Try to give detailed descriptions of the emotions you feel or felt
Hoplessly Heartbroken and healed once more
By Carliemarie23 on June 3rd 2009, evening time.on topic Broken Hearts
He told me he loved me. I have never believed in love but his words cut through my heart of glass. I had dumped him and he was going out with my best friend, i know what kind of friend am i right? When they broke up i asked him to a school dance and it all went good for the first few hours, he had kissed my quite a few times and i thought wow this is my second chance. I left him for 5 minutes to talk my friend in to dancing and when i came back he told me "I am sorry... I didnt mean to lead you astray but, im not over lizzy.". The reason this broke my heart is i had let him in and thought he was different, then he proved to me he really wasn't. My heart felt as though it was collapsing in and all i saw was him smiling at me and flirting with her. I never cry at school but i broke down after i saw him smiling as though nothing had happened at all. It felt as though his every smile stabbed me, every hug broke me over again. He had told me he would never hurt me, he had been p.o.ed over his best friend doing the same thing and it was like he had admitted to me that it was okay to lie to me yet again. My poem "Jordan" was meant for this and written as a way to close my feelings after i dumped him. I was stupid and i re-dated him exactly one week after this. Call it stupid or call it closure sometimes the only way to heal a broken heart is to break it more
JORDAN:
give up and get out
im sick of this bet
im just listening to my thoughts
and trying to forget
the words im hearing
the things i feel
im in my own world
and i just want it to be real
you aren't real any more
your my one mistake
and if you ask that one more time
i will just start to fake
im looking on the bright side
so just get away from me
if you say one more word
you'll be seeing three
of me as i walk away
you should have listen to what i said
but you couldn't hear
so get out of my head
JORDAN:
give up and get out
im sick of this bet
im just listening to my thoughts
and trying to forget
the words im hearing
the things i feel
im in my own world
and i just want it to be real
you aren't real any more
your my one mistake
and if you ask that one more time
i will just start to fake
im looking on the bright side
so just get away from me
if you say one more word
you'll be seeing three
of me as i walk away
you should have listen to what i said
but you couldn't hear
so get out of my head
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!BROKEN!BROKEN!BROKEN!
By BlueJuneNights on June 4th 2009, mid-morning.on topic Broken Hearts
when i was broken hearted i felt the worst pain i have ever felt in my life. i felt like someone had reached in my throat and pulled my heart out and ate it. i felt like my life was over. mostly because that was my first love and i really love that person. i felt like just ending it. i felt like there was nothing else better to live for. i wanted to take a knife and just letting it be over. it was really going to be over. i have never felt that pain in my life. to me that is worst than being shot. i felt like i was being punished. it was a boy and he said i was sending him to hell and i disusted him. i never want to fell like that again.
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Eight months
By Corijoface on June 4th 2009, lunch time.on topic Broken Hearts
"You can't see the TV babe"
"I don't care, hold me tighter"
"I love you so much"
"...Prove it"
"You're too good to be human"
"If i'm not human then what am I? ...Well? What am i"
"You're an angel, my angel"
"I'm sorry I just can't be with you anymore"
"I thought we would be together forever"
"You just don't push people away that you love"
"Don't you think I know that?"
"I don't get why you don't love me anymore"
"I don't either."
"I can't stop thinking about our first kiss."
*Silence*
"I don't care, hold me tighter"
"I love you so much"
"...Prove it"
"You're too good to be human"
"If i'm not human then what am I? ...Well? What am i"
"You're an angel, my angel"
"I'm sorry I just can't be with you anymore"
"I thought we would be together forever"
"You just don't push people away that you love"
"Don't you think I know that?"
"I don't get why you don't love me anymore"
"I don't either."
"I can't stop thinking about our first kiss."
