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Inspired anyone?

Okay, I am going to give you a couple words, and I want them to inspire you. You don't need to put them in your writing, just let ideas come from the words I put. Whatever they make you think of, write it down. Oh, and try to use all of them, but not necessarily the words themselves. You can, though, if that makes it easier. Alright, have fun!

1. Mask/Disguise
2. Shadows
3. Chase
4. Scream
5. Falling

    By BeMyValentine on May 26th 2009, mid-afternoon.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    The mask was tightening against my skin, and I couldn't breathe. I wanted desperately to take it off, but I could hear their footsteps already. They would be here any minute.
    Without caring where I was going, I started to run. A tree branch whipped at my face, and I could feel the warmth of blood on my chin.
    Suddenly, a horse reared in front of me. I froze in my tracks. It was a Shadow!
    I turned around, and there were eight more. That made a total of nine. Oh great. This wouldn't be easy. I ran, but I knew how fast those horses could go. They would out-run me without a problem.
    I saw the cliff, and I ran faster. If I could just make it there, I might be able to-
    One of the Shadows grabbed at me, but I pulled away before he could touch me.
    I jumped off of the cliff, plummeting down to the ocean below. I could hear them scream as I fell, but it didn't matter. I was safe for now.
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    By japscot on May 26th 2009, late afternoon.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    mask is what i wear
    whenever i'm with people that don't love me
    mask is what i wear
    even when i'm with people who love me
    mask keeps me safe
    disguise lets me breathe

    shadows cross the road
    there are two, but i am one
    where are you

    chase, chase me
    don't give up
    i'm hard to find
    i will hide
    chase me anyway
    maybe i'll reward you

    scream, scream till you can feel
    scream instead of cut
    scream instead of hurt
    scream instead of starve
    scream instead of love

    falling cannot be falling
    cannot be falling out of love
    cuz i have never loved
    falling is glorious
    falling is dangerous
    falling is my nature
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    The Freedom of Truth

    By Choirboy222 on May 27th 2009, evening time.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Why can I not see
    The screaming mask
    Makes a silent sound
    Of torture and restraint

    I must not chase after these
    the false highs of the world
    that bring shadows of doubt
    to the spirit of truth

    It is a game, the fire bids
    it is so becoming, but it is not
    for falling for her tricks
    will burn the flesh

    Let truth be a guide,
    though it hurts at first
    The light of Truth
    will rip away the dark mask
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    unvailing mask

    By softspokeheartbreak on May 28th 2009, mid-morning.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    everyone hides under their own disguise and mask
    hardly anyone can escape their mask when they subject themselves to being helpless to it.
    when you feel like screaming and falling down a dark holes as the shadows of your past are chasing you
    thats me
    ill be watching you
    we may be done but "we" are not forgotten
    at least not in my eyes
    i lifted my mask up now what about you?
    what will you do?
    be free of your mask, realize you really and truly love me?
    or just be who your not trying to hide in the shadows until your greates fear chases you into that dark whole that you fear the most
    the dark whole you cant get out of
    but i would rescue you
    if only you would let me
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    Fake

    By Mystery on May 28th 2009, lunch time.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Don't yall see this is fake.
    I am fake. This happiness its not true.
    I wear this clown face to make you smile.
    I am not happy. I hurt like if I was living in hell.
    No one to catch me when I'm falling into this pit of fire.
    Yall believe me to be this happy go lucky girl that has nothing wrong with her life.
    Sorry people but thats wrong, I fight everyday to keep living.
    I smile telling you its going to be alright cause for you it will be.
    For me its still uncertain on how long i will live.
    I am an actress that has very few friends that know everything.
    Sorry for them cause they know the true me.
    They see the pain I go through.
    For everyone else this smile is for you cause my life is perfect.
    My family is perfect everyone is happy.
    No abuse or so yall think.
    My life is fake and I can't show you the true life cause yall wouldn't believe Kay doesn't have a life thats okay.
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    I love

    By valjohnjennings on May 28th 2009, lunch time.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    I do not mask. I hate disquise.
    I want to be seen through purer eyes.
    I love to see a simple truth.
    I love the innocence of a new birth.
    I love to ponder and to pray.
    I love the sunrise of the day.
    I love the sunset, come what may.
    I will love again tomorrow.
    Anyway!
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    bored..

