Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

There are 13 freewrites for just weak hands's topic

we're chained

use this as inspiration i thought of this when listening to "Hey" by The Pixies <3

    something you won't expect.

    By just weak hands on June 3rd 2009, evening time.
    on topic we're chained






    ... I didn't feel like writing anything... :]







    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    BRIAN

    By BonafideHustla on June 3rd 2009, evening time.
    on topic we're chained
    HEY! Must be a devil between us...
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    might not make sense

    By Angel-of-Chaos on June 4th 2009, terribly early in the morning.
    on topic we're chained
    We are linked, in this chain called life.
    Strong and steady, you hold tight to me and I to you. Never have I felt this bond with anyone else in my life. You know me better than I know myself, though it is cliche' to say. The second I saw you, my soul leaped as if it recognized you from some other time or place. My heart fluttered like a caged bird trying to break free. I only need to think of you, and it is like you can hear me calling. I only need to shed one tear, and you already have a tissue in your hand. I only need to feel angry, and you already understand why. I only need to feel hurt, and you are instantly at my side to protect me. Somehow I got lucky, out of all of the years, and all of these people, I ended up beside you. Where I always want to stay.
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Random to the Extreme

    By Allyson.Lashae. on June 4th 2009, lunch time.
    on topic we're chained
    We're chained, me and you
    bonded together like super glue
    You're always in my heart
    No matter how far apart
    You've got my back and I've got yours
    Whores at my door but hey
    Where have you been
    you've been gone for so long
    why aren't you around anymore
    didn't you know I needed you!
    Why did you leave
    I was weak and you were strong
    I needed to help me get along
    But you didn't care, you left, you fuck
    You broke my heart
    Left me forever changed
    I can't even look at love the same
    I want to love someone like I did you
    But this proves to be impossible
    Worst part is it's sad, but true
    No longer do I love and trust
    Forgetting what you did is a must
    Oh my goodness this is weak
    This poem is really starting to wreak
    I feel like such an awful wreck
    I pretend to be fine
    Part of me thinks I am fine
    Part of me is fine
    I'm okay
    Aren't I?
    You made me doubt myself
    Who am I?
    I don't even know anymore
    I want to know me, I want to meet me
    But I am hidden away behind feelings and lies
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Pain and Sorrow Passed onto the innocent Can Make Us Guilty.

    By transparrent on June 6th 2009, early morning.
    on topic we're chained
    hearts entwined tied in knots i tie one you tie three almost feel you inside of me,
    a different person two in one you, me.

    A feeling pulling on me iv been here before a time when i was someone else but the same,
    my appearance was different so was my name.

    Dont know how i just have the feeling the one where there has to be a reason,
    noone else will see the me you see,
    because only you bring it out of me,
    the same me but wild and free,
    yet locked up in you and me,
    Im soaring high on this floaty feeling,
    everything will be ok no worries when your with me.
    I tell a lie there is one that ties me to you even more entwined to feel what you have felt,
    a heart still beating but battered and saw.

    I feel your anger crashing down in one quick change from a smile to a frown,
    out of the light and into the dark into the depts of what is now our heart,
    inside their lies a secret something dark,
    a monster created by others subjecting their pain onto another.

    Carry those blows and miss direct them all towards me,
    feel the pain soaring through me 1,2,3,
    its all over now,
    still i carry your pain mentally,
    not half of what was lifetime fee,
    still im trying hard to carry this pain and set it free some other way than phsycally.

    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    By nwolkrellik on June 6th 2009, late at night.
    on topic we're chained
    Steel Bracelets, and a Rebels Suit

    Flash so fast lights up the night

    Convict and guilty's already on your face

    Innocence in your presence

    whose the victims in times of peasants

    you judge to blame without you seeing im o so sane

    only this can fulfill my pain

    mind to learn, fire to burn

    see me as prophecy only empty just as me

    i do not lie and see no shame

    but as just a piece of this lifes game

    Mocked and judged in my infamous fame

    I seem to show with the purest of glow

    Reactions to repetitive, Now i need a sedative

    Death, Hate, Pain, Destruction
    Life, Love, Peace, Corruption

    STEEL BRACELETS= handcuffs
    REBELS SUIT= prison uniform

    "were chained" being in love...being arrested... eh one in the same? LOL

    Life, Love, Peace, Corruption


    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Chained

    By Princess Mumbee on June 9th 2009, late morning.
    on topic we're chained
    My name is Tara. I am twenty years old and I am a pretty normal person. There is absolutely nothing interesting about me. I grew up in a small town after my father left the air force. I had my small group of friends. I drive a normal car. I go to a normal college. Well, I am pretty normal, with nothing unusual ever happening to me.

    Well that was, until I met Serre. Once I met her my life got thrown up side down. Everything I believed to be became irrelevant and everything shown to me became my new reality. I learned to live freely in the moon light, but I also learned of the dangers that Humans of today have pushed back into their memories as Myth.

