Freedom

By Tears of Water on May 29^th 2009, late morning.
on topic What Do You See?

When I look up at the stars,
I see the shining of God's grace in the night
Lighting up the sky as God's grace is everywhere when you stare up throughout the night...
The stars twinkling and sparkling as the sky remains still
The moon lighting up the place too as it's children; the stars, spread throughout Earth, shooting and moving.
Creating a wish for a child who is lingering and wanting something in their life...
God's grace... that is what I see when I look at the stars at night...
Freedom


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Stars to the heavens

By Fallen-Thumper on May 29^th 2009, lunch time.
on topic What Do You See?

looking at the sky brings me happiness but sadness all that i was to swallow me up so i dont have to be here, not making anyone feel worse, i just think that if im with the stars i may become one that someone wishes on when i die and get their dream whatever it is but i also want to be there so ill mean somethingwhen couples or single people look up and see something beautiful, beauty in the heavens and the sky whenever they look, i just also lobve looking at the they actually make me feel something, something special like they are looking over you all personal angels each to put a smile on your face but wip away those smirks

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When you look up at the sky

By HayleyMai on May 30^th 2009, mid-morning.
on topic What Do You See?

when you look up to the stars
what do you see ?
your future ?
your lies ?
maybe me ?
when you look up to the stars
does it make you feel so small
and insignifigant?
or does it make you think
of all the answers to life?
do you gaze upon
the stars
reaching for the moon?
or is it just to wish
that your lover is home soon?
when you spot that star
the first one of the night
do you wish that they're home all right?
when you look up to the stars
and see the world around you
does that feeling ever come and
surrond you?
a paneramic view
of all that we don't know,
is it comfort?
or does it barly show?
do you get that feeling
of fear?
or lust?
that ever thing you know,
you cannot trust?
when you look up at the sky,
at dawn dusk or night
does this tremendous power
give you insight?




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The stars in the sky

By Kitty-Cattt on May 31^st 2009, late evening.
on topic What Do You See?

The stars in the sky
Make me see who I am
What I want to be
The man i can't have
The stars in the sky
Show my future and my past
My dreams and hopes
My never ending guilt
The stars in the sky
Make me think of how thins
Might have been if I
Had never known his name.

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Stars at night

By intimate kisses on June 4^th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic What Do You See?

At night, i lie on my bed and look up at the sky. The dark sky filled with many stars. I think about you. I think about my life with you. How my life would be with you, how great my life is with you, everything all about you. Because the stars at night remind me of you, once you told me that the stars was as if you. The stars, they carry a message as if to say, "I like you, i really really do." So whenever i'm down, whenever i go drinking and come home latelate at night, whenever i walk home by the road and feel lonely, i look up at the stars, i feel a sense of comfort to me. I feel a sense of warmth around me, and i feel you nearby. The stars, as if looking at your face showing me those monkey faces, only to make me smile.

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stars

By stacie826 on June 4^th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic What Do You See?

lookin at the stars i see our past
our lost promises of love and togetherness
i see you smile and a reminder of what i once had
i see what i want and what i had
mypast my present and my futer
noone knows of this but you
we will always be together under the stars you said one wonderful nite
i wanted you to saty with me but you couldnt
when i look at the stars i feel like im fallling but noones there to catch me you left becuase you had to go home to her but why leave me

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shes my star

By XxXVAMPKINXxX on June 5^th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic What Do You See?

what do i see when i look up at the stars
i see her
the one courtney the one i love
the one who will never leave my head
and i shall never let go i love her for wat she is not how she looks
she will always be my star
weather shes far from me or so close i can hear her heart beat
the love of my life the one lighting up the night
i love her i need her
you think i can leave her?
your crazy shes my oxygen shes my life line with out her i would die!
and i would die to keep her
this is how i feel every time i see her
and every time she leaves im crushed like the wieght of my life was pressed
pressed back down to my chest what do i do
i need her i wont leave her i love her she is my star

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Starz

By AddiKt on June 7^th 2009, evening time.
on topic What Do You See?

Looking up at the sky...I just feel perfect. I know that somewhere under this big sky the love of my life is there && that's comforting to me. It really makes me think a lot though, like in a bad way. I usually start to get anxiety about the past, and then start tripping on what's going to happen in the near//far future. All and all though, stars really touch me where it counts, just cuz of my babe, we have so many memories under a star struck sky..

It's also really crazy to think about how big it is...I mean holy cow! && you know we can't be the only intelligent life out there...it's mathmatically impossible.

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The Stars And Beyond

By shysky on June 10^th 2009, terribly early in the morning.
on topic What Do You See?

When I sit outside in the darkness of night and gaze up at the stars far above me, I see vast possibilities for new life, new worlds, new opportunities. I see a freedom that comes with exploring space, the amazing beautiful stars and often my mind wanders in new ways.

