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skyyward on December 14, 2005

and such a fierce flaming fire it would be
The CheshireKat on December 3, 2005

this thursday, the eighth, will be the 25th anniversary of John Lennon's death.
SanguineSaint on December 2, 2005

Much thanks for your helpful comment on "Hypodermic Halo." I think I might have to revise it and take your suggestion. I'll be checking out what you've got posted... 'cause you're all... cool and stuff... Ha ha ha.
-Xander
abernaith on October 11, 2005

Thanks for the applause. I guess you've changed your name. Although AP doesn't seem to accept it via the im system, so I'm forced to put this in your guestbook. Feel free to delete it after reading.
writonthebody on October 11, 2005

s'ok, it is new. I came up with it because that's what the sketch on my background is to me... . f i e r c e . f l a w l e s s .

And hey- this thursday, we're all trying for applebee's at ten... you up?
The CheshireKat on October 11, 2005

new name, eh? how'd you come up with this one? sorry if this isn't exactly new, i guess i'm just slow sometimes.
Edited on Oct 11, 10:31 because ''.
abernaith on September 8, 2005

Hello. Just dropping by. Am v. eager to check out the poets you recced. And also to read around, hereabouts. :3 V. curious background you have...the eyes are a bit scary.
love no more on September 5, 2005

Hello Im new and found you.I like your opening poem.It hits me close to home.Please check me out.
Soul-2-Soul on July 11, 2005

hope you enjoyed the poems you read
The CheshireKat on December 30, 2004

hey Reighna, i'm sorry. i didn't call on your bday b/c 1) i thought it was the fifteenth that day (see, my sister is one day after you, and i had this idea in my head that her bday was saturday since that was the day we were going out to dinner, so her bday was friday but i thought that was YOUR birthday...), and 2) i kinda felt bad about being too strapped for funds that i couldn't afford a present. same for x-mas. i meant to call you several times, but i've just had so much on my mind lately... it's a world of crap you are lucky not to be involved in; plus, i've been preoccupied baking tons of cookies... i don't know... it's eleven PM and i've had a very up and down type of day, maybe i'm a little burnt. i'm certainly pretty preoccupied about ... several things... mostly about Savage and Lisa and the baby. like i said, world of crap you're lucky not to be involved in. god, i HATE that woman. everything she touches turns to shit. but that's a different story. ::sigh:: i don't know. i had good intentions... but you know what they say- road to hell and stuff. i apologize for making you feel neglected, for what it's worth.
now i'm off to see if i can compose a poem that will sort out my aching head.
The CheshireKat on December 17, 2004

hey, happy one-day-late bday + stuff.
skyyward on December 15, 2004

love the drawing. the eyes pull you in and hold you
The CheshireKat on December 2, 2004

you should check out a poet here called Stenise22- she's really good.
The CheshireKat on November 12, 2004

::big exaggerated pouty sorry face:: aww i'm sorry. i guess i've just been swept up in 'the routine' or whatever. i'm never home anymore you know, you should call my cell phone. you do have my #, right? oh, and i'm not online a whole hell of a lot these days, but i got a new SN a little while ago- RedefineCheshire.
The CheshireKat on July 29, 2004

hey. i'm back. in answer to "where are you", i must answer... around.
in answer to the other question, 'anyone you know', do you remember Chris Ciaravino? of course you do. it's for him.
Saaara on June 27, 2004

Just wanted to say, I absolutely love your background, it's gorgeous. You deserve a cookie.
Edited on Jun 28 because ''.
on March 14, 2004

Some people have their heads so far up their arse they do not know whether or not it is daylight and don't appreciate anything. No gratitude whatsoever.
blondeoverblue on March 13, 2004

Thanks for you helpful comments on 'My Hit List' your critique is much appreciated.

Kat
philophant on March 6, 2004

I will miss you. I hope you've gotten your prayer answered. The one about a drink to slake your thirst. I love that poem and will always remember it. You won't stop writing, will you??????
The CheshireKat on March 5, 2004

yeah, well, i looked at her author page and she's thirteen... she was bound to mess up.
GlassSlippers on March 4, 2004

I love the background you used here-- I don't know if you've ever read "voyage of the dawn treader" by CS Lewis, but this background looks exactly like one of the scenes in the book! I wish I could walk through it... how lovely.
The CheshireKat on March 3, 2004

ryn:
yes, you know him. he's Jay Yabsley. we had a verbal altercation about a month ago.

also:
i knew about the contest! i saw it. i even put a comment on it, you silly moo.

