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i enjoy reading your poems, keep up the good work  xX
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Oit!!!
Hey babes... Writting good stuff here...
xxooxx
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waves two fingers at a time
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like your page, perhaps I will be motivated to create,hmmmmmm
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i love your author page, i always come and read all the quotes whenever i'm on  and i i love your poems. I don't think you'll be able to remember me, but you were my first friend here when i signed up, and we spoke a lot, and you've always been in my heart.
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I think your author page is too long.

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If you make God the centre of your world the bottom of it will never fall out... 
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Is that your lips in the forum photo? 
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I saw your picture in a forum today and...I think I'm in love. Will you marry me? Just say yes and I'll send you a one-way ticked to Alabama, U.S.A.
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Lady Mak : You are a vey talented writer on June 1, 2008
Hallo, you have an excellent way of touching the heart with your beautiful writes. I feel I sort of know you from the things you wrote about with such heartfelt emotion, evrything I have read has touched my heart. Thank you for sharing such excellent writes.
kind thoughts and wishes
Lady Mak.
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AnnD : Hiya .... on January 20, 2007
 Just stopped over to say Hi to a fellow Brit.
Waves a flag from the south coast to wherever you are in the UK
Ann
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I love your page. 
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I love your collection of quotes. 
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Sharcu : Hood-winked :) on November 30, 2006
Hey there!  Guess what? You've been ambushed! The group, The Poetic Bandits, do something called hood-winked where we all come together with one chosen poet and comment on their poetry. And this time you were the chosen poet. Hope you were encouraged by this and found it to be a blessing. Keep up the great writing and thank you for your contributions through poetry on this site.  --Tim
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LadyUnique : admire your quotes on November 29, 2006
since i am quite lost at this upgraded site i've been visiting poet's pages i haven't seen in a while  loved most of your quotes especially this one ''I walked a mile with pleasure, she chatted all the way. But left me none the wiser for all she had to say. I walked a mile with sorrow, and never a word said she. But oh the things I learned from her, when sorrow walked with me. ~ Robert Browning' i'd like to put it on my page too...do you mind? to me it says so much about depression. in a way it explains why i seem to write better when in that dark place  almost forgot... 'Everybody Hurts' by REM is one of my all-time favorites 
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Somewhere between the end
And the point where we begin
There's a fire burning brightly
That's found it's way to dim
When the feeling's gone
Shine on, shine on
And on to something new
It's long and overdue
I will remember you
Shine on, shine on
And let the others see
You've got your victory
Will you remember me
I was with you in the valley
And up upon that hill
So take just one more step in front of you
For I am with you still
And you're not alone
Shine on, shine on
and on to something new
It's long and overdue
I will remember you
Shine on, shine on
And let the others see
You've got your victory
Will you remember me
Can you see my hands are open
I am waiting just ahead
And you think you need it all now
But you needed me instead
Shine on, shine on
Shine, oh shine on
Won't you, won't you shine
Shine on, shine on
and on to something new
It's long and overdue
I will remember you
Shine on, shine on
And let the others see
You've got your victory
Will you remember me
Somewhere between the end
And the point where we began...
myspace.com/needtobreathe
(go here to play the song)
Noble1 
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Hi, Skitza.
Thanks for your comment on my rap. I haven't read any of your work yet, but I identify with many things on your profile page:
You seem to be fond of vampires. I'm currently considering posting scenes from my portrayal of Dracula on my YouTube channel.
You seem fond of Bruce Lee. When I was young, my friends used to call me Bruce Lee. One of them even started signing my Senior yearbook by addressing me with the salutation, "Mr. Lee,".
I get the impression you are a current or former cutter. I hope former. I've dated 2 cutters in the past. Beautiful women, and even more beautiful as people, who--sadly--couldn't seem to accept, acknowledge and treasure how truly beauty-full they were.
I think that your little emoticon may be a martian. As I'm sure you can imagine, my 1st name has resulted in my often throughout my life being called "Marvin the martian".
God Bless You, Young Sister.
Sincerely, Marvin J. ☻ † ☺
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Hey E'ryone. I'm really sorry I haven't judged the contest yet, I will do it soon! You've gotta understand that I refuse to half-ass it when I judge, and I dont want to miss one person's work while trying to rush through actually deciding who wins.
They're all amazing, you've got to understand. I'll have it done soon!
KDawg
Scratchedat
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(Twilight Zone theme comes on...)
