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  • MagicLady on August 22, 2004
    Hi,
    You are getting quite a collection of trophys!! I am contacting friends from AP that I have awarded trophys or points to in the past. You were my first gold trophy winner.

    I have stopped by to ask a favor. I am running a little contest. It is more as a good deed for someone I do not know. I am hoping you are willing to do a good deed as well. Not for the points or for a trophy, but just a nice thing to do. I do not know this author. I saw this piece featured and was drawn to do this for him. Could you possibly throw something old or new into this for him....just to him up...I would really appreciate it! Thanks so much.

    Cheryl
    allpoetry.com/Contest/772268' added successfully
  • severcherub on August 19, 2004
    Hi there,

    You once wrote you wished to see more of my work.
    Well, I've got 10 new poems online at the moment. ;-)

    Lots of love,
    Stefan
  • Beauty Sleeps on August 12, 2004
    P.S.
    This is me, Katestarz... I changed my name. I decided I needed to change my name to suit the new me.
    Kate
  • Beauty Sleeps on August 12, 2004
    ?!?!?! Please come baaaaack! You were so nice! You left such sweet comments on my poetry and you were so understanding... I know how you feel. Me and my boyfriend were together for 10 months, and I had liked him since the 6th grade... and he dumped me. It was hard, but I came to see that he really wasn't meant for me... in fact, he's kind of a jerk.
    Anyway, enough about me. I hope you're ok, and please consider coming back!
  • scarlett rose on July 25, 2004
    WHAT?!?!?! i just checked on the site because i haven't read some of yours in awhile and find that you wanna leave??? nuuuu! plz don't *sniffle* i'll miss ya and your poetry!!! im soooo so so sorry about you and adam! but i still don't think you should leave *sniffle* i hope thingsget better and you change your mind. stay strong and keep in mind that there's always someone out there, even if adam wasn't. anyways back to what i originally was gonna write, i hop e everything gets better! wait a second... i think i repeated myself... oh well! since im really tired right now, i'll go catch up on your latest poetry tomorrow!

    ~meg~
  • Remaining000 on July 23, 2004
    hey... I was going through my poems and saw u had commented on one.. or maybe a few of my poems. I dont know. u commented on my poem called suicide. but my name wasnt BlackRavenFairy then. it was sk8ergurl4444... soI just thought id say hello. actually something drew me toward you... is there something wrong or something I can do? becuz I feel like theres something going on that i could do something about... anywayz. tell me if theres not i probably sound retarded. lol, ttyl. ~Raven~
  • -Christine- on July 7, 2004
    Hey there, just thought I'd stop in and say hi. We're all missin' ya here, you were always a pleasure to read. Hope all is going good in your life and that you have a really nice summer.



    Christine
  • skigirl6788 on June 3, 2004
    Thank you LadyWiccae, I appreciate your kindness- break ups are never easy, especially right before my Sweet 16 birthday- luckily, I have people who TRULY LOVE me in my life, people who I was so blind about prior to last week- thanks again
    ~Christine~
  • Onyx Dragon on June 1, 2004
    I'm sorry to hear about you and Adam sweetie. Cheer up eh? plenty more fish in the sea..
  • skigirl6788 on May 15, 2004
    Thanks so much Christine,
    You're so sweet!!
    ~Christine~
  • -Christine- on May 15, 2004
    Happy, well, really REALLY early

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    lol

    OOooh, and I see right there that your poem was included in the recommended reads column!! AWESOME!!



    Christine
  • Ava Noire on May 13, 2004
    I featured "Night Love," on my Recommended Reads column.

    allpoetry.com/Column/627726

  • Broken4you on May 10, 2004
    You have a lot of talent for only being 15!!!!! Great Stuff...Laura
  • Broken4you on April 15, 2004
    Hey girl I just wanted to say that you are an awesome poet!!!!! I admire your work...and that poem above that that one person wrote was amazing too...you should leave it on here.....It was really sad though..anyway....Take care...Laura
  • Little on April 12, 2004
    *Congratulations* !! on all of ur trophies - u deserve them!!

    luv little
  • Rein-des-pres on April 11, 2004
    HAPPY EASTER
    ~Rachel~
  • -Christine- on April 9, 2004
    Hey there, Christine

    Just stoppin' by to wish you a happy Easter!! Hope it all goes great!!

