Suppose To be
By Rockergirl1523 on June 10th 2009, late afternoon.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
I fail for the corner in eyes
I Reach for the star but my heart cries
i Waited for you When sky was blue
i'll cry and cry and fail for you
i swam across the deep blue sea
everyday and everynight for you
were suppose to be
i Was there for you when sky was Dark
I Hold you tight and kept you warm
I made you smile was your goodluck
I smile with you with joy on my face
hold your hand when you need help
cried with you when you was sad
I listen to you when no one did
i been there when you needed me
i laugh with you and smiled at you
you made me feel like i was a queen
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please please please
By writefaster on June 10th 2009, evening time.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
Ok, Jake why?
Why can't you like me the same way I like you?
I feel like I am only just your friend, not someone you could see yourself with. I get so annoyed when you flirt with me and put your arm around me and hold my hand, because I know you are just kidding.
Every time I see you I want to throw my arms around you and hug you.
You high five me goodbye every time we part ways, but I long to hug you and hold you tight and never let go.
You make me feel so sick inside, I love the way you talk. I love how when we went to go see UP you sat next to me and put your arm around me and let me lay your head on your shoulder. But i seriously think you are just kidding. And brad? well he thinks that things can change, but I dont think so. I think that he is just being nice to me because he is my brother. I get sooo angry!!! you aren't the cutest guy, but you are the sweetest nicest funniest and i want to just hug you and when emily erin and christina dared me to kiss you i should have and i so wish i did because it might have changed something! LOVE ME!!!!!!! please i beg you!! You make me so happy espically when you come over to my house and make me happy when im bored. i want to be your best friend but i dont think you see me as a girlfriend. i sit next to you every day at lunch and i wish we could be the way brad and christina or erin and alex are!!! you understand everythin about me and we joke so funny and i love love love you!!!
Why can't you like me the same way I like you?
I feel like I am only just your friend, not someone you could see yourself with. I get so annoyed when you flirt with me and put your arm around me and hold my hand, because I know you are just kidding.
Every time I see you I want to throw my arms around you and hug you.
You high five me goodbye every time we part ways, but I long to hug you and hold you tight and never let go.
You make me feel so sick inside, I love the way you talk. I love how when we went to go see UP you sat next to me and put your arm around me and let me lay your head on your shoulder. But i seriously think you are just kidding. And brad? well he thinks that things can change, but I dont think so. I think that he is just being nice to me because he is my brother. I get sooo angry!!! you aren't the cutest guy, but you are the sweetest nicest funniest and i want to just hug you and when emily erin and christina dared me to kiss you i should have and i so wish i did because it might have changed something! LOVE ME!!!!!!! please i beg you!! You make me so happy espically when you come over to my house and make me happy when im bored. i want to be your best friend but i dont think you see me as a girlfriend. i sit next to you every day at lunch and i wish we could be the way brad and christina or erin and alex are!!! you understand everythin about me and we joke so funny and i love love love you!!!
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surplus
By DancingRed on June 10th 2009, late at night.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
i suppose i could
write poetry
about this feeling
but
everyone I know
loves me more
than i love them
so
my words are empty
and my life
is overflowing.
xx
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Broken
By muffincontrol on June 11st 2009, lunch time.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
The pain is raw and sharp as the reality breaks into view, the mind nunbed from the shock of it though the entire being of me feels cleaved to the bone. My love for you is as expansive as the ocean and causes me to to be willing to give my all for you...for your touch, your voice, your presence...just 4 words..."I love you too" and know you mean it. But you do not, you have no love to return and I am broken in two
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i hope she loves you
By geena33 on June 12th 2009, evening time.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
i love you but strangley i think you love me back i dont no why bbut its just the may that you still hug me and when i talk to you on the phonw you still find it hard to hang up and everytime i see you
you still smile at me i know that we had a rough few weeks after we broke up but eventually we gawt over it ddnt we so im hoping that you will see that you still love me more than her and you will come back to me instead of being with her and i know that i hater her and i want to knock her owt but shes your girlfriend and that would just be mean so instead of doing that maybe i could get to know her and see if shes nice and if she treats you right coz if she dozent well baybe thats just not right i treat you like you were my everything cause trust me you were i hope that if you left me for her that she treats you 2wice as good as i did and i hope that if you are still together when you plan on proposing to her ten you are happy and your not just doing it to get back at me and that i hope you really love her and if she says yes its because she really truly loves you and shes not just saying it to not hurt you feelings
you still smile at me i know that we had a rough few weeks after we broke up but eventually we gawt over it ddnt we so im hoping that you will see that you still love me more than her and you will come back to me instead of being with her and i know that i hater her and i want to knock her owt but shes your girlfriend and that would just be mean so instead of doing that maybe i could get to know her and see if shes nice and if she treats you right coz if she dozent well baybe thats just not right i treat you like you were my everything cause trust me you were i hope that if you left me for her that she treats you 2wice as good as i did and i hope that if you are still together when you plan on proposing to her ten you are happy and your not just doing it to get back at me and that i hope you really love her and if she says yes its because she really truly loves you and shes not just saying it to not hurt you feelings
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What is love really?