*Silence*
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fu** you babydaddy
By Creeper2007 on June 4th 2009, lunch time.on topic Broken Hearts
i am so completly depressed about how you can say you love us and then leave your his Fucking father and you never are even going to meet him you broke our family our friendship our love our trust you broke everything i had in my heart i can't stop loving you but i hate you so much right now... this sounds crazy but i don't see how you said you wanted a family and i'm givin a son and as soon as i tell you your on tha run fuck you and your promises to hell with your lies i'm done with bull shit done w/ cries so just fuck it all we will be just fine!
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blink
By japscot on June 5th 2009, early afternoon.on topic Broken Hearts
Love is an ever-perfecting art
blink
Love is a leech bleeding my heart
Fidelity is a gift forever giving
blink
Fidelity is the man that robs the blind
Making love is a pastime pleasure
blink
Making love is a perk to being selfish
Commitment is the guardian of safety
blink
Commitment is a god-forsaken notion
Touch is soft lips upon a scar
blink
Touch is the poison in the apple
Passion is a soul's flame ignited
blink
Passion is a constant drunken swagger
Feeling is the textbooks behind the teacher
blink
Feeling is the serpent that seduced Eve
Attraction is the heady salt of our sweat
blink
Attraction is a beautiful memory fleeting
Sleeping together is a home to hang your hat on
blink
Sleeping together is a novel too quickly read
Hearts are the beating of your joy
blink
Hearts are the naive child taken
Broken hearts are the flavor of the month
blink
Broken hearts are the flavor of my life
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Gice me a sign
By XxSorrowfulAngelxX on June 6th 2009, lunch time.on topic Broken Hearts
I have just met my long lost almost love again. I dont know if god is giving me a anthor chance in the world, this person or what. Last time i talked to this person i wasnt myself i was hideing my feelings and now i have to say im sorry. I dont know how to feel what to say or what to do. Im so afaird he will find out my serect im so scared. What god is this a good thing or a bad thing please give me a sign or let me know i feel so alone and helpless. Why did this happen? Please give me a sign i can read
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Broken hearts
By darkfairyxx1 on June 6th 2009, evening time.on topic Broken Hearts
I really hated myself because I was a fool to let you into my heart, I really should've known better, I just wanted it to work out, but She was always in the way, I didn't want you to love her, Because I think she's using you, I mean come on, she used to be a stripper, I can't beileve you fell for her, My heart broke in her your hands and her face, I still love and I no longer trust myself, I'm scared the others will hurt me like you did, Or even worse, be unfaithful, Love embraced me when you did.I think everyone needs that embrace, and because of you I can never feel that again... Broken hearted and it's all your fault
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A Dead Dream
By nwolkrellik on June 6th 2009, late at night.on topic Broken Hearts
DONT COUNT THIS IF ITS NOT ALLOWED
if i can use it... AWESOME(pretyped)
said how i felt...*past tense
A Dead Dream
My minds a depthless abyss filled with every thing I miss,
My hearts a never ending trenching quake,
My tears roll down like sap beading from wounds,
My body is a shell like a jail locking away my soul,
Your lips mezmorized me with tranquility,
Your eyes pierced the sky to stars,
While your face captured the abundance of
a beautiful perfection emulating like an aura,
Your fragrence had me addicted to you,
The sounds you softly spoken had me lust over a tune from your voice,
Your hair flowed like the breeze on a summer day,
Your air was emitted like the wind,
So gentle, yet with force abruptly killed my happiness,
When I loved you,
It was so true but even I didnt know what to do,
Now I think of the love I lost,
My life is twirling with confusion and anger,
Depression leaking through what could be joy,
What could I say, I want equality for the betrayal,
Perhaps why suicide sounds so possible,
Because I had what could have been it seemed,
If I would have waited, If I would have listened,
My heart of glass was easily shattered,
When you did try to help me by saying we could have a chance,
Then another day came, where nothing else could be the same,
It was my best interest in you to help in return,
My own desire came from every burn,
Scar to remember every time I see,
As it fades so does your image,
I broke my trust simply for selfish cause,
Only you destroyed my flaws,
Feelings of love so hard to describe,
Perhaps my reasons now,
Why you shoved me then.
