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Lilac Moon : You've not written for a while... on October 14Since the end of May from what shows here on AP...
I know how that is. Hope all is well with you, Oce
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Sunday Rain : random on May 21SEXIEST PEOPLE ON AP....WHEN YOU BEEN HIT YOU GOTTA SEND THIS PLAYBOY BUNNY TO ALL THE SEXY PEOPLE YOU KNOW INCLUDING DA PERSON THAT SEND IT TO YOU... ___$$$$$$$___________$$$$$$$ _____$$$$$$$$_______$$$$$$$$ ______$$$$$$$$$_____$$$$$$$ ________$$$$$$$$____$$$$$$$ _________$$$$$$$$$__$$$$$$ ____________$$$$$$$$$$$$$ _______________$$$$$$$$$ __________$$$$$$$$$$$$$ ________$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ _______$$$___$$$$$$$$$$$$ ______$$$$$_$$$$$$$$$$$$$ _____$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ ______$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ _______$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ ___________$$$$$$$$$$$$$ __________$$$$$$$$$$$$$ 1-3-U MIGHT BE CUTE 4-6-U FINE 6-8-U SEXXY 8-10-U ARE SOOOO SEXXXXXXYYYYYYY
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TearsKeepFallin on March 16thanks for the comment keep writing!
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confessionsofmysoul : hey on March 11how are you? i wrote some new stuff... finally. check it out
--jeffery
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Mark Rickerby on March 8How ya doin, Ocer? I hope life is treating you kindly and rewarding you lavishly.
Marco
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debilynn on April 28, 2008
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wildfiredreamer : hello on April 16, 2008I was just looking through some of my poems, and I came across a comment from you. so I just thought I would check out your page. hope your doing good.
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Salt Therapy : Hi on September 11, 2007How have you been?
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Mark Rickerby : Way too short on May 14, 2007What's with this author page? Not a word about the ol' Oce'r? Surely there must be some mistake! I'll expect a full-length biography first thing in the morning, or one at least 1/10th as long as my page!
Mark
P.S. Well, don't just sit there, get to work! haha
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the darkling on November 7, 2006I don't really feel fit to comment on any of your poems, but thanks for your critique on mine. I appreciate it
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Sunday Rain on November 1, 2006
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Aidenn on October 30, 2006Hey! Jus popping by the ole' page to say hello! Thanks again for dedicating your poem to me!
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Sunday Rain on October 24, 2006If you want I can help you, it just depend's on if you want to do it or not, set up your sn screen name, with a pic and you can design it, I've already helped some of my other friend's
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Sunday Rain on October 18, 2006LOL, I think that's it, I'll check it out,
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Sunday Rain on October 18, 2006I think I found it,
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Sunday Rain on October 18, 2006I love that motto, very unique and creative I'm lookin' for that poem, the one with the butterfly and the little girl, but I forgot the name,
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confessionsofmysoul on September 19, 2006ello how r ya doin ...... havnt written much lately... think ill give it a shot....
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Night Hope on September 4, 2006
Thank you for your generousity, ocerus...a Gift, then...Be well, Poet... Wanda
Khayyam www.okonlife.com
Tagore www.terebess.hu/english/tago re5.html
Neruda www.poemhunter.com/pablo-ner uda/poet-6638/
Paz www.geocities.com/poesiamsig loxx/paz/paz2. html
www.duirwaighgallery.com/ins piration_trail er.htm
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Lioness860 on May 9, 2006'I made some edits and let me know if this flows better...when you write from the heart and i very rarely do rhyming...sometimes it takes a few corrections to get the flow
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forbidden-colour on April 17, 2006thank you for your kind words,and advice,i would comment on some of your works but there doesnt seem to be any!
take care
Black Mist
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Mark Rickerby on April 7, 2006Hey,
Thanks again for featuring that piece. Have a great weekend.
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dreamer wind on April 6, 2006 Welcome to the group and thank you for applying
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Molly Densmore on March 24, 2006I thought I would be first is saying HELLO, how are you? and YES I am trying to finish up here. I have an appointment a little later so I have to do as much as I can... Hope you have a great day!!!
