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massacre on November 2, 2006

Hey, I just commented on a few of your poems, so I thought I'd leave you a comment. As I said a few times before. I read your post in the forum about honest opinions on peoples poetry. It's a really great idea. I think It's going to help a lot of people, a lo. Lolzz. I don't know why, but yeah, I just feel that the last lines of your poems let them down a bit. I personally like it to be a.... Dead end. Like.... It's the end of something. I just don't feel like thats happening when I read yours. I really hope that that helps. You are a brilliant writter though. And I enjoyed reading your poems. I hope to hear from you soon with some advice on mine! xx
Hiatus on September 11, 2006

I wish you still wrote.

I don't even remember how you used to write.

I am very different now. I would not agree with what I wrote to you earlier, anymore. I don't even think I agreed with it then. I think it's bullshit. I think self-harm is a crock, and that people do it because they can't accept their own fallacies and so they create problems outside themselves to alert other people to the disease inside. But then it backfires because as much pain as they are in- people love to wallow in pity.

Write more, and you will become a better person.
translucent on January 8, 2006

wow, if you used masochism and more for a contest name I'd feel very special
-translucent
on April 21, 2005

i don't come on this site as much as i used to, or should, but i only just read your comment, and thanks very much, it's greatly appreciated...your honesty that is. Vent
translucent on October 8, 2004

Any time! Keep up the good writing!
leander on October 8, 2004

Hi there

Just want to say thank you for the nice comment you've given on my poem 'True nature'

Leander
Hiatus on September 23, 2004

I understand that, I really do. And it's not something you just stop telling yourself. It's not something that will just go away. It's something that needs to be learned. You have to be angry enough and cut yourself and then know that no matter how much you bleed on the outside, on the inside, your heart is still bleeding because by acting out in that way, you make the pain permanent. You accept what is being done to you, and by cutting you etch it into yourself. I don't know if that helps, I don't even know if it makes sense. But the cutting makes it matter. The cutting makes it harder to tell yourself to stop. And pill popping is worse, because the more you do it, the more you sort of lean on it as a way out. And it isn't a way out, cause when the high wears off, you still have to face everything, and it's generally worse when you do.
translucent on September 22, 2004

I am your typical confused teen. I don't know what to believe. Most of the time I totally and completely know that those things don't help, but when it's actually the times I do it, everything is twisted around and all I can think about is how much I need to get out, or get my brain out. I don't know how to change my thoughts at those times.
Hiatus on September 21, 2004

I just got to your page and already I'm going to yell at you about Popping and Cutting. This is sad. I meant to read and critique your things. But popping and cutting are bad. I od'ed (seriously) on ibphrophen. I seriously poisioned my liver. I spent the night throwing up and the next week eating very small amounts of things because I wasn't sure if I could keep them down. Cutting doesn't solve anything. It just gives you a momentary release. The one thing I learned by overdosing that one time, though, was that sometimes it's better to spend the night throwing up then spend the next week blaming yourself for failures that aren't yours.
I shouldn't just spew this out because I don't know you, but I can't help it. I'm not saying it isn't your choice to pop and cut, what I'm saying is that you wake up and stop telling yourself that those things help, because they don't. They really don't.
angelscreams on July 30, 2004

hey, thanks so much for your comments! they were really helpful, and it was so nice of you to go through them. i havnt had the chance to fix them just now cos im about to go to bed,but i definately will, and ill check out ur poems tomorrow hey, also i reckon ud like 'unburdened'. but anyways, got to go to bed
xox ali
Isi on July 30, 2004

Hi and welcome to the group! I'll have a look at some of your stuff as soon as I have the time (got about five minutes 'till work... )

Enjoy the group, group im it if there's anything in particular you want comments on, I'd say put it on the reading list as well, but some seem to forget that we have one

Isi
MysticalMelindy on July 29, 2004

Heeheehee, reading your author page was almost like reading the story of my life, how creepy is that? Alright, I'm going to go read your poetry now!
translucent on July 17, 2004

please do
MissHapps on July 16, 2004

Nice nice nice... Mind if I dive right on in?!?

Deena
Slekky on June 19, 2004

Hey, I agree with what you said here. I'm in love with my children, in a completely maternal way -- but I feel a deeper love for them than I ever have for a man.
PerplexedMinor on June 17, 2004

Oh I love the Princess Bride! Both the book and movie.
----michael---- on May 27, 2004

thank you for awarding me 1st place. I am very honoured. Wont you enter my 1st contest???
----michael---- on May 25, 2004

thank ou for your lovely comments, I am at work at the moment but I will add you to my backlist of poets to read. have a lovely day, Michael.xxx
kyosephiroth on May 13, 2004

WHOA......you are a wicked awesome poet.....Im am goggling on your works...........nice to meet you by the way.
satuRn on May 12, 2004

hello translucent. your favorite book is the princess bride and you are, therefore, my hero. nope, just wanted to randomly say hi and also say that the princess bride is awesome and you are my hero. i think i pretty much covered all of that so i'm out... //saturn
anguish on April 24, 2004

hey...why thank me...u wrote the poem...i just read it...lol...anyway...i thought ur poem was vary good...laterz...Dave
translucent on April 18, 2004

!! yay!! That's the nicest comment I've ever gotten! Thanks so much!! Wow, I feel so special! Yay, someone likes my stuff!

