my highschool romance

By charmedmad4eva on May 29^th 2009, terribly early in the morning.
on topic Your First Crush

it was highschool and i came out of the cafe with a cup of coffee and the boy that i dream about was walking and he walked into me by accident nd we bent down to pick up the cup at the same time then he looked into my eyes and said that i had beautiful eyes and i said i liked his acsent thn the bell rang it was time for lessons but suddenly my phone went off it was prue said that her and phoebe t would not be in when i would come home from school then i rushed to my lessons and stared out of the window .

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I miss you

By Fallen-Thumper on May 29^th 2009, terribly early in the morning.
on topic Your First Crush

reaslly just write wrll lets say that the fact it is im still in love with my ex who is now dating my best friend and still they are in so much love and i really miss him i try and say that im happy for them but i get eaten inside and i dont care about myself i care about them but i really dont want to see this hsappen i want him back with me and i want to be with him i dont care if i sound like a self bitch its life im kind to others and have been told to think of myself a bit but this is me thinking about myself i want him back i miss him so much and i dont care if i hurt myself or you to get him i dont give a shit anymore and i want him, i really really want him i love him but i know he didnt love me i miss him so much i want him back i miss you come back to me please......

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He who has sewn his portrait on my lips

By HayleyMai on May 29^th 2009, early evening.
on topic Your First Crush

at first i hated you like all the others did
but then inside me emotion it did
grow
and open
through my pores did it sew
peircing my heart
and my mind
sitching you into my thoughts
forever
drops of blood did drip
from small pricks by the pin
harmless
ponderings of
never being with you
and still my vacant mind waits
to taste the length of our fates
how long will you linger on my mind
how long till the hem somes undone
yet still
years and year after
the sound of your name
does tear the patched up part
does upset the balance
of churning changing butterflies
and all i can think
is the pounding of my heart on my chest
can he hear it ?
and all i can hear it silence under
heartbeat
and i feel so much at once
the grease in my hair
the wet grass on my bare feet
the wind on my cheeks
and i feel him being stitched once again
onto my thoughts
one new incidence
one new photo to tear off
the still frame in my mind
sewned into my being
why is it so that our fates me intertwined
why is it that your string be knoted into mine
and sewn upon my frazzled brow
can'tst thou doth leave me alone
for mine heart dost know
it shall never be so
and it can read the snare on your lips
that smile that speaks
a thousand volumes
that i stare at year upon year
wishing those teasing lips were connected to mine
my first crush
why can'st thou be mine first
kiss ?




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You've Changed

By Araknia on May 30^th 2009, lunch time.
on topic Your First Crush

My first real crush
had eyes as blue as the sea
but those beautiful eyes
couldn't see any of me

we weren't so young
but rumors were always flying around
and before I knew it had happened
of my voice, he'd tremble at the sound

People thought that I was dressing like him
in an attempt to impress or catch his sight
but the truth is, I had always loved a trenchcoat
and he simply showed me it was alright.

My first real crush
had eyes as blue as the sky
but today I see nothing
but the red around those eyes
and a sunken-in face
whiter then my own
as white as the candy
he now puts in his nose.

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First Crush

By pulpyblood-dripping on May 30^th 2009, evening time.
on topic Your First Crush

The butterflies take off
Every single time
Seeming to take flight
From the very pit of my stomach.

For the first time in my life,
I've found someone
That I might want to know
In a different way than most.

I find myself thinking of her
Whenever I have idle time
Even when I haven't seen her
For such a long time.

Oh, darling, I wish you knew.
I wish I could get the nerve
To let those words of adoration
Fall from my mouth, word vomit.

Everytime I see her,
I get caught by her hair,
Her smile, her charming personality.
If only I had the nerve.


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The End of a Friendship

By Spek-Tha-Truth on May 30^th 2009, late at night.
on topic Your First Crush

My crush!!! the first crush of my life was a boy named Christian Berry. he was in my kindergarden class. i really liked him. and when he moved in 2nd grade, it broke my heart. i started to cry on his last day. i didnt want him to leave. him and i were best friends. and the first time i saw him since the day he moved was last year at a football game. when i saw the way he was looking at me, i started to cry. he came up to me and gave me a huge hug. and i really needed that from him. from this day foward i promised myself i wasnt goign to say his name or even think about him.

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The first one who touched my heart.

By Daedelus92 on June 2^nd 2009, the wee hours.
on topic Your First Crush

Oh how your words were like a knife,
aiming dead set to ruin my whole life.

They never said that love was an easy game,
for if it was then it would be so lame.

I never thought that I could recover,
but now I've come to love another.

I suppose I must say thank you,
I did not know this dream would come true.

I thank you for all the pain,
for without it I'd have no gain.

I thank you for what had to be done,
now I this game I've won.

But as I know it is not over,
the next part is like finding a four-leaf-clover.

But if it is true,
all I can hope to do is thank you.