♥Kat
Edited on Mar 03, 11:29 p.m. because 'T to the Y to the P to the O! Typo!'.
Black Star on February 1, 2004

eek again

tis possible that I say "holden" and I mean "me" or "I". Like maybe I'm putting my shit on him, but he's the universal timeless teenager, so I guess thats alright. Holden loses his cynicism? I didn't get that out of it at all. If I remember right, he realizes that there is no catcher in the rye, can't accept that, and has a nervous breakdown. Congratulations on your expert analysis of Holden, I'm in awe. But enough with the sarcasm. I'm not taking the book and putting it in poem form, I'm not at all concerned with the message of the book or whatever you think the message was. I'm writing a reaction of sorts...allowing my subconscious to speak to Holden directly. And anyway, we're getting off topic. The poem is what I'm concerned with. I know I have a firm grip on the book. And as for the 'om' thing, frankly it seems so insignificant..I just want my poem to be good and according to you, it isn't. thats the trouble
Black Star on February 1, 2004

eek

you crippled me dear...my feelings are officially smashed. Quite frankly, I was prepared to hand that epic bit of writing in, whatever the reviews may have been. but your critique has left me stranded, bouncing off the ropes. your review may prove helpful in the long run...though I must say that you are wrong and that the poem is damn good. its fucking brilliant, I think. And I'm a humble fella. if you're gonna say something like "I don't think you understand Holden" you should explain yourself, at least a little bit. Because I think I have at least somewhat of a firm grip on the book and on Holden in particular. What am I missing? ehh..I'm seriously reeling now, you've knocked the wind out of me...dancing like fire over my poem. fine, I won't hand it in, if it doesn't meet your standards. Granted it needs to be edited...besides the silly mispelled word play, do you see nothing in it? What kills me is that I've seen you give shining reviews to truly mediocre writing..."the dresses", is that my competition!?! come now. well..bleh, you've never really liked my writing much anyway, and thats quite alright. I plan on editing the fuck out of my shitty little poem, and handing it in, despite your better efforts..haha foiled again, eh? So, I'm off to go shave off the rough edges
-george
Edited on Feb 01, 9:22 p.m. because ''.
WindUpEnigma on January 27, 2004

You are absolutely AWESOME!!! I love your work so far...I will definitely be adding you to my favorites...Your work is probably the best I've seen on this site so far. You rock!!
Fred Nietzsche on January 25, 2004

not leaving...technically

I'll be flying low under the radar, so as not to appear a hypocrite. I have two names on here, the other is Black Star, so expect some comments from him (me) in the future
Edited on Jan 25, 6:59 p.m. because ''.
Celtic Nomad on January 18, 2004

You're only 18, dumfounded by the intensity and maturity expressed in your poetry. I've added you to my favourites, and look forward to reading more of you. Honoured to make your aquaintance, Fallen. And thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
Sheona
Fred Nietzsche on December 27, 2003

haaa haha, I know you aren't an athiest...you're a wiccan, right? yeah, I remember your presentation(s) last year, both really good. the crowley one was particularly interesting. mucho enjoydo. anyway, good answer, lol
SomnusLupus on December 11, 2003

in that case, what does the islip stand for? becaause it is most definatley a long island town
Fred Nietzsche on December 5, 2003

i'm from england originally, but islip will do
kat recommended you, i was in your media class last year. boy up front, dirty hair, interested in communism? eh, you probably don't remember me, my name's george though. thanks for reading my ramblings
writonthebody on December 2, 2003

thank you very much; likewise you are doing well and I hope you keep doing so. Also feel welcome to drop by any time. Oregon huh? never been... one of the only states I haven't been in yet.... lol.
poeticweaver on December 2, 2003

Wow! Your author's page is so beautiful, I'm glad I chose to drop in, looks like Oregon, I have visited there, and it is the garden of eden, thanks for reading me today, and I welcome you back anytime, keep up the wonderful works here, for I see your loved!

Take care!
-Timothy
The CheshireKat on November 30, 2003

indeed! both walked.
::sigh::
it's funny, i did think of you while out on my walk... that just settles it, i should have given you a call. wanna hang out but have mad schoolwork to do. eh, that's life.

oh, and about 'end all embers': heheheh, ponderance. see what Vanilla Pepsi spawns??
-Kat
philophant on November 29, 2003

dear fallentocinders, the poem you've written here: it's lovely. what a beautiful philosophy. indeed, a pity you are not a gentleman.
Edited on Nov 29, 10:54 p.m. because 'to tell you i'm adding you to my favorites list'.
The CheshireKat on October 21, 2003

why can't it be about Dave? we're friends.

what you doin' Allhallows?

♥, Kat.
Malobole on October 4, 2003

I offered kudos before I read your entry ... nicely done.
The CheshireKat on September 30, 2003

they love you, Reighna! they really love you!
Chaith on September 30, 2003

Hey,

I've been reading lots of your poems, and I must say you are really talented! I mean, i sit and read a poem and Im just in awe, your words capture something really special, and I hope you expound in your talent.

Keep writing by all means, and I may bookmark a few..or several of your pieces, awesome awesome works of art, good job, and good cheer!

-Chaith
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