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  • RainFall InOctober on November 5, 2005
    #2 is much more raw emotion, more poetic too...I'd go for that one.
  • nick - on July 2, 2005
    yoyo! I think numero dos is a lot better. Have fun in californ-i-a.
  • Antirrhinum on June 24, 2005
    i would vote...
    for two
  • the atlantic on January 24, 2005
    i miss you so much.
  • Speak on December 27, 2004
    i liked # 1 .. but my vote goes to # 2 .. it was amazing! ... and now i am off to read some of your poetry!

    Jess Jess
  • RoseThatBled on November 27, 2004
    I am unable to read your entry to my contest as I am underage. Please remove it/change it/substitute it for another
  • TheMuffinMan on November 27, 2004
    I liked #1
  • papercutsagain on November 27, 2004
    Hey raven!
  • The Monster on November 9, 2004
    Where have you been rach!

    -Jake
  • The Monster on November 7, 2004
    Haha I commented on alot of your poems today, I hope I didn't annoy you. Peace.
  • The Monster on November 7, 2004
    Haha I love that picture paper. Write something new, I want to read!

    -Jake
  • StrawberryFrost on November 2, 2004
    I have to say I like the first one better. It seems to hang together better and has more of an urgency. The second poem seems a little awkward in its structure and the rhyming scheme seems a little confused.
  • The Monster on November 1, 2004
    Hey, I thought I had left you some feedback already. Anywho, I like the second one more. It's got better flow, better language, and it seems more "intimate" in a way. So yeah, second one is good. Can you do me a favor and tell me what u think of my newest poem? An eye for an eye they say, maybe we can make this a regular thing!

    -Jake
  • dearjealousyx on November 1, 2004
    I think #1 fits better... I just really like the "My words, my only weapons" part.. yerr...
  • The Monster on October 31, 2004
    Just stopped by, I'll read more later today!

    -Jake
  • Freaklett on October 13, 2004
    Hello! I Like # 2 >> So Cool
    COOLNESS
    Like salmon. Yeah Salmon Are Cool. Neways You Rockzorz.

    Chao,
    Freaklett
  • malkinpuss on September 12, 2004
    I couldn't read all of this poem either and it is frustrating because it evoked intense emotion from me...Ok.... ur young and cute (pretty) ... sadness should not hold domain over you...yet your angst is real and the words I could read shovesd it in my face, The emotion evoked from your words caused me pain as I read it. Well done! You have talent but bone up on spelling and grammar. These kind of mistakes seriously detract from the written word. Wonderful imagery. I am not 100% sure of the meaning of "PAPERCUTSAGAIN" because I couldn't read the whole thing but even so it affected me. Wish you'd send it to me without the background so I could REALLY read and get into it.
  • painted veil on September 12, 2004
    shucks, thank you. I'm glad you liked reading it. I was trying to find a poem that wasn't overly happy or excitable, but also not too depressing- because knowing her, she will be harsh. but i guess we'll see. thanks for the comment.
  • Blushfulmoon on September 10, 2004
    Hey Papercuts
    I read your poems
    I live in Ky too
    What part of Ky do you live in
    I am South Central
    IM me and let me know
    Nice to meet you and Welcome to AP
    Hugs
    Susan~~~
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