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LaAmyaArlene : hey on March 19, 2008

No desire to talk, or what?
LaAmyaArlene : Momma on March 17, 2008

I know that you might not consider me your AP Daughter anymore. But when my own mother wouldn't listen to me, you listened. That was over four years ago. I haven't talked you in forever, and I miss all our long talks. Get in touch, LaLa ♥
JustBeingDevine on May 22, 2007

Just wanted to say hi!
JustBeingDevine : Being a mother is Fantastic on April 26, 2007

You are such a fantastic writer I love reading your stuff and thanks so much for your comments...Keep up the good work.
LaAmyaArlene : Mom on March 22, 2007

I miss you. I know you might not consider yourself my AP Mother anymore, but I consider you it still, and always will. You helped me, taught me, and guided me so much when I was younger. I'm now 18 years old, engaged, and getting married Aug. of 2008. I have power of attourney & am working on getting custody of my two little cousins. I've had them for the last two months. It's been incredibly hard raising two kids that have been through so much in their short lives. But anyways! Get back at me! ♥ LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on October 25, 2006

It's been almost a year since I've talked to you! This hurts. I've m issed you so much. Here's my status! I'm turning 18 next month, getting married in Febuary. I moved out of state to North Carolina with my fiance and my friends! I love it. How's your girls?
on February 27, 2006

Hello. This is Caitlyn. You know me by the many AP names I've had such as Fatally Insecure, as is on your list on this page. You used to comment on almost all of my poems when I was younger. Yes, it has only been about 2-3 years, but I feel much older now. To get to the point, I was reading through my older poems, and your comments caught my eye. You may not have known it, but you guided me and helped me so much in life. Just through your comments, your advice and support, I grew stronger as a poet and a person. I'm sure you have done this for many, and the others are all just as lucky as I. I just wanted to stop by and say thank you for all you did for me. I'm sorry this is so random, but I felt you deserved the thanks.
I hope you are well.
Thanks for everything.
Caitlyn
LaAmyaArlene on December 29, 2005

Hey huni... yep, I'm gone hehe... sorry I haven't been on much, but I've had little computer access... Tell your girls I said hi, I miss them! Thank you for wishing me a happy holiday... how was yours? Love you!

LaLa
Desire on November 23, 2005

Hey poetry within~
Wanted to wish you a safe and enjoyable Thanksgiving...
Take care my friend!!!
and much love~Desire
LaAmyaArlene on September 22, 2005

Mom!!!!! I wrote you an email yestarday. I don't know if I'll be down in April or not because they might not let Dustin out til next October So yeah, but if I do, I'll come see you and the girls, k?

LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on September 6, 2005

Ugh... I'll miss you, good bye.

LaLa
as i lay dying on August 25, 2005

hello, remember me? I know it's been a while.. but I'm back..
So-Alone on August 19, 2005

i love ur poetry so beautiful!
gr8t job on em'
~~nicki
Diamond on August 18, 2005

Hi Poetry Within, thank you so much for visiting my HP and leaving such a cheerful and sweet message. It certainly made my day. I would love it if you entered my 'Dramatic Short Story' contest. I'm trying to recruit as many people as possible. If you don't wish to it's ok, I understand that not everyone likes to write stories. Feel free to copy my HP picture if you like and thanks again for stopping by. You are a true friend and I will cherish your friendship for a lifetime.

All my love,

Avril

P.S. I am so happy that you and your girls enjoyed my chicken story, I am in the process of writing a sequel for it.
LaAmyaArlene on June 9, 2005

I love you!
snowfairy17 on April 21, 2005

hey, thanks for your comment on Stronger. i'm still in pain so yeah, i'm doing the best i can. thanks again.
LaAmyaArlene on March 25, 2005

Things haven't been too good. I relapsed with the blade thingy yestarday, after I got into a fight with my Grandma. I left, and went to my friends. I'm hardly ever home. The only reason I'm home right now is because I have to work at 10am....

Tell Caitlyn I said hello too She's so pretty! I'm going to bed, I have to wake up early.

LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on March 25, 2005

I love you
DaJaHSi inc BOOKS on March 9, 2005

your opening poem is much like my addiction to poetry. since i found her i have not been able to let her go. i begin poems and never end for at times i feel she may leave never come back. it is a great release dare i say better then sex but i am a guy so that i will never say but i loved your opener and that leads me to believe you are a great poet... hope to see a lot more poems like that...
boo2u987 on February 2, 2005

hi i'm boo2u987
you left a comment on my poem heaven and i thought that i would let you know that soon i will be submitting 2 more poems in the heaven trilogy i will let you know when i have them posted i thought that you might like them. have a great day and
smiles
boo
sinningvirgin on January 12, 2005

you have a really cool page! i enjoyed it very much!

-cindyxxx
LaAmyaArlene on December 7, 2004

Just thought I would say Hi, and that I hate school, and I dont want to be here lol. Yestarday I was sick, so I had a extra long weekend lol.

LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on November 12, 2004

Has the mail gotten there yet today damn it? lol
silver and cold on November 11, 2004

thanks alot for all the amazing comments..its very uplifting when people like your work.. thanks again
michael adams on November 8, 2004

after reading thorugh this and that, i can see wherre the trophies came from.
Angel in Disguise on October 27, 2004

I'm glad it's not a personal experience, too! lol And I'm glad you like it. Visit my site anytime!
LaAmyaArlene on October 25, 2004

I wrote a short poem for you and Leander, I hope you both like it, it truely came from the heart...thanks for everything you've done for me

You look at me, and see all that I've been through.
You know my story, yet still hug me tight.
You dont call me helpless, nor run far away.
Instead you call me beautiful and hold me close.

My best friends helping me, picking me up when I fall.
Touching my life with their stories, and their struggles.
Never giving up on me, showing that they'll always be there.
Honest opinions and helping hands, I'd be lost without you.

Angels sent from God, showing me the way to happiness.
Showing me the light, the way to be okay.
Loving me for who I am, like closest friends should.
Never leaving me behind because of the mistakes I've made.

Thank you for everything you have done.
You've touched my life, and guided me so far.
You will always be apart of me, and my broken heart.
For you made me smile, when I was fighting back tears.

Thank you for giving me hope, when I wanted to die.
For showing me the way, when I was lost and broken.
I will cherish your memories, and everything you give, always.
Even after I die, I will still call you, my angels.
xxLost-in-Lovexx on October 21, 2004

I love your poetry!!! its all soooooo amzing!! no wonder youve got so many trophies!!! good job!!!! you are so awesum!! keep it up!!! mucho love,
*melyssa*
LaAmyaArlene on October 19, 2004

Hey you! Did you ever get the email? Im so tired, and so bored. I havent been home the last couple of days, I've been out with Ashley and stuff, and I will be at her house this Friday probably til Saturday or Sunday. Her Dad left, so Im allowed there(my mom wont let me stay there if there's a male role in the house that she doesnt know, for that matter, this is the first time I've spent the night somewhere in like a year. Anyways, I've been so busy. I didnt even go to school yestarday. Well... I did, but Ashley was upset, so we left, and walked home (3miles) then slept all day. Well, I will let you go, so I dont take up your whole Author page and what not. Love ya, and hope all is well....Your AP Daughter...LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on October 16, 2004

Hey you Whats up? Not much here, rather down. I got your card, and I emailed you last night, but I dont know if you even got it. I went to see Raise Your Voice last night, starring Hillary Duff. That movie is so sad, but such a good movie. I think I want to go see it again, and when it comes out, Im buying it for sure How are you? I have a friend over, and Im so busy. I have to write a 1000word paper today for English class, set a topic of the week for my group, think of a game for them to play, and try to get more people to join. *so much responsibility. Ever feel like you're going to break down? I do.
Ms Raneika on October 8, 2004

Hey poetry within this is truth i was just wondering would you be interested in joining my group the truth corner it's about conversating on topics that i put out there or topics that you put out there it don't matter people from the allpoetry.com will be there so it's a good way to get to know other poet's so if you are interested in joining please let me know by going to my page allpoetry.com/truth and leaving me a comment thank you From:Truth p.s there is no rules or policies just speaking of true minds
LaAmyaArlene on October 8, 2004

