FFF

By Leanna-bean on June 20^th 2009, late afternoon.
on topic Loving a Loser

Loving a losser is all I have ever done...Your a loser your moms a loser everyone you know that I know is a fucking loser! you will never amount to anything FFF nobody on here knows what that means but I do and thats all the fucking matters fff I fucking hate you fff and youf fucking ass to mouth whore I hope you both fucking die...I hope she gives you fucking crabs and your little dick swells up and fucking falls off...it would be an improvment if you ask me you fucking asshole piece of shit!!! I hope you die FFF!!! You fucking pathitc crack head mother fucker!!! Sorry for all the four letter word going on but I am pissed!!!!

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I have ended it, but is it the end of me?

By Arabella on June 20^th 2009, late at night.
on topic Loving a Loser

His eyes: the outside a dark green, like a forest late at night, the inside an ever changing colour, first light green then medium, sometimes with flashes of gold. The only eyes I have ever seen mirror my own. They are truly magnificent and when I view them it is hard to not fall in. It's like being hypnotized or drunk on him, so that when he says something it sounds like a good idea, or at least it is difficult to find a reason not to do whatever he suggests.
His lips: soft and kissable. They hide the true seat of his power, the silver tongue. Whatever you may wish to hear, whatever it is that would get closest to your heart, your secret desires, he knows and gives voice to them all.
His voice: might as well be leaden with an enchantment. Even though you know you should not, you answer his siren's call. All the drugs in all the world could not compare to that.
His body: not quite the Adonis that many may claim him to be, yet perfect in its imperfections. How warm his touch is, like being caressed by rays of sunlight.

Although I love him, have always loved him and always shall, it means nothing. For I am just another who has fallen for him, my demon and my angel, and I mean nothing to him. Knowing this both kills me and saves me. Never again shall I see him, never again shall he have a chance to captivate and capture me. I have ended it, but is it the end of me?

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loser

By melveen on June 21^st 2009, terribly early in the morning.
on topic Loving a Loser

Loving a loser,
is like loving a death leaf,

Loving a loser,
is like giving your heart,
to be kept on a torn flower,

A loser,
will always lose your heart,
a loser,
will never give you happiness,
a loser,
always think he win,
but always forget you,
a loser,
is a loser by nature,
a kiss without without taste.
loveless

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Moronic loser

By AllOverItNow on June 22^nd 2009, early evening.
on topic Loving a Loser

You moronic loser,
Dumping me because your mother told you to,
How could you leave me?
I was the best you'd ever had,
Lucky to have me, you were
But too stupid to realise.

You moronic loser,
Texting me, begging me back.
I'm better than that you know,
And i grew tried of you anyway,
You just made it simpler,
Someone else to blame.

You moronic loser,
The day before valentines,
Probably to avoid buying me a card,
A rose was all I wanted,
I shall probably never have one,
Alas theres always another,
Moronic loser to try.

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loving a loser

By StillLovingYou on June 22^nd 2009, early evening.
on topic Loving a Loser

i love you you loser
why do i though?
is it your hair
you smile
your clothes?

I love your kind words
but i hate the way you treat girls
i would love you more
if you just changed your world

I love you loser
why do i though?
is it your eyes
your poems
your car?

Did i fall for your charm
like the other girls did?
Or was it the tangible things?
the things like money and clothes.

i love you loser
why do i though?
is it your money
your words
or all of those?

of course that is why the girls fell for you
you are richer than the world.
but i fell for your charm
i could care less about the money.


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LOVE AND THE LOVELESS

By XxLonelyTearDropxX on June 23^rd 2009, late morning.
on topic Loving a Loser

Losing someone that you love can take a beating. but in the end it isnt what you've lost. its what you've gained, but taking a breath of forgiveness and saying that i can do it, you replenish the fact that most people dont have a boyfriend or girlfriend to go home to at the end of the day, and to think of the times that i wanted a guy to come up to me and give me a complement, its just silly to think that anymore. I know realize that my life is to live without a man in my life because i have been heartbroken so many times my heart wont beable to take the beating anymore. so i say on to you people when i say make the best of life in every way. you dont realize it yet but when you lose someone and you havent had that person to call as a boyfriend or girlfriend yet, its hard and you cant change the fact that they might love you alot or just want to be friends, or maybe just want to forget you all together. the only thing i can say know is to just let go and free yourself.

in the end make the best of it. one day you will find that special person to spend the rest of your life with and wether or not you care enough to think of that person right now. just do it already

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its all good

By Joe Savage on June 23^rd 2009, early afternoon.
on topic Loving a Loser

so i met this girl and she played with my heart twice, i thought it was real, it wasn't, what am i worried about? i've been through this "ness" before. why does it still hurt? this life is to flippy floppy, especially when existance and love collide.
i'm still stuck on why it hurts still. i think i just need to push myself past it and call it good. alright. there. its all good.

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junkie, mine!

By S.m.t on June 24^th 2009, evening time.
on topic Loving a Loser

Loving a loser, Oh my man, dunk junk junkie drip dripping blood from his syringe leaking it all over the toilet. Can't keep a job, can't show up on time.No bacon to bring home, no movie to go to, no cash. All the money goes to her, that bitch! I'm second, third and fifth fiddle..she the dope heroine ..crack..smack!! It's all so fucking wrong I can't tell my friends i'm still involved with him, he, the loser from hell. He yells, screams, he falls he spits, he sways so. My junkie gets lost and confused. But then he kisses me,
and i sink
i sink so,
gu gu gu gu gush!

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He liked me until someone asked him then he then he hated me

By Twilighterb4u on July 23^rd 2009, late afternoon.
on topic Loving a Loser

I never thought I would love a loser. It never even crossed my mind. Don't ever tell ANYONE who you like. Especially if you've like him for four long years. When you 'friend' tells them they may smile, they may freak out. You never know. I was lucky and got a smile. But when you finally start out as boyfriend/girlfriend, and your friends freak out and go tell everyone, it might put the guy under pressure. When the other 'popular' students come up to him and ask if he's going out with you, what will his expression be? Well, if he likes likes you, he might say, "yeah, she's mine," or, "yeah, jealous?" But what if he doesn't like you? What will he say? "No. I don't like her. Yuck." He may say something like, "Oh, my gosh, NO WAY!!" So don't ever say anything to anyone until he makes the first move. Let him tell you he likes you. That way you don't get your heart broken.

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