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  • liveinthesky on October 11, 2005
    actually...thank you for your comment but the poem did rhyme...on the first stanza the pattern was abab then after that every stanza was aabb...
  • SoleDiavolo on October 27, 2004
    yes! i remembered ur other name! dude..its been a while... thought i'd say hey hun...so yea....hope ur fine. ciao.

    ~Sun
  • trustjab on June 23, 2004
    listen bitch...
    you fucked up talkin about carmen
    you really fucked up talkin about my mom..
    I think I'mma have to take a trip to Burlington
    so me and Carmen can go get our pictures taken at the mall
    then we'll get a motel at the Nurdip.
    Yeah that sounds fun...
    And what else, I don't care what you say about her
    why? Because Carmen is more than twice the woman you'll ever be
    Stephanie. and you and I both know that that's the truth.
    She never touched crack in her life.
    You used to shoot up w/Joe.
    she wanted me since i've known her...
    that's a long long time ago... over 2 years ago...
    I wanted her since I first saw her but was
    afraid of being rejected plus she treated
    everyone like shit, so
    I took what I could get, a fat bitch for pussy
    yes you. even if you ain't fat, you're still a slut, wait
    no a whore, wait, a hoe, and a BITCH!
    go suck a dick, it's something you're used to.
  • Precious on February 28, 2004
    First off. You heard wrong.
    I am not still a fat ass bitch.
    I only stayed fat so you would leave me.
    You nasty ass bastard.
    How are you gonna tell me to get over you and you are the that be calling my house.
    Yeah my family told me.
    So you still a bum ass nigga?
    Do you take showers?
    Do you have a job?
    You better leave me alone before.
    Before I come and beat you and your crack headed ass girl up.
    I am not playing with you.
    You bitch ass mother fucker.
    So fuck you and your mother fucking mama.


    I hope you die,
    Stephanie
  • truembrace on May 8, 2003
    Hi there Josiah!
    Well, I wanted to thank you for reading my post earlier today... Ya know, the contemplative lil diddy about life. Anyhow, I was hoping to read some of your cover page, but found it a bit hard with a font colored of dusk put on a black canvas of sorts. The whites are easy to note on this page.. but the left side is a bit hard to discern the words from the backdrop. Again, thanks a million for reading my stuff!
  • on April 5, 2003
    hello there josiah... dropping by to thankyou for reading my works... i do have more angst than nihilistic future... i can give you a list of those if you ever want to read them... its not many though, i post those rarely to break up all my 'romantic' style of poetry to give it that more well rounded approuch... anyways i babble thanx again and i will be stopping by again
  • GangstaPoet on April 4, 2003
    Aw hellz nah
    nigga are you on da real
    Cuz raght now
    The way i feel
    is that you just be frontin
    i suggest you start a runnin
    from my gat mack
    Cuz yo shit be whack
    so step aside
    and watch me pull up and ride
    this blang blang all up in here
    i'm on da real sissy bitch
    ya hear
  • Canon on March 29, 2003
    i beeen readin your stuff, i think its cool how you can write about happy stuff through rhymes and poems and then write evil shit too through both rhymes and poems, i need to work on that....keep it up..
  • Jessesgurl on March 13, 2003
    I just gotta tell ya, you got some strong shit in here real good too.


    Jesse
  • alisha-lynne on November 25, 2002
    hey i will read them , but im not promising to read and comment on all of them.
    ~alisha~
  • on November 14, 2002
    Thank you very much for pointing out my spelling error.... lol
    i am an awful speller..usually i dont bother to fix them..but i actually did take the time to fix....smiled LOL
    omg...ha..im so stupid..
    i will be going now..
    much love..
    JAG
  • trustjab on May 9, 2002
    I don't know.... I haven't been on much, that's why I haven't been adding poems here and there
  • Slekky on January 30, 2002
    Hi Josiah, why nothing new for awhile?
  • trustjab on January 23, 2002
    but I changed it again
  • trustjab on January 11, 2002
    I know that... I like the way my background is
  • sheshe143 on January 11, 2002
    hey josiah,
    i just wanted to tell you that you can change the background on your author's page, i just found dat out today, go to edit and it'll say change apperance...kewL dOOd!! =D
  • CRaZyDiAmOnD on January 5, 2002
    'If you can think and not make thoughts your aim, you can meet triumph and disaster and treat these two imposters the same.'
    that's beautiful- and such truth!!! thanx that made me think =)
  • trustjab on January 5, 2002
    I always look for some type of rhyme scheme. I mean poems don't have to rhyme, they just sound good if they do. I like your poetry too. Even though you don't got many poems. I think your next one will be good.
  • ambersred on January 4, 2002
    Hello josiah, thanks again for reading. On my first poem 'Shadows Of Love', I try not to let myself rhyme w/ every other sentence. That is why my (rhyme scheme) plays out in the
    fashiion it does.
  • ambersred on January 4, 2002
    Thank for reading i wanna here feed back.. I like your work, read alot of it so far lol.
  • Rage Of The Machine on December 24, 2001
    Have a merry Christmas and happy New Year (or at least a less-than-sober one so you can forget it all :p) my friend. And keep up with the excellent writing...We want more! We want more!

    NWC
  • on December 6, 2001
    I read some of your poems but I didn't rate them. You have a lot of anger. Some seems misdirected at those who give your poems low ratings. I would watch that. People take offense to a critic of their critique. If I were you, I wouldn't ask for a critical review of your work unless you are really ready for the reality of how people feel about your writing. Don't give up. You are good but not everyone will like your tone or your rhyme scheme.
    Just some friendly advice.
  • on December 4, 2001
    hey josiah ... thanks for commenting on my poem ... i read some of yours too ... i suspect you hide a very insightful and sensitive soul behind the tough exterior ... ;).
  • sheshe143 on December 1, 2001
    yes my poem 'take me away' is a haiku, i just started writing them...wow!! but thanx for your comment
  • Canon on November 27, 2001
    'freestyle hip hop' was freestyle because i have the type and talk program, a lot of the words were messed up after i did it but i re-spelled them
  • sheshe143 on November 26, 2001
    callin me a youngin--he he he!!
  • Desdemona on November 20, 2001
    i agree with slekky. You are a very great writer. I hope you continue posting. You express yourself well.. great job.. Lee
  • Slekky on November 20, 2001
    Hey, Josiah, can't believe no one's signed your author page yet! Anyway, good work on expressing your thoughts and getting your message out. Keep it up!
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