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The Boy Who Never Knew
By BeMyValentine on May 26th 2009, terribly early in the morning.on topic My feelings for you
My heart beats harder when I see him. I can't breathe. I can't stop looking over at him. Does he see me? Does he even care? No, he doesn't. I'm just a random girl on the street. Why would he like me. But, wait. He looks over at me, from a distance. How did he know I was here? Was he looking for me? He waves, and I wave back. He's smiling, and my heart stops beating altogether.
"Hey, how are you," he asks.
I forget how to breathe. How am I? Well, I am definitely not okay. That's for sure. But, with a sudden feel of confidence, I smile and say, "I am great. How about you?"
"Hey, how are you," he asks.
I forget how to breathe. How am I? Well, I am definitely not okay. That's for sure. But, with a sudden feel of confidence, I smile and say, "I am great. How about you?"
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My husband
By daviskimberly on May 26th 2009, mid-morning.on topic My feelings for you
i love your smile
Overflowing affection into one's heart
Loveing pools of warmth
Unbias strength of will and heart wins my soul
Your love and friendship is will my heart
Even after you depart
A magic glow of perfection for me, that is he, my dream
Beautiful father of undying support
Strength of character from far appart
He is my perfect man
Overflowing affection into one's heart
Loveing pools of warmth
Unbias strength of will and heart wins my soul
Your love and friendship is will my heart
Even after you depart
A magic glow of perfection for me, that is he, my dream
Beautiful father of undying support
Strength of character from far appart
He is my perfect man
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you
By japscot on May 26th 2009, late afternoon.on topic My feelings for you
why do i love you
let me count the ways
you numb my pain
merely with a smile
you look forward
you look forward to the future
you look forward to reward
you look forward to the mission
you look forward to the race
you look forward to the prize
you look past
you look past my faults
you look past my flaws, and there are many
you look past a mistake
you look past a strain
you look past an offense
you look past a scar
you look past a fork in the road
you touch me
you touch me with your eyes
you touch me with your soul
you touch me unconditionally
you touch me regardless
you touch me in spite of
you touch me even though
you touch me
you laugh
you laugh in the face of enemies
you laugh at a blunder
you laugh when you fall
you laugh when they despise you
you laugh when pain is heavy
you laugh and brush it off
you laugh for me to hear
you're here
you're here when i leave
you're there where i am
you take me to a home
you talk to me i'm deaf
you touch me i am numb
you see me i am blind
you love me i'll never be enough for you
let me count the ways
you numb my pain
merely with a smile
you look forward
you look forward to the future
you look forward to reward
you look forward to the mission
you look forward to the race
you look forward to the prize
you look past
you look past my faults
you look past my flaws, and there are many
you look past a mistake
you look past a strain
you look past an offense
you look past a scar
you look past a fork in the road
you touch me
you touch me with your eyes
you touch me with your soul
you touch me unconditionally
you touch me regardless
you touch me in spite of
you touch me even though
you touch me
you laugh
you laugh in the face of enemies
you laugh at a blunder
you laugh when you fall
you laugh when they despise you
you laugh when pain is heavy
you laugh and brush it off
you laugh for me to hear
you're here
you're here when i leave
you're there where i am
you take me to a home
you talk to me i'm deaf
you touch me i am numb
you see me i am blind
you love me i'll never be enough for you
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At least you're happy
By neko951 on May 27th 2009, the wee hours.on topic My feelings for you
I love you
But you're with another
Every time you both are going to seperate
I fix you back up again
I torture myself
by just seeing you two
The smiles
the looks
But you are at least happy
I want you to be happy
I can't be the one to give you happiness
Seeing you smile next to me is enough
I feel fortunate in seeing you
Happy with another
I'm ok
You don't realize
How i torture myself
But it's ok
But you're with another
Every time you both are going to seperate
I fix you back up again
I torture myself
by just seeing you two
The smiles
the looks
But you are at least happy
I want you to be happy
I can't be the one to give you happiness
Seeing you smile next to me is enough
I feel fortunate in seeing you
Happy with another
I'm ok
You don't realize
How i torture myself
But it's ok
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By aien aristeuein on May 27th 2009, the wee hours.
on topic My feelings for you
on topic My feelings for you
Why do you have feelings for me, and what person?
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mistakes mess with you and your heart
By crosmyhearthope2die on May 27th 2009, late afternoon.on topic My feelings for you
I see you in the halls at school
wishing the goodbye never came
but sadly it did
and all i have to do is wait
i wait for you to say your sorry
i wait for you to say it was a mistake
i wait for you to take me back
but when i wait
i think about the day you said bye
and i think about the reasoning
and i think that its shouldnt be you
it should be me to take you back
its my fault its over
its my fault you said goodbye
i never did what you thought
i still love you
i always will
i want you back
but you never will
wishing the goodbye never came
but sadly it did
and all i have to do is wait
i wait for you to say your sorry
i wait for you to say it was a mistake
i wait for you to take me back
but when i wait
i think about the day you said bye
and i think about the reasoning
and i think that its shouldnt be you
it should be me to take you back
its my fault its over
its my fault you said goodbye
i never did what you thought
i still love you
i always will
i want you back
but you never will
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Association
By Love Is Heartless on May 27th 2009, late afternoon.on topic My feelings for you
As I lay here on the floor,
I look out the window at the bright blue sky,
And I think of you.
