Freewrite~!

By Parfayeet on June 1^st 2009, lunch time.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I want to feel the things you say that You see in me. The things that I don't even notice. I want to kiss you till night falls and dawn arises, and I want to see you forever and ever more. The thoughts roam inside my head. I have nothing I can do to deal with it. It's saddess that corrupts me. It's mostly maddess I feel for you. Only I can pursade those emotions for I am the only one who truely loves you. You're sillyness. You're aggressive side. Have I ever told you how you made me feel when you yell? It's exciting and thrilling. Not one strand of me is scared by your anger because sooner or later, you'll be back with me. I love how you can make up your mind

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random freewrite 6/1/09

By Borntowriteforever on June 1^st 2009, late evening.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I dont know why I love you so
Maybe its the way you are so calm
Or the way you never get mad.
Your voice to me is like a light
Guiding me through the darkest hours
And leading me to a safe place.
i dont know what to write
still dont know what to write
why is my heart breaking
what is the noise i hear
it sounds like glass crashing on tile floor
please tell me it wasnt my heart
tell me i was imagining it
it wasnt true or fair
i loved you so much more
for so long until
i couldnt hold it in anymore
i wrote in on paper
but i didnt get it to you
cause of the fear held within


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I love you!!!!!

By CourtJester on June 2^nd 2009, the wee hours.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

Ok so here it is, 2:42 am and I can't stop thinking about you. God I make such an ass of myself everytime you are anywhere near me. It is a new feeling because I am not affraid to make mistakes with you. I want the chance to get to know you, slowly though because I don't want to miss a thing and I want it to last forever. I knew there was something special about you the minute I saw you. I also knew that I wouldn't be brave enough to bring it to your attention. I need you to know that, I don't think I have ever loved anyone or anything as much as I love you. Just knowing I will get to see you, makes me feel so happy inside. When I don't see you, I still feel so happy just knowing that I have had the pleasure of meeting such an amazing and wonderful woman. You are perfect to me, in everyway. I would not trade you for anything. If God granted me the ability to choose anyone in this world in which to live with and love, and he would make them love me, it would be you. With your boisterous laughter, your beautiful eyes, your wonderful accent, you well shaped body. I am in love with you and I am tired of holding it inside. Be with me now and forever, and I promise you I will not do anything to make you regret one day we spend together. Just be with me, even if it is only for a little while. As long as I can be next to you, I will do whatever it takes.

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HOTTIE(!perfect!perfect!perfect!)

By BlueJuneNights on June 2^nd 2009, lunch time.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

you make me laugh when i am sad or mad. you light up the room when you walk in.you make me laugh for days when you dance. you are the kindest person in the world. you are sexy as helllllllllllllllllllllllllll.
you make me wanna jump on you and rape you. you are the perfect person. i wish i could be with you, i wish i could keep you forever, i wish it was me and you. but one thing that i dont love of you is you are not bi. i wish you were. and i am so stupid because i do love you and i would give the world for you. you are awsome and perfect for your feet to your amazing hair. and your eyes. oh my gosh. when i look in your eyes i freeze. i dont know why.perfect is the only word for it. you are perfect!perfect!perfect! and thats really all i can say. so if you want to know what i feel about you i love you and i wish i were with you. and you are a hottie!

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Something about you...

By StarEyes on June 3^rd 2009, early morning.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

Today, there is one question on my mind...
why do i love you so damn much...

I don't know if i can answer that one...

there is something about you,
about the way you make me feel inside,

the feel of your touch,
the taste of your kiss
on my lips, on my memory...

the longing i feel for you
when you are not close by my side...

the sound of your voice,
as it falls gently on my ears...

there is just something about you...

when we are together,
it is as if we can conquer the world,
nothing can stop us...

it is just the beginning of the
climb for us, and well,

together we can do it......




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love is forever but lust is for everyone

By Kala-Kuntajus on June 3^rd 2009, mid-morning.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

well i'm not really sure i love you yet, but i know for sure that i really like you, and i hope something can come of that. you make my stomach turn circles with one of your sweet kisses to the cheek. i never thought i could begin to know someone so quickly. the way you hold me close to you, and never push me to let you have all the fun is more than i can say for most guys i've ever liked this mucch. i know its illegal for us to be together, but at this point, i really dont care. you make me so happy, and i know i can do the same. i just hope nothing bad comes of all of this.

