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I'm so sad. I just re-read our arguement from like a year ago and see that you haven't been on since Feb., and I was SOOOOOOO looking forward to letting YOU of all people know that I'm not so Oprah emotional anymore. I was excited to see on your myspace page that you are a Scorpio. That's classic.
Anywho, I'm gonna send you an invite on myspace. Hope you won't hold that "everybody's a special flower" shit against me
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Hey, I thought I would drop by and say hi. Hope things are well. Keep writing!
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bw43 on September 1, 2006
hey so you're still coming around here. interesting. i thought of you the other day - don't know why... just did. so thought i'd say hi. was wondering what was of your life and if you're doing well...
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hey saw you online and thought i would just say hello... so hello and that is that.
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I'm so sorry about your Mother, Atomic... I hope you are alright. Edited on Apr 22 because ''.
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hey i miss talking to you whether you believe it or not.
i emailed you. you once told me to email you if i wanted to be friends... i never got an answer. did you withdraw the offer?
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you have remember this is a site where there are that amateurs write. Putting them down doesn't help and never will..reguardless of the reality you think. and all poetry is objective period...as all art is. what some like, others don't. Edited on Mar 01, 3:44 p.m. because ''.
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funny thing is you come across at least in your mind as honest. people like you don't have the foggist idea of what poetry is. as far as your critiquing... there's a thousand just like you as first yr college lit students.
you're nothing special my friend. i can find people who tear down potential poets thru the magazines... thru the internet any day. Billy E. Whitehorn
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You don't seem to write very much lately. I miss your writing are you O.K.?
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Things are tough right now. I feel depressed alot right now.
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I'm sorry. I've not been using the internet very much recently. Things have gotten busy. With that said, no you haven't made me mad. I hope things improve for you. Things must be tough.
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Why don't you ever talk to me anymore? You never even say hi. Did I say something to make you mad?
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Hey what are you doing? Me, not much. Just chillin.
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I decided I want to try Buddhism as maybe a possible religion. I really like to think, and maybe this is what I need. I need some sort of religious spiritual being to believe in. You want to hear something crazy? I used to think that love itself was a god or goddess. I thought it was the ultimate spirit. The one thing we all strive to reach for, and some never do. But I do believe that it is a god, as well.
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Hey there-what's up? N-M-h I guess you heard-I tried to overdose on Aspirin pills. I got stoned real bad. I got real sick. But I'm better now. I think.
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In a sense, yes. It's not that I reject all I was taught, it's that I cried out for freedom and expression. I am not one who lives for cut and dry precepts. God is a metaphysical necessity -- and one who is incoherent yet personal. That's what I was trying to express with that poem. And every human experience is an extension of God's gifts.
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first, thanks so much for replying. second, wow again. so did that piece also reflect the direction of your heart? (that is to say, where did your heart go?)
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I studied at Hadar HaTorah Rabbinical Seminary in Brooklyn, New York under the tutelage of Rabbi Baruch Goldberg -- one of the greatest talmudic scholars amongst the Lubavitch Chasidim. I was blessed to sit at his feet. However, I could not go on with my studies, as my heart was not in it.
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Oh my goodness, wow! So I glanced at your bio and was like "WOW, he likes T.S. Eliot too, that's cool!" and then I went to your other website and was like "WOW! AGAIN!" I haven't been on AP all that long but congradulations mister, you are the first person I've added to my list of favorites :-D Did you really study in yeshivas? (That made me grin really big too, even if it's just for the character you made up--but still, way cool). :-D WOW! (Don't you love those times when you wax so eloquently in your excitement that you forget to be loquacious? Ha ha ha... I'm trying to sound intellectual to balance all the "likes" and "wows" and my pride is demanding that I don't sound like a total airhead here. ha ha, silly pride...)
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i cant believe someone said 'kill the wabbet' here... oh my god! my rabbit is in danger!! 
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Hey, what's up? How are you doing? Me, not much. Just chillin.
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I mean, she hasn't spoken to me in forever. I don't even remember the last day she spoke to me. Maybe I just need to make more friends, or something. I don't know.