Everytime my phone vibrates,
I can only hope that it is you.
Everytime someones says your name,
I smile wide and think.
When I see you,
The first thought I have,
Is one of love.
When I lay in bed at night,
And I hear our song,
I wish more than anything,
That you could be there with me,
Holding me,
Kissing me,
Being with me.
When I talk to you,
It is the best moment of my day.
I think that possibly,
Just maybe,
I love you.
I look out the window at the bright blue sky,
And I think of you.
Everytime my phone vibrates,
I can only hope that it is you.
Everytime someones says your name,
I smile wide and think.
When I see you,
The first thought I have,
Is one of love.
When I lay in bed at night,
And I hear our song,
I wish more than anything,
That you could be there with me,
Holding me,
Kissing me,
Being with me.
When I talk to you,
It is the best moment of my day.
I think that possibly,
Just maybe,
I love you.
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for you
By pinkreaper on May 27th 2009, late at night.on topic My feelings for you
my body goes numb when you touch my skin, one glance makes my heart feel like its exploded within
if each kiss for you feels as it does for me, there should be no doubting eternity
just seeing you makes me feel like a mess, all these butterflies that i can never put to rest
my thoughts never sleep, always thinking of you, consumed of the fact that you love me too
i can never be perfect and follow in your lead
i can just look at you and know you're all that i need
i know that my heart is not all that it should be, but i didn't know i had one until you brought love out of me
i have so much left to say, but words alone aren't enough to portray
all i have left to tell you is this
i love you and i'm glad that you exist
if each kiss for you feels as it does for me, there should be no doubting eternity
just seeing you makes me feel like a mess, all these butterflies that i can never put to rest
my thoughts never sleep, always thinking of you, consumed of the fact that you love me too
i can never be perfect and follow in your lead
i can just look at you and know you're all that i need
i know that my heart is not all that it should be, but i didn't know i had one until you brought love out of me
i have so much left to say, but words alone aren't enough to portray
all i have left to tell you is this
i love you and i'm glad that you exist
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Haunted
By Momma Goose on June 1st 2009, late at night.on topic My feelings for you
I read the words on the computer screen.
They all want to know who you are
and what you are doing in my heart.
Why I speak your name so gently in my sleep.
And by your name's meantion i begin to weep.
You face haunts my once blessed dreams.
Ripping my heart apart at it's seams.
Though we walked away so long ago.
Your's it the only love I'll ever know.
Just so you know, I don't mean to,
but I love you still.
They all want to know who you are
and what you are doing in my heart.
Why I speak your name so gently in my sleep.
And by your name's meantion i begin to weep.
You face haunts my once blessed dreams.
Ripping my heart apart at it's seams.
Though we walked away so long ago.
Your's it the only love I'll ever know.
Just so you know, I don't mean to,
but I love you still.
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regret
By RoisinJ on June 2nd 2009, early morning.on topic My feelings for you
I have loved you from the time I first saw you
but I never knew what you would think if I told you
or what you'd say.
Would you love me or hate me?
Would you ignore me or talk to me even more than you did before I told you.
I don't know what would have happened if I told you.
I want to tell you, but I'm afraid, nervous, scared.
I don't know what to think.
All I know is that I love you.
I haven't seen you in a while and I don't know if I will ever see you again, but I wish I would have told you when I had the chance.
but I never knew what you would think if I told you
or what you'd say.
Would you love me or hate me?
Would you ignore me or talk to me even more than you did before I told you.
I don't know what would have happened if I told you.
I want to tell you, but I'm afraid, nervous, scared.
I don't know what to think.
All I know is that I love you.
I haven't seen you in a while and I don't know if I will ever see you again, but I wish I would have told you when I had the chance.
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Love
By Autophobia on June 8th 2009, late afternoon.on topic My feelings for you
I love you more than words can express. I don't no why I do I just do. I was born this way. Your so amazing. Your special too me because you are and were my first girl crush. But it developed into something more. We got closer but you never knew the way i felt, i told you that i like you and you just acted like i knew what the answer was. I still love you and you will never know that because you will foreget about me but you will always be in my hearte forever.
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Adel
By Spek-Tha-Truth on June 9th 2009, evening time.on topic My feelings for you
Adel........my feelings for you are real. i liked you since the 4th grade.a dn we are in 8th grade now. when i first met you i always thought that me and you would make the cutest couple. nand ever since we broke up the last week, i couldn't sttop thinking about you. you have the most beautiful smile and the worlds amazing eyes. hopefully you can feel the same way but i can understand if you don't. and i just want to let you know that my world is nothing without you in my life. so if you ever watnto get together just call me. the one thing i like about you the most is that you are the only person thtat i can really talk to when im up or down.