"Do-do0, do-do0, do-do0..." 
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Ah! A fellow  .
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hey thanks for stopping by 
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Alright, I am really busy till school starts im sorry 
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Well it was free verse, I was in a really really upset mood and just wrote, and him doing that was the first thing that came to mind, I could change a few things when I get time, cause I work tonight and stuff. How do you do that green face?
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I dont really know how to change it lol
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alright thank you! hopw you like it lol
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I dont exactly remember which one it was to be honest, did you see the new AP that they had yesterday? I thought it was horrible, so they changed it back 
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Thank you very very much!
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Thanks and I really do need your help
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I also ask to to pay attention to Rage of Reason's comments..should you read any of my ponderings..he's also someone you should check out..a brilliant & very wise soul who has progressed beyond most.
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I thought it best to come here instead of the boards.. so here's my response to you...
I've come to think (my opinion) that these demons or evil entities we pretty much project on ourselves or allow them to be projected on us.
Fear being the most sinister.
Again..it's things we've been taught. What better way to control another human than through or with fear. Whatever that fear may be.
For instance.. Our Creator is of the highest, purest form of love yet we are taught to fear this Force. (God) Makes no sense to me.
10yrs ago, you couldn't have made me believe in reincarnation..I've been taught alot in the past 10yrs.
If you want to progress, if you want to learn...read everything you have access to. Study all religions...study mental health...research darlin'! Read other versions of the Bible that pre-date King James Version...you'll be amazed  Lotsa changes. Study King James & why he had the Bible reworded to fit his denomination.
Meditation is an awesome tool...it's gives balance,understanding, teaches, heals. Self teach..if confusion sets in dig in deeper until there is a peace within you. Ask for guidance, ask for the things you need to better yourself. Seek that Higher Power which is part of you...of all of us.
To better know me & my journey..I direct you to my author page..anything with 'personal' on it is of me. I'm not directing you there for myself....if you want to know what I do/see/hear/feel...it's there. If you have any questions I'll do my best to answer.
Be well darlin'...I have no doubt you will overcome & find the balance YOU can achieve...in your way...we are all different..we all walk different paths..but we're headed in the same direction...towards the Light
Peace,Love & Light
~Pamela
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Well I have hit him back, and he just hits harder so. And can you help me make it more like a poem then a letter?
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If you've still not read the late Mr. Ginsburg, I can assure you that he would be worth the time spent. Give Kenneth Patchen a looks-see while you're at it. He won't disappoint. Jo and I are buddies, and she has good taste in old verse.
~Morgan
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thanks for the comment, what i meant by "was true" was that it was true when i loved someone else.
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Yeah.. I guess so..... But I don't like colour.. except maybe red.
Vampire? How do you know????
She likes you....

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Dear skitza,
What's up with the vampire chick not liking me?
(looks right - looks left) Hey! you need some color on your page!)
Tang
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hey in my poem its my tourniqut the contest one you wrote that I needed to read the rules, Um I don't understand why could you explain for me? Thanks
Tyler Ann
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Ha ha ha ha...I was glazed when she took it...but cute works too I guess...so thanks!...Well I look forward to reading your next poem...take care!
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Well.... thanks!!!  (Cute photo btw)..

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mmmhmmm...yep thats a picture of me...oh yeah...and I just wanted to say...I absolutly love every poem that I have read of yours!...you have incredible talent!
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Erm.. ok.. thanks!
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hey! You need to put some more poems on here!love ya x x x
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alright this is a lot sry but heres three of my favorite songs by twiztid give em a listen to ight get back to me and tell me what ya think...
"Blink"
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
What's beyond my eyes? (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
When I open my eyes I see the blood on the wall
Neck and back stopped to contract
I'm bout to fall
When I open my eyes I only try to hide the pain
Cause legally, physically, mentally I'm insane
When I close my eyes everything goes black
My heartbeat skips rhythms like a heart attack
I'm an insomniac with a nose bleed
You can ask Nosferatu bitch he knows me
When I open my eyes I'm hoping everybody dies
Mission will accomplish when the carnival arrives
When I open my eyes the dead will resurrect
And we gonna issue bitches with problems with slit necks
When I close my eyes
My body's paralyzed
Engulfed in the swarm by the Lord of the Flies
My eyes stay closed
My temperature falls
My bed starts shakin
Blood drippin from the walls
When I open my eyes another day without a friend
Sick and tired, crazy and bored
When will it end?
