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  • spacewench on July 8, 2006
    Thanks. It was different enough for me.
  • mumma on July 8, 2006
    spacewench ..i love your name...
  • Shirley Shaw on July 5, 2006
    Dear spacewench; Thank you,so very much. I agree,and as I tld., this particular party,if they didn't like my poetry,and it bothered them,that much,then why are they reading it?????I 'appreciate' that,and I am getting ready to read,some of your 'wonderful poems'...'God Bless'..Love,your friend,Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo. 64133........
  • Endeavor on May 26, 2006
    Will you read, "Never Tell".. please
  • itllnever on April 15, 2006
    OK, I will explain using this sonnet. It's really very simple:
    You look @ the last words in each line to determine what a poem is using abab...etc. Here I have
    through - (a) this one would start it now listen to the sounds!
    of - b
    knew - (a)
    love - b
    See the 1st and 3rd lines rhyme as (a & a)
    and the 2nd and 4th rhyme as (b & b . So the first stanza is abab!

    So now you will look at this sonnet as: abab cdcd efef gg
    (notice the letters change as the rhyming words change.)
    GET IT?

    © Wind-Swept Tears (Shakespearian Sonnet #11)

    Written in Iambic Octameter.

    Translucent bottled prisms through a
    these eyes do find confessions of, b
    pursuing guilty minds we knew a
    and be renewed a tattered love. b

    Because our dreams found at this time c
    a Tragedy of lost desire, d
    the wind-swept tears are really mine c
    and maybe then restart the fire. d

    As if it’s stolen once by thieves e
    was then a hope for future bliss, f
    I know that she sometimes believes e
    in such a wondrous love as this. f

    Those wind-swept tears that come this way, g
    are found to then just drift away. g

    Edited on Apr 15, 9:09 because 'revise w/o smiley faces'.
  • The Cza on March 28, 2006
    good poems cuzz get at me peace
  • Sins on March 2, 2006
    it's really just I haven't read any of your newer stuff.
  • Grenade Jumper on February 12, 2006
    thanks again!!! you're quite an amazing writer yourself.
  • Grenade Jumper on February 10, 2006
    thank you so much! any compliment is a huge compliment to me.
    <3
  • martinezjjoe on December 31, 2005
    no problem
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