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Not Knowing
By shatterednNosense on July 2nd 2009, lunch time.on topic My feelings for you
I love you deeply. You're all i ever think about, dream about, and talk about. i begin to wonder am i in love? Or am I in love with love? You use to brighten my day in every single way, make me feel as though i could just fly away, but all those feelings began to fade. You stopped calling, even texting, rarely did you want to hang out. Still all i could think about was you. Those soft kisses, those beautiful eyes, and lovely smile. I miss being able to hear your voice. Escpically when you'd say I love you. Their was just something so comforting about those words. You were always their for me. I knew i could tell you anything. I loved how i could be myself around you. Were still together and im suprised. Being that we havent talked in two weeks. Just know if you brake my trust never again will i let you in. You of all people know im not a trusting individual. You remember how hard you had to fight for my trust. Dont ruin it now. Please just a call to say i love you, to let me know everythings alright. I don't want to lose you. I never thought i'd be the "clingy" girl that needs you or i would never be complete, but that all changed. Now the hardest part is not knowing if were falling apart.
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By CourtJester on July 3rd 2009, late at night.
on topic My feelings for you
on topic My feelings for you
I sit and wait, reading through the freewrites. I would sit here and wait for ever if I could. I wait for your name to appear. When it does, omg the feelings that you stir are so overwhelming. The butterflies, and the racing heart. It is easy to see once I feel in love with your words, I had fallen in love with you. My thoughts are filled with you and the hope that I will speak to you soon. You make me want to be a better person, the person I should have been anyway. I want to take chances that I was too afraid to take before. I want to start over like my past has never happened. I want my memories filled with your smile, and laughs. I want my life to be filled with you, and all that you bring to me. You are an amazing person and I can't help being in love with you.
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The hole you left in me
By krystal111 on July 8th 2009, lunch time.on topic My feelings for you
The hole in my chest is deep, deeper than eyes can see
I hold you responsible for the pain that eats at me
You dug this hole, scraping blood and muscle away
The day you walked away
Daddy you were my everything, my heart and pride, the very essence of my soul.
You took me on my first rollercoaster and taught me how to fish
You held me close when I scraped my knees, telling me everything would be ok
Before you walked away
I never thought I could feel such pain
Especially from someone I loved so much
But I guess it's true, what they say, 'the ones closest to you, hurt you the most'
It hurts so much, the hole in my chest
Not a day goes by that I don't feel the ache
Where you ripped my heart out
The day you walked away
Mommy used to say that I was 'Daddy's little girl' because I was always hanging onto you
You read to me when I couldn't do it myself
I remember sitting in the living room reading doctor sues to you
Over and over again
Before you walked away
But now I'm all grown and I realize now the pain of a scraped knee is nothing compared to what you did to me
I remember your face so clearly, but not the one from when I was little, full of joy and love
The one I remember now is hard and cold
Nothing can stop this pain inside me, my insides are slowly recoiling against me.
Soon I will be dead, from the pain of a broken heart
But you wont come, because you don't love me anymore
The day you walked away
I hold you responsible for the pain that eats at me
You dug this hole, scraping blood and muscle away
The day you walked away
Daddy you were my everything, my heart and pride, the very essence of my soul.
You took me on my first rollercoaster and taught me how to fish
You held me close when I scraped my knees, telling me everything would be ok
Before you walked away
I never thought I could feel such pain
Especially from someone I loved so much
But I guess it's true, what they say, 'the ones closest to you, hurt you the most'
It hurts so much, the hole in my chest
Not a day goes by that I don't feel the ache
Where you ripped my heart out
The day you walked away
Mommy used to say that I was 'Daddy's little girl' because I was always hanging onto you
You read to me when I couldn't do it myself
I remember sitting in the living room reading doctor sues to you
Over and over again
Before you walked away
But now I'm all grown and I realize now the pain of a scraped knee is nothing compared to what you did to me
I remember your face so clearly, but not the one from when I was little, full of joy and love
The one I remember now is hard and cold
Nothing can stop this pain inside me, my insides are slowly recoiling against me.
Soon I will be dead, from the pain of a broken heart
But you wont come, because you don't love me anymore
The day you walked away
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HELP ME THINK OF A NAME!
By FazeTheRage on July 18th 2009, early morning.on topic My feelings for you
I am a rock, you are a feather
and somehow we've managed to stay together
You may forget important things
but darling dear you gave me wings
You held me soft, kissed me light
said everything will be alright
Though the others wouldn't agree
I wanted to kiss you endlessly
And here I sit holding your hand
while this hourglass runs out of sand
No matter what, promise to be my friend
even if this love comes to an end
and somehow we've managed to stay together
You may forget important things
but darling dear you gave me wings
You held me soft, kissed me light
said everything will be alright
Though the others wouldn't agree
I wanted to kiss you endlessly
And here I sit holding your hand
while this hourglass runs out of sand
No matter what, promise to be my friend
even if this love comes to an end
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