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HomeGrown : Just little old me... on May 14

In Sac. Shoot me an Email you check and I'll send my numbers in case you come by. I'd like to see Trevor sometime if it's possible. Take care of you G. And keep the head up.

D
Aries : Ode To A Beautiful Mind Aries on December 4, 2008

Thank you for your kind thoughts.Man Of Halech
really hurt me .I have had 2 strokes & AP has helped me so much with the mental exercise
I feel now I shouldn't be on AP.
HomeGrown : Birthdays... on September 18, 2008

At least you stay in touch on my birthdays. Hope you are off being brilliant somewhere. Hope things with the kids are well, and you too, of course. Number hasn't changed. Call any time.

HG
HomeGrown : What the...? on July 8, 2008

Where are you? No cellphone, no home phone, no contact? Need my home number again? Call any time, if she gives you shit just keep calling. Miss you.

HG
kevoc : Wondering the same on June 21, 2007

I dont know why I am great? It just falls there when I least expect it. And to be honest I dont want alot of it. As far as the rest goes... that's all on you darlin'
Well enjoy mine and I'll enjoy your's
debilynn : To My New Friend on February 23, 2007

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Soulful Woman on February 22, 2007

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment about my work. I write from my soul..thus Soulful Woman
Its the only way I know how to relate in my writing.
I am sorry to hear of your illness..I hope that you will be able to get through what you need to get through. Stay strong and keep writing..
And again, thank you most humbly
Noreen
Brandy3 : Brandy3 is still alive,living on half a brain on February 6, 2007

yourbentangel you will live for as long as God isn't done with you.For I was givin the results of my EEG and showed only my left side of my brain had any living cells.The Drs cant even figure out how I'm able to walk,for the right controls the left and visa versa,yet I walk talk and I am working on my 2nd book.Dont give up for my drs are testing me for every type of cancer,and my baby brother died from lympnode cancer also.Brandy3
Prince Charming on December 22, 2005

Thank you for dropping by and your great compliments. Nope I am not from the states I am a real Dutchman, but its nice to know that there is a look alike livin in the states thats famous and one of your favorite celebrities. Greetings from Holland Herman
spamwitch on September 10, 2005

Sorry about your dad, I lost my mom too, so I know how hard it is. Lovely picture of them by the way. By the way, you quoted one of my favorite songs from one of my favorite albums ever,,,The Hurting, by Tears For Fears" they wrote all of those songs about the abuse they suffered in their childhood. Peace to you.
on June 15, 2005

Hey I used to have some poems on here and I had to take them all off and you left me comments saying come back so I did...so check out some of my new stuff please..
Kaitlin
apples in autumn on April 18, 2005

I just happened upon your page and saw the lyrics to "Mad World" on here. That is one of my favorite songs from my all-time Favorite Movie. I just learned how to play it on the piano about 2 weeks ago.

"I went to school and I was very nervous
no one knew me
no one knew me
Hello teacher tell me what's my lesson?
(look right through me
look right through me)"

*sighs* it's beautiful.
yellingstreetnut on April 5, 2005

im sry to hear bout ur dad but the man in my bakground is my grandfather whom i loved dearly and ur prob wondering what does that have to do with you well he apperently died the same day as your father that is very ironic and i thought id never meet a person who lost a father grandfather great grandfather ect. on the exact same day i lost mine im sry to hear of your loss and im sure it still hurts and the pain is overwhelming and any brief thing can bring you to tears and that is the same way i feel since 11-11-04
*Carrie
Andy Stephenson on March 29, 2005

Thanks for dropping by. I must warn you that I have a dark side which lives in fantasy, but sometimes expresses itself in what I write. I am a Truist, but I indulge in fantasies sometimes. Recently I have written erotica and horror. That's quite a departure, but I confess, I found it entertaining. Nothing new really, just my variations. Thanks again. Just thought I should warn you.