By Rainraven on June 12th 2009, late evening.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
Love can hurt all your fears can come true. This simple world can break many heart. At first there is alot of happniess, but then left behind are many marks. It can be so bright then a warm day but quickly fade away in to a strom. Yelling like the thunder is all you seem to hear. Where we thought there was love lead striaght to fear. Now you are all black and blue leaving nothing but usless news. But he/she is gone they are living there life you are left alone with a knife.
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Now?
By in the snow on June 12th 2009, late at night.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
OH MY GOD!
Howd you guess
that every time that i
digress
its cause im thinking
in my stupid corner
of the love youle never let me have
im half a toy
half a girl
and all stupidity
mercy me
cry for me
die for me
just kiss me once!
Make me happy!
Comical
im even
t
a
k
e
n
now
and you begin to flirt
inflict the hurt
i still cant assert
my meaning
my leaning
on your shoulder
is all hallow
"I will swallow,
if it will help
my sea level
go down"
and then il drown
Howd you guess
that every time that i
digress
its cause im thinking
in my stupid corner
of the love youle never let me have
im half a toy
half a girl
and all stupidity
mercy me
cry for me
die for me
just kiss me once!
Make me happy!
Comical
im even
t
a
k
e
n
now
and you begin to flirt
inflict the hurt
i still cant assert
my meaning
my leaning
on your shoulder
is all hallow
"I will swallow,
if it will help
my sea level
go down"
and then il drown
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What you see
By The-Scene-One on June 14th 2009, lunch time.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
i love you but you don't love me
look into the future and tell me what you see
hey that's me being so lonley
look more closetly and tell me what you see
a teardrop running down my face
look into my mind and tell me what you see
picture of us running threw my mind all the time
look at the picture and tell me what you see
me with you not looking so blue
look into my soul and tell me what you see
it's all black because you won't come back
because i love you but you don't love me
look into the future and tell me what you see
hey that's me being so lonley
look more closetly and tell me what you see
a teardrop running down my face
look into my mind and tell me what you see
picture of us running threw my mind all the time
look at the picture and tell me what you see
me with you not looking so blue
look into my soul and tell me what you see
it's all black because you won't come back
because i love you but you don't love me
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hurt..
By carrots on June 16th 2009, late evening.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
i really did love you
you know
but you never opened up to me
you told me you did love me
you told me i was your everything
days passed then
weeks..and i heard nothing of you
then you called one time but it was not
a great talk
you said i was no good
that you a had a girl and it
was to forget me
i said those were lies but i didnt
want to give up
not yet..
i kept on trying but you kept on
saying no
this pain you caused me was so deep
but i really loved you
and i wasnt going to give up that easily
i kept on fighting
but then you came back to me
was it a miracle
you said you were sorry
that i could find a better boy
but it was too late
i had fallen for you already
days passed..then months
we didnt talk much anymore
i would call but you would stay quite
then months passed and no word from
you
until my friend came to me and
told me what had happened
i asked her what
and she told me you wanted me out
of your life..
and these were your last words
i guess you never loved me
like you said you did
you were just another boy passing by
another boy breaking my heart
it broke into a million pieces
shed so many tears
just for you..
but you never really cared..
and i just realized this until now..
you know
but you never opened up to me
you told me you did love me
you told me i was your everything
days passed then
weeks..and i heard nothing of you
then you called one time but it was not
a great talk
you said i was no good
that you a had a girl and it
was to forget me
i said those were lies but i didnt
want to give up
not yet..
i kept on trying but you kept on
saying no
this pain you caused me was so deep
but i really loved you
and i wasnt going to give up that easily
i kept on fighting
but then you came back to me
was it a miracle
you said you were sorry
that i could find a better boy
but it was too late
i had fallen for you already
days passed..then months
we didnt talk much anymore
i would call but you would stay quite
then months passed and no word from
you
until my friend came to me and
told me what had happened
i asked her what
and she told me you wanted me out
of your life..
and these were your last words
i guess you never loved me
like you said you did
you were just another boy passing by
another boy breaking my heart
it broke into a million pieces
shed so many tears
just for you..
but you never really cared..
and i just realized this until now..