    By none the less. on May 28th 2009, late evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    i chase away my fears
    into the shadows
    but this only causes more tears.
    i wish you hadnt tore me away
    from everything i love
    i wish i'd somehow learned to pray.
    i'm so afraid of being alone
    why wont you pick up the damn phone?
    i feel like i'm falling
    i'm screaming for help
    cant you hear me calling?
    i put on a mask
    of a smile and laugh
    that are completely and utterly
    fake.
    hide my sadness
    and just let my heart
    break.
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    scene one

    By HayleyMai on May 28th 2009, late evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    AUDIO/ thoughts

    "Take that fucking mask off
    your hideaus face,
    Listen to what i say !
    Bitch . . .
    NO, don't you dare fucking walk away from me
    DON"T YOU FUCKING DARE !
    You little shit !
    FUCK ! FUCK YOU ! don't walk away from me
    don't you fucking walk away"
    ***
    don't leave me here
    disguising my true self
    i dont want to fall
    you don't hear me when i scream
    not even if i chase you
    follow you
    you just walk away
    you just WALK THE FUCK AWAY
    YOU FUCKING ABANDON ME
    ***
    "GET THE FUCK BACK HERE
    I"M THE MAN IN THIS RELATIONSHIP
    I MAKE THE MONEY
    you little whore don't do anything!
    sit down slut,
    DO AS I SAY
    good. . ."
    ***
    don't leave me powerless
    don't leave me in the shadows
    this angers just a disguise
    ***
    "BITCH
    Now...
    thatsssssssss right
    The fucking whore listens
    now,"
    ***
    help me, i've become a monster


    VISUAL \ situational



    The door opens
    a women, small and petite walks into a little house
    the floors are white and tiled
    her shoes make clicking sounds
    hes sitting on a small wooden chair
    between the stairs and the entrace to the kitchen
    he looks strained
    he says something firmly
    the womans face is shocked
    she touchs the mask on her fask
    it's a masquerade mask, small and white
    he forehead wrinkles the nest time he speaks
    she touches her lips
    and steps foreward
    heading to the stairs
    he whispers something nastily,and shakes his head slightly
    like he can't believe her
    he yells, enough to strain his throat
    the woman is on the stairs now
    the woman blinks twice and pulls her chin in
    as he throws the chair violently
    and goes to the stairs
    he grabs her shoulder
    tightly, you can see by the grip of his hand
    and pulls the mask off her face
    he starts whispering angrily
    close to her face
    then slowly back away
    his jaw clenched
    she runs up the stairs as soon as he lets go
    he screams, turning his face red
    and the viens in his neck and forehead pulse
    he lifts his hand into a tight fist while grabing the railing with the other
    his walks up the stairs
    she up on the second floor
    theres gray carpet there
    dingey, unwashed looking
    he yells again after moving one step
    as he does this he hits is chest with is index finger
    twice, signaling me, me !
    it's with quite force
    then he points at her, he then runs up stairs
    grabs her by the wrist and pulls her to the bedroom
    she looks limp and defenseless
    he pushes her
    onto the bed
    she orients herself and sits up striaight
    looking him in the eyes
    maliously
    spitefully
    he walks over to his desk right across from the bed
    a few feet away
    she just stares angrily
    he looks into his mirror
    and starts to undo his tie
    is says a short word, mockingly
    then turn as he removes his tie
    lifting off his head
    he nods saying a word long and sexually
    unbuttons the first button of his shirt
    then slowly unbuttons the second
    he says something arrogantly
    while still walking toward the bed
    ***

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    I just don't get it.

    By f o r s a k e n on May 28th 2009, late evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    The smile on my face is a facade I made for you, my love. I showed you once what I looked like really, I allowed you into the depths of my pain and my heart, and I saw the disgust and hatred in your face. I thought I might die when I saw the rejection within your eyes, so I lied and told you not to worry. That it was just a phase and I would get better.
    I'm sorry, love. I really am. I was scared you'd leave me and I would be left to my thoughts of self-hatred. I'm terrified of life without you. I wonder if you would laugh if I told you that I want you to protect me from myself, I want you to change me. I want you to be with me forever just so I can morph into the person I want to be, and I want to be with you.
    God, why can't you just accept me. You know I love you so. I hope you love me the same way. I don't get why I feel like I have to wear this mask forever. I just don't want you to see me and run, and I don't think I'd be very succesful in a chase scene. I'm falling, love. I need you as my support.
    WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME WHEN I NEEDED YOU MOST?
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    By Mango Memories on May 29th 2009, mid-morning.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    I watch my favourite masked disguise,
    wake, smile and come alive.
    See it chase away the look,
    the one that tells fiction like a book.
    Scream, i smile.
    Fall, i stand
    i guess that whats it is,
    when you walk the walk.
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    falling

    By lil emo girl on June 4th 2009, early morning.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    falling from the ceiling down to the ground
    falling while inm screaming but no one hears a sound
    falling farther then i ever thought posible
    falling to the pits full of people that are hostile
    no one is there to cath me and no one is there to care
    so im free falling from way up there dropping to down there
    my arms are weak against the air and they flail behind me
    like a rubber doll i drop as the ground nears me i cant help but think
    what brought me to this falling...
    falling from my self and my safety
    into the pits of terror as i fall
    dropping and going faster as i fall
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    Disguising.