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Maybe she is really busy. Every relationship has its season.
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Chris, I don't think me and Raggedy Ann(Dena) are friends anymore. She doesn't talk to me that much anymore.
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Oh also if you don't mean could you give me a few pointers on how to punctuate this piece.It would be greatly appreciateit.Thanks in advance.
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I think your right the punctuation could be better I'll go correct it.
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Nothing much. I'm just trying to get some criticism before I leave for work.
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Hey I just thought I'd drop you a friendly hello to say thanks for commenting and popping by in my writes
ps: you're on my favourites list too
until today, I had no idea that you were canadian!
much love!
~spin~
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The fact is you
are not so cruel
as those who judge
what they do fudge.
My son likes blonds
it is not wrong
he is tall, dark
like a desert storm.
So you go anywhere
just follow your cares
God has given you
useful things to do.
I read your site
don't listen to gripes
some of your critics
are trite, ripe, yikes.
No one ever grew
who did not eschew
goals, visions, dreams, scenes
contradicting what feelings means.
Take your time feel
What is true, real
then let go, flow
as your heart knows.
Muses defeat common fears
creepy shadows cloying near
I use mines to
lead my mind through.
Have you heard we
got two brains free
one that fears wrong
the other loves song.
Peace- AT Alishtari Edited on Aug 02, 1:28 because 'Case Correction-er- stuff'.
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I applaud the desire you have to scale heights, and your acknowledgment that poetry is something to work on and that can be improved.
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You don't understand-I go depressed, and I don't always know why. I just have problems I guess.
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Chris, I think I told you I'm a manic depressive or bipolar. I'm one or the other. That was my angry and depressed side. I'm fine now. I feel absolutely fine. I don't know when my depression and anger attacks. It just hits me, and I become bitchy. I'll get over it. I think I might go back to mitchell. I'm not sure.
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By the way, my name is Christopher.
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Dude, it's really no big deal. So you had a little crush on someone. We all do. But the way of the world is such that people always have feelings with those who do not reciprocate. You're a pretty good fellow. There's no need to be down on yourself.
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please write back. I'm sorry-just say something.
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My thoughts exactly. I don't understand the mind of a woman, nor do I think I'll ever understand it. But hot damn! I'll I'm willing to be confused if it means I can me some of those curvy women.
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Hey I'm sorry to be butting into your conversation and all, but I gotta agree with ya, nothing can compete with curves. WOMEN ARE HOT!
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I'll leave you alone now.
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so u want to write something immortal? kinda reminds me of achilles...
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I'd fall for you because your honest about my poetry, and you seem honest. You wouldn't lie to me.
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I think that if you fall for someone, you should be very sure about what you are falling for.
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Does age really matter when it comes to love? When your in love, age won't matter. I know I don't know you. I just feel like I've known you longer than a week. Maybe your one of those serial killers or online predators. What do you mean settle for second best? I didn't get that part.
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I can handle being hit upon. However, I think you should be very careful who you meet online. I'm waaaaay older than you (I'm 23). Plus, it is hard to know someone simply over a week period. Also, don't settle for second best.
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It's okay-you don't have to be gay. I won't hit on you anymore. I'm sorry. Please forgive me.
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I'd go out with you, and love you for who you are. I don't care about your psychological profile, or whatever. I'm a manic depressive, and I have other mental problems. I'm partially deaf, and I have aspergers syndrome. As for a bag of cherries, I'm not a britney spears. You know, I'm not hot or anything.
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I don't think I can ever bond with a man -- emotionally or sexually. I don't think men are attractive. In my mind, I wonder how anyone can compete with curves. Truthfully speaking, I keep wondering why more chicks aren't into chicks. But hey, I'm not complaining if women dig me.
Really man, even if I was gay, you'd realize very quickly I'm no bag of cherries. I don't think you'd like my psychological profile either. I think you're probably looking for someone who is willing to be way more vulnerable.
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I feel like I've known you all my life. Isn't that a weird feeling?
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