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  • RemovedName on July 24
    Hey, i stopped by your page after the wonderous comment you left me, i hate ALL disney people, i like coke better than pepsi,
    Im an atheist, and i could kill someone and not feel bad about it, and get away with it
    Well just wanted to sign, your an amazing poet and i hope someone brings happyness to you because no one should feel that way.
    Stay twisteed
    -Cody
  • phillyhottpockets : almost on July 19
    wow almost happy huh well lets hope you can get the rest of the way there if you need any help im open for venting
  • xxSerendipityxx on July 11
    You are a very talented writer! And on your page are some really great quotes. I also hate the jonas brothers, zac efron and hannah montana. Im also addicted to coke (the drink ) I don't care if your athesist it is your life and is your choice whether you believe in god or not. People who judge others on there religion are just plain ridiculous. Anyways sorry for the ramble. Instant fav!
  • phillyhottpockets on June 23
    ya i doubt your a waste of time no person is ive met people like that before things can get better but only if you let people help you and you never you may help them too
  • Papabear 4 Rosered : Thanks 4 ur kind thoughts on June 18
    I'm not doing well and it's impossible 2 go on w/o SOME support.
  • Done but Not Gone on June 6
    Argue and win, huh...Do not!

    lolz. I like to argue too! AND I'm extremely open! We should be friends!
  • shaun on June 5
    Life beyond Agony

    In the corner of my mind lurk shadows of turmoil.
    Intercepted is my subconscious by repetitive mockery.
    Waiting for answers from the karma that haunts my will to succeed,
    I feel alone, empty, enslaved to a tiny box.
    As I kneel, whispers taunt at my sanity.
    The somber glow of my thoughts lead me to a place dark and vacant.
    Cold steel plunged into my heart releasing the agony I have carried all of these years.
    Face down in a pool of blood, my eyes blink continuously cleansing a transparent vision into the next life.
    Fires ablaze, crowds of souls dancing amidst, subliminal messages urge me to come forth.
    The sound of drums fills my ears.
    There are no screams here, no burdens, no laughing, nor cries.
    Just the rhythmic pattern so grooving the body moves without order.
    As I approach the middle, a sea of souls identical to my own, I hear a voice for the first time.
    Faint yet sharp and defining came its command.
    “Dance my servant, dance in praise.
    For I will have the glory on this day, a new soul has entered my domain and forever will it remain.
    Dance new soul, dance like you have no control.”
    So without my care, without my pain, without any question and without my shame,
    I danced!

  • xCinnamonSwirl on July 19, 2007
    Hey sweet, added you as a favourite.
    =]
    xx
  • xCinnamonSwirl on July 18, 2007
    I like your profile.
    And don't worry about being called short...I'm short too ;-]
    But I love it ^_^
    xx
    I'm going to take a peek at your writing, now.
    xx
  • Shadowed-By-Her-Past on July 15, 2007
    Thanks for all the comments you have left me on my poems. You are a talented writer and I really like your poems, they have so much emotion an dfeeling i nthem and you can relate to them. I haven't read the mall yet, but I will read the rest tomorrow. xXx
  • murphy07 : Hey on July 13, 2007
    your poems are awesome i fell so much emotion from them and i can tell every felling you had when you wrote them i can also relate i love your writing its just so ... GOOD !!
  • raina6 on June 27, 2007
    Hi, I would just like to say your that poems are fantastic and I think you have an amazing talent. If you are writing like this at 13 yrs old, (just amazing) I believe you could have a very possible future in this field. Excellent writing!!
  • SwimForBetterDays. on August 27, 2006
    Wow you really are a great writer. Very well written pieces. Everything ties up well. Great job!!
  • SignoraDiDispiacere on August 12, 2006
    Hi and welcome to AP ^_^ i've read all your pieces that you have up, and they are nicely done. you are a good writer, and i hope to see more of your work. Writting isn't always easy for people, but practise does make perfect hope to see more from you in the future.

    Best wishes,
    -=- Amber (PandemoniumPrincess)-=-
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