Freewrite a poem about the one you love.
Prey
By Love Is Heartless on May 28th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
They tell you all about it,
That you must watch out.
They tell you that it will change your life forever,
And indeed it will.
They tell you to be careful;
Cautious;
Wise;
Smart.
You think about what you have heard,
And you agree.
When it happens to a friend,
All you can do is pray;
Sympathize;
Worry;
Hope.
It all seems so unreal,
Untill it happens to you.
You get dragged in,
Willingly dragged in.
They set you a trap,
And you intentionally fall into it.
They lure you in,
With their kind words of love;
Hope;
Desire;
Passion;
Reassurance.
But it is all just a lie.
You have never met them,
But you can see that they are beautiful,
Inside;
And Out.
You start to fall in love,
Deeper than you ever have before.
They tell you that they want to be with you forever,
That they cannot live on without you.
They tell you not to worry,
That they will always be there for you.
Until they tell you,
Tell you that they want to be with you,
So they can hold you;
Kiss you;
Love you.
But it is all just a lie.
You never actually know,
Who is on the other side.
It could be the real deal,
Or it could all be a lie.
But you never know,
So listen to what they say,
Because it all seems ridiculous;
Unreal;
Unbelievable.
But believe it,
It is real,
It happens everyday.
You become their prey,
They will devour your heart alive.
It is always different,
When it is you,
Not them,
You.
That you must watch out.
They tell you that it will change your life forever,
And indeed it will.
They tell you to be careful;
Cautious;
Wise;
Smart.
You think about what you have heard,
And you agree.
When it happens to a friend,
All you can do is pray;
Sympathize;
Worry;
Hope.
It all seems so unreal,
Untill it happens to you.
You get dragged in,
Willingly dragged in.
They set you a trap,
And you intentionally fall into it.
They lure you in,
With their kind words of love;
Hope;
Desire;
Passion;
Reassurance.
But it is all just a lie.
You have never met them,
But you can see that they are beautiful,
Inside;
And Out.
You start to fall in love,
Deeper than you ever have before.
They tell you that they want to be with you forever,
That they cannot live on without you.
They tell you not to worry,
That they will always be there for you.
Until they tell you,
Tell you that they want to be with you,
So they can hold you;
Kiss you;
Love you.
But it is all just a lie.
You never actually know,
Who is on the other side.
It could be the real deal,
Or it could all be a lie.
But you never know,
So listen to what they say,
Because it all seems ridiculous;
Unreal;
Unbelievable.
But believe it,
It is real,
It happens everyday.
You become their prey,
They will devour your heart alive.
It is always different,
When it is you,
Not them,
You.
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I love you.
By f o r s a k e n on May 28th 2009, late evening.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I love you. I love everything about you. I love how even when I'm mad at you I'm still only thinking about you. You're never out of my mind an dyou drive me crazy. You dominate my dreams, my thoughts, my fears, my heart. I am yours. Everything I am is for you. You make me who I am.
I love who I am in the moments in love with you. You don't realize how much you mean to me. You can't possibly understand what it is like to be away from you; being deprived of air would be much easier to endure than your absence. I can't think clearly without you. But when you're with me everything is so clear and I know where I'm going and who's coming with me.
You're my tomorrow now. There's no way in hell the sun could even be compared to you. Nothing could be compared to you.
You're my drug of choice, my personal happy pill that makes me delirious and crazy. I can't breath with you but at the same time I've never had this much air in my chest.
I love you.
I love who I am in the moments in love with you. You don't realize how much you mean to me. You can't possibly understand what it is like to be away from you; being deprived of air would be much easier to endure than your absence. I can't think clearly without you. But when you're with me everything is so clear and I know where I'm going and who's coming with me.
You're my tomorrow now. There's no way in hell the sun could even be compared to you. Nothing could be compared to you.
You're my drug of choice, my personal happy pill that makes me delirious and crazy. I can't breath with you but at the same time I've never had this much air in my chest.
I love you.
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You
By Ororon on May 29th 2009, the wee hours.on topic i love you, always have, always will
Well here we are...
