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  • southerngirl92 : hello jessi on June 1
    hey girl i love your page hey dont let boys and life bother you pray about it thats what you should do. Hey i love you and miss you great poems keep writting you could really make a booke some day if you really put your work in it. I understand totally what you mean about life ive been through alot like you have. Just put your heart into what you belive. And never quit writting i think it takes your mind off of certain things.

    love always destiny simons your my best friend thanks for being there for me and sorry for all the stuff ive did to make you mad please forgive me and maybe i should listen to you more often about guys well luv yaaaaaaaaaaa........................
  • Hikari Lady on October 1, 2008
    You have such a wonderful page, I enjoyed reading it. And you look like me when I was your age, so many people just can't believe that some teenagers can have deep emotions or understand parts of this life, my advice to you is to not allow them to get to your heart.
    Keep up writing and always try something new, I'll now take a tour around your poems, lol.

    Cya around

    ~Noor
  • EojRepus on September 16, 2008
    children's book are some of the most profound and imaginative, i suggest you rethink your stance on dr. suess
  • constchar : Hello on September 16, 2008
    Hi Jessy!
    I'd suggest that maybe you work a little on rhyming despite your feeling on that matter, personally I try hard to rhyme and express my feelings at the same time because rhyming gives the poem a silky smooth ride as if I were taking the reader for a journey into my mind, but if you over-rhyme you'll lose that effect.
    Poetry is a form of art though so never be afraid to experiment or to try something unconventional and always accept criticism constructively, but also don't let it hold you back.
    Also I agree with you; never let anybody tell you that teenagers don't have feelings, they're very real and deep, because teenagers are just adults but without all the life experience.
    -James
  • humblpye : Hello Jessica...! on September 15, 2008
    I kinda like looking into everybody, irrespective of age or experience, we're all here for the same reason...well, I hope so anyway...you write poetry, me too, welcome aboard this ol' choo choo! John
  • SongOfSilence on June 30, 2008
    Welcome to ap! ^.^

    ^.- if you need any help, I'm here to help ^.^
    -Aiden
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