When I open my eyes I wish I could glue them shut
But then I couldn't see my cigarettes and I'd be fucked
When I close my eyes I see how everybody dies
Hangin from a rope
All with fear in their eyes
Chokin on the lies, and the blood, and sweat
But don't leave now you ain't seen shit yet
Why don't you?
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes (Take me)
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies? (Bring me)
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies? (Show me)
What's beyond my eyes? (Why don't you?)
When I open my eyes
I can feel my ears bleed
Nerscleve shakin my hand
Wishing me Godspeed
When I open my eyes I'm in a trance
My only thought is rockin the dead until they dance
When I close my eyes I see Hell turn to ice
Starving little children feedin on the rats and mice
My eyes stay closed
Angels fall from the sky
They said that it rains everytime God cries
When I open my eyes I can see Heaven on a cloud
All these people in the line but I can't hear a sound
When I open my eyes I'm steady fallin outta graves
Contacted by the beast of the flames and pure hate
When I close my eyes the mirror goes black
A demon crawls through
And tries to kill me with an axe
He chase me around the room
Until I'm tired as fuck
And then I fell into the corner
Now I'm shit outta luck
When I open my eyes I'm only askin to be buried alive
I can't escape the voices crawling inside
When I open my eyes I know I'm better off dead
Still lookin for a way to cut off my own head
When I close my eyes the Devil then appears
And tells me he's been hiding in my closet for years
My eyes stay closed and he rambles on
And hands me the lyrics to a Dark Lotus song
Why don't you?
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies?
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies?
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes (Take me)
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies? (Bring me)
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies? (Show me)
What's beyond my eyes? (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes (Take me)
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies? (Bring me)
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies? (Show me)
Show me what's beyond my eyes? (Why don't you?)
Show me what lies just beyond my eyes (Take me)
Would you take me to the world where my spirit flies? (Bring me)
Tell me is that really fact or a pack of lies (Show me)
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
Show me what's beyond my eyes (Why don't you?)
"Fall Apart"
I swallow razor blades and spit up blood
Cut out my heart and gave it to my love
I hung myself with an extention cord
And dangled high above the ouiji board
I heard the wind in the trees and it made me scream
I'm wonderin' if it's real life or just another dream
I need something, someone
To help me with my brain because it's fallen apart
I fall apart
I've fallen to pieces but I don't know why
It's all because
It's all because we're all afraid to die
And if you think
And if you think about it, it will eat you
From the inside out till you don't know what to do
You fall apart
I'm drinking gas smoking square after square
I'm looking for this place but I don't know where
I'm just a soul in the land of the lost
I feel the blood in my lungs when I cough
I cut my hands off in the dark and just sat there and bled
Why the whole world fell apart inside of my head?
I need something
Someone
To help me with my brain because it's fallen apart
I fall apart
I've fallen to pieces but I don't know why
It's all because
It's all because we're all afraid to die
And if you think
And if you think about it, it will eat you
From the inside out till you don't know what to do
You fall apart
I broke my rib cage open with a butcher knife
And open up the wound to show my life
I'm not the devil but your momma swear were one in the same
And we didn't make it this way so were not carry in the blame
I've been down and out
I know what that's all about
You fall apart
I need something, someone
Help me with my brain, help me with my brain
You fall apart
I need something, someone
Help me with my brain, help me with my brain
I've fallen to pieces but I don't know why
It's all because
It's all because we're all afraid to die
And if you think
And if you think about it, it will eat you
From the inside out till you don't know what to do
You fall apart
Jumped outta twenty story window today
I got back up and then I walked away
My head was screamin' for a tylenol
Open the bottle and I ate 'em all
My head was spinnin' in a daze and I need to relax
So where's my chainsaw, butcher knife and muthafuckin' axe?