    Christine
  • skigirl6788 on April 2, 2004
    Macbeth1023 wrote the poem, I was unable to get access to the poem because it's an adult write, so she posted it here, i'm glad you enjoyed it, i told her that i would leave it there in hope of attracting other's to it
    ~Christine~
  • My Milieu on April 2, 2004
    Ummm i really like the reallly long poem sum1 sent to you can u tell me who wrote its sadly sickly my type of poem thanx alot

    EVE in the grave
  • Clyde1023 on March 31, 2004
    w.d.l.g.
    by Macbeth1023 on Mar 30

    laying in bed...i roll over,
    and you're there!
    i said for you to leave me alone
    you said you don't care

    i turn over again
    ignore your presence
    i can remember it all
    every single second

    you pull the blanket over yourself
    in attempt to hide your hard on
    but it does nothing for you
    just having the blanket drawn

    so you place your hand on my shoulder
    and give a gentle squeeze
    "don't do this, not tonight,"
    i beg of you, "please?!?"

    i try to pull away, but as a man
    you have the strength of your title
    my resistance angers you
    and i realise my mistake was vital

    you dig your fingernails into my skin
    and throw me on my back
    beat me in the face
    while you're rubbing on your shaft

    run your hand down my chest
    run it down to my knees
    try to spread them easy
    but i do not what you please

    so your wrap your hands around my thighs
    and rip my legs apart
    the bruising and the pulling
    to you this is an art

    you rub yourself harder
    and place yourself between my legs
    you pin my hands above my head
    and leave me left to beg

    i beg for mercy
    and again you break my trust
    i beg for you to stop
    but it only fuels your lust

    you rip off my shirt
    and dig your nails into my chest
    you love the damage you see
    as the blood drips from my breast

    i feel you enter me hard,
    feeling more bruising
    my ripping, tearing walls
    you find this all amusing

    you laugh, your power hunger has
    consumed the man i once knew
    i questioned your authority
    but now i must pay my dues

    you pump harder and harder
    now tears stream down my face
    i can feel your hatred in me
    as you knock me out of place

    feeling all this
    i stretch to fit your girth
    "ha,ha you're my little slut,"
    (make sure i know my worth)

    you go from rapid and short
    to long, rough and deep
    you bask in your glory
    the benefits you reap

    you find my neck
    and deep go your sharp teeth
    you whisper insults in my ear
    i smell alcohol as you seethe

    you bite at my shoulders
    like a rabid beast
    as if my flesh is
    calling to you to come feast

    i become numb, no pain
    so i become quiet
    this doesn't please you
    and your rage begins a riot

    you dig you nails into stomach
    and rips at my skin
    you will not be the only one
    to suffer for this sin

    you make a fist
    smash my face and ribs
    i scream out in pain
    agree to keep your fibs

    you pump your hardest yet
    and i know you are going to cum
    you lick the edge of my ear
    and whisper to me, "yum..."

    one last thrust,
    hardest of them all
    you grunt in relief
    and release your thrall

    you withdraw from me
    and you make sure to do it slow
    not wanting to leave my warmth
    may be the only power you know

    you grab my shirt from my clutches
    wipe yourself off and throw it in my face
    you understand what you do
    and make me feel like the disgrace

    you half laugh and say,
    "hmmm..baby you always rock my world.
    now tell me what i want to hear
    come on you know you want to say it...."

    ....."Who's daddy's little girl?".....

  • -Christine- on March 25, 2004
    Hey there, Christine!!

    You're so welcome for the support given to you and your writing. It is really no sweat at all, because your poetry is always so incredible. It is all so well deserved.

    And I thank you for your support on my pages. I always anticipate your comment because I want to know what you have to say. Your encouraging comments always help me keep going.

    And just remember that it's not what we think of your poetry, but of what you think of it yourself. Although we are all our own worst critic, be aware of your amazing talent!!

    Thanks again!!

