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by the way, Donnie Dark = Awesome
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i LOVE that Stars quote!!! aaaa! (:
-your ex-lover is dead- < amazing song. (:
wwwoooottt!
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SUPERMAN IS NOT DEAD!!!!!!!!!!
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i've dabbled a bit into a poem of yours here, and while i'm a bit commented out at the moment i wanted to say that i'm intrigued and adding you to my favorites list so that i remember to come back to you, and read.
j
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we should do a contest together : ).
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i really just need to talk to someone-and you're not on...but that's okay.
do you have any idea what i'll be working this coming weekend. barb said she'd call-and hasn't, but she probably will in the next day or so-but i was just curious.
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hooray for the normal version of AP 
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come back to high school. please?
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allpoetry.com/Contest/2159931
you should enter. all the cool kids are doing it
it's abby (more like war) and I's contest, so you should see if you can come up with something.
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Hey,
Don't know if you're on here much anymore-but I guess it's okay if you don't read this for a while.
..it was nice seeing you at Katie's grad party today. I miss you guys, a lot-but I suppose there's nothing I can really do about that.
I guess that I just wanted to thank you for everything that you've done for me in the past two years. For how much you've really helped me to grow up. you wrote that you were glad you've been around to see me grow as both a person and as a writer...but I just want you to understand that you really helped me as I somehow grew in both of those ways...
I was talking with somebody about the seniors graduating, and it was kind of funny-because I was talking about how I felt like I was losing a brother or something. (They then pointed out to me that my real brother was, indeed graduating), but I feel like in a way you've sort of played that part in my life since I've gotten to know you, and I really, honestly appreciate that. I'm really worried that once next year starts, that you'll be gone-and I won't actually get to see you anymore, but I really don't want that to happen if it doesn't have to. I don't think that I really have much else to say; except to thank you again for being someone who was there to give a shit when no one else was there. I probably won't see you again before I leave. I'll be gone for three weeks...but hopefully I'll see you at some point during the rest of the summer/next year and such.
Amanda Edited on Jun 22 because ''.
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Hey Andrew
I just thought IŽd stop by with the few internet minutes I have remaining to say hola from Mexico!!  I am currently sitting in an internet cafe in Peurto Vallarta
I hope youŽre doing well!
(By the way - do you graduate this year?)
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Good poem, although the subject is by now ancient. We all need to make things right with our loved ones especially during breaks. Catch sight of my poem, 'REVENGE' on poetrypoem.com/intone to understand my comment.
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A very happy (though belated) Valentines Day to you as well my dear!
Hope all is well,
~Andrew
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Thank you so much!!
Wow...yes that's enough to keep my busy for a while, that's for sure! And the sad but wonderful thing is that of them all, I've only heard Our Lady Peace and Gary Jules' "Mad World" because I can play it on the piano lol.
I've been told I live under a rock. What can I say.  Thank you

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(And even though I'm not a reliable commenter, I always read and always enjoy  )
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Well, I'm a few days late, I'm sorry-
But, erm...Merry Christmas!!
Hope it was all you'd hoped for,
and happy holidays, for what's left of them
and happy new year
I hope 2006 brings you all that you deserve
Take care Andrew, it's nice to see you around here again

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Hey,
Haven't really talked to you in a bit, so I thought I'd drop by and see how you were doing.  Hope things are going good for you

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is that Darko in the background?
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In less words, yes, my name does come from the song by Our Lady Peace. In more words, it is also the title for a novel I have off and on worked with for three years or so...
~Andrew
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Nice name, was wondering whether it came from the Our Lady Peace song titled 'Superman's Dead' lol. And now that I've puzzled over that, time to read some of your poetry 
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hahahah. your comment was cruel but very very true! i'll do my best to work on that. i have to admit that english was my worst subject kind of makes u wonder why i'm writing poems. haha but thanx.
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ok thank u never mind u should read some of my poems
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Seventeen... but I know no Charlie... She's just a character.
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hey how old are u? i know a charlie and i just want to know if thats u
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lol yeah for some ODD reason i didnt really think u were ninety seven... i thought maybe u were twelve... but when i saw ur poetry i realized u had to be older... lol...
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ha, I'm not actually 97... just 17... but what better than to lie and just say 'adult' than to make my age my favorite number!
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you are the first ninety seven year old i have encountered that uses a computer!
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hello there andrew, i thank you for your helpful suggestions and comments. you've been nothing but helpful from the beginning. 
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I was just going through all of my bookmarks, and guess what??!!
7 of 13 are yours.
Just thought I'd share that with you. 
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I have another contest going if you are interested 
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Ok, I've decided you're really cool... good bands, good poems, AND Donnie Darko!! (best movie ever). Check out some of my stuff sometime, I just started a new account on here so I only have 4 poems but I could use some critique!!! I'll definitely check out more of your stuff... and sounds like I was right about the Our Lady Peace.
Btw, where did the idea for "hot 9th grader" come from??The title, I mean...
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beacuase i could not stop for death he kindly stopped for me, woo what a good poem! im gonna read more of your stuff now, youve caught my attention! plus gotta love the donnie darko background
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Oh dear, I meant Easter lol

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Hey!!
Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Eater!!
Mmm, chocolate......
So you're in Utah for now? Well, have a good time!!

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You should try to expand on that little bit on your page, there  (the 3-lined poem I mean lol)
Future masterpiece...

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i like the poem on the page, it's really good. it makes me sad inside
4EVER BEIN ME,
WLA
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hmmmm...yes i know...  (kinda)
the thing about your real name...wow...it's too long a story...
and seriously...how do they make the trophies so shiny when they're like cyber-trophies???
ohhhh...now i have to go check out Our Lady Peace...
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Supermans Dead is a song by Our Lady Peace... I like the reference of it... it says that I can't be the hero anymore... that I'm not that strong... you know?
Why does my real name make you sad?!?
And I know, my trophy collection keeps growing... I don't know what to think of that, I don't see myself as all that good... but whatever I'm happy with em!
Thanks for taking the time to leave the comments on my work and my page!!!
~Andrew
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hmm.....
why is superman dead????
who killed him????
you ['re {real} name] make me sad...grrrr all these memories...
anyway...
you have so many trophies...the gold ones are making my head hurt... 
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Thank you so much for your kind comment on my piece. It really made my day
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so she has let me know... funny how that works I guess!
~Andrew
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Oh my gosh, your name, it totaly rings a bell to me, like my friends weird relationship. wow...
~ShiningGreyStar~
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Oh my my, I think you must share with me this story of irony... Very, very interesting message to leave, it makes me happy!
You're welcome, and please do tell!
~Andrew
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I was just looking over AP and I saw ur name...wow u have no idea how ironic ur name is to me. both supermansdead and ur real name. its a bit creepy. but really awesome. kind of a sign...lol.
well thanks for what u dont know uve done
<3
laraine
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Yea, 4AM is awesome  I love Happiness is not a fish you can catch... especially Annie and Blister. I haven't heard Julia though, i might have read the lyrics i dunno... Spiritual Machines is ok... no my favorite but i like Made to Heal the best  Do i love OLP....
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