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Love.

By intimate kisses on June 3^rd 2009, late at night.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I love you. Maybe you don't know why, or maybe you'll never know how i feel towards you. But, i don't find it a problem. Though you many be attached, to someone i know, to my good friend. But she don't know i'm in love with you. Because i don't want your relationship to be at risk, i decided to keep this all to myself. Its tough, if you should know. All the heartache, painful. But, if i really think back, maybe its all worth it. Its part of growing up, its part of learning. Its just normal, i guess. I love you because you're sweet, i love you because you're nice. I love you because you're special, and i like the way you are. I don't need you to change cause i think you're great like that. Even though with flaws, but in my eyes, you are perfect. No need for a change, sometimes, i feel that i'm not good enough for you. Maybe cause you're too perfect. I've learnt to let go, i know that loving someone doesn't mean we have to be in a relationship, but i'm not saying that my feelings have faded away, but i just want to say, that i'm just using another way to love you. The way that will cause less pain to everyone. Cuz you're what makes it worth.

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By roxana pesina on June 4^th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

the way i love you

when you were created i was created right by your side
this is the way i love you
I would give my life for you
this is the way i care
I will alwalys love me for loving you


this is the way i love you this is the way i care with my heart in my hand for you and me to share
I am the other part in your life you need to survive you are that sun that shine my light and warms me down

Not even time can take my love no matter how far or down we are

ur name is carved deep down inside i bought a lock and locked it down

here is the key to my heart together we stand till death do us part

this the way i love you this is the way i care me and you together even if we burn in hell

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For You ....

By Xx--love-pain--xX on June 4^th 2009, lunch time.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

i love you, i love the way you're smile just lightens my day, and the way the words "i love you" makes my week, i love it how you can make me smile even if im so close to tears, you are more than i have ever wanted, i cannot believe that you've stuck by me for so long, i love you, you're light kisses - they have so much passion, i really do believe you when you say i love you, it's an amazing feeling knowing that someone cares, you accept me for who i am you are so perfect in everyway. I Love You Darling, Forever xxx

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Freewrite: "this is why i love you"

By doodlebug1234 on June 4^th 2009, evening time.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

This is why I love you
She thought
as her soul slipped through
shock induced comas:

That silence
between my heart beats
is just for you
its reserved
for your silent breaths
and your silly compliments
utterly dripping with syrup
I gulp them up
and let them slither
down my throat
they doze there
seeping thought my pores
and entwining itself in my throughts,

You're dilatory hours
reserved for nothing
but meloncolly smiles
and entwining fingers.

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What I've learned

By FlamingoCroquet on June 5^th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

When you're thinking you have this look on your face
You pull yourself out of the present, out of time and examine.
Searching your brain, parameters: [what to say]

You break things apart - I put them together
and that is how we work with each other.
Take things piece by piece, observe.
Does it fit better here?
Yes. Let's make things better.
There is no such thing as a finished product.
Especially not in regards to people.
No one is complete.

I used to be afraid of clocks, they go so fast
Hands grasping, can't hold on, rushing air, time, life.
They're speeding on and I'd be left behind, right?
But now I don't have to cling to anything,
I just move with it and I feel the universe:
not rushing past, but flowing around me softly.


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blah. life is blah.

By sekmhet eye of ra on June 12^th 2009, late evening.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

why is it that the people that i think i'm connected to eventually fade away? i'm convinced it's because i'm cold; but, i think i give alot and that i give freely. and i think that those bastards take too much; they take advantage. nobody is attached to me in any way. i'm floating alone.
i worry that i do the same to others. my mother tries to connect sometimes, but i usually run. does she feel the same as i do? i don't like listening to her all the time. it's so negative and it just drains me. maybe she doesn't know what to say, how to connect. maybe she's just throwing out a line, trying to get some attention.
maybe i'm a coward for not finishing the job like should have. destiny my ass. coward's veil is all it is. scaredy cat can't use a blade. to afraid to walk downtown. this is all crap.