Andy
HeavenScent4U on March 21, 2005

Hello, since you commented on one of my poems, I thought I would return the kidness and stop by your little corner of the AP world. That's great that you have your favorite picture of your father here, very admirable. I'm sorry to hear of your loss, I know it was hard from experiance. I myself lost both my mother and father in 1989. They passed away 11 weeks apart.

I enjoyed my visit and promise to stop again and read some of your poetry. I also like the song lyrics you posted. I just LOVE that song. Be Well and Be Blessed.
HomeGrown on March 12, 2005

Hrrmmm... Have you joined more groups?
LadyAmalthea on February 21, 2005

UNKOWN USER, YOU ARE SO MYSTERIOUS, CLANDESTINE BUT YET, INCLINING. YOU ADUMBRATE YOURSELF, YOU ADUST MY SENSES.
pozo on February 21, 2005

Thanks for your comment
Ava Noire on February 8, 2005

Hello, just dropping in - I've seen you around. How are things going? Any better?

I've been busy with work and family life, school is on hold for a few months Then I'll basically have no life for a year or more during clinicals and stuff. I enjoy it though, I just miss Alaina.

tell me about you.
fadedyouth on January 10, 2005

Thanks for the comment! Uh yah it is an original idea ... I just didnt know how bad life could be for some people even if they seem perfect... its really odd how your eyes decieve you.

.Nicole.
on June 13, 2004

I love that you had the song Mad World on your page! I love that song... it completely MADE the movie Donnie Darko!
on June 12, 2004

just thought i would say hi
yourbentangel on June 12, 2004

You take my breath away, thank you, what did I do to deserve this from your beautiful soul?
on June 12, 2004

Bed of Roses - Lover’s Words

I

{ Whispered breeze falls so
quietly upon soft
bed of roses sweet,
perfumed scent locks hearts.

She lies there, her eyes
closed in waiting for
delicate surprise,
breasts gently rising,

falling with her breath,
released into the
summer day’s murmurings,
the world is silent

fury as I smile,
collect thoughts and speak -
the words roll of tongue
like melting ice-cube. }

II

Whispers: (I love you!)
My life before has
ended, I am born
again right here, now.

Do not open your
eyes my sweet desire,
let my words roam you,
touch secret places.

For you, I would throw
life to the devil
and waste away pure
time, just for a glimpse

of that smile waiting
in the crystals-jade.
I would live here in
bliss now - die tomorrow!

III

[ Please don’t stop, my love,
as I lie here, eyes
closed, heart racing in
fathomless time, tears

dance beneath my lids,
your words excite me,
no! Excite is too
feeble a word to

use for my senses
reel with passions bright.
I could lie here still
forever and wander

the lines you breathe for
me, take me away,
to that dream you have
brought into my life! ]

IV

I would throw myself
at your delicious
feet and bear my soul,
cry my love, ‘alive!’

Sexually (sigh)
attractive wonder
that you are, my love,
nothing could hold back

this leaping flame that
is for you alone.
Time will blush at the
things I will show you.

The moon will weep for
her sister sun - die
in heaven for us,
this true love we share.

V

[ My God in heaven,
I thank you for this,
this man of wonder
who sings his soul here.

Let this time forever
be remembered in
the pages history
folds throughout my sweet

fired eternity.
I have lived, nothing
can change that now,
beautifully, I live!

(Sighs) fold me into
these roses beneath,
my rivers run for you,
always true for you. ]

VI

My heart, open your
eyes, look upon me,
see this truth I hold
for your touch so soft.

There will be only
you in the spaces
wandered, death, it could
not remove me from

this love, I swear it!
Come to me please and
open me as I
open your treasures.

Let the Gods of old
watch these scenes as we
fall into the wild
veins of lovemaking.

Come to me, give all
that I ask of you,
take all that I give
of myself so true.

VII

{ Roses dance, the day
laughs loud at pleasured
sights, hearts skip beats and
gasp in gentle wisps.

