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Emmerson on January 16, 2005

A Fairytale For A Princess
by Aliana on Mar 07, 2003

It was a night cold and still.
The moon had stopped moving
Through the clouds;
The stars held their breath,
As the princess whispered her vow.

I know you angels of heaven,
Look down upon me in good grace.
I stand here before you
Naked of pride;
Blessed by the wisdom you shine
Upon my face.

I vow with the mornings rise
To stand tall and be strong.
To put back into my heart
The wisdom of your song.
I had all but forgotten,
What had brought me here to this spot.
The trials and tribulations of life,
Had caused my heart to all but stop.

I do not wish for charming,
For charming is just that.
To please or delight another,
Through incantations often flat.
I beg not for the gift of love,
But for my love to be a gift.
To shine light into the darkness of another,
Whom otherwise, may not of ever felt
The magic of this soulful gift.

To live with passion my childhood beliefs;
Let them not forsake.
Even when age has creased my brow;
Let girlishness, giggle
At past mistakes.

A fairytale for this princess
Does not end with once upon a time.
It begins with happily ever after;
She will be,
From this very precious,
Whispered, heartfelt cry.

Found it .... enjoy
Lurie on September 3, 2004

*Hey girl!!! Thanks for reading me lil poem!!!! You made me smile today, when i saw you visited me again. My time is so scarce obnline anymore. I do love ya!!!! ~ Laura
persephone grey on June 5, 2004

hey sweetie i recommended you for a poetry contest here because your the only one i know on here and they said that they needed a name of someone else on here so if you get anything on it don't get freaked lol ttyl
johnlennon on May 29, 2004

thanks you pretty much hit what im trying to get at through my writing, theres jus so much more than money and religion, sometimes i feel like my writing is repetitive you know? may i ask how you decided your name? well thanks
Lurie on May 21, 2004

*Smae my dear i've missed you so!!!! How are you doing!? I can't seem to stay afloat! Everytime I think i'm gonna catch a break something happens. This week my 6 year old broke her arm.
But i'm trying to come back long enough to read once in awhile. Love ya me Smae! ~Laura
MightyBoosh on March 25, 2004

He i would just wanna say that your comment on broccoli's contest on suicide is so true. Im going through it now i wanting to feel to die she mst be desperate or summit casue its not a feeling i would eva want to share with anyone
carrot on March 23, 2004

you may ot like it, but one of the most common human emotions is depression. i would say 79% of the poems on this site are about cuttig, or suicide, or abuse, or something like that so if you are going to bitch about it, bitch to your frieds or someone who gives a sh!t because i really don't care if you don't like it or not. i am giving these people an opporotuity to win poits for their expressive poems, ad if you don't like it the shove it up your ass.
Randomguy on February 24, 2004

Heya! I just found that link that tells you who has you on their favorites list (I didn't know there was a favorites list until about an hour ago ), and I just wanna say thanks for the compliment!
poetryality on January 14, 2004

*CONGRATULATIONS!!!
poetryality on January 9, 2004

After all that work, I am so sorry you lost your voice. Words never dissapate, they stay inked in our minds, so next year you'll be better than ever. Like you say, READY TO GO, and I know you will tear it up! Hope your voice comes back soon, don't need a voice to write, huh, just pen, ink, or PC and thoughts, emotions, and feelings. A great big heart. Keep smiling and write your butt off.

Much Love,
Renee
Edited on Jan 09, 1:36 p.m. because ''.
poetryality on January 6, 2004

You are welcome my dear, only too glad to help. Have fun!

Much Love,
Renee
smae on January 6, 2004

THANKS IT'S PERFECT! Just what I need! and it's long to, i need that for to eat up my time limit!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU !
jULI
poetryality on January 6, 2004

Candlelight

From a small,
Quiet,
Dark corner
A match is struck.
The aroma of sulfer
Fills the air...
The wick of a candle
on an end table
Is lit.
Suddenly,
The room becomes
Softly bright
As warm light invades
The darkness,
Just enough to see;
To give a path to the eyes.
This small flame
Sparkling and pure,
Burning
With great endurance,
A token in the night.
Not like the lightouse
In the strom,
Not like a spotlight
On the stage
Of a Broadway Show.
A small
Gathering of embers,
Enhancing,
Giving sight
To a blighted space.
Flickering against black walls,
Dancing in a soft glow,
Grand in illumination.
Less than one inch in length,
Tall leaps it's flame.
Trance like,
Mysterious...
It pulls at the senses,
Bringing you into
It's brigtness.
This waxed miracle
With a mighty wick
Gives us light.
Ever flowing,
Ever glowing,
Until it burns away.
Melts into a waxed puddle,
As the flame dies,
The room fades back
To the little, dark,
Quiet corner.
Without the
Light from
The little
Waxed candle,
Hush resounds,
For the sound
Of the candlelight
Is no more...

I really hope this is whay you're looking for. Prose is hard for me sometimes, although I truly love it. Hard not to use metaphors for a candle. I can edit where you think it's necessary. Hope this helps you.

