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  • slamstar on March 30, 2008
    I know those kinds of cyclones can be pretty annoying can't they? I'd lay sandbags or something but then I might not learn ever anything again.
    Thanks for the comment.
  • Ankotenshi on February 21, 2006
    Thanx for the comment, but that was definitly not one of my better poems, its for school. i'd appreciate it if you could maybe read some of my better ones. Thanx a lot! And I'll read yours too!!
  • cafegroundzero on February 5, 2006
    Silver Member cafegroundzero online at 07:56 a.m. Sunday morning, 5 Feb 20006
    Rock on witcher bad self! 779 critiques, 137 poems. said:
    Verdict: Andale pues, vamos a leer
    Mayonaka Kireli has written a rather unusual poem for this web site, one which is focused not on her own self but on the world about her without the ego constantly present. Indeed there is very little ego evident, though of course the eyes of the poet, the mind of the poet must be awake and cognisant of the subject at hand. Or must it?

    Shorty jo, you should never say never. If you try, keep trying, you may do this. I say, of myself, try try, or die trying. But never lie, lie, weeping and sighing.

    So, you teach? I am a substitute teacher, and have taught classes before at vocational colleges, Kuskokwim College in Bethel, Alaska, and Southeastern Technical College in Glennville, Tattnall County, Georgia.
  • GossamerAlice on February 5, 2006
    Thank you very much for your comment on my newest poem! I'm trying to kill writer's block and it's good to see that I'm back and not "dead". ^_^
  • Just4u on December 14, 2004
    Just wanted to stop by and wish you Happy Holidays

    Hugs...Eddy
  • marissabeth on July 1, 2004
    wow...that's crazy awesome. i guess i'm not used to reading such real work such as yours or its truely a masterpiece. never stop writing. for in your words lives your unforgoten soul that pours young rivers of light spreading into the darkness of unspoken rights and underminded wrongs. you are honestly amazing.
  • - Marz - on December 19, 2003

    Thanx for you comments! I really like your poems!
  • xela on September 5, 2003
    Thank you for getting back to me, the poem is now bookmarked! I would guess that the lady in the poem is dead. But if that's a wrong interpretation would like to know the real one! beautiful, either way.

    Alexandra
  • Dizzy Juggalette on July 22, 2003
    thank you for the comment on my new poem (different)
    =Dizzy
  • LazuliLight on July 13, 2003
    Nice poem. u do know that i am only 13?
  • -Dawn- on July 10, 2003
    Thank you

    Thanks for your in depth look at my poem earlier~~I must tell you that you came so close to what I was feeling when I wrote that and I appreciate that you even bothered to try to figure it out

    Thank you for being so kind and reading my work~~and because of that I have stumbled upon you and you are a very talented writer indeed


    ~~Dawn

  • Wretched Machine on July 8, 2003
    Hello...thank you for your kind words...i try my best when i can be creative enough to write...i read some of yours and i thought they were really good but i don't trust my judgement enough to comment in any single poem...but jut know i did enjoy them and will check back when i can...thanks
  • anne on July 6, 2003
    thanks for the advice on writing less juvenile poetry!! Very helpful.

    Thanks!!
  • Phantene on June 29, 2003
    thankyou very much for ur wonderful comment on 'from the edge'. it was much appreciated. im sorry it was so sad but thats how it came! now i must go read sum of urs thanx once again! take care hun! xxxxx
  • butterflyinflight on June 28, 2003
    Thanks for your comment on my poem "the sidewalk", I really appreciated it. I've now read quite a few of your poems, and I have to say that I enjoyed them very much! I hope your keep writing and sharing. Awesome work!
    -butterflyflight
  • wilma on June 22, 2003
    I want to thank you for your sweet comments on my poetry it is well appreciated. I will have to read some of yours.
  • FriendlyPanther on June 22, 2003
    Hey shortyjo I just wanted to welcome you to AllPoetry! This is an awesome site and I know you will enjoy your stay here with us I want to mention that we have some very cool memberships available We have preferred, and uber memberships for sale! This is a great way to support the site and in return you get an amazing deal! Like a larger name that stands out, you can see you viewed your poetry, etc. Go check it out today Anyway's, I am off to read a poem of yours! Take care

    James
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