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By Destany20099 on June 20th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
I LUV U BUT U DON'T LUV ME
Y IS THAT BECAUSE AM
TO BIG OR TO SKINNY
WELL IF U DON'T WANT TO LUV ME THEN
DON'T
CAUSE I KNOW THAT I WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO
WILL
I LUV U BUT U DON'T LUV ME
Y IS THAT BECAUSE I
ALWAYS LIKE TO PLAY
WEN U R NOT IN THE MOOD
WELL U NEED TO HAVE SOME
FUN
BUT I CAN'T TELL U WHO TO LUV
OR WHO NOT TO LUV
Y IS THAT BECAUSE AM
TO BIG OR TO SKINNY
WELL IF U DON'T WANT TO LUV ME THEN
DON'T
CAUSE I KNOW THAT I WILL FIND SOMEONE WHO
WILL
I LUV U BUT U DON'T LUV ME
Y IS THAT BECAUSE I
ALWAYS LIKE TO PLAY
WEN U R NOT IN THE MOOD
WELL U NEED TO HAVE SOME
FUN
BUT I CAN'T TELL U WHO TO LUV
OR WHO NOT TO LUV
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Loving My Best Friend
By Gypsy-Girl on June 24th 2009, late morning.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
I love you so much because you called me pretty and were kind to me like no other has ever been
I love you so much because your ideas for the world are magical and your so kind, My best friend
I love you so much because you understand me when the rest of the world sees through me
When I'm invisible to all it seems you tell me that I'm here before I beleive that I'm not
When I try to go back into my past you pull me back into the present
I love you so much because it has always seemed that you love me
But you don't
were just friends
and i'll always be filled with jealosy
towards my best friend because you love her more than me
I'm not good enough then
I was so stupid to ever beleive that there was a way for any one to love me
stupid to let myself go out there
stupid to let the world know that i love you
and stupid 'cause I still do
You don't love me you never will
But me I will always love you
I love you so much because your ideas for the world are magical and your so kind, My best friend
I love you so much because you understand me when the rest of the world sees through me
When I'm invisible to all it seems you tell me that I'm here before I beleive that I'm not
When I try to go back into my past you pull me back into the present
I love you so much because it has always seemed that you love me
But you don't
were just friends
and i'll always be filled with jealosy
towards my best friend because you love her more than me
I'm not good enough then
I was so stupid to ever beleive that there was a way for any one to love me
stupid to let myself go out there
stupid to let the world know that i love you
and stupid 'cause I still do
You don't love me you never will
But me I will always love you
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i was wrong
By godsdaughter630 on June 24th 2009, lunch time.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
you made it seem as if you wanted me,
i was wrong
you made seem as if your heart was free,
i was wrong
i thought you were the one i loved,
i was wrong,
i thought you were sent from up above,
i was wrong,
i thought you were my last shot,
i was wrong,
i thought i forever would be distrought,
i was wrong,
i thought no one new would come,
i was wrong,
i thought my love life was done,
i was wrong,
you gave reasons why ,
they were wrong,
you thought they would make me cry,
you were wrong,
they thought we were meant to be,
they were wrong,
i thought you were right for me,
i was wrong.
i was wrong
you made seem as if your heart was free,
i was wrong
i thought you were the one i loved,
i was wrong,
i thought you were sent from up above,
i was wrong,
i thought you were my last shot,
i was wrong,
i thought i forever would be distrought,
i was wrong,
i thought no one new would come,
i was wrong,
i thought my love life was done,
i was wrong,
you gave reasons why ,
they were wrong,
you thought they would make me cry,
you were wrong,
they thought we were meant to be,
they were wrong,
i thought you were right for me,
i was wrong.
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why
By jumper0219 on June 26th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
i love you.
i never cheated on you.
what did i do?
she cheated on you 6 times.
you're the only man i saw in a crowd of 2thousand others.
what did i do?
i believed in you.
i trusted you.
you were my everything.
i hate you. i love you.
i never cheated on you.
what did i do?
she cheated on you 6 times.
you're the only man i saw in a crowd of 2thousand others.
what did i do?
i believed in you.
i trusted you.
you were my everything.
i hate you. i love you.
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Countless time
By lilma14 on July 6th 2009, the wee hours.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
Countless Time
I remember crying and begging god
Just so you could look at
Countless time being past
You never looked
You never stared
You never glanced
Countless time being thrown away
I loved you but you never loved me
In secret and hiding that is where I was
A coward and lonely
Not to far and Not to close
A book
It had everything you could ever want to know
Countless time being taken away
You heard the words from this book
You finally glanced
You finally stared
But not the way it was suppose to be
Last words
Spoken
So kind that whats made them cruel
I loved you but you Never loved me
Never forget those countless times I Put my feeling to the side
Just to know that this whole time it was a lie
Even though just so young
I know what love is
Even though you don't believe
But
I loved you
You just NEVER loved me back !
I remember crying and begging god
Just so you could look at
Countless time being past
You never looked
You never stared
You never glanced
Countless time being thrown away
I loved you but you never loved me
In secret and hiding that is where I was
A coward and lonely
Not to far and Not to close
A book
It had everything you could ever want to know
Countless time being taken away
You heard the words from this book
You finally glanced
You finally stared
But not the way it was suppose to be
Last words
Spoken
So kind that whats made them cruel
I loved you but you Never loved me
Never forget those countless times I Put my feeling to the side
Just to know that this whole time it was a lie
Even though just so young
I know what love is
Even though you don't believe
But
I loved you
You just NEVER loved me back !
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Me And You
By Wendybird on October 14th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic I Love You But You Dont Love me
I love you Thomas but you probably wouldn't care. I think you hate me. I'm the dork in the class. Though that was weird what you did today. Missed you during choir. Though I really didn't think about you. Ashley was there too. So she probably distracted me. Though I write now i will miss you tomorrow. Things shall be different when we return. If anything happens i will scream. Tony should be back since he came today with his mother. To bad Kate has no recess till Thusday I think. I know one thing though. I Love You But You Don't Love Me.
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