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  • Melissa Gayle on April 24, 2006
    I noticed that you have read quite a few of my pieces, hope you enjoyed them.
  • LunaStar13 on April 17, 2006
    out of curiosity have you ever read the book ' house of leaves'?
  • Laylay on November 10, 2005
    lighter colors so we can read everything
  • g r e y i s m on October 16, 2005
    hey
    how are you? just though I would send this link your way because I think you could do this contest justice

    allpoetry.com/Contest/1572051
  • Devsouane on September 13, 2005
    awsome poems nd great done i would like to chat with u sometime keep pening c ye
  • Araina on September 4, 2005
    I have to say that is an absolutely gorgeous picture of you. Wonderfully stunning. Well, now that I've done that I guess I'll read some of your poetry
  • 13darkhearts on September 1, 2005
    oh my stars, WHERE did u get ur pic?? i love it!!!! and tim burton is my friggen idol...id marry him if he werent 2 times my age
  • abernaith on August 27, 2005
    Hello. Just dropping by to read. I think your poems are cool. And I like Tim Burton and Chuck Palahniuk, too.
  • LeBrooke on August 23, 2005
    Ok, awesome! This play is so...original. A fresh, new outlook on playwriting!

    The one part in the play where Adam is talking as he looks at the newspaper- I'd like to cut Ian and Irene's lines and make it a monologue, so it'll be as follows:

    "ADAM
    (Picks up newspaper, pauses) Do you think that death can make a person seem better than they really were?

    Just listen for a sec will ya? Whenever you read an obituary- you never see “he drank too much” or “she wouldn’t listen to her children.” Is it really that every person who dies in the country is Angelic, godly, a real family oriented saint?

    I’ve got eyes, I know that’s not the way things are, it’ll never be like that. People are imperfect, defective- hell exists for a reason, we can’t all be angels, because it just doesn’t work that way.

    I’m not saying that there aren’t people in the world who are worth what’s written about them; just that everyone can’t be like that…

    And David... I don’t know, he was a good guy, an amazing guy- I’m not going to deny that. Just these last few hours I’ve heard so many people tell me about this kid, this talented, charitable, openhearted kid who made the world a great place. But all this time, I’ve been thinking to myself- and call me a heartless bastard- but I’ve been thinking that Dave was great, he was one of my best friends- but he wasn’t that great. His presence didn’t make the world any better than it is."

    Could I use that as a monologue?

    And I would really like your email address- I have other things in mind for this play, too. I'm sending mine to you through an IM so everyone won't see it.

    Thanks again!

    Brooker
  • painted veil on August 23, 2005
    No. I wouldn't mind at all. I'd love to see the monologue you cut from it. My Name is Kathryn Ottman. --Ryn
  • LeBrooke on August 23, 2005
    I love your script- it is amazing!

    Would you mind if I borrowed a monologue from it? I'll have to print the whole thing, but do you mind?

    I'll also need your name so I know who to give credit to.

    Brooker
    Edited on Aug 23, 2:09 p.m. because ''.
  • painted veil on August 9, 2005
    you bet it is, lol. johnny, dear half crazed johnny and navidson.
  • bachelorette on August 9, 2005
    Saw your username and wondered if it was in reference to that crazy (footnote bogged) book by Mark Z. Danielewski.

    -K
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