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  • Miz Katastrophe : I wrote this poem on June 5
    I just wrote it now I enjoyed writing it and it flowed rather effortlessly. Hope you like it!

    Everything is black and white
    Blurry eyed I wander in.
    I pick a spot in which I reside
    A hard narrow bench.
    I curl up into a warm fetus
    Ignoring the bitter draft
    R.E.M pours upon me
    And I disappear alone.

    In this place I'm free and dancing!
    Drinking all the music
    I can go on forever ...
    Basking in this lucid beauty!

    But ofcourse I'm ripped right back,
    I've fallen from my bench.
    I yawn and gaze around me,
    Everything gray and decaying.
    I patiently zone back out
    As I wait for the game to end
    These fucking games take so much time,
    And everybody loses in the end.

    Suddenly, stark and screaming!
    I hear a voice upon me!
    It's loud and clear, I'm sure I hear
    A freebird calling my name...
    I hear their voice, silent but ringing
    Unheard by all the deaf children
    Who are you?
    The grey turns blue...
    I become a river rushing.
    Raven calling at the cellar door!
    I splash upon the cold gym floor!

    I disperse myself into a class of fools
    Needlessly chasing their balls
    I scan the crowd curiously
    Charmed instantly by the Raven's sweet calls.

    Soon.. I sight her wings, so magnificent!
    But ever so slightly torn.
    She is a brown haird nymphette,
    A freshly hatched egg
    No more than a few thousands of years old.
    Her song amuses me
    As it echoes from closed lips
    We are anacronyms, so misplaced!
    Me and this raven daughter
    Her skin gets wet when I touch her face,
    and I welcome her with hope and grace,

    "Your the most beautiful person in this room."
  • Antebellum on March 21
    ive been reading your writing and its amazing! The stye/form...yeaa not real sure of the poetic terms lol but i enjoyed reading your stuff.
  • FullyAlive on February 28, 2008
    so you should totallly un cut me out of your AP life and add something amazing about me like how amazing i am
    because that was the most humble sentence ever.


    loveeeeee
  • FullyAlive on November 18, 2007
    I miss you enough to make me cry.

    =)


    -x-
  • Co-Co-Cola on June 27, 2007
    Your name seems extremely familiar
    but I just can't put my finger on it.
  • Wicked Angel on June 23, 2007
    "the moments between when my feet left the roof and when my head hit the pavement were the best of my life." That's so far out i dig it wholeheartedly
  • SoS on February 20, 2007
    Yeah, so Becka definatley reminded me who you are. And now I remember. :]

    So yeah. I think that was just my way of issuing a really crappy ice-breaker hello.
  • Love Me For Me on January 24, 2007
    WFJDLKSJFKLJDLJDS HI. TALLLLLLK TO MEEEEEEEE. =)
  • Love Me For Me on November 13, 2006
    ...I am not pregnant........CAN I MURDER LESLIE NOW!!! GRRRRRRR
  • ruiven on November 12, 2006
    right back at cha baby doll, so, i hear that your haveing a baby!!!!!!! thats soooooo cute!
    call me later sweetheart!
    ~raven
  • Love Me For Me on October 9, 2006
    grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr lol
  • Already Gone on September 19, 2006
    raven! my god, i haven't talked to you in FOREVER! dude, what's this i hear about you going to some private school? we really need to catch up on what we're up to. i think you have my cell # so PLEASE call me when you get the chance!

    <3 always,
    megan
    Edited on Sep 19, 2:40 p.m. because 'i can't spell to save my life'.
  • Love Me For Me on September 13, 2006
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Tell Yevette and Bojana and anyone else that I said HELLO! and that I MISS THEM! lol my teachers.....

    1-tent ss 219
    2-gym markabitch 3rd is healt, veter
    3-sesak math 208
    4-citro science 216
    5-finke lang 210
    6-LUNCH WITH LESLIE!
    7-accavello suport 116
    8-milward cooking sewing
  • Undead666 on September 13, 2006
    Wow,that's cool.Yeah there was this place in Garfield that gave you an hour for $6 but the computers kind of sucked..oh and the payphone I use isn't working for some reason right now :/

    Hey,did you hear any of the new My Chemical Romance songs yet?
  • ruiven on September 12, 2006
    well, the thing is that i just found another place in pompton lakes that lets you have the internet for an hour, for only five dollars, and they won't kick you off every ten seconds so i've started going here more.
    ~raven
  • Undead666 on September 12, 2006
    Hey,I got your comment,and thanks for the input on my poems! Yeah I'm at the library a lot too,so it's really wierd that I haven't seen you! Well,we'll hang out sometime!
  • Love Me For Me on September 11, 2006
    ...........HI!!!!! I'VE MISSED YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING MUCH!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa .......
  • FullyAlive on September 10, 2006
    ravennnn

    i love you toooo!!!

