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  • keatsnwaldo on February 11, 2008
    is that a quote at the top of your page or did you write it?
  • keatsnwaldo on January 20, 2008
    well dude if your not going to be on here for awhile my email is Keatsnwaldo@aol.com, so keep in touch..... i would like to know what becomes of you.... by the way found out 2 weeks ago or so... im gonna be a dad.... hah... life comes at you fast... so watch your head.... peace
  • EvilKate : Merry XMas or Existential moment of your choice! on December 25, 2007
    You are like every poet - in that you seek an answer to who you are and who you might become. I, for reasons particular, can especially relate. I hope your year ahead is full of wonder and, if now answer, at least some very interesting questions
  • keatsnwaldo on December 16, 2007
    realizing you might not know yourself all so well is an amazingly enormous step begining a journey into your ownself which if pursued with patience and perserverence will obtain for yourself a much greater understanding of your own identity of course but also a better understanding for all people and, in a broad sense, society. i've read many of the things you've written, its as if or better than, maybe, looking into your eyes where you might truely see ones soul and i do believe i can see a great soul.... i feel that you have something in you that sets you apart from most people... this makes you a very unique thinker... but you may often find that it can make you very alone, do not shy away from this aloneness instead embrace it.... if you can survive the struggle of being alone to most extreme extent in every sense of the term alone you will find your writing and your way of thinking much more capable of acheiving... i feel that i started this journey at about the same age as you, but i fear i am stuck, diging a deep rut and not budging but maybe i should free myself oneday... either way whether or not you take my words for something of meaning or not please consider them, i think they are worth that much......
    peace

    p.s. life is a struggle, everyday
  • keatsnwaldo on December 2, 2007
    whats up good friend, i hope your doing well i see your still writing and that is good... i havent been able to get on here much or post any of my writings except for one short poem that im not exactly happy with but enough of that... i just recently (a week ago) and abruptly (in the middle of the night) moved with one of my friends to live with the girls that i met at a music festival in Asheville, N.C. but now that i am settled in i hope to get on more and post more shit anyway just wanted to say whats up and i hope your doing well.... peace
  • keatsnwaldo : Let the words be yours, I'm done with mine. on September 30, 2007
    I have seen where the wolf has slept by the silver stream.
    I can tell by the mark he left you were in his dream.
    Ah, child of countless trees.
    Ah, child of boundless seas.
    What you are, what you're meant to be
    Speaks his name, though you were born to me,
    Born to me,
    Cassidy...

    Lost now on the country miles in his Cadillac.
    I can tell by the way you smile he's rolling back.
    Come wash the nighttime clean,
    Come grow this scorched ground green,
    Blow the horn, tap the tambourine
    Close the gap of the dark years in between
    You and me,
    Cassidy...

    Quick beats in an icy heart.
    catch-colt draws a coffin cart.
    There he goes now, here she starts:
    Hear her cry.
    Flight of the seabirds, scattered like lost words
    Wheel to the storm and fly.

    Faring thee well now.
    Let your life proceed by its own design.
    Nothing to tell now.
    Let the words be yours, I'm done with mine.
    (Repeat)

    "Cassidy" - By The Grateful Dead
  • keatsnwaldo on September 26, 2007
    "What good is spilling
    blood? It will not
    grow a thing"

    -grateful dead, blues for allah
  • keatsnwaldo on September 23, 2007
    a ghost huh.....hmmm nah i dont think so... i've talked to a couple of ghosts... they were different than you..... but i dont know... maybe im wrong.....
  • Akimbo on September 21, 2007
    15... eh?
    You got talent.
    Kj
  • keatsnwaldo on September 20, 2007
    ehhh..... dont really have a quote for you this time..... just bored as hell... read your poem pitfall for like the third time... seriously thats an awesome poem..... and i would love to see more from you in that style.... anyway im just wasting time so i better go find something to do....
    peace
  • keatsnwaldo on September 18, 2007
    ehhh we're all terrible..... sounds like you need to travel.... i'd say go west but your there.... go sit on a mountain or something... think awhile..... get away hide whatever..... either way keep your chin up... lows just make highs higher....

    "No hills go up,
    If no hills go down.
    Don't cry now."
    -haiku i writ
  • keatsnwaldo on September 12, 2007
    "talking about music is like dancing to architechture" - chris vallot
  • keatsnwaldo on September 9, 2007
    "fuck their roads.... i'll build my own." - me... been sayin that for years... the quote you have about destiny reminded me of it
  • keatsnwaldo on September 2, 2007
    " An honest man will admit he is a liar" - me...
  • keatsnwaldo on August 12, 2007
    " You can't take this shit to the grave,
    Might as well smoke it while you got it.." - a good friend of mine....

    just dropping a quote on you

    P.S.
    watch your head
  • lauren nicole on July 24, 2007
    I really really like your poetry. It's all unique, and I can't wait to see the follow-up on 'balloons for lovely'. A favourite for sure.
  • the atlantic on May 20, 2007
    hey whr have you been
  • riverrunning : Hey Person on April 26, 2007
    Hello Cassidy! you rock my socks! just sayin' hi and that life shouldn't drag you down (hopefully it's not)!
  • MOvIng iN StERiO : fixed on April 3, 2007
    the poem. what do you think?
  • Methusala on April 3, 2007
    so now ive read all of your poems. You are an excellent poet.

    ~James
  • animated lies on April 2, 2007
    School only gets worse. Believe me. -__-'

    Might as well ATTEMPT to like it... Even if its a huge lie. Otherwise your last years of high school will be hell.
  • Gasp : o on March 2, 2007
    and im 14 as well and just to add to the other poeple who said stuff in your guestbook i agree your a great poet =)
  • Gasp : *gasp* on March 2, 2007
    how can you not like emo poetry it (usually) has alot of feeling in it..hehe i love em =p
  • wendy on February 28, 2007
    It's hard to believe that you're only 14. You have a rare talent. Don't ever stop writing. It would do the world an injustice if you do.
  • duke of balabamas on February 26, 2007
    though you seem a little closed-minded and combatitive based on your page desription, your writing has piqued my interest. youve asked others not to discount you, so i must ask: why would anyone feel the need to shove their political and religious ideologies out there if they arent expecting a good joust. i wish i could give it to you, but im a libertarian taoist so i agree with a lot of what you are saying, just not the nature of your saying it, unprovoked. food for thought...
  • Matt Holck on February 17, 2007
    I like your clean simple way of writing
    presenting subject with in an open frame
    while your descriptions are vivid and pregnate with metaphor
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