In this bliss
I never realized I would come to care for you like this.
In my time of need you come and save me.
I never thought it would be this strong....
I never thought it would grow to this strength.
Now, I can't imagine the rest without you.
I have and forever always love you.
I love you more than anyone can think to love anyone.
In this bliss
I never realized I would come to care for you like this.
In my time of need you come and save me.
I never thought it would be this strong....
I never thought it would grow to this strength.
Now, I can't imagine the rest without you.
I have and forever always love you.
I love you more than anyone can think to love anyone.
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three nine nine
By phoennix on May 29th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
guess i always have loved u, before i even knew u
b4 i knew it was "wrong to do",
b4 i knew i knew...
i hope u know i still do love u, don't think i can not;
i hope u feel it when ur running stops;
i hope u feel it when ur sky drops
im sure i'll never cease loving u, nor because of u blues;
unsure what next to write or to do,
im sure i cannot not 4ever love u.
b4 i knew it was "wrong to do",
b4 i knew i knew...
i hope u know i still do love u, don't think i can not;
i hope u feel it when ur running stops;
i hope u feel it when ur sky drops
im sure i'll never cease loving u, nor because of u blues;
unsure what next to write or to do,
im sure i cannot not 4ever love u.
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notess
By Soliloquist on May 29th 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I love you always have and always will
My pleasure my momentah \
my thrill
My pain
My inescapable sorrow
My no tomorriw
My sharp two edged knife
My life
My writhing pain
As i restrain
from becoming nearly insanne
I love you always have and always will
My cheap pleasure my thri
My pleasure my momentah \
my thrill
My pain
My inescapable sorrow
My no tomorriw
My sharp two edged knife
My life
My writhing pain
As i restrain
from becoming nearly insanne
I love you always have and always will
My cheap pleasure my thri
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me and drew
By hotemochick4400 on May 29th 2009, late afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
Drew
I love you
and
always will
your my sunshine in the dark
my moon at night
and my teaddybear
that will hold on tight
you are the perfect one that knows when
i've been up all day day and night
thinking
and
dreaming of you
i cant keep my mind off you
its as if
we are ment to be together
as if you are a n other side of me that i dont want
to loose
thats the truth
i dont want to loose you
and i want to be with you forever
but most of all
i want you to
love me
the way i love you
I love you
and
always will
your my sunshine in the dark
my moon at night
and my teaddybear
that will hold on tight
you are the perfect one that knows when
i've been up all day day and night
thinking
and
dreaming of you
i cant keep my mind off you
its as if
we are ment to be together
as if you are a n other side of me that i dont want
to loose
thats the truth
i dont want to loose you
and i want to be with you forever
but most of all
i want you to
love me
the way i love you
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I love ihim forever
By brokenxx1 on May 29th 2009, late evening.on topic i love you, always have, always will
i love my ex still even though i broke up with him becaus ethe relationship was boring so i sent him an email saying that i loved him after the hole bereack up thing.. plus i love my daddy he has gone to afgaistan tho which is really sad which makes me wanna cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i m so sad and depressed but for the ppl i love are always funny , loveing and caring to me execpt my ex. i dont know if he knows that i love him ... ive never told a boy that before in my life other than my dad. but anyway i love him and its sad that he dosent know that..... i love him so much , not as in the obseesed kind if way just like the first love youve had probobly... lol. j+j jacob and juli just so you guys no i will always love him no matter what.......
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My FiRsT & OnLy LoVe....
By Miss. Marisa on May 30th 2009, late evening.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I have never felt this way before,
i see him & my butterflys awaken
i realize he's too busy for me at times
yet im willing to wait
the only guy iv actually cared about
the only one ive cried for
the one i was willing to bring home to present to my parents....
the one that left me
he didn't mean to hurt me
but i gess he had to let me go
the one that to this day
i still think about
way to much
the one that i want back in my life
the one that is no longer mine
the one
the only
the first
& hopefully the last
that i will ever have to love....
i see him & my butterflys awaken
i realize he's too busy for me at times
yet im willing to wait
the only guy iv actually cared about
the only one ive cried for
the one i was willing to bring home to present to my parents....
the one that left me
he didn't mean to hurt me
but i gess he had to let me go
the one that to this day
i still think about
way to much
the one that i want back in my life
the one that is no longer mine
the one
the only
the first
& hopefully the last
that i will ever have to love....