It's because you broke me,
that I have risen free.

I know that it can't always be right,
but when it is I'll hold her tight.

I'm a new man because of you,
and my first crush is who I owe it all to.

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john...my personal hell

By Satans angel666 on June 2^nd 2009, early morning.
on topic Your First Crush

john my love my life, i thought he loved me i thought he cared he was around he said he wouldnt leav me, not for her but there they are and im alone noone to help me noone to hold me. you always leave always come back my hearts broken nd then taped shattered nd then glued torn and left. tears fill my eyes at the thoght, but you dont care, not if its not a good time, could i die??? could i die and you not notice, i dont know what you want.... but i wish it was me....

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8 months down the drain

By BlueJuneNights on June 2^nd 2009, late morning.
on topic Your First Crush

my first crush was so sweet. he was kind and cool. but the only problem was he was not bi like me. i liked him so much, but ididnt really know him. i had met him over the phone with my friend and he was cool. but over time he seemed to change. he acted like he liked me. but i guess he did cuz we went out. we went out for 8 whole months. but then i started hearing stuff like he didnt like me, we dont go out, and he just be playing with me. so i had to end it and we broke up. we stoped talking and maybe 3 week later he wanted to go back out with me. i really wanted to, but he really hurt me so i couldnt. now we talk a lot like were best friends. but i has bean about 2 month since we broke up and i cant stop thinking about him. i still love him and i am very much i love with him. i cant get him out of my head. so my first real crush was... richard alexander daniel teeter. but he like to be called alex teeter also known as (by me) R.A.T.

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First Crush

By geetarrstarr on June 3^rd 2009, mid-afternoon.
on topic Your First Crush

The cute cowboy who didn't know.
He was awkward as I'll get out.
Didn't notice me.
Or maybe it was that I didn't want to be noticed.
Quiet girl, quiet boy.
Quite a match.
Too young to date or anything,
But too old to believe they could be bitten by the cootie bug.
The black-haired boy with the country twang.
Did he even know my name?
I guess I'll never know.
I saw him a year or so ago,
He doesn't look near the same.
Yes he's still a cowboy,
And yes, he still has black hair.
But he no longer had that thing about him,
That made him a person I'd want to know.

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Great Friend

By BeMyValentine on June 3^rd 2009, evening time.
on topic Your First Crush

The first time I saw him, I knew. He was definitely the one for me. I love the way he makes me laugh, and he listens to me. We're best friends, but he couldn't possibly know the truth. He was a wonderful friend, a great person indeed. How could anyone not see him for what he was? They take him for an annoyance, but he really is a great guy.

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crush

By icesc8ergirl on June 15^th 2009, early evening.
on topic Your First Crush

I have had many crushes, but none like this. i was eleven. he was 12. we were meant to be together. even he thought that.
i hope. he asked me out . i was so excited {even though my dad wasn't so thrilled}...youre too young is what he told me. but everyone else in my grade haad been bf and gf with kids. we only go on group dates and its not like we kiss or anything.. its just hugs and hand holding....really! no big deal. anyways so we liked eachother but then i found another guy. he didnt like me..yet.. but i realized i had to break up with my first crush before i started looking for a new one. it was the most awful thing ive eveer done. "i think we should just be friends' after 3 months of datinng is not easy. so yeah thas my story.

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By billcronk on June 25^th 2009, early morning.
on topic Your First Crush

it seems 35 years have passed now, since the time I held your face in my hands, since I heard the sweet music of your voice....


So much has passed behind me now and the future is shorter than my past and I wonder...I wonder of where you are and..

I dream of you more often than before like clouds reversed in the sky your form and music and dreams come back to me so clearly...so cleary..


I can hold your hand like I once did and see the auburn in your hair and the blueness of the whites of your eyes and ..

our dreams come back to me now unfullfilled and over stuffed with the lack of you now so much later

and I hope that life is good, that you too hold a certain memory of dreams in the past and the good times of a hand held

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My First Crush

By Jessicaaa on August 1^st 2009, early evening.
on topic Your First Crush

Well I met this guy on holiday,
And he was my first crush.
Not like most girls first,
He wasnt hot, sexy or lush.

I only saw him on a night,
He was only there for a while,
Didnt take much notice of me,
Liked pretty girls with style.

I guess I dont blame him,
I didnt know him for too long,
But it still hurt like crazy,
The moment he was gone.

He was 2 years older,
And I was such a mess.
He didnt seem to mind,
Used to call me Jess.

Now I hate the sound of it,
Cos thats what he used to say,
All the northern accents,
Take my memories of him away.

But obviously as you'll have guessed,
It didnt end so well,
He left and we havent spoke since,
And right now Im going through hell.

Its almost been a year,
Since I've seen him last,
Dont think I'll ever see you again,
So best just leave it in the past.

Better just move on,
It's hard for me you know,
Cos although he never held on,
I havent yet let go.





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