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  • Kastor on November 5
    Wow, you have a giant outhor page! How do you get it so big?
  • individuality on April 4
    here is a poem you might enjoy considering your usernam

    Rhythmical Relationship's Smile


    Take hold of this heart I offer you please -
    this red rose becomes our bonded symbol
    for everything that you've revealed to me,
    the releasing of chains that tightly bound
    that prison I found myself weeping in:
    freedom now flutters her gorgeous wide-wings,
    here too is a second rose: to show our
    friendship is beautiful; blossomed bright grace.
    Another; the third, I place on your lips,
    to scent passion with its fragrant desire,
    to protect each and every moment shared,
    we will rise as one on petals; tender.
    Relax now dear, let this rose of fine trust
    slip onto your opened palm's wonderful
    acceptance while I stand guard over wisps
    of knowledge; getting stronger all the time.

    Brilliantly your masterful approach
    finds me in shivers of exotic peace,
    here - number five is yours as is the sixth,
    when marriage blesses us under God's sky
    we shall dance on their memory's wonder.
    In faith's golden curves I press the seventh
    into your hair so its presence will seep
    down the spiralled pleasure of your spirit,
    for your whispered promises here's the eighth.
    The ninth is a roman numeral which
    sings sweet verse along its straight-edge power,
    I swerve under the notes it gives and laugh
    life; the world is easy flowing colour.
    Take this tenth and gently grind it down to
    put in bread: made for us to break at dawn.
    The eleventh rose will accompany
    us as we take our first threshold steps; one, two,
    three leads to the twelfth where love's eternal
    beat: our rhythmical relationship's smile,
    will capture moments; swing them under stars.



  • poetryality : Let me know when you get here! on February 22



    Can't wait to finally see you and the children, hubby too.


    Renee
  • silverfish : the season on December 24, 2008
    greetings and best wishes from the bottom of the sea, may your christmas be dry and happy! cheers. -rednosefish
  • Rejected Easter Egg on August 18, 2008
    I'm okay mommy, and I'm feeling better now. I was a little broken up the other day. and I love you! and I sorry I worry you.
  • poetryality : THANKS! on July 19, 2008
    "'Colored People" rocks TRUTH! I needed that just now!

    Loved it! ♥

    Renee
  • Aurielle on July 7, 2008
    awww I LOVE where you live nad your children is sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! --Aurielle
  • Going Forever on July 4, 2008
    O.M.G
    your background is fantastic
    i've never seen anything like it!
  • Rejected Easter Egg on June 30, 2008
    you flatter me mommy
  • Rejected Easter Egg on June 4, 2008
    yesh we do mommy....and now you are stuck with me forever poor you
  • xPink-Lotusx on May 17, 2008
    Thanks for the comment.. Are you from SC or just living there? I was born there... Miss it a bit. Once again thanks for the comment!
  • Rejected Easter Egg on May 13, 2008
    aww course I love you...you be my MJ and
  • Rejected Easter Egg on May 6, 2008
    well jesus tap dancing christ MJ...where the heck have you been? I miss you.
  • Rejected Easter Egg on April 24, 2008
    missed you too....cutey face
  • Rejected Easter Egg on April 14, 2008
    I miss MJ
  • Rejected Easter Egg on March 17, 2008
    Happy St.patrick's day to you too stay safe!
  • poetryality : You are always so supportive of my work. I needed to say.... on February 15, 2008
  • Kelli Marie on February 14, 2008
    Happy Valentine Day
  • WillAlwaysLove on December 24, 2007
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    I want to wish my dear friend a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Love you, Gianna WillAlwaysLove
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