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By FlamingoCroquet on June 15^th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

The acoustics of my heart leave echoes
of past sins and desires,
the roof is caving in, my aorta straining.
You accept my discord, embrace the cacophony
that is innate inside me rattling my bones and
brain percussively.
My chest vibrating with chords and jarring thrums.

And this is why I love you.

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I love you for .....

By XSlayerOfSoulzX on June 15^th 2009, early evening.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I love you for your smile
I love you for your eyes
I love you for your mind
I love you for your soul
I love you for your body

Your smile makes me smile
your eyes draw me in
your mind is a labrinth that is
impossible to exit
Your soul enters mine and offers comfort
Your body is the body of a god it hightens my senses and sends shivers down my spine.
You catch me when i fall.
you save me from the nightmares that haunt my sleep.
You are my life the one that i can always count on.
This is why i love you..

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This Love I Share

By BloodlessValentine on June 22^nd 2009, the wee hours.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I love you for your eyes. I love the way you look at me, cuz I can see that you care. I can see that you love me with all your heart. I see that this isnt a game. It is not childish love, or 'puppy dog' love, not even fairy tale love. No, not even close, it is tru undying, faithful love that you share for me. I love that whatever I may do to hurt you, I am always forgiven. I love the oh so soft touch of your lips, not demanding anything, just there.. loving. I love the way you hold me tight and make sure Im alright. I love how you are here... always and forever to tell me you love me.. and I love you. I really do.

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By Dreamers LoveMe on July 2^nd 2009, terribly early in the morning.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

Why do i love you?
How the hell am i supossed to know!

It is the way you treat me,
You make it all go away,
You shcok me,
Your hugs make me warm and happy

The biggest shock of all was when you left
And didn't come back
Then one day yuo randomly show
Give me a hug that made the whole day bright
Then you have to go and i havent seen you since

Now when i am missing you
Or thinking about you
Or when i am just plain sad
I remember that last hug

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At Your Feet

By Sheep Person on July 3^rd 2009, late morning.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I'm not sure why I love you.
You're annoying, you're loud.
You're uncaring and using.
You laugh with people
and then at them right back.
You're not physically beautiful.
You're too sensitive,
and you make me feel
lower than dirt at your feet.
And that's where I always find myself -
at your feet.

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Meds and other such love

By munchbitty on July 10^th 2009, lunch time.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

I used to ask why does love always feel like
nothing? nothing? nothing? why can't I feel the way
everyone else feels their hearts beat and shatter
anything that decides to hinder their path?

then I met you, and my heart began to thaw
and I realised emotions weren't fables and myths
they actually existed, and you reminded me
again, that I was actually a human being!

for this I fucking hate you, but I still love you
at the same to try to deal with these new feelings
and I wonder sometimes what's the point in loving?
But then I see you smiling and I can't help but smile back.

I try to stop my heart bleeding soft wounds of spite
but it's not unlike pouring vinegar over them
and it stings, this love, but the sting is addictive
it's one of those medications I can never resist.

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This Is Why.

By foreverxnow on July 28^th 2009, early evening.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

This is why I love you.
The way your shirts always smell like home
You make me feel like I'm hidden from the world
Because you would never hurt me.
This is why I adore you.
You're so cute you make me want to squeeze you
Your smile is the 20,000th wonder of the world
The way you act protective around other guys.
This is why I hate you.
You made me fall in love with a fantasy
You went behind my back and destroyed me
When you hid me from the world, you also hid me from your OTHER girlfriend
This is why I left you.
You lied
And continued to lie
Even though I called you out
This is why I can't wait to forget you.

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This is why I love you

By Ally-Skittle on September 2^nd 2009, the wee hours.
on topic This is why I love you- Freewrite Challenge!!!!

Your smelly socks, your dirty underwear, and your used gym shorts.

Your dirty dishes, your ugly feet, and your very hairy back.

Your boy soap, your special shampoo, and your expensive body spray.

Your morning breath, your morning wood, and your greasy morning hair.

Your loud snore, your big hands, and your uselessness with a tool.

Your tuneless whistling, your toothy grin and your boisterous laugh.

Your strong arms, your booming voice, and your chicken legs.

Your green eyes, your stupid jokes, and your unending ability to make me smile.

This is why I love you.

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