Author: Timothy Ross Miller 6-17-07
if i can use it... AWESOME(pretyped)
said how i felt...*past tense
A Dead Dream
My minds a depthless abyss filled with every thing I miss,
My hearts a never ending trenching quake,
My tears roll down like sap beading from wounds,
My body is a shell like a jail locking away my soul,
Your lips mezmorized me with tranquility,
Your eyes pierced the sky to stars,
While your face captured the abundance of
a beautiful perfection emulating like an aura,
Your fragrence had me addicted to you,
The sounds you softly spoken had me lust over a tune from your voice,
Your hair flowed like the breeze on a summer day,
Your air was emitted like the wind,
So gentle, yet with force abruptly killed my happiness,
When I loved you,
It was so true but even I didnt know what to do,
Now I think of the love I lost,
My life is twirling with confusion and anger,
Depression leaking through what could be joy,
What could I say, I want equality for the betrayal,
Perhaps why suicide sounds so possible,
Because I had what could have been it seemed,
If I would have waited, If I would have listened,
My heart of glass was easily shattered,
When you did try to help me by saying we could have a chance,
Then another day came, where nothing else could be the same,
It was my best interest in you to help in return,
My own desire came from every burn,
Scar to remember every time I see,
As it fades so does your image,
I broke my trust simply for selfish cause,
Only you destroyed my flaws,
Feelings of love so hard to describe,
Perhaps my reasons now,
Why you shoved me then.
Author: Timothy Ross Miller 6-17-07
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My Day
By surreallyme on June 7th 2009, evening time.on topic Broken Hearts
Love i feel like i dont know what that is anymore. I thought it was something real that would last always...but i realized its something you have to work at and the key is communication. But it seems that with communicatioin you need more, like trust. Why coudln't he just be there for me. I t was supposed to be my day and be a bout me. But he had his own problems and now i have to hear other people in my ear telling me things that he's probably doing and how he is probably lying to me, which i dont want to hear. I dont think he would lie why would he, he has no reason too. I want him to be the one, the one i can talk to about anything and just to know he's always there. But lately i feel like he's been lying to me a little, maybe he's trying to play me because he is older. but in a way i feel like i should trust him, just believe what he says because after he might mess up a little he soon makes it better. But i dont want him to mess up to make it better...i just want it to be right. I really dont want a broken heart, this will be the first time. and i dont want to have that feeling. I've seen too many people go through that so i dont want to experience it. It took me forever to get into this relationship because of it. Talking about this just makes me cry. and i've already had an emotional day. This is supposed to be a happy day for me since i graduated. and all he can say is i act like i dont care that he had a bad day, and i have to remind him to say congradulations to me for graduating and when he does he doesn't even sound excited, he just says i dont care that he's had bad luck today. does he not care about whats going on in my life. i dont know if i should just not stress over it and just go with the flow, just let it play itself out. I hope things clear up to me in the future about this situation.
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The Emotions from the Heart
By lunalure on June 8th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic Broken Hearts
My heart is shattered into microscopic pieces,
my pleas of desperation fill my mind, as I pour out my emotions through the words in this freewrite poem.
Tears pour out from my broken heart like endless streams of serpents, crawling out from a crypt.
these words I write come from my soul as I write my true emotions on this computer screen,
such emotions are to be held back, but what it's
like, I cannot explain.
You must experience this emotion for yourself, to feel such sadness, welling up inside you until it is about to burst out inside you, like a nuclear bomb of tears, affecting the ones who have caused it, and putting inside their hearts, a brand new, unlknown feeling to some, the emotion of regret.
my pleas of desperation fill my mind, as I pour out my emotions through the words in this freewrite poem.