Edited on Jan 06, 5:02 p.m. because 'I puncuated the poem! '.
poetryality on January 6, 2004

Hey you!!!

If you tell me exactly what you need. I can writ something for you for your speech withoug ntring it into the contest and maybe post it here on your author page. That was not one of my best, it was done quickly and without much thought. Let me know!

Renee
facesofnatalia on January 6, 2004

yes, i'm a theatre person.....even though i don't know anything about it and have only been in three shows, two of which were midsummer. haha. anyway, glad you enjoyed Scene V, i do too.
facesofnatalia on January 3, 2004

you ask why you can't write like me.......it's because you're a poet, whereas i'm a buffoon. that's why.
sare on January 1, 2004

Hey. thanks for the hello,
i should read more books but dont have the time
i look forward to reading more of your stuff
sarah
-Joey- on December 30, 2003

Heyyy I love hte merman that is a grgeous drawing the form is perfect, I am just wondering if it was your lovely hands htat created that or if it one of your lovely friends anywhos just poking in and was really awed by that, and well wow jeeze I would love to have a drawing like that in my collection to play with, maybe I should try a merman drawig, but I don't know if I could get such a wonderful form as this one has, its the form that is so striking in it, the way he is swirled andthe shape of hte tail, love the swooping graceful lines of mermaids and merman anywhos just peeking i, and dropping a warm hello
kindest regards always,
joe
-Joey- on December 27, 2003

Heyyy thats a picture of you well aren't you a pretty little thing but what is really pretty about the picture besides the lovely outfit, is your lovely warm smile, just how I would have pictured such a bringer of kind words anywhos just had to let ya know I was wandering by and smiled when I seen that -----> seeeee smiles ;0 ,
most sincerely,
joe
Territhyme on December 23, 2003

Hey hun. keep up the good work. Hey, i added an add-line... try it out ^_^
Madison Attitude on December 22, 2003

Merry Christmas to you and yours this season Smae.
Happy New Year to you too and may it be the best ever!
Love, Aimee (& son) xoxo!
bhsbandgeek on December 18, 2003

Thanks for all those comments that you posted on my site, it's so awesome that you would read that many.
-Joey- on December 18, 2003

well maybe if you weren't here ahhh thank you Julie, your a sweetheart here as well, I always lok forward to your words, but I have to run now, you have the most wonderful of holidays as well, and I mean that you little precious sweetheart , you have a wonderful holiday and share that beautiful smile of yours with anyone around you Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ,
much love always,
joe
poetryality on December 14, 2003

Hello there friend, how are you, hope you are well. Thanks for the nice comments on that Denzel entry. He is a wonderful gentleman, and I just resently found out he lives three doors from a friend of mine in LA. Now you know I'm going to visit her as soon as I can afford a airline ticket. I hope you make that audition that you were talking about. I hate auditions, they are too much like tests. Luckily for me I've been in the business long enough where they just call me when they need a black actress here in Cleveland, and an actor that can play multiple roles. I once was in a production called "The Mississippi Delta" where I played 14 characters. It was a task. Take wings and the best of everything to you. I have only done one musical and boy is that hard work, but so is theatre if you want to do your best. Be blessed!

Much Love,
Renee
squeakypoet on December 13, 2003

your school is doing Les Mis? So is ours... how coincidental. well, good luck.

Kay
razorbladechaos on November 27, 2003

holy man...lol thanks for reading all those poems of mine, and leaving comments. glad you liked them...and we remember the free-styles because my friend Lindsey beat boxes...so we pretty much start the rap over a million times doing it for our other friends, and by the sixth or seventh time we have it perfect and we just remember it...lol not to mention, I'm a waitress and I never write anything down-(what does that mean? i have a good memory, I think, lol.)
razorbladechaos on November 26, 2003

thanks for commenting on my poem, lol...i do have a couple of humorous poems...just gotta look for 'humor' in the categories of them.
Nando Tater on November 21, 2003

Planning my death? Heavens, no...I haven't even planned my life yet.

Thank you kindly for popping in - and feel free to call me "hun" or anything else that strikes your fancy. : )
SEA angel on November 8, 2003

S ure you may enter your prewrite
U ntil my Angels Blessings contest ends
R egardless if in another contest
E xcept if against AP rules and I don't think it is
-Joey- on November 5, 2003