    -x-
  • Wicked Angel on August 29, 2006
    luckyyyyyy i should go to omish school...haha yeah we should deffinately hangout sometime, just give me a call
    <33
  • Wicked Angel on August 23, 2006
    RAVEN HI I MISS YOU WHY ARE YOU GOING WITH THE STUPID OMISH THEY LICK POTATOES ANYWAY WHO WANTS THAT?!?!?!?!?!!?
  • ruiven on April 2, 2006
    God, i luv ya tracy cakes!
  • ruiven on March 18, 2006
    oh my gawd! you called me toots...again!
  • epitaph-macabre on March 16, 2006
  • on March 9, 2006
    where are u ive been trying to get a hold of u and i got ur message but u wouldnt message me back well cya TOOTS!!!!haha
  • joli foutu xx3 on February 6, 2006

    ..........
    ..........
    ..........
    ..........
    THE WEEPING CAMEL!!!
    @_@.......
    ..........
    ... woah geez all this sleep deprivation is making me hungry.
    ::runs off to get some ramen::
  • joli foutu xx3 on February 6, 2006
    I N E E D S L E E P *o*
  • joli foutu xx3 on January 2, 2006
    woah my gosh!
    happy new year!!!!
    shit this is late...
    sorry! ^.^
    see you tomorrow!!!
  • antique on December 21, 2005
    Merry christmas Raven
  • FullyAlive on December 17, 2005
    trainor man101: hola.
    x0metallicaToX: hey
    trainor man101: whatss susj'?
    x0metallicaToX: susj'?
    x0metallicaToX: wtf
    trainor man101: the ways i say up
    x0metallicaToX: oh
    x0metallicaToX: im going away
    trainor man101: boo
    trainor man101: where?
    x0metallicaToX: idk
    x0metallicaToX: my parents just told me to do my hw and pack for 3 days
    x0metallicaToX: and so here i am, doing my homeowrk


    MEEP
    i dont wanna ggo
    i wanna see Chris
    with whom i made out with today
    call me
    -bexa
  • ruiven on December 17, 2005
    yeah nib! u tame this beast! oh baby!
  • joli foutu xx3 on December 14, 2005
    geez, Raven, you really ramble, huh?
    heehee, i love you. don't worry. i accidentally hung up on you like twenty minutes ago, and i'm trying to find your phone number, whoopppssss.... oh yeah, it's nib. i just got this thing. i don't know what the hell to do... ah! it's confusing. whatever, i have to tame this beast. muahhhh!!!
  • on December 8, 2005
    hi elf of death this is the knome of doom is the sex fairy there???haha
  • on November 30, 2005
    RAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i love you!!!!!!!my dogs an alcaholic!!!!!call me
  • Ashro on November 30, 2005
    dear raven,
    you really have to start to appreiciate bonno more
    dont strike at me -.-
    ::::::::::::::
  • Ashro on November 27, 2005
    i shall me commenting ur work
  • Ashro on November 27, 2005
    raven my bi nudest lover!!!! shit i havent been on this site in a while a forgottt

    yes try to call me!

    ashro loves u
  • FullyAlive on November 25, 2005
    OMFG
    call me


    later
    -bex
  • x Loveless x on November 18, 2005
    You havent been on for ages! Or you just havent talked to me for ages... >_<

    x Raven x
  • asgannen on November 6, 2005
    Evanescence...Linkin Park...Seether...Slipknot
    Way to go! 4 of my many fav bands! (3 of my top though)
    Amy told me to look at your stuff...idk if you were the friend she was talking to the other night while talking to me but...just thought I'd check out your stuff
  • ruiven on November 4, 2005
    he is real!he is i swear!he hears you!he does!people just think that because you can't hear him or feel him or see him he is not real but i kno he is cause i can feel weight off my back when i talk to him!i no he understands me!he has to because he created me! i may seem totaly crazy to sum people, but hey, this is just wut i belive, and i can't tell you wut to think.
    much love to ya'll!
    ~raven
  • x Loveless x on October 26, 2005
    Do you have some sorta weird hatred towards this "God"?! Or something. XP

    x Raven x
  • on October 14, 2005
    he does stop.
    he stops listening.
    he stopped listening to me.
    god is some fictional character some smart person made up so the world wouldnt go insane.
    too late smart person! u've made me insane!
    he's not listening!
    HE DOESN'T LISTEN!!!
    HE CANT!!!
    HE WONT!!!
    HE'S NOT REAL!!!

    he's not real.
  • FullyAlive on October 13, 2005
    blinks back
    well, who the fuck are you???
    </3
  • FullyAlive on October 3, 2005
    Right... Wrong... Gothic???
    lol
    good times in health
    god who thought health and mosh pits would be in the same period...
    ATTN
    DO NOT! go into water with dead fish...
    later loser
    <3
  • on September 24, 2005
    omfg RAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!! the tickets are almost sold out!! You have to go to the concert cuz its for my B-day! u have to go cuz my mom is finally letting me go and the tickets are like 50$ each and the row is upperrows 204 # 6 or something and it starts at 6pm doors open at 7pm at contile nental air lines arena on oct 13<- thats info for ur mom. PLZZZZZZZZZZZ see if u can go plzzzzzzzzzz??????????????????? ilu! (non-sexual way)(of course! omg when i went to Ny today i saw these 2 gay guys holding hands and it was really cute. WE HAVE TO CELEBRATE GAY PRIDE WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • on September 21, 2005
    PARTY BUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!burn yourslef god!!!haha we need to have names that for every letter in the alphabit,I am not a nee-ni-idiot!!!!please sir can i have some more?????ur so cute when u scream!!!!!ilu!!!!
  • Suitcase Balladeer on September 18, 2005
    howdy. damn yer from jersey. i dont catch a whole lot of people from jersey. but then again im not on here much naymore anyways
  • x Loveless x on September 18, 2005
    Hehe, thats gross. XP Maybe you should sue the people at Dell, and then buy anew computer with that money, and buy me Cartoon Network. That would be Awesome!

    † Raven †
  • ruiven on September 17, 2005
    i could never ignor u!ignoring you wuld be like ignoring the hair in my old sci teacher's ears jk!jk!ilu! my web is down and the jerks at dell can't fix it!
    ~raven
  • x Loveless x on September 13, 2005
    ...
    I havent spoken to you for ages. What are you doing?
    ... Are you ignoring me? That would be very sad...

    Raven-
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