Tears pour out from my broken heart like endless streams of serpents, crawling out from a crypt.
these words I write come from my soul as I write my true emotions on this computer screen,
such emotions are to be held back, but what it's
like, I cannot explain.
You must experience this emotion for yourself, to feel such sadness, welling up inside you until it is about to burst out inside you, like a nuclear bomb of tears, affecting the ones who have caused it, and putting inside their hearts, a brand new, unlknown feeling to some, the emotion of regret.
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broken hearts from a girl
By pingping97 on June 8th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic Broken Hearts
How can this simple nieve boy change the way I feel??
Does he have some secret potion that he put in my drink??
Or maybe won me over by his first impression on me??
Whatever it was, it sure worked.
After a month, he leaves me broken hearted. Sad and feeling alone.
Why would he do this to me??
Was it something I did, or was it just plain old me??
All the good times we had, and also all the bad, I kept all the memories in my head.
So why did he do this??
Do you have all the answers, or are they waiting somewhere in life for me to see??
Does he have some secret potion that he put in my drink??
Or maybe won me over by his first impression on me??
Whatever it was, it sure worked.
After a month, he leaves me broken hearted. Sad and feeling alone.
Why would he do this to me??
Was it something I did, or was it just plain old me??
All the good times we had, and also all the bad, I kept all the memories in my head.
So why did he do this??
Do you have all the answers, or are they waiting somewhere in life for me to see??
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By Spek-Tha-Truth on June 9th 2009, evening time.
on topic Broken Hearts
on topic Broken Hearts
OKay. Just this past week, i kissed my best friend on the last day of school. and he said that he really liked me and i told him that i had strong feelings for him that i couldn't but into words. and so he told me that he want to go out so i said sure. For at least a day, we were boyfriend and girlfriend. but what i didn't know was tht he was going to break up with me. he dumped me the next day. and all i could say was wow. once you've kissed me you don't want to date anymore you must be crazy. my heart just sank when i was staring him in the face. i started to cry and my heart felt like it was torn out and shot to death. and to me that is the most hurtful thing someone could do. i felt like i'd been used or something, like im just a peice of trash laying on the ground to get kicked around by the whole city. and i really like him. of course me and hima re never talking agian. and im giving up guys for rite now. im not dating anyway because i dont want someone else to do this to me and i will get my heartbroken once agian. LIFE IS NOT RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its too randoms
By Yinangelinthedark on June 9th 2009, evening time.on topic Broken Hearts
I have been broken, neatrly beyond repair. I know that i have the ones who love me, and they are they ones that keep on this earth, no matter how few and far between they are. I am in love, with someone one wonderful, but I am also in love with the pain that i once owned in my arms and my legs. My broken hear is someting of unique style. I do not think anybody, but those fair few know that true reason to my depression. Heart broken and dying, i keep a journal to record what I have known ssonce dec. I can type all tyhat fast and i have tothink about it so i cant write all that much. get me with am emo tude, an i will make you want tob die with me ass well.... so i have more time. sweet.
I think back to the time'
where happiness was mine
I couldnt know what melancholy was
And what it can from
All the blame\
and instant shame
I only pray
and hope he can stay.
Will i hurt even more
is my arm going to be sore
and will i live again....
once more?
I think back to the time'
where happiness was mine
I couldnt know what melancholy was
And what it can from
All the blame\
and instant shame
I only pray
and hope he can stay.
Will i hurt even more
is my arm going to be sore
and will i live again....
once more?
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Razor Blade Kisses
By Kia-Ruko on June 9th 2009, late evening.on topic Broken Hearts
I wear your scars upon my wrists,
I hold dear every Razor Blade Kiss.
I'll remember every promise,
And will remain, forever honest,
For what you have to say,
I will listen everyday,
I thought we were in love,
But I realized you were just my drug.
One day I'll realize,
That I was a part of your lies.
But my heart will remain forever true,
because I love what your kisses do.
They fill me up, without a doubt,
and I wait for them to bleed out.
