Guestbook entries for riley

• hartofsilver on October 27, 2008

  Hi,
  
  I don't really know if I'm still writing poetry, to be honest haha. I have the occasional idea for a poem, but usually never get around to writing it...
  
  I'm just about to post one now though.
  
  It's really nice to hear that someone misses reading my poetry though .
  
  I am still pursuing writing though. I'm taking Creative Writing at UVic, and I'm in my second year, majoring in Drama/Screenwriting and Creative Non-fiction
  
  I haven't disappeared off of the face of the internet completely though...but I've alluded to that in mentioning that you should get a facebook .
  
  But anyway, hi back . And I am doing decently well. I hope you are too!
  
  Kayla*
• Quetzalcoatl on May 30, 2006

  Fire and Ice, eh? I like your taste. Robert Frost is an excellent writer! And I see now that CountryCousin above me agrees as well... how interesting.
  
• CountryCousin on November 9, 2005

  I particularly like Robert Frost's poem about Fire and Ice too. Very interesting and now to read your poetry.
• Night Dragon on October 25, 2004

  I'm aware this is way out dated but I just noticed now, you're the only person to have ever left me a negative comment (10 ways to say I love you) you were harsh and mean, thank you. I appretiate that to an extent you couldn't begin to comprehend. So many ppl would read it , not like it and move on but no, u had to point it out, cuz ur honest, a very respectible quality. Thank you for you negative imput, it's always welcome on my page.
• HuggyBee on April 17, 2004

  Thank you....
• HuggyBee on April 15, 2004

  when are you judging your contest? it's been saying "to be judged in two hours" for the last five days. Just curious.
• Ava Noire on April 5, 2004

  Please send me the link of the poem you wanted me to see your reply on. I will look at it tomorrow. I need some shut eye now
  
  xx
  
  
• Bigmammajen on December 24, 2003

  oh hehee. im a tard. I could have sworn I read you were from Washington. being that its nearly 4am.....I was most likely reading my OWN page ROFLOL ahem
  
  Oregon seperates cali and washington
  
  but yer still a west coaster so that makes us family anyway LOL
• Bigmammajen on December 24, 2003

  oh and Im in Washington too. though Im heading to bed now dunno where you are, but Im way up in Bellingham by Western.
• Bigmammajen on December 24, 2003

  thank you. its interesting how people always comment on how my photos compliment my poems. they are usually born at the same time. I have vision as to what I want to photograph for the words in my head, take the photo, and write them down......or I take a photo with an emotion in my heart....then write them down.
  
  they are normally fraternal twins, born at the same moment. I visually see what I feel.....so you can see it too.
  
  thank you for noticing me
• froglover80 on November 18, 2003

  Hey there. Its ok that you didnt notice...I kinda crept back in and became active again. Funny how life sends you on different paths and somehow we keep comming back to our original love...hmmm. Anyways, thanks for the comment on my page...hope we can chat again soon.
  ~~Jenn
• hartofsilver on August 31, 2003

  hey riley, i haven't talked to you for a LONG time, i kinda stopped updating my journal for a while, and i keep forgetting to sign on AIM cuz i primarily use my msn, but i really miss talking to you.
  
  anyway, i hope to talk to you soon, so if you're ever on allpoetry and see that i'm not on AIM, give me a shout on here
  
  kayla*
• Cadee Blaze on May 25, 2003

  Hey thanks for the comment on my poem. I read a few of yours, you've got tallent. Thanks.
• squeezy on May 6, 2003

  Hey- you won a trophy in the 'ex' contest. Well done!
  
  I didn't ... I'm evidently not bitter and twisted enough LOL!!
  
  Congratulations! :-)
• ElipticalShadow18 on May 4, 2003

  riley:
  that comment you left on one of my newer poems, "My Worst Enemy" meant SO much to me, I can't even begin to tell you. Everything you said from finally understanding others feel the same way and how greatful you were that I wrote and featured it... it made me feel the same way you did when you read it. I love knowing that (a) i've affected people with my writing, and (b) that there are other people who can relate to how i feel and that i'm *not* alone. thanks again. it really made my day i look forward to reading your work.
  -M
• squeezy on May 4, 2003

  Thanks for the lovely critique of my sonnet! I agree - i am better off now I'm freeeeeee, and, I wanna win LOL! :-)
• hartofsilver on May 2, 2003

  since you weren't online when i read your comment, I couldn't actually answer it, but in response to your confusion on the jealousy thing, i guess you kind of have to be part of the family to understand it, it's just one of those things that is automatically known among our family that other people don't catch onto easily, but if i explained it, it would make me sound so extremely cocky and self centered...maybe you can guess by now or something, maybe not, but i'll talk to you tomorrow about it...
  