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short freewrite for chompy
By Jaims Beowulf on May 31st 2009, the wee hours.on topic i love you, always have, always will
Gosh i can't think o f a damn thing to say to you. you rock. i love you. i really love you. i want to kiss oy again. you have cute teeth. you make me laugh., you make my belly do that frisbee thing like the ride. can i be your superman. I enjoyed superman it was fun. with my craziy screaming and you're like "shut up" so i keep going. i held your hand. i liked that. no bonecrushing haha., i i love bonecrushing. but it hurts. ouch. like dang ouch. no holding your hand douring birth. wow we'll have kids. jaims and eliza. tho belle defaire is pretty too. it'd give a good story about this to our kids. I want to kiss ou again., we weren't making out. i just kissed you for a short amount of time. i'm not lusting. i love you. i'm ready to marry you. like now. If i could. i wnder if she wone the lottery we'll live in kingwood. i like kiongwood. but you weren't there. hey. thanks for the hootie songs! i like piano. you should listen to piano with me. i want to play songs withyou. let's dance.
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Other Side
By sky black on May 31st 2009, evening time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
Its been too long now,
Back and forth,
Like a favourite film,
Forgotten somewhere,
And found again,
Watching it over and over,
Rewind and play....
I've always loved you,
More than I've been willing to admit,
And maybe you do influence my life,
Again, more than I like to admit.
But now with you halfway across the world,
Gone for 6months,
How am I supposed to tell you how I feel,
Trust me to figure it out whilst you were gone.
I love seeing that its you whose ringing,
And the awkward phonecalls we have,
As if we're strangers talking,
When really, we're anything but.
But you belong to her...
At least til September!
You could never commit to her,
Sneaking kisses with me,
The odd cuddle,
Even wishing she were me.
How do I know you love me though?
You declare your love down the phone from Aussie,
Some may call it romantic,
I call it chance...
Trust you to figure out you love me,
Whilst on the other side of the world,
Travelling and seeing the sites,
With her....
Back and forth,
Like a favourite film,
Forgotten somewhere,
And found again,
Watching it over and over,
Rewind and play....
I've always loved you,
More than I've been willing to admit,
And maybe you do influence my life,
Again, more than I like to admit.
But now with you halfway across the world,
Gone for 6months,
How am I supposed to tell you how I feel,
Trust me to figure it out whilst you were gone.
I love seeing that its you whose ringing,
And the awkward phonecalls we have,
As if we're strangers talking,
When really, we're anything but.
But you belong to her...
At least til September!
You could never commit to her,
Sneaking kisses with me,
The odd cuddle,
Even wishing she were me.
How do I know you love me though?
You declare your love down the phone from Aussie,
Some may call it romantic,
I call it chance...
Trust you to figure out you love me,
Whilst on the other side of the world,
Travelling and seeing the sites,
With her....
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I love you, always have, always will
By LoveBug13 on June 1st 2009, lunch time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I walk alone.
You walk with her.
I stay back as you go ahead.
Watching as you hold her hand.
I have always loved you.
Why can't you see it?
I guess you only see her.
She's your world.
And I am just a lowly pup.
A love sick lowly pup.
For I love you.
I have always loved you from the moment I met you.
This feeling wont leave.
It only grows stronger.
Growing like a rose.
From a small bud crash to full blooming love.
I watch as you hide yourself from her.
Yet give her everything unknowingly.
I watch as I do the same.
Knowing you wont see just as she doesn't.
For I love you, always have, and always will.
You walk with her.
I stay back as you go ahead.
Watching as you hold her hand.
I have always loved you.
Why can't you see it?
I guess you only see her.
She's your world.
And I am just a lowly pup.
A love sick lowly pup.
For I love you.
I have always loved you from the moment I met you.
This feeling wont leave.
It only grows stronger.
Growing like a rose.
