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  • acoustical on October 9
    CAN WE PLEASE TALK SOMETIME

    OK THANKS BYE
  • hilly on August 4
    i like this shitty michigan life. it is, in majority, very vulgar and crude.
  • ilovebex on July 7
    can we play today and will you help me remember everything i know is true?
  • Colossal Squid on June 19
    mega prolific
  • xcutiepie16 on May 18
    hey wadup!?
  • acari27 on May 12
    all these fucking birds.

    I feel like im in a hitchcock film.
  • Reanna Eryn : Hey! on March 20
    Thank you so much for the beautiful comment you left on my poem. It was very intresting to read. I hope we can be friends in the near future. Much love to you and have a great day!
  • chasing rainbows on March 19
    thank you for the beautiful words sweetheart (: ♥
  • Aussie Gypsy on March 19
    Thank you so much for the brilliant comment you left on alcohol may kill (don't tempt me) it was raw and honest and I appreciate your time to comment so thoroughly
  • MaskedMoose on March 13
    yer from michigan, I AM TOO
  • fellow worker on February 12
    i honestly don't know how you can write so much. you are very talented but how do you keep doing it all the time? you must have so much going on upstairs. and you know what it is that goes on. i can tell you, i don't know what goes on in my upstairs or if it's much at all. I am happy that you can write so much tho. i think it is good for you to write it.
  • bebeluver : Birds on January 9
    The birds need color
  • bebeluver : whatever helps you relate on January 9
    Sometimes we need comfort, a ghetto is a poor area usually, comfort can be anywhere though, some people live there and they are happy
  • bebeluver : nice background on January 9
    The birds are cute
  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX on January 4
    Awe. I love your background such cute little birdies seems like someone drew them did you?
  • acoustical on December 20, 2008
    background ftw.

    it's so cute. i love birds.
  • ilovebex : waik up on December 15, 2008
    hi we're going to failmart to return cans and get things to make good times sweatshirts i decided so get up get up i love you my car is probably frozen shut but whatever the sun sets in an hour wake up!
  • Short but cute on November 17, 2008
    hi how are you?
  • photoretinas on November 17, 2008
    D
    thanks for comment
    idk how to do much on here thus far but i am reading
    and you are brilliant
    so there.
  • Fashionista : hey on November 16, 2008
    Hey plz take a moment & comment my poems well more so (songs) I really would like your opinion plz & thankx
  • acoustical on November 10, 2008
    dude i'm reading factotum.
    fucked UP
  • chasing rainbows on November 8, 2008
    oh my Jim Morrison, I had forgotten how amazing your work is. <33
  • hilly on October 31, 2008
    i'm reading bukowski right now, i love that man. and why the fuck did i stop reading your work!
  • aparnaagarwal on October 19, 2008
    And don't worry about your lineage
    poetic or natural. The Sun shines on
    the jungle, you know, on the tundra
    the sea, the ghetto. Wherever you were
    I knew it and saw you moving. I was waiting
    for you to get to work.



    - frank o'hara



    some people never go crazy.
    me, sometimes I'll lie down behind the couch
    for 3 or 4 days.
    they'll find me there.
    it's Cherub, they'll say, and
    they pour wine down my throat
    rub my chest
    sprinkle me with oils.

    then, I'll rise with a roar,
    rant, rage -
    curse them and the universe
    as I send them scattering over the
    lawn.
    I'll feel much better,
    sit down to toast and eggs,
    hum a little tune,
    suddenly become as lovable as a
    pink
    overfed whale.

    some people never go crazy.
    what truly horrible lives
    they must lead.



    - charles bukowski


    They won't or if they do
    it won't be because
    of a promise
    in a poem.

    So much of poetry depends
    on keeping legs crossed
    at the right moment
    but whether at my knee
    or your neck
    that is the question.


  • aparnaagarwal on October 19, 2008
    And don't worry about your lineage
    poetic or natural. The Sun shines on
    the jungle, you know, on the tundra
    the sea, the ghetto. Wherever you were
    I knew it and saw you moving. I was waiting
    for you to get to work.



    - frank o'hara



    some people never go crazy.
    me, sometimes I'll lie down behind the couch
    for 3 or 4 days.
    they'll find me there.
    it's Cherub, they'll say, and
    they pour wine down my throat
    rub my chest
    sprinkle me with oils.

    then, I'll rise with a roar,
    rant, rage -
    curse them and the universe
    as I send them scattering over the
    lawn.
    I'll feel much better,
    sit down to toast and eggs,
    hum a little tune,
    suddenly become as lovable as a
    pink
    overfed whale.

    some people never go crazy.
    what truly horrible lives
    they must lead.