  it's a good thing it's not actually in the poem tho, people would get mad cuz then they wouldn't be able to understand the poem.
  
  anyway, goodnight.
  
  kayla*
• Delia on May 1, 2003

  Hey...thanks for your comment on my poem...:)
  
  I know what you mean about falling in love and it not working out...been there once myself...it sucks...:)
  
  Anyway, I really like your poetry...you seem to have a real knack for writing this stuff. I'll definitely keep checking out your work. Thanks again...:)
• Nyx Iscariot on April 28, 2003

  thank you for the comment on my poem...
  indeed thinking too much is probably my downfall, i dont just think, i theorize, about everything and anything. and situations that are proabably nothing, form into big giant monsters..and i end up unable to escape from them. hopefully you have a monsterkiller near you...i sometimes do..and sometimes dont.
  as for crying...im a girl..and i dont cry because i think it's weak, and makes me look pathetic...nice way to think eh? but sometimes i just cant stand it..so i do...so if you want to...and really need to...do it..it'll make you sick otherwise.
  
  Nyx...
  Edited on Apr 29, 5:22 p.m. because ''.
• ArtFullyMe on April 25, 2003

  Thank you for the most interesting comments on "Poets Anonymous". I too feel it is both blessing and curse. The curse of thinking in this fashion, and the blessings of it. I have many times vexed at that talent, when someone wishing for clarity says ... excuse me you are being cryptic again.. winding up frustrated that my words cannot seem to explain my position. The blessing I think is that it offers such an incredible diverse way of seeing things, and that it can bring those that have an inkling closer to those concepts that we see. A curse indeed but not one I would ever have broken
• Bigmammajen on April 23, 2003

  thanks for visiting my page
  im gonna get to bed now and cant think very good so Ill come back tomorrow after I have had some sleep
  
  Jen
• Johnny Wheeler on April 21, 2003

  Hi again,
  Thanks for your really wonderful comment on "Mortal Heart" It is readers such as yourself that make it all worthwile for me. Thank you so very much my friend.
  ~~~Johnny Wheeler~~~
• Johnny Wheeler on April 21, 2003

  Hi Riley,
  Thank you very much for visiting my author page. I am very flattered that you like "Soliloqy" enough that you would consider showing your teacher. Yes you may show your teacher! I wrote something a little different last night in the form of Shakespeare, and would appreciate it if you would take a look.
  Thank you again for chosing my write in your contest.
  ~~~Johnny Wheeler!!!
• InvisibleMan on April 21, 2003

  Hey Riley! Glad you enjoyed "The Burning". You aked for a poem about pain in love and that's exactly what the Burning is all about. Sometimes love is so overpowering that you love even when you know ahead of time that it is just going to hurt you. Sometimes it sucks to be human! :-)
• Mrs Robinson on April 17, 2003

  Hi Riley..this message is in relation to your comments on my poem "loved for awhile" ...you felt the statment about giving 110% every day being a cliche, and you are right it is definitely a cliche, but I am wacky and sometimes I like cliches......after all there's a reason they become cliches as many people find they make the perfect fit for what they are trying to say. It was my first attempt to enter a contest and I think that might have been the problem, as I usually write from my experience and just for me and I think trying to come up with something in that different way made it a bit contrived and not as deeply felt as what I think I usually write-Thanks for the constructive criticism...Have a great day!
• Johnny Wheeler on April 17, 2003