Ya, Canada kicks ass!!!

Thanks for reading my stuff, too, that's awesome
LadyLover on April 18, 2004

First off Canada ROCKS! Secondly I LOVE YOUR POETRY. You have an awsome talent and keep it up. I like how you said you werent suicidal, that was a goos thing to say because some people can just read your poems and say oh well shes suicidal and bla bla bla. You are very talented.
stay existential!!!
love hateablecoco110
blackxbutterfly on April 15, 2004

PLEASE AND PREWRITES. i have a poem on your contest that is a prewrite. it won't win but i would prefer to not be disqualified (can't spell). i'm about to read some of your poems because i saw that u had a lot of trophies so they probably are great. not great a comments just o warn u. well have to go. GAL
agent99 on April 8, 2004

well then thank you very much!haha
i have to get off line now but i will read soem of your stuff soon! im sure its very good!
translucent on April 8, 2004

hehe, ya I really meant it
agent99 on April 8, 2004

wow! that was a very very VERY nice compliment on my poem ARGUMENT. if you really mean it THANK YOU VERY VERY VERY MUCH!wow!
so-called-girl on April 6, 2004

Yeah, good point. If i'm numb then I can't see or feel the good things that happen. I'll just let it go and hope it gets better. that's all i can do really. THanx for the support.
translucent on March 28, 2004

Yay, I feel special now! Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
NamelessPyre on March 28, 2004

Thank you so much Translucent for the points. I really enjoyed the contest you hosted and I hope to see your poetry soon. Thanks again.
on March 25, 2004

Good! Let me know how you like it...or if you have any questions after you get it...
translucent on March 25, 2004

awesome, thanks! I'll check that out
on March 25, 2004

It sounds like you like to challenge yourself when you write. That's great! I think you might like a book called "The Practice of Poetry" edited by Robin Behn and Chase Twitchell (a couple of woman poets!). It has 92 exercises (or ideas) for getting poems started. Check it out, I think you'll be glad you did!
translucent on March 23, 2004

Yes, you do. But it's a secret that this is me. Only Liam knows its me so far. *Welcome to the secret me*
BlueWorlds on March 23, 2004

thanks for the kind comments.
(p.s. Do I know you in real life? Cause Liam has been commenting on your stuff.....just wondering.)
WindUpEnigma on March 18, 2004

Okay, contest time!! Have fun...I don't think I'll enter I never win the stupid things...Good luck to everybody else though!!
sanity on March 18, 2004

You know you can always critque my work anytime, I love comments, negative or positive, doesn't worry me I think it helps me grow as a poet.......Take care and keep writing.....You have a lovely talent.......

Sanity.
Cheshire Cat on March 18, 2004

good stuff i hope this contest works out well for you
translucent on March 18, 2004

uhh, let's see... here's a mini-contest all for you.
1. write a poem about your favourite inanimate object/clothing
2. write about what the voices tell you to do...that's right, the voices...and why or why not you listen to them
3. write about the best cloud you've ever seen
4. write about how you feel about your family as a whole, and/or what you'd change
5. write about what you would take back if you could erase one thing you did in your life that you regret.

Alright, there's my ideas, brought on by late night and lots of coffee! IM me if you use one of these, it'll make my day.
That goes for anyone else out there too, feel free to use these, they would be in a contest if I had the points, so use them!

Also, you hav been added 2 my MSN, so I'm the new person that you don't know who it is.
WindUpEnigma on March 18, 2004

Oh, and I need an idea for more poetry, so challenge me!
WindUpEnigma on March 18, 2004

Yes...you do sound a lot like me ...but more like me about three years ago, but w/ the maturity I have now--what little I DO have newayz ...but yeah...I used to think I would never smoke, or have premarital sex, and that I would always have complete faith in God...my life is a series of failures, what can I say? Everything changes, I guess...
Hmm...a question...can't think of one right now. I will later though...and I have MSN too...yshyk_nxea@hotmail.com if you want to talk sometime.
lilworldruler on March 17, 2004

lol.... i've heard that song before its really funny
Kellysharmonica on March 11, 2004

Nice author page, you sound alot like me Just add fishnets and guitars to it and you'd be my twin. Though I do have a black eyeliner fetish.
translucent on March 1, 2004

hehe johnny depp rocks!
velvet on March 1, 2004

i would be invisible because i could go to johnny depps change room and watch the show... oh yea!
translucent on February 29, 2004

ummm... I think I would either have the power to become invisible or read people's minds, because then I would be able to find out why tf some people do what they do, or the power to fly because that would be so cool!
velvet on February 28, 2004

if you could have any power what would it be?
translucent on February 25, 2004

I own 5 pairs of socks that are actually worth counting, 4 that are not, 4 that I never wear, and if i'm really desparate, there are always a pair of communal family socks floating around my house, but eww, no thanks! And when I get sum money, I am going to get myself some new socks, yay!
Rainna on February 25, 2004

Neat idea about that pants. Maybe I'll try something like that but not on my pants though. Me mum would freak! As to which day of the week to get rid of, I think I would get rid of Thursday. You've gone through Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday already..Who wants to go through ONE MORE day just to get to Friday!? Not me! So I vote to X out Thursday ~Rainna~
isa on February 25, 2004

How many pairs of socks do you own?

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