    Christine

  • slayer89 on March 22, 2004
    hi it makes me soo happy that i cry to kno that ppl like my poetry i love tasha soo much. Don't worry some guys can't get in touch with the side that i am in touch with. It is against our nature hahahah. i was wondering ur sn if u are on aim
    i would really like to talk to you.
    thanks
  • skigirl6788 on March 22, 2004
    thanks so much randi, i really appreciate your really kind comment
  • xEdGe0fSaNiTy on March 22, 2004
    congrats on your award...you're a great poet, and you've got a great boyfriend!
  • forgottentreasure on March 19, 2004
    oh wow! i feel so honored, being on your list of faves!!! youre a great poetess yourself--and you, like fine fine wine, will only get SO MUCH BETTER with time!!! i cant wait to see what you come up with next!!! love ya!!
  • skigirl6788 on February 28, 2004
    hehe No prob- your one of my new favorites~ I love your poetry!! Keep up the great work!!
    ~Christine~
  • Broken4you on February 26, 2004
    By the way thank you so much for putting my name up on your screen that is the coolest thing ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! Laura
  • HammeR on February 17, 2004
    I would like to express my pleasure at seeing your comments on my poetry. I enjoy it when someone finds something they like within the lines. Good luck with all of your endeavors in life, and I wish you and Adam the best. Until next we meet.............
  • severcherub on February 16, 2004
    Nice writing my friend.
    I'm the writer of Dream os glass and another peom your saw yesterday.
    See you around someday.

    Steevy
  • rhiannon 11 on February 4, 2004
    Hello
    Nice to meet you. I really don't love him. We weren't getting along. I was trying to be funny. It's ok honest, he's yours, but you already knew that.

    I think he already forgot what we were disagreeing about. He wrote back "Heh"? lol

    No worries.
    Nice to meet yah
    Good luck with your sweetie.
    Rhi
  • invested on February 2, 2004
    you should write some erotica on your amazing Adam.
  • skigirl6788 on January 28, 2004
    Don't let the past create the future, let the future erase the past.
  • WhiteLilac on January 19, 2004
    Thanx for your comment on " Disfunctional" I really aprreciate it and it makes me feel better. There's always pressure to succeed and be perfect. Like your mom points out all ur mistakes, like mine. I tell them " y can't u be happy for the good things i've done instead of pointing out all my wrongs" well its nice to kno that i'm not alone and i thank u 4 dat
  • Kafnen on January 18, 2004
    thanks for ur kind words about my poem "i keep it in an iceblock". hav fun with the contest!!
  • -Christine- on January 18, 2004
    Hey!! I just posted my contest, and I'm pretty excited about it!! Well I can't talk long (again) but ya, if you want to check it out, go ahead!!!

    Christine
  • PoetryGirl17 on January 14, 2004
    I've read a few of your poems and I think they are very good! I am going to add you to my favorites. I can relate to a lot of your poems. And I yes I do hate how people call dark brown hair black..lol I get that all the time! I wish you and your boyfriend the best of luck in your relationship. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you sweetie! ~*~Melody~*~ Poetrygirl17
  • fluffleduck on January 14, 2004
    Ps Fidn Your Way Back is one of my favorites too! Along with ALll You Wanted, Tuesday Morning and I'd Rather Be In Love.
  • fluffleduck on January 14, 2004
    Hey, it's good to see another Miss Branch fan! I agree, she is just totally amazing, not too impressed with the photo shoot she did recently but I still think shes my lovely Michelle ! lol. Thanks for your comments, I will browse through your work soon.

    Fluff x
  • Candice Bezanson on January 8, 2004
    Thank you for the comment on my poem "Fate" I really appreciate it. It was hard to write but I love writting so its all good ;0)
  • Tornado on January 2, 2004
    Thank you SO much for commenting on my poems!!! I`m glad you like them!!! I really REALLY appreciate it!! Your poetry is pretty, keep writin girl!
  • d635p on January 1, 2004
    I like all of your work.. KEEP it up!.. your stuff is very powerful and tells the truth about a lot of things.. i love it.. check out my stuff!!!!

    -dan
  • on December 31, 2003
    Hey,

    Thanks!
  • -Christine- on December 30, 2003
    Hey,
    Thanks so much for your comment on my work!! Greatly appreciated. It seems like only a select few do that these days. I'll definately read your work!!

    Like the name too, Christine. Thats a good name lol. And it's funny, because if I'm not mistaken from reading your name, you like skiing, which is awesome, cause skiing is my biggest passion in life (besides my writing).

    Hope you have fun on AP!!

    Christine
  • SomnusLupus on December 27, 2003
    hey babe! cant wait to see what you come up with!

    love you ,
    -adam
    Edited on Dec 28, 1:01 because 'smiley'.
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