Grr...We have a stupid assembly the last 2hours of school, and I dont want to go, but my grandma refuses to pick me up. So Im just skipping, and probably will get in trouble, but Im not fricking going. Grr...fucking-a...that pisses me off. She's like 'you cant always follow your friends' Im not following anyone, I just dont want to go, then she's like 'well I do things I dont want to do everyday' and Im like 'fuck it, I will go' and I hung up on her. But Im not going. Im just going to get wrote up because Im not sitting in that hot gym for fucking two hours Grrr..I know Im just being a baby, but I really dont want to sit there. Its BS that she doesnt feel like coming to get me, yet wont let me leave with my friends. When Jessica comes and picks Tonya and Cody up, Im just going to go with them(thats Cody's 23yr old sister, Im allowed in her car)...thats if she has enough room.
LaAmyaArlene on October 6, 2004

Im at home(my mom's house)... I just woke up from a nap, and I will be going home in about an hour. I started a book today. Called Monster. Its different I guess. I love Walter Dean Myers books, and after this one, I will be borrowing me another book thats by him from a teacher I had last year So have you been? Im a bit worried. The other day, this girl in my writing group was speaking of cutting herself, because her friend died the night before. She was really upset, and asked me to help her, I tried talking to her, but she said she had to go, and now I havent heard from her in 2days. I hope she's alright. Will you pray for her?? Anyways, 's I hope things are alright with the family. Please tell Caitlyn I said hello

LaLa
swankylady on October 5, 2004

Hey you have an awesome home page not to mention that i absolutly love the poem "little rose" so unique. but i am just browsing around AP.
check me out later, i know i will be bookmarking you.
LaAmyaArlene on October 4, 2004

Happy Birthday!!!! Whoo, I made you something, but I woke up late, so it will have to wait til after Im done with school. I was a whole hour late lol...Im pissed, cuz I was suppose to wake up at 5. Im wearing all black, my friends are going to be mad, but I dont care. Its my body, my clothes, my personality. Everyone says I have a bright personality(they're kidding theirselves, but yeah) so you think it would make up for my un-bright clothes Haha...anyways, happy birthday...Love ya, LaLa

by the way..that poem, I will admit, its for him to see how much Im hurting, but not for attention. I dont want his attention, God has all of that[/cuts jealous shit] I just want him to see how I feel, because I sure dont have the guts to say it to him...plus he'll read it anyways...and I honestly like that poem LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on October 3, 2004

Im going to bed, or Im going to lay in my bed actually..and wait for my bro to call me. He's not my real bro, he lives in GA, but yeah. He's the one that gave me the nick name Mya lol. He always calls me to say goodnight, and to make me laugh, and talk to me about my day. He cheers me up, and yells at me when I whine too much. I know Im acting like Im not hurting, but its killing me inside. I love you, good night...LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on October 1, 2004

I just got paid for baby sitting, so I finally have enough money to get my ring sized. Maybe I will feel a little better when I can finally wear it on my finger. It hurts though, because he said we'd get married. That he'd come back for me....I guess he could still change his mind, and there is always hope, but right now there's slim to none. If you havent already, read the email I sent you, and maybe you'll understand what Im talking about....LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on September 29, 2004

I'm in school man...the 1st marking period ends soon, so that means I have a week to do better, and keep my grades in the A's, B's, and C's catagory. Its hard as hell working your ass off to even get them kind of grades. But it was the deal. Even if I broke my other deal(on accident) with Rich, I want to keep this one.

Anyways, how are you today? Me? My arm hurts, my head hurts, and Im tired. I went to sleep early last night at 9, only to wake up earlier then normal..so it really didnt pay off. I have church tonight til 10 because Im going to a concert afterwards. So I wont be home til 10:30 Im guessing. I hope all is well with you, and the girls. How is the weather there? Its real windy here, but I wont get anything from the hurricanes but a little small storm or too. Well bless you hun, LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on September 27, 2004

Can we say You kick ass? Well, if you cant, I can Hehe...just thought I'd leave you a message, cuz I love leaving messages. Im in a really good mood, and yeah...just thought I would let you, and everyone who comes to you author page know :-D Hehe...LaLa
LaAmyaArlene on September 24, 2004

This sucks, so dont put it on your author page please! lol

Poems that kick some major ass
On top of things, having a blast
Excellent mother, excellent friend
Tries so hard til the very end
Reaches her hands out to me
You're a star, a friend for me