  Hello Riley,
  Thank you for you comment on my contest poem 'Soliloqy' I am flattered that you compared it to Shakspeare, to me that is a high honor
  ~~~Johnny Wheeler~~~
• whited sepulchre on April 13, 2003

  Your contest says ending on April 4th but it's open. I'm confused...
• Dreamweaver on April 13, 2003

  Thank you for coming by my poem 'The "F" Word'... I am not offended by your rant ... You said what had to be said ... and were not afraid to say it ... I like your honesty.
  Take care,
  Sammy.
• whited sepulchre on April 12, 2003

  Wow you write quite alot.
• squeezy on April 11, 2003

  Thanks for the comment - yeah, I think I'll keep the last line as it is. cheers!
  
  It is a bit of a dig at people who go in for romance with 'all the trimmings' - trying to act like film stars but with no real friendship or fun under it. That would be a sad situation indeed. I wanted it to be a kind of 'look; this is a relationship where we don't pretend to be perfect or to have never loved anyone before; we actually LIKE each other - no protests of 'love', just honesty/fun/respect, even though we know we aren't the most beautiful people or anything'
  I think the media has pressured a lot of my friends into being in love with the concept of love/romance, and desperate to find 'a' husband. one even has a dress in mind - now she's just got to use her 'shopper's eye' to dress nicely and find a socially acceptable 'romantic' man - ...oh yeah, she might have to get on with him too. but she hasn't thought of that yet LOL!
  i'm glad you enjoyed my poem - i think it is actually quite sweet/soppy, because it is about someone i like and respect. I would hate anyone to think it was JUST a political 'rant', but i think you got that :-)
  Edited on Apr 11, 9:24 because 'added some stuff'.
• squeezy on April 10, 2003

  Hi- great contest idea! Found it really stimulating. nice one.
• The Enemy on April 1, 2003

  hey, saw your comment on my poem.....the whole thing is in my head.....i use could because it's a possibility....i understood from the challenge that it was the possibility of a relationship and the bad things that could happen that you were looking for......the relationship in my poem hasn't happened, it's all a fantasy i wish would.....any suggestions on how to better clarify my meaning?
• WoundedAngel on March 28, 2003

  Just wanted to say thanks for all your comments on the poems. Loves Victory is a slightly altered look at love, but I really like metaphors *S* Yes the pieces of the poem broken are all apart of it, just to show where the narrator is speaking to the reader, then actually the telling of the tale. Anyways...thanks for your comments I like to hear what others think on my work...
  
  -Angel aka WoundedAngel.
• stormchaser on March 28, 2003

  To answer your question I was inspired to write this by how my aunt and uncle got together. It was based around how it all got started and how it all ended up being.
• SilverWolf13 on March 24, 2003

  :: pokes riley in the nose when he isnt looking::
  
  ::throws a stinky shoe at him just for good measure::
  
  ::sticks around to make sure the shoe hits him::
  
  ::seeing that it has, she promptly disappears::
  
  :-D
• LibranDeity on March 23, 2003

  thank you for your suggestions for "anger without enthusiasm." you were a great help!
• froglover80 on March 21, 2003

  hey you, long time, no talk...just wanted to stop by and say hello, miss talking to you.....i dont get to talk to anybody much seeing as I went back to work...but I do have this wednesday off, so maybe we can catch up then...kk... to you ~~Jenn
• undeniably geek on March 15, 2003

  Hey, thanks for the advice on how to fix that spellcheck problem
• phatalvision on March 12, 2003

  Hi riley, thank you for reading 'The Woman In Blue'. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
• froglover80 on March 12, 2003

  the things in your mind wandering about...
  
  not cold blooded...just a little unsure...now I am cold blooded...freaking cant ever get warm (or at least my hands and toes) the rest of me is ok...how retarded is that?
  
  anyways, thanks for making me smile...major and for that...lots of love...doll ~~Jenn
• froglover80 on March 12, 2003

  yeppers doll...thats what I said....hehe
  
  you are a doll because you seem to pick up my spirits when nobody else seems to..you have a kind spirit to you, and you have companionship seeping out of you...you are a warm, kindhearted person...that is what makes you a doll in my eyes... BIG to you!!! ~~Jenn
• maus on March 12, 2003

  Write a violent story!
• froglover80 on March 12, 2003

  I just freaking noticed that I dont have a single note on your author page...I am so bad about doing that damn it...lmao
  
  anyways, to answer your question on my author page..there are actually 3 poems of mine that mention until death shall we meet again, instead of until death shall we part...here are the links and the names of the poems:
  
  http://www.allpoetry.com/Poem/155622 (My Hero from Within)
  http://www.allpoetry.com/Poem/136788 (To my Everlasting)
  http://www.allpoetry.com/Poem/140773 (To You)
  
  you are such a doll...many loves to you ~~Jenn
  
• EmB016 on March 11, 2003

  Hey I just wanted to thank you for leaving a comment on one of my poems. I really appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read it Thanks again!
  
  ~Emberly~
• Katilina on March 10, 2003

  nothing heals love myt friend
• on March 10, 2003

  Thank you for the cool comment. I took poetry in college, and I realized then that I had been blind to all around me. I have not put my pen down since then. Drink in all college offers you, Raymond.
• nessanya on March 10, 2003

  thanks for the poem i really like it..
• lostinthedarkness on March 9, 2003

  Thank u for your comment and your help...not many people do that...so thanks a bunch...plesant nightmares... :-P
  ~Sofrito~
• nessanya on March 5, 2003

  hey, ok i thought you were, oh well..lol, i posted the poem on my name anyway, just because, its kinda made out to you cause well i thought it was you, i made up most of it anyway..lol, i still like it. you can check it out if you want... i'll talk to you lata... *waves*
  ~nessa~
• SilverWolf13 on March 4, 2003

  glad i could make you smile, any time you need a smile, or a virtual hug i'm here!
  
  ~SW~

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