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Best Wishes for The Happy New Year, witchyflyer!
(From Phantomdreaming from Eddy's Family Page)
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Happy Holidays...
Hugs...Eddy
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Dear witchflyer! Have a Happy and Healthy New Year!
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: hey there, dear. on March 19, 2007
this is pseudofemme- i don't know if you remember me, but i used to write here... i'm so glad to see you're still here!
the description on your front page is so intense & amazing, i will be wishing you the absolute greatest things in your time of struggle/thrilling change.
i have a new project i've created, if you're still interested in the little things i have to write- it'll be at pseudofemme.com, and if you're interested i'll let you know when it goes up on the site.
lovelove girl.
elyse
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''Happy New Year, witchyflyer! I wish you lots of luck, health and happiness.
Di
(Your Aussie Sis)
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Happy Holidays and the best to you in 2006.
Hugs...Eddy
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well I was going through my list of groups because I figure it's time for me to get more involved, and I found "brutally honest" and went to check out witchyflyer here's page. Lovely I must say. I've pissed people off, but I've never had them go as far as to bann me, but with the new mods, who knows what will happen. But a while back I had a contest entitled "Only the Brave Should Enter" because I warned them I was going to tear apart their poems if I felt so inclined (which I turned out to be in a good mood judging day and was quite nice). Anyway I got a bunch of IM's about how I was "so cocky and I should take myself off my high pedastal," or "you're not so good so stop thinking you have a right to judge other people's poems". Can't say I was very happy because I warned them and they didn't have to enter my goddamn contest if they didnt' want to. I swear it is voluntary and you can leave even if you click the button without entering a poem. I know I'm not the best writer, but I prefer to hear that my poem is crap instead of one of those lameass comments like "I know how you felt when you wrote this," or "this is beautiful and you are a great writer. great write!" Comments like that are the reason you can't use the featured box anymore. But witchyflyer's page is just turning into one big rant session  . Time for me to push off. ciao.
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I'm just plain tired of only being able to kiss ass. Any post that doesn't boost the ego of some shitty poet gets me another letter from the mods. I should be able to say freely that I don't like a poem and if the author argues with me I should be able to give him or her the finger ,,l, or even go so far as to say "HEY ASSHOLE . . . I'm not wrong, I really don't like your poem because its shit and no amount of bitching is going to change my mind." But obviously I can't do that. I seem to be wasting my time in an imitated utopia, nobody can say anything bad and every poet on this site must be great - just look at the comments about them. What was great when I joined this site a few years ago was that there were some brutally honest people here that would tell me like it was. Now that most of them have left or been booted because some whiny bitch couldn't take it that their poems weren't poems and weren't any good, the site lacks that edge to curb me from becoming another one of these shitty poets (I never sought that kind of freedom, I'm too mature for that). Anyway, that is my main reason for leaving and even with relaxed restrictions on swearing I say big whoop. Swearing is great and all but I'd like to say things besides "fuckin awesome" and "holy shit that's great". I want to be able to say and hear things like "Your metaphors are shitty and your syntax was mixed by a retard with his head up his ass" 'cause if it's the truth, it's the truth. Poets should thank harsh critics for not bullshitting them and once in awhile cuss back if they're out of line. The site mods should just laugh at most but rules are rules and they have to warn me about my unruly behavior. I'm getting redundant and I'm tired of always biching about the same thing. adios
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ok ummmm im sorry for what that girl wrote to you it was uncalled for totally. we said what we had to say to say to each other and it was done and how long has it been since you read my poem crushed dreams???--a few weeks i know. again im really really sorry.
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i started my own group if you want to join... it's called shits and giggles
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I highly doubt I said that you don't "know the pain associated with cutting" unless you yourself said it first. I was probably saying that you didn't adaquetly convey the pain/feelings involved through your poem. I don't know, I don't remember. send me the link and I'll take a look at it again.
And yes, I piss a lot of people off because I'm honest... and a lot of people on here don't like that about me.
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i must say you do piss alot of ppl off sorry that my friends jumped at you like that but you cant say that i dont know the pain associated with cutting cause i do i quit though for the people i hold dear and love like my friends that did yell at you cori
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sorry i am nosy and hadd to read this but who is that and why in the heck are they jumping dwn your throuht (if thats how you spell it) thats messed up did they even hve a right for that?
cori
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what the hell do u mean it was incoherrent
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that "sentance" was incoherrent.
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u know what i don't care just please don't comment on anymore of my poems. its people like you that crush other peoples dreams
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my god, I'm not looking for a fight.
you can't expect someone not to read it, unless you put like... a warning lable on it. And I did -not- make her out to be a slut. I didn't even comment on the content.