    By DarkAngel2013 on June 8th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    I disguise the way I feel in order to make their days better. In order to keep everything in place. I'm tired of hiding, of holding back half of myself to keep everything in its perfect order. I'm tired of having myself half hidden in the shadows in order to save them. Why can I not just be me? WHY?! I cannot chase my dreams because I have to let things be the way they are perfectly. My dreams do not work out perfectly. There fore they are wound up and thrown away. I want to scream. Scream at the top of my lungs because of this. Scream because it's nobodys business. I'm falling out of life. I'm letting my life slip out of my hands. Every second I wait, i lose it more. and it's time im done with it. I've lost it to the point I cannot retrieve it. It's gone, not just for today but forever. I can never get it back. It's no longer mine. I may as very well be dead. Then I will be numb and not just another doll inside of the perfect doll house, inside of the perfect world, inside of the perfect image. Inside of your psychotic perfect narrow minds.
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    By MicroFatCat on June 8th 2009, lunch time.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Love wears the jewelled mask
    Cloaked up this masquerade
    Doing the two-step down the promenade
    Dancing down to government
    To tell them that Love should rule
    as it knows what’s good for us
    Phantom thoughts fade
    They weren’t entirely there
    In that precious pursuit
    Love calls
    Echo back and surrender
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    Chase

    By CHERRYlips527 on June 8th 2009, early evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Your hands running down my arm,
    and our body pressing behind me.
    I love when you chase me.

    Your stupid jokes,
    and your obscure stories to impress me.
    I love when you chase me.

    Your beautiful smiles,
    and your gentle eyes.
    I love when you chase me.

    Your pulling on my arm,
    against you for a kiss.
    I love when you have me.
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    Walking through shadows

    By MOVinGinShADowS on June 11st 2009, late afternoon.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Walking through the shadows
    Natures voice intoxicating
    Man dosnt live here so please be quite.

    The breeze under feet directing my path
    Never slowing, Never stopping
    Never moving too fast.

    As the darkness consumes
    Leaving a dim orange glow
    Problems become memorys.

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    mindfarts

    By pineapple-eyes on June 16th 2009, late afternoon.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    Yes I wear a mask every day most of the day until I drink the drink and then the primevil animal of self escapes from this pet trap of society and runs free without question. We are all caged within the system. System bloody system. Inside I scream but am rarely ever heard, I chose not to listen to my own head, I have had to tell those voices to shut the fuck up before she spoke. I have searched the shadows within myself to try and find the I but who cares anyway because I am through with that quality. I don't beleive you, you have not worked hard enough, or cried hard enough or chased those demons from your sleep. This is not your disguise this is my disguise and I am I. Be yourself always; be yourself all ways.
    i think not.
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    Falling.

    By young lyrical on June 18th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    I fall,
    willingly,
    into your eyes
    these teardrops of despair,
    and I'm falling through
    and i'm going fast,
    but i can feel every tear these eyes have shed
    and i want you to know that,
    from here on out,
    I'll be there to catch them all
    you won't have to do anything but open your eyes
    and i'll handle the rest
    and as i fall,
    i realize that this is exactly where I want to be...
    Falling into your heart.
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    This was a terrible little write.

    By Lila Love on July 3rd 2009, early evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    I am falling.. deeper and deeper in to a new reality.
    I am screaming.. louder and louder for I didn't want to go.
    I am putting up a front, disguising myself from you.
    I am scared of shadows, and feel chased.. alll the time.


    I am scared of losing what I have, I am scared of what I am receiving. I am scared of what I had.. What else is there to do, but run?
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    Haunting Disguised Shadows

    By ILuvToSing on July 10th 2009, the wee hours.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    This is easy:

    I always feels as if everyone's wearing a dusguise. Like they will nice and innocent aroun everyone except you. Then you walk away, and it feals as if they are chasing you. It's as if everywhere you turn the shadows are chasing. It makes want to scream. It makes you want to scream LOUD. And just run, and run, and run. But, all you do is run straight of the edge of a cliff, and fall into a deep black hole. With more shadows, that will haunt you forever, and that you can NEVER escape.
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    Umm.... ?

    By river-of-tears on November 6th 2009, early evening.
    on topic Inspired anyone?
    The shadows crept. Chasing my reality. I burned in the fire. Screaming. Willing the shadows to set me free. But never would they touch the scortching red light of the flame. I closed my eyes, and ran. Ran away, far into myself. Toward a cool water lake. Yet still could I feel the flame. and run as I may, my voice was rough from my scream. Though I know I am dreaming this horror. I know when I awake, I will fall. As my bridge has burnt from the fire. No more do I have a platform on which to stand.
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