Time sneaks away, it
leaves lovers alone,
subtle breath smiles,
wanders into dreams! }
on March 25, 2004

thought i'd casualy walk back in the place after some time away i'll have to start writing again now, not done much at all with poetry, i'm just so damned lazy. have been doing some artwork though and have posted some new ones in the recent poems. how have you been? living the high life here missed this place.
Ava Noire on February 4, 2004

Well...I am ok as in that I am alive. My daughter is doing good even though the past few weeks have been hell (she's teething and has been sick). I hope things go well for you.
Ava Noire on December 24, 2003

Happy holidays sweetie hugs
Talia on October 22, 2003

Well, I would hate to think there was someone out there who felt they had no one to turn too. In fact after your comment on my page I am glad you wrote it and they came to realise (hopefully?) Sometimes things have to be put to them bluntly for them to take notice of things around them. Thanks for letting me know, but it still scared the hell out of me LOL

Natalia
on October 21, 2003

Thank you for the comment on my page. I've never actually thought any of my work was any good, so it's nice to hear from at least one person who likes it. I would read some of your work now, but I'm short of time; so you can expect me back any time.

+Cour†ney+
macandrew on October 21, 2003

Can't seem to IM from work. Thanks for your comments on Submission. Not from personal experience but easy enough to draw from the far too many occurances around us. Pain, anguish, fear; especially were chosen to fill the line but they are just really emotions so well fit to the poet.

thanks again... really enjoying your stuff.

John
phatalvision on October 14, 2003

Hi yourbentangel, thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. To answer your question, I have one more poem in this vein called Hillbilly Christmas Cake. I was wondering, being a fer piece from the coast (I'm not really a hillbilly) what HSU stands for? My confidence rating is pretty high on the 'U'.
whatsinaname on September 22, 2003

Hi there thank you very much for your comment on my poem " a million aplogies" I was really surprised by that one because it was very personal and it would have been to make complete sense.lol.But as you say if you write from your heart it will always show.And we do seem to have at least one thing in common Robert Frost and probably a sensitive heart as well.lol.Thanks again and itis now time for me to have a peep at your works.You wouldn't mind would you.lol.You seem to be new around here or may be not.The number of poems suggest that you may be but the entries on your page suggest otherwise.Best wishes either way.
whatsinaname on September 22, 2003

Hi there thank you very much for your comment on my poem " a million aplogies" I was really surprised by that one because it was very personal and it would have been to make complete sense.lol.But as you say if you write from your heart it will always show.And we do seem tohave at least one thing in common Robert Frost and probably a sensitive heart as well.lol.Thanks again and itis now time for me to have a peep at your works.You wouldn't mind would you.lol.You seem to be new around here or may be not.Thenumber of poemssuggest that youmay be but the entries on your page suggest otherwise.Best wishes either way.
SmallBlueThing on September 16, 2003

Hi, bentangel!
-just wanted say thanks for reading my tired ol' drivel and for your nice comment on the last one (and I didn't think anyone read the junk I post here). Just read one of yours...it seems you have the soul of a poet, a rare & precious thing indeed.
Oh, and your handle has odd but strong appeal for me.
Many :)'s & 's
-David
moonlitmirror on September 12, 2003

Hey, from what I've read your a good poet, and wow, other people must think so too, if youve only entered 4 contests and you got a trophy already holy shit! It took me like 20 entries to get one!! lol. anywayz, just stoppin by and saying hi. I like your new poem.

~~blessings~ ~

~rora
Ava Noire on June 19, 2003

I am proud of you for taking the step towards happiness. I know you must be scared as heck but you have alot of support from me and others as well I'm sure. I wish you the best of luck on your journey. I know youll find happiness and contenment, I'm sure. I was born in Nov myself so good luck with all that.

take care sweety. Thanks for stopping by my page, it made me smile.
And for reading my poems too. I'm glad you find solace among my words.

luv xx
Ava Noire on June 10, 2003

Hey you. I wish you the best of luck with your studies and with your thoughts. I hope to hear from you soon and hopefully all will be well but sometimes it takes awhile for things to get just right. Try not to be discouraged -I know that is so much easier said than done, but always know you have the stregnth within to pull through whatever life throws at ya.

