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By HayleyMai on May 28^th 2009, late evening.
on topic Scene writing


The small wooden white door opens
a women, small and petite walks into a little house
the floors are white and tiled
her shoes make clicking sounds
hes sitting on a small wooden chair
between the stairs and the entrace to the kitchen
he looks strained
he says something firmly

MAN : Take that fucking mask off
your hideaus face

the womans face is shocked
she touchs the mask on her fask
it's a masquerade mask, small and white
he forehead wrinkles the nest time he speaks

MAN: Listen to what i say !

she touches her lips
and steps foreward
heading to the stairs
he whispers something nastily,

MAN : Bitch ,

and shakes his head slightly
like he can't believe her
he yells, enough to strain his throat

MAN: NO ! don't you dare fucking walk away from me
DON"T YOU FUCKING DARE !

the woman is on the stairs now
the woman blinks twice and pulls her chin in
as he throws the chair violently
and goes to the stairs
he grabs her shoulder
tightly, you can see by the grip of his hand
and pulls the mask off her face

MAN: You little shit !

he starts whispering angrily
close to her face
then slowly back away
his jaw clenched
she runs up the stairs as soon as he lets go

MAN: FUCK ! FUCK YOU ! don't walk away from me
don't you fucking walk away
GET THE FUCK BACK HERE !

he screams, turning his face red
and the viens in his neck and forehead pulse
he lifts his hand into a tight fist while grabing the railing with the other
his walks up the stairs
she up on the second floor
theres gray carpet there
dingey, unwashed looking
he yells again after moving one step

MAN: I'M THE MAN IN THIS RELATIONSHIP!


as he does this he hits is chest with is index finger

MAN: I MAKE THE MONEY!

twice, signaling himself
it's with quite force
then he points at her, he then runs up stairs

MAN: (while running to her) you little whore don't do anything!

grabs her by the wrist and pulls her to the bedroom
she looks limp and defenseless
he pushes her
onto the bed

MAN: sit down slut,DO AS I SAY
(PAUSE) good . . .

she orients herself and sits up striaight
looking him in the eyes
maliously
spitefully
he walks over to his desk right across from the bed
a few feet away
she just stares angrily
he looks into his mirror
and starts to undo his tie
is says a short word, mockingly

MAN: BITCH

then turn as he removes his tie
lifting off his head
he nods saying a word long and sexually

MAN: Now...

unbuttons the first button of his shirt
then slowly unbuttons the second
he says something arrogantly while still walking toward the bed

MAN: thatsssssssss right
The whore fucking listens
now,



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Too vulgar! Grow up! Be a lady!

By Hardy Parkerson on June 1^st 2009, late at night.
on topic Scene writing

Too vulgar! You make
your parents look like
failures. Surely they
are not. Clean it up,
young lady!

s/Hardy Parkerson

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By mattywhite on June 7^th 2009, late morning.
on topic Scene writing

well i would write for you but all the swear words you've fucking used are comin up as bunny you fucking made me mad really looking forward to doing this but you've been a shit and used to many swear words crappers your making me mad. I would take my hands off the keyboard early but i've committed myself to this crap now oh how i wish i bloody hadn't, i'm only 13 so i can't see the swearing you've used there for i can't do that freewrite oh what a waste of 3 minutes of my fucking life, oh i wish i hadn't done this. 3 minute clock woopee, bye

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