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confessionsofmysoul on March 21, 2006ello
its confessions here
how are ya
... i have got a few poems that i am a little aprehensive to post , i think ill polish them up a little before i post them... hehe
PS i got a job!!! i bust tables at an amish restaurant called yoders over on bahia vista
ttyl
confessions
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Sunshinegf on March 20, 2006I WILL BE BACK TO READ MORE SOON
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AND I AM SURE ALOT OF OTHER WRITERS
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only just on March 14, 2006In response to your comment on 'Just A Girl': this is a more sarcastic look at the image of the female in society, therefore empowering her by pointing out how wrong people are. I would consider myself as a bit of a feminist and the poem is meant to be seen a little more in depth than the way you might have read it. I wouldn't see this as an impression of myself, so your kind advice was noted, yet not necessary. However, thanks for your comment and it was very much appreciated
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Stingersinger53 on March 14, 2006I just wanted to say Hi again and welcome to our group!! I'm really glad you decided to join! If you need any help around or need to know how to post a poem I think I could help you so just im me.
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Stingersinger53 on March 12, 2006Okay! I'm back here is the link:
allpoetry.com/Application/1871652
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Stingersinger53 on March 12, 2006Hi! I just wanted to come and tell you thank you for the help on my poem "Far away" I made the changes you suggested and I think it flows much better now. Sometimes I struggle at parts that I want to say too much and just can't seem to find the right words. Please feel free to look again and see if it's better now. I am also going to ask my AP grandmom to send you an application to join our group. There are alot of great poets there and the application will explain everything. I think you would be very helpful to all of us. So look it over and I hope you decide to apply! My grandmom is Mistic Moonlite and she will send you a link or I will. Thank you again!
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Peas in the Sink on March 7, 2006Ya the end of the poem is throwing everyone off. That is what I like about it. Thanks for your comment. I will get one of your poems later.
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Elfin on March 5, 2006Hi Ocerus, Thankyou for commenting on my poem "under the stairs" but believe me this was a very true account on part of my life as a child. I am now an OAP but the feelings never go away.
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Stingersinger53 on February 26, 2006I wanted to come by and say Thank You for the nice comment you made on my poem. (I did change the miss spelled word) I start typing too fast trying to get words out of my head and that's what happens, lol. I usually use spell check, I don't know why I didn't with that piece. I am awful at spelling. I am 14 an that is one of my downfalls. Thanks again for the comment and the correction that needed to be made that no one else would point out. Hugs & Kisses-Cayla
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Bekabulwinkle on February 20, 2006hello - just wanted to say im looking through your work and i love it -- it takes my breath away and i just want to curl up and read it for hours.......
I love the way you can bring the worlds together, bring yourself out so open......
thank you for all your kind words and for all the beautiful words your have given us
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Sedasia on February 19, 2006Chess and Her Eyes caught my attention. I loved the title, well chosen there. Then, I read it and I fell in love with the poem.
I will be back I'm sure.
Be well
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Dross zero on February 17, 2006I find your work to be profound and breath-taking. Completely awe-inspiring!!!
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RuthKephart on January 22, 2006I can't believe your shelves aren't lined with trophies. What's wrong with the judges in the contests you're entering?
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Quill on January 12, 20063 bronze trophys for 30 writes ooh err ,how wonderful!
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ocerus on December 8, 2005Dear Dan,
I was going through my poetry recently and I found a comment you had made in which you asked me how you could avoid forcing rhyme. The best advice I could give you would be to say, look inside yourself for the truth of everything - everything you can understand (no one sees the total truth, let's face it) - and when you've seen the truth as clearly as you possibly can, ruturn to you poem and let it write itself as much as possible. And don't worry too much about what you think other people will say. The only way to write a truly great poem is to please yourself, believe me.
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DougMcCue on December 3, 2005i saw gwar last night and the color of the day is purple
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Ellis on November 4, 2005Thank you for your comment on
My poeem DEAD FLEAS UPON MY KNEES
The fleas are now, thank goodness, gone
They blew off when I sneezed
Don't know where they have gone
With these fleas you cannot win
Oops, my cat says something's wrong
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Weltt on September 10, 2005Thank you so much for your advice! I agree with you in that in a lot of my stuff the rhymes get a little forced i haven't figured out how to correct that yet...It seems like I'll start out on something and it'll be going along really well and it is just pouring out onto the page and then nothin'.......and then I think well I can't just leave it like this...it's unresolved and has basically no ending. So I try and slap something on there and it usually ends up pretty weak. If you have an adivce on that feel free to share with me. I would greatly appreciate it. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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cherche -d -ame on June 2, 2005I am flattered that you enjoyed "Piano Man" It was in cinquain form , therefore the lines had to be counted in syllables , and I could not make it any longer. I wish you the best with the piano and Mahler will sound perfect one of those days as far as a witch
if I am (I am a good one) Take good care of yourself and thank you,
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Bigmike69 on May 4, 2005thank you for your comment, what spelling errors did i have. take it easy and by the way i am the lost child not a gift. trust me i know why i am and that is just for me to know
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