I do hope you continue writing. Now is a very important turning point where your poetry is concerned because you are going through a difficult/trying time. Many changes are being made and writing about it will help you get those feelings out. Keep a journal...record your everyday thoughts. noone will have to know about it but you. it can be your sole companion during this time.

thanks for remembering me. I'll be thinking of you so when you get time drop in and lemme know you are ok
yourbentangel on June 10, 2003

To Tina, Chasingtheday, ZEZ, and all others who spared my feelings and told me what they honestly thought of my writings, thank you thank you thank you. Tomorrow, I am moving to the coast, where I have been accepted to HSU. I start in the fall, and will not have a computer up and running for a while. I always have my laptop, but I fear that I may not have much time. With everything that has gone right in my life this last year, there has been much that has gone wrong, I will sit at moonstone beach, watch the waves, and reflect that the ocean is a never ending source of power, a power that cannot be stopped. I will try not to think of the bad, I will remember the good, a trip to chico, Eric Clapton, Butterflies, Burney Falls, and maybe I will be inspired enough to write.
It may be a while before I am on again, and I hope that when I am, things will be perfect in my life, but I have a feeling of "Never Again"
~yourbentangel~
anmen on March 21, 2003

i appologize for posting my comment on your page, it wasn't directed to you, but being new to this sight i was trying to figure out how to reply to TruWil.. I'm learning my ropes here, and i appologize for the direction of my comment towards you..
keep up your good work, your style is great.
Lyrical Trance on March 20, 2003

Thanx man I think your style is nice and you have talent as a poet and I look forward to reading your drops.

-HDA AKA LT 221
Cecilia Rose on March 12, 2003

hi!
Jaden on February 19, 2003

Hi. Robert Frost is also one of my favorites.

I might suggest Billy Collins.

He was accepted as America's Poet Laureate two years in a row and recently gave a reading at the Library of Congress. Just go to google search engine and put in his name. From there you should be able to find the LOC reading he gave. Or try:

http:www.loc.gov/locvideo/bcollins/

It's about a 45 minute video stream (three sections I believe, just give each section a few moments to reload)

He has been compared to Robert Frost. Not because of his stlye, but because of his originality. Incrediable poet.

Take care.

Jaden
Timothy Cameron on November 18, 2002

Hi Yourbentangel,
I don't know if you are into this, but I put out a Challenge for a poem from which responses have been limited. I wonder if you wouldn't mind taking a crack at it. I have 150 points on it. Thanks for your time.
Ava Noire on October 28, 2002

Hey :) I will try to enter your challenge. Just depends on if I can come up with something decent x_x I got a lot going on right now but I think I can find time
Ava Noire on October 24, 2002

hey :) hope all's going well. Wish I could have stayed & chatted the other night but ya caught me as I was leaving :( hopefully some other time.

take care
Ava Noire on October 18, 2002

hey sweety :) my email is Wicked_Midnite@hotmail.com, email me anytime...If I don't reply within a few days please know that it is not because I discarded your message or that I'm ignoring you. It prolly means I haven't been online to check my messages. I am spending most of my days sleeping now, so tired lately. Don't have much longer to go though! 5 weeks! :D
Zez on August 14, 2002

hiya, thanks for stopping by and reading one of mine, tina and chasing are great buds to have in your corner. im looking foward to reading your stuff.
Ava Noire on August 13, 2002

awe how sweet of you to mention me ^above^ *blush* Hope your day is going good :) take care
Ava Noire on August 5, 2002

Hey chica! Hope life is going better for you. I added your poem 'Transgressions' to my recommended reads on my author page. Stop by & take a looksee when ya get the chance :) I change it every 5 days or so. Only poems that are my favs will go there. I changed it this morning so it will stay till around the 10-11.

au revoir :) take care!
on May 17, 2002

:) hi

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