These deadly kisses, I hold so true,
Because this is the only thing I truly love about you,
Your Razor Blade Kisses, are ripped at the seam,
Like something out of my wildest dreams.
By Kia Ruko
I hold dear every Razor Blade Kiss.
I'll remember every promise,
And will remain, forever honest,
For what you have to say,
I will listen everyday,
I thought we were in love,
But I realized you were just my drug.
One day I'll realize,
That I was a part of your lies.
But my heart will remain forever true,
because I love what your kisses do.
They fill me up, without a doubt,
and I wait for them to bleed out.
These deadly kisses, I hold so true,
Because this is the only thing I truly love about you,
Your Razor Blade Kisses, are ripped at the seam,
Like something out of my wildest dreams.
By Kia Ruko
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Broken Love
By xXSapphireXx on June 12th 2009, terribly early in the morning.on topic Broken Hearts
You have to know it`s not easy for me,
but i need to feel free.
This Love is broken, you know
and we both know it`s time to go.
Now after i told you "it`s over now"
i really wish i could go
but my feets won`t make a step
while the tears run down my neck.
People say there`s a one and only Love in life,
now i know they`re right.
but i need to feel free.
This Love is broken, you know
and we both know it`s time to go.
Now after i told you "it`s over now"
i really wish i could go
but my feets won`t make a step
while the tears run down my neck.
People say there`s a one and only Love in life,
now i know they`re right.
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Kyle...=(
By LovexMexDead on June 17th 2009, early morning.on topic Broken Hearts
Kyle oh Kyle,
you've changed me for the worst.
You tore at my heart.
Was that what I deserved?
I loved you so much.
I gave you my all.
I never thought that I'd crash,
and be tempted to fall.
You chose a good friend,
of mine over me.
Now I truly hate her,
when she once was family.
I'm trying to love,
but who can I trust?
This new guy I'm with,
is no object of lust.
I cry every night,
as I think about you,
still scared that he'd prove,
to be just like you.
Leftovers of a broken heart,
I have locked up in a drawer.
When you had me you hurt me.
You can't hurt me anymore.
I love you but I hate you,
and this guy I try but can't,
feel the same just yet.
Please just leave my head,
I'd rather be with him instead.
'Cos I'm sick of having my heart broken...
you've changed me for the worst.
You tore at my heart.
Was that what I deserved?
I loved you so much.
I gave you my all.
I never thought that I'd crash,
and be tempted to fall.
You chose a good friend,
of mine over me.
Now I truly hate her,
when she once was family.
I'm trying to love,
but who can I trust?
This new guy I'm with,
is no object of lust.
I cry every night,
as I think about you,
still scared that he'd prove,
to be just like you.
Leftovers of a broken heart,
I have locked up in a drawer.
When you had me you hurt me.
You can't hurt me anymore.
I love you but I hate you,
and this guy I try but can't,
feel the same just yet.
Please just leave my head,
I'd rather be with him instead.
'Cos I'm sick of having my heart broken...
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A Broken Heart
By Socialbutterfly101 on June 18th 2009, early morning.on topic Broken Hearts
He says he loves you.
he'll do anything for you.
he'll love you to death and never let anything hurt you.
Wrong!
he's nothing but a two-time facing liar!
Psh! and i thought i was in love.
NO
i was merely pulled in the trap of love.
Love hurts
Love kills
So why should i try.
It only leads to deceit
heartache
and broken hearts.....like mine.
I though he really loved me
now i guess he loved what he go and left.
Which kills me because what waz wrong with me?
Did i do something wrong?
Was he not attracted to me anymore?
I WANNA KNOW!
i wanna know how he cud do this to me.
how cud he just carelessly rip my heart out and stomp on it.
How could you, you bastard?
now I'm left with no heart.
Only one split in two.
Broken....and never fixed.
he'll do anything for you.
he'll love you to death and never let anything hurt you.
Wrong!
he's nothing but a two-time facing liar!