Huga and run
shaitus on November 2, 2003

I like many of your works.
Of course you are among, a talented
few in this site.
All well wishes.
Take care.
~shaitus
Edited on Dec 08, 12:47 because ''.
-Joey- on October 30, 2003

ohhMe sowies Smae, you precious one, I just don't spend the time I use to here online, well not participating like I used to, but ya know I really enjoy the sweet things you always come by and say, Smae always has that wonderful way, of making my Day, the pool hmmmm well if ya click on my link at my author's page, you will find a bit more on it how I foundit and such, may even give ya the willies, it sure did me tis in my gallery the poem, well Sarah wrote that so she is hte one who has the corner on the feelings and words on the poem was a sweet thing she did for me at Deviantart, just poked in and left me a little poem on my picture anywhos sweety, just had to let ya know I wanted to send you hugs and smiles and all those warm fuzzy feelings I always get from you
kindest warmest regards always,
joe
Phantene on September 6, 2003

heya! sori i ddnt cum earlier but i jus started skool again n everything is literally up in the air!
so..."phantene"...well actually i chose that name cos i was at the time, thinking about shampoo types and i thought of "pantene" and then i looked up and i saw the disney movie "fantasia" and suddenly in my head i thought of fantene but i wanted a "ph" instead of the usual "f" and thus "phantene"
actually strange that i ddnt even think of les mis wen i had it, seein as its 1 of me fav musicals! tut tut tut me i think!
lol!...wen u asked how i got my name, i bet u wernt xpectin nethin about shampoo eh?! man u must think im REALLY weird! its all good!
(it was my birthday yesterday so i gave u 16 ... i think! ... flowery roses things!) xxxxx
on August 21, 2003

Thanks so much for creating such a fun contest (Break the Rules). Even more so, thanks for the honorable mention! It's the first recognition I've ever gotten for a contest poem, and it was very much appreciated! You're super cool!
Thanks again,
Stephanie
Dark x Reality on August 16, 2003

hahaha. why did my poem make you sad? alot of people feel bad for the ketchup. lol. I love it. Such inquisitive minds.
blooten on August 11, 2003

Well The contest was over but you were close girl.

Not for first one but you got pretty close.

So juli dont give up yet. Cuz even if it dindt win a trophie , I liked it very much.
SEA angel on August 9, 2003

SMAE...
S weetness
M ixed with
A mazing talent
E xquisit

YOUR POST IS JUST FINE. I WAS JUST KIDDING WITH YOU BUT IF MY POST BOTHERS YOU I CAN REMOVE IT.

Enjoy being sixteen. I loved turning sixteen. Godspeed and best wishes 24/7 and always
Sabur Mukhtar on August 9, 2003

yoU Srtill sabuR frienD I LIke you S yeSS
Mothra on July 25, 2003

Thankyou for stoping by,
What exactly is this?
It sounds like an odd monolouge or a short story more so than a poem. Although confusing, it was amusing. "shooting off rainbows of colors" I like that line there, its very descriptive as was the rest of the writing.
The ending was quite haunting, it reminds me of those scary movies where the children creep you out. Isn't that weird how kids are soooooooooo frightening? Well this work here intrigued me so I think I might read some of your other pieces. Maybe that will help me understand.
If I did understand I would love it. Well I do but I don't. I think.Whatever, it'll make sense later.
Smae
Its a short story you got the tale end of it, I dont know why its listed under poems? however I do hope you can readthe startof the story
Sabur Mukhtar on July 6, 2003

why you KNot Join saBUr cLub yeT?

smaE mY FRiend

saBUr
squeezy on June 10, 2003

Thanks so much for the points- I enjoyed reading all the poems in your contest. It was a really interesting topic!
squeezy on June 6, 2003

Thanks for your response to my poem! Glad you liked it - in fact i think your response to the light/dark thing explained something to me. It must have been under the surface of my mind ... but yeah, the sleazy old men try to be crazy, to get the young to follow their lead- and then get resentful because it just reminds them they're 'past it'. Heh heh. I really appreciate people reading my stuff and not going 'I didn't get this so it must be 'wrong'...'-yeah, some of my poetry is very personal, so I write in a very personal style for those. Not all of my poetry is that mysterious, just a few!
on June 3, 2003

no, kara.
kyattaman on June 3, 2003

no need to be edgy. Apparently you did not see the instant message announcing the winners of the adventuresome editors contest. Re-check the contest because i know I completed it.
on June 2, 2003

Thanks for giving me your opinion I appreciate. I've just started writing poetry and need all the help I can get in how to improve. I know exactly what you were trying to say. ...I have days all the time where I can't figure out what in the world I'm trying to say.
Lurie on May 29, 2003

Hello sweetheart!
I am really enjoying your work!!!!
I bet some day you will be a very well known author!
You just keep doing what you are doing and you will go far! ~Laura
-Joey- on May 10, 2003

OK smae tis time for some new posts here, I am curious about ya LOL and this 2 week old one isn't telling much about how smae is doing anywhos I just stopped by to say hello to yous you have a wonderful day :D,
most sincerely,
joe
WillowRose on April 28, 2003

hey thanks for stopping by........
your kind commetns are greatly appreaciated....

peace and light
Willow
squeezy on April 4, 2003

Thanks for your comment on my poem. I was intentionally using repetition and mundane words in this poem, however; I'd actually reviewed my work removing emotive language and powerful words. Thanks for your comments though! Any opinion is fine by me.
Spilledblue on March 31, 2003

Fixed what you suggested...ummm...I
must have missed the missing word "I"
Thank you. Means a lot. I will be back to read
some of your poems. Thanks again, later.
-Delia

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