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  • logorrhoea on September 6, 2008
    I've had a read...know that I love your style. I can't make a comment today, it would be too forced and pay any poem no compliment.
    ~Slug <3
  • lively banter on July 7, 2008
    i love augusten
  • Chrysalis on June 23, 2008
    your brutal!
    lol.
    but it's cool... really!
    -Blanche
  • Pelican on January 13, 2008
    I really like your name
  • Shandu on December 28, 2007
    Thank you for your comments on my poem. That poem means the world to me. I have read some of your poems as well and really enjoyed them. "Red" so far is my favorite you do a great job with imagery.
  • flight on July 9, 2007
    Thank you so much for the note!
    I am excited to have my life moving forward,
    and I am glad you believe I can do it!!!
    Thanks again.
    peace to all ~flight
  • CitrineSunrise on June 29, 2007
    I appreciate the eloquent comments you have given to my short poems. It is a pleasure to hear from someone who enjoys language as much as I do. It is nice to meet a fellow Californian. Peace, Liz
  • toasted-lemming on December 29, 2006
    Thankyou so much for the in depth comments on my poems. I especially appreciate the (constructive) slating you gave 'The Partygoer', as I've never been happy with that one myself. You've given me some ideas that will actually get me moving to revise it. Thankyou again!
  • pure-spirit on September 23, 2006
    Thank you for your very in-depth comment on my poem "Exodus!"
    I appreciated VERY much both the compliments and the constructive criticism and it was one of the most useful commens have ever recieved!
    Thanks again...
    Pure-spirit
    xxx
  • dark desire on June 27, 2006
    ok i have revised my poem for your contest. I did change it just a little bit, but i think it was for the better. you will notice my changes i believe and the things that you thought i should correct i did. thanks again for that lovely comment and i hope that you enjoy the revised verison just as much if not better then the first version.
  • Immortal Nightmare on May 5, 2006
    ty for the critical comment. you are right i tend to make those mistakes from time to time cause i get caught up in the poem and i end up getting upset. i would change my poems unless its a small gramatical error cause i love to leave it in its raw form. but ty i love you for actually taking the time to look into the poem and not at the poem. thats what i wanted and yeah that moment hurts a lot and im not sure but if its happened to you too, then you know what it feels like to feel that way. ty very much *bows out of respect and great honor* and if you would like to talk more in the future im always here. have fun and ty again.
    --Immortal Nightmare--
    --A.K.A. Jonathan--
  • Kissafrog on April 22, 2006
    Hey thanks for that comment you put on my last poem. Ill have to check some of yours out. O and BTW...your page looks nice.
  • stagnant recliner on September 2, 2005
    well, you tell ppl to be harsh, so i here i go... i liked your first poem and thought it went downhill from there... tho long, after is definately your strongest write... but i almost didnt read it when i saw how long it was... i wasnt actually thrilled with your random breakdown of what was esentially prose to make it into poetry, but w/e... emotion was terribly cliche. sally is your second best, but is endenyably incomplete. toothpaste is a waste of memory space. hope you dont take that as a personal attack, im just telling you my opinions in the blunt way you beg for.
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