From a small bud crash to full blooming love.
I watch as you hide yourself from her.
Yet give her everything unknowingly.
I watch as I do the same.
Knowing you wont see just as she doesn't.
For I love you, always have, and always will.
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Love
By dorithecollie on June 1st 2009, mid-afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I love you.
Your blue eyes sparkle in the light blue sky.
your blond wispy hair flys through the wind,
you look in my eyes and see through my brain.
you touch my arm with your soft hand.
then pull my closer and gently but firmly kiss me.
you pull away and smile, then alittle more firmly kiss me again.
Every time i feel the same rush of energy
I feel love.....
Your blue eyes sparkle in the light blue sky.
your blond wispy hair flys through the wind,
you look in my eyes and see through my brain.
you touch my arm with your soft hand.
then pull my closer and gently but firmly kiss me.
you pull away and smile, then alittle more firmly kiss me again.
Every time i feel the same rush of energy
I feel love.....
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Say Goodbye
By BloodWhiteOleander on June 3rd 2009, lunch time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I love your smell,
always have always will.
I love your eyes,
they way they sparkle in the moonlight.
I love your voice,
it's my favorite lulabuy.
I will always love you.
Even if I have to say goodbye.
always have always will.
I love your eyes,
they way they sparkle in the moonlight.
I love your voice,
it's my favorite lulabuy.
I will always love you.
Even if I have to say goodbye.
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Love you alwayz.
By intimate kisses on June 4th 2009, the wee hours.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I love you boy, i alwayz will.
For the first time i saw you,
i never thought i'll love you.
Instead, i even hated you.
But when time passes by,
I remember the time,
When i cried, infront of you,
you told me that i should just relax
and dont give myself stress
Thats the day i had my eyes on you,
That day i knew i had feelings for you,
That day i knew it was you.
Till now, its been months,
I know for sure, that i'm in love with you.
Even though obstacles may occur,
We'll go through it together,
we went through thick and thin,
just to be together, i want to say,
I love you, and i always will, J.
For the first time i saw you,
i never thought i'll love you.
Instead, i even hated you.
But when time passes by,
I remember the time,
When i cried, infront of you,
you told me that i should just relax
and dont give myself stress
Thats the day i had my eyes on you,
That day i knew i had feelings for you,
That day i knew it was you.
Till now, its been months,
I know for sure, that i'm in love with you.
Even though obstacles may occur,
We'll go through it together,
we went through thick and thin,
just to be together, i want to say,
I love you, and i always will, J.
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almost
By Katie Girl on June 6th 2009, terribly early in the morning.on topic i love you, always have, always will
the one i love doesn't know i love him
i've never been able to tell him
not because of guys im dating
or girls he dating
but because i dont want rejection.
somehow i feel that if i tell him, he will laugh at me.
or worse...pity me.
we've been bestfriends for what seems like forever
only he knows how i truely am.
he knows stuff my parents dont know
stuff that my ex boyfriends have never known
and we can talk to eachother.
he comes to me for advice and i go to him
he tells me everything and i tell him almost everything
everything but the fact that i love him to distraction
i love it when he teases me and when he hugs me when im cold
i love the way he does his hair and the way he smells and...
i love almost everything about him
the only thing i dont love about him is the fact the he doenst love me.
i've never been able to tell him
not because of guys im dating
or girls he dating
but because i dont want rejection.
somehow i feel that if i tell him, he will laugh at me.
or worse...pity me.
we've been bestfriends for what seems like forever
only he knows how i truely am.
he knows stuff my parents dont know
stuff that my ex boyfriends have never known
and we can talk to eachother.
he comes to me for advice and i go to him
he tells me everything and i tell him almost everything
everything but the fact that i love him to distraction
i love it when he teases me and when he hugs me when im cold
i love the way he does his hair and the way he smells and...
i love almost everything about him
the only thing i dont love about him is the fact the he doenst love me.
