His lips feels so right.
He says he loves me.
The rain and him is part of my love story
Tears run down my face.
My black mascara and eye linner is runnning.
I see him looking at me.
He grabs my wrist, asking me back.
I run away in the rain.
Its dark but yet, beautiful.
I hear thunder which scare me.
I run into a park and sit down on a bench crying.
He comes to me and kisses my lips.
His lips feels so right.
He says he loves me.
The rain and him is part of my love story
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rain in my eyes.
By black-phenoqu on July 2nd 2009, early evening.on topic _ rain
the rain makes me feel that i am at home. when the rain envelops me, i am at peace-at least for a little while! not that i don't like the sun, it feels great, all warm on my cold skin. but the rain, as it beats softly on my window, or loud torrents like anger of the world coming out through the clouds. It's beautiful, and devastating all at the same time. i think it reminds me of myself! i love the rain, the same way i love anything that scares me with love. if that doesn't make sense, look into the rain, and pretend that it's just heavy enough to be called "rain", and not a sprinkle, or drizzle. now pretend that there is no wind at all, and that everything is silent and still. now, see the individual rain drops, like bits of crystal? see the crystal turn blood red. see now, not drops of rain, but drops of blood, falling from the sky. if you still don't understand what i mean, well, you might want to stick to sun-shine!
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By endofgame123 on July 3rd 2009, the wee hours.
on topic _ rain
on topic _ rain
Let it pour
Until it pours no more
The drops are drops of blood
i guess
from wars my generation will fight
or not
it all depends on the rain
it rains a fancy rain
and covers a deep ground deep
(a girl blinks underwater,
turns the tide)
its dark inside
and i guess i like it that way
its nature in and out
and in
like a sky swelled by the moon
i am not the deluge
i am not the oak
i am not the whisper
i am a child
tell me if this moves you:
dark rain
touches roofs light
rebounds a mist
dark
no? rebuild your romantic
Until it pours no more
The drops are drops of blood
i guess
from wars my generation will fight
or not
it all depends on the rain
it rains a fancy rain
and covers a deep ground deep
(a girl blinks underwater,
turns the tide)
its dark inside
and i guess i like it that way
its nature in and out
and in
like a sky swelled by the moon
i am not the deluge
i am not the oak
i am not the whisper
i am a child
tell me if this moves you:
dark rain
touches roofs light
rebounds a mist
dark
no? rebuild your romantic
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_rain
By Vane-dahh on July 3rd 2009, the wee hours.on topic _ rain
This rain like pouring tears on my face
yet very small with a salty taste
this thunder roar as loud as an argue
but now the sky turned a darker blue
this lightning as bright as the sun
but now were stuck and we cant have fun
yet very small with a salty taste
this thunder roar as loud as an argue
but now the sky turned a darker blue
this lightning as bright as the sun
but now were stuck and we cant have fun
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rain dont go away
By sarahbabydoll123 on July 3rd 2009, terribly early in the morning.on topic _ rain
my hair soaked in wetness
my clothes drenched
the smell so natural
the view so beautiful
the sound so calming
the cars making splashe
my tears hidden by the skies shower
little girls dancing under they're umbrellas
rain don't go away
stay every day
my clothes drenched
the smell so natural
the view so beautiful
the sound so calming
the cars making splashe
my tears hidden by the skies shower
little girls dancing under they're umbrellas
rain don't go away
stay every day
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Thunder and Lightning
By Pretty Blue Pencil on July 3rd 2009, terribly early in the morning.on topic _ rain
Thunder and lighting speak to me. They sound like they are shouting, but they just have loud voices. They are really laughing, the thunder a deep growling voice, the lightning not exactly in siound but in light and energy. The rain forms a background hum and rhythmn, a pulse for their conversation. I stand in it, arms raised, palms to the sky. My energy swirls around me, leaking from my hands and travelling down my arms like rivulets of water before swirling up and around. I am singing in my heart, though my mouth does not move. It is a white song, with blue edges. Rising up, it joins the thunder and lightning and they laugh.
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By shattered silence on July 4th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic _ rain
on topic _ rain
the sun hides away
no beauty in the breakdown
a beautiful reminder
that we are alone.
grass squishes under your shoes
you are the reaper
but who is the savior?
your face is disguised in the shadows.
remember the night
i danced with the devil?
with a sly smile
i'll take your hand once more.
my blood is boiling
heart racing
pulse quickening
it's just you and I.
you're no good for me,
hold me.
shield me from the rain
keep me dry.
you're my umbrella
with holes all around
the water seeps through
soaked to the bone.
no beauty in the breakdown
a beautiful reminder
that we are alone.
grass squishes under your shoes
you are the reaper
but who is the savior?
your face is disguised in the shadows.
remember the night
i danced with the devil?
with a sly smile
i'll take your hand once more.
my blood is boiling
heart racing
pulse quickening
it's just you and I.
you're no good for me,
hold me.
shield me from the rain
keep me dry.
you're my umbrella
with holes all around
the water seeps through
soaked to the bone.
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