    I bumped into Serre in the woods one night when I was walking along a trail. I didn't really know what to make of this girl. She was sitting on the edge of a river, that wrapped around the trail, and was just staring into the water having a conversation with what appeared to be her self. She was a beautiful thing. Her hair drifted down her back in a loosely plaited braid of amber red. She was wearing something I would expect out of a renascence fair though. It was a dress that had layers and layers of pink and magenta. The fabric looked like it was woven from spider web and silk. It was very fetching on her though.

    I made my way over to her inquisitively. It wasn't every day that I met some one on the trail this late at night, and well to be honest, I was taken by this strange woman who talked to her self under moonlight. I pushed a lock of my chestnut hair back behind my ear and took a small breath so that I could get my nerve to interrupt what ever reverie she was so deep in.

    "Hello, miss?" I called softly when I was about five feet or so away from her. I didn't want to startle her but at the same time if I did spook her I didn't want her to run. I genuinely wanted some company that night on that long trail of moonlight and whispering rivers.

    She glanced up over her shoulder at me after a moment. When her gaze met mine my breath seized and what ever I had been about to say ceased to be. She stood up quietly and dusted off her skirts while she continued to hold my gaze. It felt as though she was searching deep into my heart and could see my deepest fears and joys.

    I shook my head to get rid of that nonsense thought as I looked back to her. Her gaze was not as hypnotic this time as she walked the last few feet away from me. It irked me a tiny bit that she had remained silent the entire time that I had attained her attention. Generally, even if some one surprises you, it is polite to respond and not ignore them.

    With an alert gleam in her eyes, Serre smiled wanly towards me with a soft chuckle. "Manners are different in every culture, my dear girl. " She spoke chimingly while lifting a frail looking hand to trail over my cheek tenderly.

    Her voice sent soft flutters down my spine as I relaxed against her caress. As I looked up at her I realized that her eyes were an odd shade of violet that matched her dress to some degree. I thought that maybe she wore contacts for that color. She had to. I didn't really know what else would make sense.

    Clearing my thoughts with a soft breath I looked up at her. "I am sorry for interrupting you but I was wondering if perhaps you would like to take a small walk with me? I usually walk the trail alone but I don't often happen across company." I rambled on nervously under her gaze. I really didn't know why I was getting so flustered. She just seemed to have this overshadowing essence that intimidated me and enthralled me all at once. It was almost like some one who got to meet their favorite celebrity for the first time.

    Serre watched me in amusement before smiling with a simple nod. "I can accompany you, dear young one" She breezed in a voice as soft as the wind that caressed along the back of my neck.

    I walked beside her contently, my arm linked lightly through hers as we made our way along the trail. For a while we were silent, well I was quiet and she softly hummed into the night air. Her voice lulled me to the point that it felt that I was walking in a dream. I closed my eyes for a moment with a soft smile drifting over my lips.

    I turned my gaze to look up at her as we walked. "Miss, may I ask you something?" I inquired gently, loathe to interrupt her humming. "I was wondering what you were doing over by the river. It sounded like you were talking to some one but I didn't see any one there..." I continued on before going quiet.

    "Oh, silly one, you are suppose to wait for me to give you permission before you ask something." She teased softly with a faint smile on her lips as she stopped walking. "I was having a conversation indeed. Whom, I was conversing with was there, but if they didn't want to be seen you would not have seen them." She answered before grinning impishly at me. "I can understand how that might have appeared that I was talking with my self."

    I tilted my head curiously before biting my tongue to keep from asking more. I wanted to know more but I didn't feel like it was my right to ask any more.

    We continued walking on in silence as she began to hum again. It was a different melody this time. It was a bouncy tune that lifted my heart up and swung it around in playful circles that spiraled as high as the moon above us.

    Before long I was joining in on humming the tune in a softer voice. I met her gaze from the corner of her eye as continued to walk forward. She was grinning faintly as the corner of her lips quirked up.

    As I continued to hum the melody to the song she paused for a moment before starting up with what must have been the words to the song. I grinned to my self and continued to hum. I didn't want to stop yet. It went along with the words so well.

    And so it was, we continued to walk through the woods, her voice and my humming dancing intertwining circles with each other along the breeze of the wind. My heart danced contently with in my chest; as her voice took a hold of my mind and melded the words of the song into my memory, as sure as I will always remember the way wind feels brushing like a lover along my skin.

    "Welcome Welcome, one and all.
    You are now in Tomb Town.
    Watch your step lest you fall,
    there are graves all around.
    The population is limitless,
    between the living and deceased.
    Here we co-exist in bliss,
    for we are the town of Night Kind.
    Do you wish to join our ranks?
    Among the living and dead?
    We accept you, now give thanks,
    as we drag away the rejected.

    Welcome to the land of night,
    where we play under the moon.
    There is bound to be some fight,
    when you step into our realm.
    So take a walk in our town,
    enjoy the sights and sounds.
    Everyone wears their own crown,
    for we all rule this little place.

    In and among the crypts we play,
    there are no rules here except one.
    Watch your back while you stay,
    for there are things that creep.
    This is the land of the night,
    we bow to no one but our selves.
    There is no wrong or right,
    for we play as we wish to.
    So stay awhile, enjoy yourself,
    just watch where you are going.
    Or you might become a head on a shelf,
    There are things that go bump here.