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well you kno what you want to say something go to my page mc chris if i see that you mess with her again it wont be pretty it isnt that you comment on it it is the way you did it you made her sound like a slut so i dont care if you like it i think her poems are fine so if you dont like them dont read like i said you want to rip someone apart go to mine ok then something leave her alone she does it so she can vent poetry is what you feel ever heard of free poetry it is where dont rythm so there go to mc chris and say some thing leave her alone and we have no probems ok ok
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woah, calm down there. No need to deface my page with your profanities.
She wrote a poem, so I critiqued it. If you/she didn't want a comment, you/she shouldn't have posted it, huh?
also, there are these wonderful things, I don't know if you've heard. They are punctuation and the "shift" key. Wonders of the world.
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first off bitch she was raped that isnt funny that you come in and judge that before you even know i think you dont know poetry is if it helps it helps so if you dont like it then go to hell she wrote about being raped and all you can say is that it isnt poetry fuck you i dont like people who think they are better then anyone else because your not know think about that and if you wanna say something this is mc chris on all poetry i am her fiance and i have had to pick up the peices and then you come in and say shit like that just dont say a thing to her ok good now that is clear up i am sure yours isnt the best everyone has flaws so get off your thorne now if you want to report anyone report me mc chris other wise leave something on my author page
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Happy New year and Best Wishes
From
Di
(Your Aussie Sis)
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Sis...you have a new brother...please go welcome him...
Hugs and Love
Eddy
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Happy Holidays...
Hugs...Eddy
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chelsea
hi
teeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee
derrick is somewhere with kelli
maybe they're boofing
(eyebrow raise/nostril flare)
hmm, no?
i'm using his computer.
in .... protest .... of .... nothing.
love kathe
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w00t!
I'm excited that I came across your poetry.
I've liked what I've read so far, and want to read more.
Its cool that you have a Rumi quote : )
And I am off to check out your group. I hate how allpoetry is based on compliments and not improvemnt!
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Well I don't really know you uh at all but from your info I like your bluntness lol. Sometimes blunt is good and this is a time lol. Okay enough with the lol's just thought I'd share that I like people who are blunt. Don't ask me why I thought you would want to know that but I did so I said it. C-ya
Always live before you die,
StarBlack
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We have a huge barrel of wine, but no cups,
That's fine with us. Every morning
we glow and in the evening we glow again.
They say there's no future for us. They're right.
Which is fine with us.
--Rumi
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Chelsea, Chelsea, Chelsea, I must say, you're quite the interesting person. It's good to see someone on here who actually is against all that depression/cutting/suicide bullshit that seems to have invaded and therefore contaminated society today. Perhaps you weren't like that at one time, but that's okay, you are now. Needless to say, you don't really know me, but that doesn't matter; I'm hoping the entry I'll be turning in for you contest will be enough to kinda freak you out, as I feel I've gotten quite good at getting inside people's heads.
Anyways, you need not worry 'bout me; I have no intention of actually going through with my main character's actions in the story, so...yeah. And actually, French and Spanish aren't nearly as similar as Spanish and Italian are; the similarities between the last two are incredible.
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she said bukowski--bukowski is cool, huhhuhha.
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wassup bitch  ....im on vacation with my fam...wanted to say wassup to my main homie  ....hope u havin fun without me...even tho i know it must be pretty damn hard  ....
~~lithium~~
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oh, i didn't know that! i was considering entering your contest, but i am leaving for a week, so i can't, although gettin the info would have been fun for me! make sure they are real bastards about it! because they need to be real sneaky if they 'stalk" you!
-Meg
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spanish, actually. "fin" is "the end" in spanish. the two languages are very simaler. I live near sturbridge, what about you?
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what town in massachusetts are you from? i live here too, and yeah, we have hills and trees, shocking, eh? and wondering, do you speak french, because oyu put fin at the end, or did you do that for fun?
(I take french, not that you care)!
-meg
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yes, well....
i gave in, joined the masses, whatever.
it's a cliche grab bag today, isn't is just charming?
www.xanga.com/thirteen_songs
love love love
Käthe
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u liked that one of mine yesterday huh?
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okey dokey. send any points to the screen name "brutally-honest" right now we only have 100 points, so even a little bit will help.
gracias.
(it'll be a kick-ass contest, though.)
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yarr, i've got 1233 points. *beams*
i think i'm gonna make a contest now... but yeah, basically all i'm sayin' is i've got plenty 'o points to give to yee for the brutally honest thingy thing.
Katie o)
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lol. sure, *hands you a waiver*
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AHH CHELSEA
I feel bad critiquing you .... can you like give me a "kathe doesn't have to give critical comments" waiver?
because
um
yeah
ok
-kathe
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hmm. no abstractions... huh? I don't think I -have- written a poem like that.
maybe some of my very early "goofing around"stuff...
but I accept your challenge
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Have you written something very concrete without anything which can be taken away? If you haven't, I'd like to challenge you to write a poem where every word is essential, and there are no abstractions.
I very much like your work, and am glad to have been introduced to it.
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