I imagine that I can just simply leave earth and find exactly what I'm looking for beyond the stars. A world with no drama, no heartache, where people are perpetually kind to each other without the need to kill, maim, or harm in any way.

I desire a world of peace. Where arguments are illegal and everyone has to just enjoy their lives to the fullest. A home for musicians, artists, poets, a quiet world. A world where relaxation is simple and there's no outside influence.

What I want of course probably doesn't exist, but it doesn't diminish my desire for it. I wish for a world free of pain. Pain of mind or body. I wish for a world where people are adored for their talents and their beauty, inner and outer.

I wish for there to be no more chaos. I long for a place among the stars, even at the point of it being my last breath. I see so much in the heavens above, and yet, still I am earth bound.

That is what I see among the stars.

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You Are My Star

By XxXNoxiousRoseXxX on June 10^th 2009, late at night.
on topic What Do You See?

When I'm away,
I can only see you at night.
See, it makes it quite hard,
when I can only see you in the stars.

Your eyes are the two brightest,
while you and Orion share a belt.
The moon is the light on your face,
that never fails to make me melt.

Anticipation clouds my mind,
as the sun sets...
For I know soon we can visit,
and I can be briefly happy.

Without you here,
it's just so boring.
I'm lost here without you,
I don't know what to do.

In the stars,
there you lie.
Until morning comes,
and the sun steals away my love.

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Star Light Expanse

By katie marie on June 14^th 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic What Do You See?

expanse before me, endless, immense.
dark void yet filled with fullness
twinkling lights of heaven
seeming so small and yet full of depth
causes wonder, questions, awe
longing, desire, searching of mind
beauty to behold, satisfying to the soul
spirituality fullfilled or at least tapped into
God hidden somewhere within

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Him

By fallenstar13 on June 18^th 2009, early morning.
on topic What Do You See?

When I look into the stars, I see him. It's as if he is flowing all around me, smiling and singing to me in his own way. Sometimes I used to wish he would appear and be more than just a ghost. Sometimes I used to miss him when he wasn't there. I even used to pray that he could hear me talking to him when I was upset.
Years later he was there, he did smile at me in his own way, and he was definitely more than a ghost. Holding my hand, calling me, hugging me, making sure I am okay and protecting me. He does all of that. But looking back it wasn't so bad to wonder where he was, to wish he was there instead, because deep down I knew; even if he never noticed, even if I never saw that smile, I felt him there with me. He was my true love long before I met him, and he will be long after I die. Love is more powerful than anything else, it is a bond that links us from heart to heart and soul to soul. One that is not meant to chain you down, but set you free.

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Hopeful Shine

By DustinsGirl11508 on June 26^th 2009, evening time.
on topic What Do You See?

The stars send me whispers
as the moon seems bigger
tonight I feel closer
to a world with much hope.

The stars are shining bright as diamonds in the sky
Awake in the grass, filled of beauty, I lie.
I see them dancing so high up.
I don't know if I could ever do enough
To deserve to see such beauty tonight
To fell so lucky and filled with delight.

They whisper to me, as the moon listens too
I see a gleam of happiness, is this true?
Maybe its the angles that make the beauty of the night
Maybe its meant to make you feel alright.
Stormy or clear, they always twinkle as if nothing else is real
Thats how I feel.

The way I feel is so amazing and great
I feel like I'm looking at the entire world, from this one insignificant place.
Songs of hope fill my mind
I know faith is lingering, and will be givin in time.


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Start of Poem

By fallenstar13 on July 4^th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic What Do You See?

Stars spark colors of another reality
burning into my head;
emotions twirl like dancers
lost in an ancient beat.

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A Star In The Night

By ILuvToSing on July 11^st 2009, evening time.
on topic What Do You See?

Shining so bright above me,
sparkling like glitter.
So beautiful,
so bright,
they make me feel free,
they make me feel happy.
These objects that shine so bright,
create images, so high in the sky,
so high it's amazing that they can be seen.
When I see where they are at,
I wish I were up there, too.
So beautiful,
so bright.
Though only seen at night,
I wish I were one, too.
I wish I were a star.
So beautiful,
and bright,
so free,
and noticable by anyone who looks,
though, only at night.


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The Stars Remind Me Of You

By Randomness x on August 1^st 2009, evening time.
on topic What Do You See?

The stars remind me of you.
Of how you were until she left.
So full of joy, so happy.

The day she was gone,
We saw that shooting star,
Made you smile for a second.

You told me to make a wish,
I wished you'd kiss me,
Bet you wished it was her there instead of me.

Now Im home there are barely any stars.
Northern skies arent so pretty,
Southern ones are.

Cant believe Im not coming back,
Just like she didnt the year before,
But its different isnt it.

Cos you missed her,
You wont miss me,
I know you wont.

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