    Welcome to the land of night,
    where we play under the moon.
    There is bound to be some fight,
    when you step into our realm.
    So take a walk in our town,
    enjoy the sights and sounds.
    Everyone wears their own crown,
    for we all rule this little place.

    Have a tea party among the headstones,
    or what ever strikes your fancy.
    Just don't trip over the bones,
    Some one might need those later.
    Here in our town anything goes,
    You can find anything here,
    From Ghoulies and their Jos,
    to mid-Victorian sots with fangs.
    Just have fun before the sunrise,
    That's when Tomb town goes to sleep,
    With mourning and reluctant sighs.
    So enjoy the Town of Crypts while its here.

    Welcome to the land of night,
    where we play under the moon.
    There is bound to be some fight,
    when you step into our realm.
    So take a walk in our town,
    enjoy the sights and sounds.
    Everyone wears their own crown,
    for we all rule this little place.

    Welcome to the land of night,
    where we play under the moon.
    There is bound to be some fight,
    when you step into our realm.
    So take a walk in our town,
    enjoy the sights and sounds.
    Everyone wears their own crown,
    for we all rule this little place. "

    I smiled softly closing my eyes. It took me a moment to realize that we had even stopped walking. All that I was consumed with was the song softly surrounding me in a little bubble of joy, protection, and welcome. I opened my eyes after the song had stopped and looked around quietly with confusion marring my face.

    Serre was no where to be seen.

    I knew that we had stopped walking but she had still been singing not seconds before. And just like that, with the blink of an eye...Gone?
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Vent

    By XxXNoxiousRoseXxX on June 10th 2009, late at night.
    on topic we're chained
    We're chained to attention,
    it's become such a need.
    Look at our society...
    Young girls of just ten,
    taking risque pictures of themselves.
    Just for a boy's attention.

    Look at our society...
    Attempted suicides,
    but they're just teens.
    Seeking the attention,
    saying they've had enough.

    Look at our society...
    We believe everything government feeds us,
    as if we have no minds of our own.
    I don't know about you,
    but that doesn't seem like freedom to me.
    It's been given, but so taken for granted.

    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    In Chains

    By on June 13th 2009, mid-afternoon.
    on topic we're chained

    We' re chained to our realities
    by the hand of fate
    our thoughts bound tight
    in a straight jacket
    must be all released.

    And by the time its over
    what is that I've done
    expressed but only memories
    for they sorely will be missed.

    This vain cruel world
    where all is lost
    we must never give up
    for this is the price of
    living life
    and too high is our cost.
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Chained

    By beauty from ashes on June 17th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic we're chained
    humans broken and chained
    blinded by their darkness and shame

    they see only what they want to see
    they hear only what they want to hear
    they block out the truth with their lies

    will they be stuck in darkness and shame?
    will they still be in their chains?

    how long can they hide from the truth
    how long can they choose to see what they want to see
    and hear what they want to hear?

    soon when truth comes in that final light
    chains will be broken
    and they will be set free
    no more darkness and shame
    or brokenness and shame

    they no longer hear what they want to hear
    or see what they want to see
    but hear and see what they need to hear and see

    no lies to hide behind
    and truth that shines a blinding light
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    I'm so sick..

    By The-punk-princess on June 24th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic we're chained
    I've been down this road before
    This dark and dusty road.
    These thoughts in my head scream at me
    Telling me that no one cares....
    For you...
    Or you feelings....

    They brake into my thoughts.....
    "Your friends have forgotten you" They says
    "No, they would never do that......would they?"
    "How else can you explain this?" They asks
    Your friends are gone, They don't care....They never did."

    This is the voice that I have battled
    They whisper in my ears, Scream in my brain
    I hear them...
    Their SCREAMING IT!
    These thoughts make me feel hopeless, lost, worthless.
    I'm so sick of this.....

    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    Suppressed By chains

    By Gypsy-Girl on June 24th 2009, late morning.
    on topic we're chained
    we're pulled down to this earth by chains
    forced to taste the bitter rains
    forced to live when we want to die
    forced to weep and cry

    I hate these chains that'll never let me be free
    hate being surpressed by the wheight of the world
    I want to run to flee
    I want my body to lurch and hurl

    Hurl itself up into the great blue sky
    that's where I dream to fly
    But these chains hold me down to the land
    To the point where I can barely stand

    I want to be tall and mighty and brave
    to set myself free of these chains
    but it's inpossible you see I've tried
    I won't again last time I did I was pulled farther down

    So I will stay
    forever surpressed by my metal chains
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.

    i dont even know

    By Gypsy-Girl on June 25th 2009, early morning.
    on topic we're chained
    I feel chained to the choices I make chained to my life my mistakes I'm chained to the one I love imvchained to the world I'm chained to life chained to everyone we are all chained to one another and there is no. Key we must get along we must stop the wars that is how it must be.
    There are no comments on freewrites, however you may message the author.