    - charles bukowski


    They won't or if they do
    it won't be because
    of a promise
    in a poem.

    So much of poetry depends
    on keeping legs crossed
    at the right moment
    but whether at my knee
    or your neck
    that is the question.


  • aparnaagarwal on October 19, 2008
    And don't worry about your lineage
    poetic or natural. The Sun shines on
    the jungle, you know, on the tundra
    the sea, the ghetto. Wherever you were
    I knew it and saw you moving. I was waiting
    for you to get to work.



    - frank o'hara



    some people never go crazy.
    me, sometimes I'll lie down behind the couch
    for 3 or 4 days.
    they'll find me there.
    it's Cherub, they'll say, and
    they pour wine down my throat
    rub my chest
    sprinkle me with oils.

    then, I'll rise with a roar,
    rant, rage -
    curse them and the universe
    as I send them scattering over the
    lawn.
    I'll feel much better,
    sit down to toast and eggs,
    hum a little tune,
    suddenly become as lovable as a
    pink
    overfed whale.

    some people never go crazy.
    what truly horrible lives
    they must lead.



    - charles bukowski


    They won't or if they do
    it won't be because
    of a promise
    in a poem.

    So much of poetry depends
    on keeping legs crossed
    at the right moment
    but whether at my knee
    or your neck
    that is the question.


  • vaguelyfamiliar on October 17, 2008
    Jesus Christ, I heard you read, and you're bloody brilliant.

    I should cough awkwardly now, and say something sarcastic, but I just can't bring myself to do it.

    Thank you.
  • krystal balllll on October 13, 2008
    wow...your background kicks ass.
  • chasing rainbows on September 28, 2008
    I heart your background. :]
  • Shades of Pale : MICHIGAN! on September 9, 2008
    i live in Michigan too i hate it. but your name is sweetness.
  • Sameo : Writer's block on August 30, 2008
    that's what i'm experiencing right now...........
    Help out............
    i'm on facebook.........tooo..........
  • vertigo beat on August 27, 2008
    bananas
  • aeroplane on August 27, 2008
    hi. :]

    I like your name.
  • iverbthenoun on August 21, 2008
    indeed and that is sad.

    i wish i didn't read that... *shudders*
  • iverbthenoun on August 21, 2008
    ewwwwwwwwwwww arsenal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *vomits*

    man utd rocketh!
  • Til the Day I Die : lol on August 1, 2008
    what's up?
  • hilly on August 1, 2008
    i listened to aftershock four times.
  • xrain dancerx on July 10, 2008
    well um wow. i read 3 of ur poems. i loved them. but i didnt comment cause im trying to save my points, sorry. but really ur great.
  • alicesparadigm : hey there on July 6, 2008
    Hey unbroken, just droppin' by to say hello. this is Courtney, by the way.
  • She Stole My Voice on July 5, 2008
    Ah.
    I'm listening to your recordings.
    They're fabulous.
    Can I download them or something like that?
  • She Stole My Voice on July 5, 2008
    Hmm. Where can I find your recordings?
  • She Stole My Voice on July 5, 2008
    "A Cup of Tea

    Nan-in, a Japanese master during the Meiji era (1868-1912), received a university professor who came to inquire about Zen.

    Nan-in served tea. He poured his visitor's cup full, and then kept on pouring.

    The professor watched the overflow until he no longer could restrain himself. "It is overfull. No more will go in!"

    "Like this cup," Nan-in said, "you are full of your own opinions and speculations. How can I show you Zen unless you first empty your cup?""


    Wow.
    Amazing.
    I'm so stealing this from you =]
    I hope you're okay and everything is fabulous for you ♥
  • Miss Faith on July 5, 2008
    I love hearing your poems read!

    lovely voice my dear.
  • Going Forever on July 5, 2008
    hey...just dropping in to look at your page...i like your background
  • PoeticSymphony on June 19, 2008
    really talented poet.
    xx
  • Avani on June 8, 2008
    i would love to let you know which ones i think should be published... but it would only be my opinion, nothing more, and i tend to think everything you write is book-worthy.
    i'll definitely give you my thoughts on it
  • RawrSmileBabyPlz on June 7, 2008
    hellos
  • Shadow Darkstar on June 7, 2008
    Just dropping by to check the page out. The name kinda intrigued me. Have a good day, fellow poet.
  • Miss Faith on May 15, 2008
    hello friend!

    how are you?
  • Avani on April 16, 2008
    you have something. the way you write draws people to you, and what i mean by that is you're not just another poet here, you're different. your poetry's real. from the guts. and from the heart. i admire that - and i beg you to never let it go.

    I also beg you to write a book, because I'm dying to have a copy of your writing on my shelves.
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