Something, someone
To help me with my brain cause it's fallen apart
I need something, someone
To help me with my brain cause it's fallen apart
I fall apart
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I've fallen to pieces but I don't know why
It's all because
It's all because we're all afraid to die
And if you think
And if you think about it, it will eat you
From the inside out till you don't know what to do
You fall apart
"All I Ever Wanted"
All I Ever Wanted
All I ever wanted was
I don't wanna lie
All I ever wanted was
A shot that I never got
All I ever needed
No one ever cared
All I ever wanted was
Someone take me outta here
All I ever wanted was for me to be a myth
Hidden from the land of the bliss
I'm constantly dissed and pissed off
My mindframe shackled to the floor
And I can't move even a little
All I ever wanted was a noose to hang from
And then I show all of u bitches where I came from
The carnival is comin
U can see it in my eyes screamin at the top of my lungs
I wanna die
U couldn't see it with your glasses on
Without a witness doing shit on my lonely and then I'm gone
All I ever wanted was to flip the script
U pull a gat on me and Ima break both your arms bitch
Eastside represent about the killas drug dealas
Put your hands up if u feel us
And I don't give a fuck about u bitches spreadin hate
Cuz most of u hoes will be dead at 28
All I ever wanted was
I don't wanna lie
All I ever wanted was
A shot that I never got
All I ever needed
No one ever cared
All I ever wanted was
Someone take me outta here
All I ever wanted lemme kick back and ?remanice?
Only a few things I can think of on my list
A new meat cleaver with an edge like a razor
And a windpipe connected to a hater
It's all I ever wanted, I ain't askin for much
A handle with an axe on the end of my clutch
And then swing it down with all that I've got
Into the ground and ????? (chop)
Hatchet rydas and juggalos come with us
We gonna blow the other side the fuck up
Douse that bitch with gas give me the matches
I got somethin for all they asses
Listen to em now pleadin' for they life
Talkin bout they were wrong and always knew we were right
Light the molietof
All we ever wanted starts happening now
All I ever wanted was
I don't wanna lie
All I ever wanted was
A shot that I never got
All I ever needed
No one ever cared
All I ever wanted was
Someone take me outta here
All I ever wanted was a chance to shine
I wasn't askin for much I just wanted mine
I don't even have a clue what went wrong
I just knew I wouldn't let the shit slide for long
Tell me somethin who the fuck you laughin at
What the fuck u thinkin don't you see this bat
Tell me what the hell is stoppin me from crackin your dome
From smackin your dome till it ooze like foam
All I ever wanted was an eye for an eye
Ima taste your ?soul? when I swallow it live
Turn around wasn't lookin diggin in your locker
as soon as you Looked up whack that's when I gotcha
Crack smack it rack it again
Kept thumpin and skull til it finally caved in
It looked like spaghetti in a broken bowl
I guess I lost control it's all I ever wanted though
All I ever wanted was
I don't wanna lie
All I ever wanted was
A shot that I never got
All I ever needed
No one ever cared
All I ever wanted was
Someone take me outta here
All I ever wanted was to scare you to death
Choke your fuckin neck until your ass is outta breath
All I ever wanted was to hear you scream
You know it's hard to sleep when you're controlled by your dreams
The man in the mirror knows that vanity's a must
But will he understand and become like one of us
Paintin up his face, not givin a fuck
Grabbin' his nuts and expectin bad luck
All I ever wanted was a brand new axe
Strictly for the purpose of choppin and splittin backs
All I ever wanted was to watch you bleed
For the cause of the underground in which I believe
I'm a maniac But u don't understand
My axe keeps swingin like blades on ceiling fans
I could show u everything that u can't see
But all I ever wanted to be was just me
[Chrous 2x]
All I ever wanted was
I don't wanna lie
All I ever wanted was
A shot that I never got
All I ever needed
No one ever cared
All I ever wanted was
Someone take me outta here
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first if theres any otha way i can talk to you like in IMs id like too second a bigot is a racist or anyone that hates someone because of being rich or poor or what they wear or if they are straight or gay ect. ect. ect.
third no offense but im not christian i do believe in god but i also believe he may not exhist i find that organized anything includeing religion corrupts people turns them in to ignorant people// no not all people and it seems that you are very opened minded i just mean to say is that when things become organized people tend to take them to the extremes and forget that wer all people and we are not who should judge others if god exists then he is the only one that should judge and he will be the only one to decide if i go to heaven or hell and yes i do bad things yet what is truly bad some say smokeing is alright and others dont some say that dressing freely is alright others dont when in fact what is right and wrong is simply up to the person you ask ...
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I listen to rap too.. I like Bizzy Bone (also talks about God etc).. Life Goes On, Jesus, Before I Go, Father.. Those tunes are good..
You said on the group IM that you were told you are possessed.. I have been told this before.. Once or a few times..
It basically means you have a 'strong hold'.. that the Devil can really get into you and whisper you things and you listen.. Some Christians are strong enough to ignore..
So tell me more about this thing... I believe you can sort through this.. Don't stop going to Church.. What has happened that has made you think like this!?
skitza
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