Psh! and i thought i was in love.
NO
i was merely pulled in the trap of love.
Love hurts
Love kills
So why should i try.
It only leads to deceit
heartache
and broken hearts.....like mine.
I though he really loved me
now i guess he loved what he go and left.
Which kills me because what waz wrong with me?
Did i do something wrong?
Was he not attracted to me anymore?
I WANNA KNOW!
i wanna know how he cud do this to me.
how cud he just carelessly rip my heart out and stomp on it.
How could you, you bastard?
now I'm left with no heart.
Only one split in two.
Broken....and never fixed.
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Her
By olfrienderfo on June 19th 2009, early morning.on topic Broken Hearts
the day is breaking, ive been up for hours
the light stings, this poison soured
breathing heavy air, weighing me down
a hole in my chest, feeling drowned
the mirror shows no one i've ever known
weary eyes reflect what the heart has shown
another lifeless day to get through
another halfhearted attempt to forget you
no one will see this blinding pain
like spotting tear drops in the rain
no one will hear this screaming death
silently and slowly taking my breath
the light stings, this poison soured
breathing heavy air, weighing me down
a hole in my chest, feeling drowned
the mirror shows no one i've ever known
weary eyes reflect what the heart has shown
another lifeless day to get through
another halfhearted attempt to forget you
no one will see this blinding pain
like spotting tear drops in the rain
no one will hear this screaming death
silently and slowly taking my breath
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Heart Of Stone
By SheWolfNLust on June 22nd 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic Broken Hearts
A self-committed prisoner, in side this heart of stone
In slaved safely inside, allowing no one to see with in
Inner feelings of sadness, locked deep inside my heart
Which leave this empty space inside
With in it I feel alone
It is the place that I go, when all I want to do is hide
Far away from the sight, of ones naked eye
I am finding hard to climb, from this darkened hole
Left inside me, from all the hurt it has sustained
And in realality, I surely don't like being alone
Often I find my self at war, with myself and my desires
But deep walls of stone, serve to protect this heart of mine
They guard against all, with intension's of harm
A self recluse locked inside myself, totally alone
Leaving little hope for any trust, to allow love in once more
All that remains for now, are chains that tightly bind and hold
I often wonder if there will always be, this empty heart of stone
And will I always, feel this lost and alone!
Written by
Debbie Altiparmakis
In slaved safely inside, allowing no one to see with in
Inner feelings of sadness, locked deep inside my heart
Which leave this empty space inside
With in it I feel alone
It is the place that I go, when all I want to do is hide
Far away from the sight, of ones naked eye
I am finding hard to climb, from this darkened hole
Left inside me, from all the hurt it has sustained
And in realality, I surely don't like being alone
Often I find my self at war, with myself and my desires
But deep walls of stone, serve to protect this heart of mine
They guard against all, with intension's of harm
A self recluse locked inside myself, totally alone
Leaving little hope for any trust, to allow love in once more
All that remains for now, are chains that tightly bind and hold
I often wonder if there will always be, this empty heart of stone
And will I always, feel this lost and alone!
Written by
Debbie Altiparmakis
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My Broken Heart
By Wendybird on June 23rd 2009, early afternoon.on topic Broken Hearts
My Broken Heart
Flying through the forest talking to my friend. Leave stupid fairy I ban you from here! he shouted. My Peter Pan baned me from my home. He doesn't know I love him. I know he misses Wendy. She left him to grow up. But now my heart just broke. I am not going to get her for revenge against my old best friend. For now I must stay hidden or i just might cry. For my old love Peter Pan.
Flying through the forest talking to my friend. Leave stupid fairy I ban you from here! he shouted. My Peter Pan baned me from my home. He doesn't know I love him. I know he misses Wendy. She left him to grow up. But now my heart just broke. I am not going to get her for revenge against my old best friend. For now I must stay hidden or i just might cry. For my old love Peter Pan.
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