Without you I wouldnt be who I am
I love you so much, Im your greatest fan
Thinking of you puts a smile on my face
Having you in my life makes days of grace
I hope that you feel better soon
No one deserves to be as happy as you do

Never heard of that show lol. Im so tired, its Friday night, and Im stuck at home(just like all the other Friday nights of my life) I hope you feel better. Talk to me about anything. Some women on here just called me a flippin child. What the frick is wrong with her Im no frickin child lol Pisses me off... I mean, just cuz I was born 15years ago doesnt mean Im 15 on the inside, and really...I dont look 15 on the outside either. HaHa I crack myself up sometimes.
Edited on Sep 24, 7:48 p.m. because 'damn, cant make up my mind'.
LaAmyaArlene on September 24, 2004

Wow, you really like my poems huh? I like take up 1/4 your frickin author page lol...have you been getting my messages?
LaAmyaArlene on September 24, 2004

I decided Im going to sit here and type a poem for you im in school so I dont know exactly how good it will be, but whatever lol!

Always there to pick me up when Im falling fast.
A true friendship with so much heart, defently one to last.
Not a day can pass that I dont think about her.
How she's so loving, and a good friend for sure.
Without her, I dont know where I'd be.
She's a special person, for all to see.
She's there for support, and always there for me.
She writes from the heart, beautiful poetry.
What a great person, a great mother and wife.
So much to offer, takes away so much strife.
Inspires me to keep going, to keep alive.
Someone who wouldnt want me to die.
Thank you for everything you have done.
My frienship you have, a great friend I won

Dont know if it makes sense, but yeah lol...there you go!

Edited on Sep 24, 8:20 because 'whoopsie'.
Topaz135 on September 16, 2004

Penning poems, constant flow
Outward sign of her pen-name
Entry to an Acrostic tried
Taking Bronze, to her acclaim
Rarely vying for the prize
Yet again her pen must write

With contentment putting down
In words that scour her second sight
This catharsis makes it right
Herein these words I spin
In tribute to a poet true
Named as Poetry Within

Hope you like it, consider it my personal applause for your poem entry. It does rhyme across the divide! lol
Good luck
Kim
BonBon on September 15, 2004

Thank you for reading Potato Chip Can. Out kids sure do some good ones. I have a few I have written about his antics as he was growing up. Now that he is older they are turning out to be pretty poetry lines.
Also love your background on this page it is beautiful.
BonBon
poetry within on September 14, 2004

how very touching and sweet! i thank you so much for your kind words and thoughts,i too hope we can be friends and share each others words and thoughts. i love this poem i'm putting it on my authors page at the top thank you.
JesSiCa RabBiT on September 14, 2004

Hops around a little nervous
I wrote you a poem.. you'll probably hate it but I did try weaallly hard and I mean every word of it!

For You.

Upon discovery,
of your emotions,
I have met,
true inspiration.
and slipping words,
provoke my mind,
your comments honest,
gentle, kind.
you I thank,
for showing me,
that deep inside,
I hold the key.
to open doors,
of hidden thoughts.
and your love,
of which you speak,
reminds me of,
the times less bleak.
I will always,
willingly lend,
a hand to hold,
and be a friend.

Well, thats it, hehe, I hope you like it it's especially for yoouuu (Oooh, bad kylie moment >.< lol)
Edited on Sep 14, 2:12 p.m. because 'Typo'.
babydoll89724 on September 12, 2004

awww...thanx for saying hi. i really appriciate it. im glad to know im missed!i promise i'll try n make some more poetry. actually i have written one in school but it's in my locker right now. lol ... well i miss ya too! i'm going to see what i have missed latley so look forward to some comments from me.
Jessimie (that's my new nickname! )
JesSiCa RabBiT on September 12, 2004

I love your work, you are so talented, you are my favourite poet on AP ah, you're so talented I love your work to bits!!
teardrop on September 10, 2004

LOL, they came up this time, must have been me. oopsy!
LaAmyaArlene on September 10, 2004

Hey you How are you doing? Me, well Im okay. I got out of gym class because of my problems(the ones that I told you about) and my mother is going to try and get me into the doctors soon. Anyways, Im sick. I have a cold, and Im so drained. I have to much home work to do, and it sucks. I hope all is well with your family, your husband, and your girls. Stay safe, and stay healthy. Hope to talk to you soon LaAmya

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