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The one and only... Vampires

Tell me little ones. Tell me the birth, pain, gain, and sorrows of your vampiric soul.

    Vampire rising

    By Rory Williamson on June 19th 2009, late at night.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    I felt the teeth sink into me
    suck agaisnt my skin
    the blood flowing down my shoulder
    I bleed
    i moan
    I cant believe this
    Why me?

    I feel myself
    down a long tunnel
    a fire touches my skin
    i burn
    i just burn
    i cant feel myself anymore
    i hear stuff iv never heard before
    im awakening

    I feel my new power
    my new thirst
    that red hot lust in the back of my throat
    i see myself
    in the mirrior
    as a nobody
    a pale
    dark and lost soul
    caught between life and death

    I hear the voices around me as if they were in my head
    wait they are in my head
    what is this?
    my power?
    I can mind read
    and I can use physic powers
    what is this?

    I have my first bite
    my first taste
    my first savoury
    of human blood
    i want that blood more
    but it feels wrong
    i dont care
    i feel my teeth sink into her
    her silent scream
    as I drain her
    her heart from her body
    and her blood from her soul

    I feel the hunters approuch
    I dont know how to react
    i dont care anymore
    let them come
    I manage to take out 3
    before the others get me
    they burn me at the stake
    I hadnt even been alive a week
    oh well
    guess my life is over
    I was a monster
    a vampire
    a creature of the night
    and I deserved my fate
    the fate of death
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    Vampire 4 mins

    By AllOverItNow on June 22nd 2009, early evening.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    Born in scalding, searing, burning heat.
    Changing, the terror mounting, the flesh tearing, the thirst building.
    What Creature am i becoming? Hungry, wild with thirst. Addicted to illegal substances; any passer by.
    Trained to kill. Strength to feast.
    The bleeding pain of victims, writhing under my uncaring callous skin.
    So unhuman, what Creature am I?
    Unable to control the inhuman desperation, the desire to destroy, the thirst to kill.
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    the real me

    By bloodygirl on June 24th 2009, mid-afternoon.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    have u ever
    thought of becoming
    a vampire,well guess
    wat just ask me

    being a vampire
    is the scariest thing
    u want to drink someones
    blood but u cant to scared to
    be rejected

    i`ve fought to be a human
    because i hate that i can`t
    excepted for the real me
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    The Endless Emotions

    By Cari Cullen on June 26th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    "Walking into the wet rain of old England from which I must bare. For I'm something different, something that is not to be made, I'm a vampire for display. But how could I? The monster that hides from within fell in love with you that day? Was it your hair, eyes or is it the oppsite? Your tender life that I will never have again.

    Is that why I'm drawn to you, your dreams, goals...The ones that I will never have? It's this monster that I have the curse of the damned upon me. But yet you came into the picture; I..I can't handle this emotion. To loose you is to be truley dead to me. Can't you see I'm stuck here you and me. I want you to be mortal to live a life that I did not have...But yet I want you to be with me..Is this the curse or is this the love that my heart has given to me?

    You haunt my mind, the imgaine of you, my master, father and the one who drags me up the wall. How can you tell me that I'm not the one at all! You made me yours but my emotions are tense! How I loathe you and your game, that you drag me down for you pleasure to see me in pain!

    My sorrorws you ask? Well why now? My sadness is nothing to you. You know Ventago, you know what you did, you took me away from my lovely Dove, my little rose. But I walk away to start a new..I want to love another not you."

    He walks away from the elder, lost and confused and hurt. His enternal life has only yet but started only a few centeries old how can one be aparted?
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    to good to be true

    By calliegirl353 on June 28th 2009, early evening.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    he was perfect, wonderful, i loved him so much. i didn't know why, but there was something about him, the way he winked at me and flirted. if only i knew of his evil plan.

    the party at his house was were i would make him mine. i wore my favorite dress and curled my hair to perfection. i knew i looked great, but would he notice?

    he came right to me when i walked to the door. and he fallowed me around everywhere. i knew that he had to like me!! i was exited beyond words when he wispered "lets go somewhere where we can be alone."

    we walked up the spiral staircase as the upbeat music faded away. it went completely silent when we went to his room, now i realize it was soundproof... for a reason.

    he was really flirty to begin with, kissing me on the cheek, then the lips, it took us an hour to start really making out. i hardly noticed how rough he was until his teeth sunk into my neck.

    as loud as i screamed i noticed that no one could hear me, i sunk into defeat when he dragged me to the closet. hopefully i would live.

    i saw everything in the second room, the coffins, the blood, the skeletons, even the newspapers of the mistyrious disapearences of locals. i never beleived in ghost stories, until i became part of one!

    he slammed me onto a table, and stroked my hair, saying he was sorry for ruining my dress, i could hear the sickining laughter in his voice though. he ran his lips down my ear and my jaw, and suddenly ripped my juggular out!

    i wonder what happened when i went missing, who looked for me and if it was incorrectly solved, all i know is, vampires are real, and they are merciless.
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    What am I?

    By Too High to Fly on July 19th 2009, lunch time.
    on topic The one and only... Vampires
    My birth was horror
    My birth was bloody
    My birth was with screaming
    My birth became when the sound of teeth ripped through my skin!

    And now...

    I smell the things others can't
    I feel emotions others can't
    I see the sorrows others can't
    I see devotion others can't!

    But...

    My thirst for blood is neverending
    My mental pain is neverending
    My loneliness is neverending
    But also my love is neverending!

    What am I?...

    I can't feel my heart skipping any more beats
    I will never ever blush so easily
    I see the eyes of my beloved so colourful but mine so black
    I feel the heart of my beloved, but mine will still be dead

    What is happening?...

    My spirit is caught by something very powerful
    My own powers are strength and hearing thoughts!
    My spirit is living between the up and the down
    My spirite is living between the life and the dead!
    My spirit is living with no hope nor faith!
    My spirit is living like no one else would!
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