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myslfe
By Mrs.Moody on June 7th 2009, late afternoon.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I used to love you so much.like crazy.but now everything is changing.I don't know why.its hard to explain.I know you love me but you are insane.I'm not good for you either.but you are more worse.I act like a a bitch all the time because there is nobody that care about.everything is insane .I don't want to overdose again but i know i am better than that.I don't live my life for you anymore.for my self for my happiness.you are out of the line.I do hate you but sometime i love you. you are not fair.you think you are always right.I'm so sick about all the shit.sometime i wish i could forget about my status.I just want to be a child cuz i don;t have to worry about anything. no love no hate no bills.just eat,drink,play and sleep.I am waiting to get a better life but without you.cuz i don't think we will be happy if we are together.just selfish and be yourself.I'm going to be myself too.
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Thinking of You
By XxSuicidal-RomancexX on June 9th 2009, lunch time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
Your voice like velvet
Your kiss like candy
I can't get enough of you
There were times when I thought we were breaking
Falling apart at the seams
My heart it was aching
You are so perfect in my dreams
There were times when I thought it could last forever
I loved your every move
but you wanted to see me, never
Your voice was the only thing that would soothe
My aching soul
it reaches for you
crying out for all to see
For a love that used to be true
How many times did you say those words?
How many times did you make me believe them?
These are the questions I ask
Will you ever repeat them?
I love you now
I love you never
like a rose
my heart will wither
Your kiss like candy
I can't get enough of you
There were times when I thought we were breaking
Falling apart at the seams
My heart it was aching
You are so perfect in my dreams
There were times when I thought it could last forever
I loved your every move
but you wanted to see me, never
Your voice was the only thing that would soothe
My aching soul
it reaches for you
crying out for all to see
For a love that used to be true
How many times did you say those words?
How many times did you make me believe them?
These are the questions I ask
Will you ever repeat them?
I love you now
I love you never
like a rose
my heart will wither
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love
By Vane-dahh on June 9th 2009, evening time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
so i see you and turn around
then i turn back but your starring at the ground
do you see me sometimes i wonder
see i dont understand wyh i cant keep my eyes off of you and i dont understand if this love true
i love you, always have, always will
but nothing seems to be real.
then i turn back but your starring at the ground
do you see me sometimes i wonder
see i dont understand wyh i cant keep my eyes off of you and i dont understand if this love true
i love you, always have, always will
but nothing seems to be real.
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Before and Eternity
By aimiemai on June 13th 2009, lunch time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
I loved you before you were here
You were the one I waited for
To take your prize - my heart
It belongs to you
It has from the day it started
To beat your name
Again again again
I didn't know that it was yours
Until you came to me
Said my name
Saw my soul
Took me into
Your very being
Nurtured me and loved me
With all your life
Gave to me your love
Unconditionally
Without reserve
And now I know
Here you will remain
Deep inside my very being
And I in yours
For all eternity
You were the one I waited for
To take your prize - my heart
It belongs to you
It has from the day it started
To beat your name
Again again again
I didn't know that it was yours
Until you came to me
Said my name
Saw my soul
Took me into
Your very being
Nurtured me and loved me
With all your life
Gave to me your love
Unconditionally
Without reserve
And now I know
Here you will remain
Deep inside my very being
And I in yours
For all eternity
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The first will never go away
By AnAverageGirl on June 16th 2009, evening time.on topic i love you, always have, always will
You were my first,
My everything,
We've parted ways all for the better,
But just so you know:
You'll always have a place in my heart,
A place that no one else can take,
A place that's all you're own.
I understand it didn't work out,
But I'll never forget everything we had.
I'm not mad, I couldn't be,
I get that you were not for me,
But all the things that we have said,
Don't go away because we've parted.
You'll always hold a piece of me,
You'll never go away.
I hope you know you've changed my life,
I'll never stop loving you.
My everything,
We've parted ways all for the better,
But just so you know:
You'll always have a place in my heart,
A place that no one else can take,
A place that's all you're own.
I understand it didn't work out,
But I'll never forget everything we had.
I'm not mad, I couldn't be,
I get that you were not for me,
But all the things that we have said,
Don't go away because we've parted.
You'll always hold a piece of me,
You'll never go away.
I hope you know you've changed my life,
I'll never stop loving you.
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